Shinobi2000
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I ask everybody for help,
I love to write and create stories, I thought i could ask you for your feedback on that field. Please read through and tell me what do you think.
So I would actually like if manga went like this:
Naruto looses to Madara, Kurama is being taken away. Before Naruto looses he has a conversation with Minato about Uzumaki clan and their seals, seals appear to be nothing else but chakra in a different form. Madara is being pushed away by the four Hokage, Sasuke and the alliance. In last moment, after forcing Madara to retreat, when he is totally exhausted, Orochimaru takes over Sasuke's body and escapes.
Only thanks to being Uzumaki and so strong Naruto survives. While whole Ninja world is being busy with rebuilding and searching for Madara and Orochimaru Naruto goes through another trauma because he couldn't save his friends Kurama and Sasuke. After awhile he decides he needs to save them both. Naruto moves on for one last training supported with his superiors.
After a time skip:
First Naruto appearance is shown when he saves some fodder shinobi from Madara's improved Zetsu clones. Naruto is so fast that nobody can even recognize him. Witnesses would later state that the only thing they could see was an orange flash. Eventually Naruto reveals himself during some bigger battle. His cloak resembles the one he had while in Kyuubi mode but at the bottom of it you can see black flames pattern.
While fighting Obito Naruto displays his capabilities. Thanks to Cooperating with Kurama Naruto's chakra control has greatly improved, he can form Rasen Shuriken with one hand, his Kagebunshins are more resistrant. Naruto went through many trainings, learned more wind techniques, improved his taijutsu to extreme level training with lee and later Hiashi. Naruto learned gentle fist using nature chakra while in sage mode, also he's improved his sensor abilities while using Senjutsu. At the old ruins of Uzumaki clan where Naruto studied his clan techniques, he applied Hiraishin seal on himself so that after creating a clone he can teleport in his place instantly whenever he needs, thus creating Hiraishin lvl. 3. To worship the memory of his father Naruto's weapon of choice is special kunai now, ones like Minato used, with a wind element enhancement just like Assuma's chakra blades. Thanks to a contractor seal now when Naruto's clone is gathering nature chakra he doesn't need to be summon anymore but he just transfer the nature chakra straight to original Naruto, therefore Naruto can enter Sage mode whenever he pleases. Naruto after realizing that he needs to train more and study more to find a way to reverse Orochimaru's Body Transfer technique becomes more mature and forward thinking. His techniques usage improved amazingly so he applies perfect strategies and tactics while fighting without wasting any chakra which he has enormous supplies at the moment.
Orochimaru and Sasuke are holding one another at bay. Sometimes Sasuke takes over, sometimes Orochimaru. They both can use the same techniques. Their body acquired Rinnegan and it's techs, they can use Mokuton and all 5 other chakra types, thus creating new techniques, and new KekkeGenkai.
Defeated by Naruto, swallowed by darkness Obito at the end of his days gives his life away using Rinne Tensei thus reviving Madara so he can Become Juubi chinjuriki and end this world once and for all...
This are just some of my possible scripts. I was also thinking of alternate script for Naruto: "If Itachi didn't kill of the Uchiha".
Tell me what you think of this, I will be thankful for your feedback
It's really important to me. Thank you in advance
I love to write and create stories, I thought i could ask you for your feedback on that field. Please read through and tell me what do you think.
So I would actually like if manga went like this:
Naruto looses to Madara, Kurama is being taken away. Before Naruto looses he has a conversation with Minato about Uzumaki clan and their seals, seals appear to be nothing else but chakra in a different form. Madara is being pushed away by the four Hokage, Sasuke and the alliance. In last moment, after forcing Madara to retreat, when he is totally exhausted, Orochimaru takes over Sasuke's body and escapes.
Only thanks to being Uzumaki and so strong Naruto survives. While whole Ninja world is being busy with rebuilding and searching for Madara and Orochimaru Naruto goes through another trauma because he couldn't save his friends Kurama and Sasuke. After awhile he decides he needs to save them both. Naruto moves on for one last training supported with his superiors.
After a time skip:
First Naruto appearance is shown when he saves some fodder shinobi from Madara's improved Zetsu clones. Naruto is so fast that nobody can even recognize him. Witnesses would later state that the only thing they could see was an orange flash. Eventually Naruto reveals himself during some bigger battle. His cloak resembles the one he had while in Kyuubi mode but at the bottom of it you can see black flames pattern.
While fighting Obito Naruto displays his capabilities. Thanks to Cooperating with Kurama Naruto's chakra control has greatly improved, he can form Rasen Shuriken with one hand, his Kagebunshins are more resistrant. Naruto went through many trainings, learned more wind techniques, improved his taijutsu to extreme level training with lee and later Hiashi. Naruto learned gentle fist using nature chakra while in sage mode, also he's improved his sensor abilities while using Senjutsu. At the old ruins of Uzumaki clan where Naruto studied his clan techniques, he applied Hiraishin seal on himself so that after creating a clone he can teleport in his place instantly whenever he needs, thus creating Hiraishin lvl. 3. To worship the memory of his father Naruto's weapon of choice is special kunai now, ones like Minato used, with a wind element enhancement just like Assuma's chakra blades. Thanks to a contractor seal now when Naruto's clone is gathering nature chakra he doesn't need to be summon anymore but he just transfer the nature chakra straight to original Naruto, therefore Naruto can enter Sage mode whenever he pleases. Naruto after realizing that he needs to train more and study more to find a way to reverse Orochimaru's Body Transfer technique becomes more mature and forward thinking. His techniques usage improved amazingly so he applies perfect strategies and tactics while fighting without wasting any chakra which he has enormous supplies at the moment.
Orochimaru and Sasuke are holding one another at bay. Sometimes Sasuke takes over, sometimes Orochimaru. They both can use the same techniques. Their body acquired Rinnegan and it's techs, they can use Mokuton and all 5 other chakra types, thus creating new techniques, and new KekkeGenkai.
Defeated by Naruto, swallowed by darkness Obito at the end of his days gives his life away using Rinne Tensei thus reviving Madara so he can Become Juubi chinjuriki and end this world once and for all...
This are just some of my possible scripts. I was also thinking of alternate script for Naruto: "If Itachi didn't kill of the Uchiha".
Tell me what you think of this, I will be thankful for your feedback
It's really important to me. Thank you in advance
