PLEASE READ! The Cookie Traveller - I Come the World of Cookies!

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No one can live a life without cookies right? Maybe you can ._. anyways, cookie training is serious business you know.

Zexis - *Slides down a dirt hill..Starts coughing* Ugh.. My precious cookies! They got dirty!!!! *Face get furious* Gawd.

Boy - Are you okay Mr? Do you need any help or somethin'?

Zexis - I ain't no old man you fool!

Boy - I know that, but are you injured? Since you kinda like.. Fell down that hill and everything..

Zexis - I told you... I'M ALRIGHT!

Boy - Okay... No need to yell! Who are you anyways? You're not dressed like a normal person.

Zexis - Psht.. I came from the land of cookies ---

Boy - COOKIES?! *Laughs* Childish much? *Continues Laughing*

Zexis - 3:< I have just finished my cookie training and now I am here to well... I don't exactly know the reason...

Boy - Then why are you here?

Zexis - It's not my fault! My mom sent me here! By the way, who are YOU?

Boy - Me? Oh I'm Mac. Like, iMac, Macbook.. You know.. I'm so Apple friendly.

Zexis - Why hello Mac. *Laughs* Mac n cheese...

Mac - Do you want a shelter or not?!

Zexis - I don't need a shelter.. I must survive in the wild with all those hairy cats and dogs.

Mac - But it's gonna t-storm tonight. Are you sure you don't want to stay at my place for a while?

Zexis - Well... Do you have any french fries there?

Mac - Uhm.. Yes?

Zexis - I'm in. *Cleans self off and starts following Mac*

Zexis and "That Mac Guy" arrive at his home.

Zexis - Sheeeeeeet! This place is big!

Mac - Why thank you very much! Wait.. Whats your name?

Zexis - The names Zexis Katsuro. Im going to go change.. So bee arrr beeeeee okay?

Zexis roams around the house looking for the bathroom

Mac - Zexis.. Sounds like sexist to me.. But oh well.

Zexis comes out of the bathroom with his new outfit.

Mac - Hey Zexis, can I be your little helper or something?

Zexis - OF COURSE! Just put these on *Hands Mac : A pair of goggles, the same thing that Zexis is wearing and a messenger bag just like his owns* Now you're all set!

Mac - Do I need like some kind of training?

Zexis - Nope! Your job is to track down cookies with this raidar *Hands him it* and to help my battle for the cookies alright?

Mac - Yeah.. Theres a million red dots on this thing!

Zexis - That means we got alot to do! My plan is to collect all the cookies, but trust me. It's not that easy. So let's get going.

Zexis opens the door to hunt down that bada*s cookie.
 
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It's only the first chapter :|
Zise is a dude, you know that? doesn't sounds good a bar with an Heart and the name Zise used by other guy.

Anyway, kind of strange start but why the beg for "PLEASE READ!" and why don'you stick with one Fanfiction instead of creating a new one everyday?
 

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Zise is a dude, you know that? doesn't sounds good a bar with an Heart and the name Zise used by other guy.

Anyway, kind of strange start but why the beg for "PLEASE READ!" and why don'you stick with one Fanfiction instead of creating a new one everyday?
That please read thing is that I'll change the form of text and turn it into a book report.
2 : I don't know
And what do you mean by Zise?
 
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