Your other tags were better because your lighting in this tag is kind of awful, no offense (I know you can take criticism well, so I mean that with love
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The tag is good, you have flow, depth, some good shading (Maybe a little too dark, but it's because you're going for a dark atmosphere so it's not bad).
The problem? The render. It sticks out like a sore thumb. Your render has a really intense light source that you didn't appeal to in the slightest. Also, the render is from an anime, and anime renders tend to be very flat and just difficult to work with. I'd suggest staying away from them for you. Anime renders also make blending a lot more difficult because it's hard to achieve both realistic depth and still have the flatness an anime render brings. Also with over-editing anime renders like you did here, the edges become a bit rough and you can see the individual pixels more readily. If there was another render that would fit the atmosphere of the tag there, this would be a very very good tag, but since the render you chose is there, it's sort of a 'ehh' tag.
Umm, yeah. I don't feel like ranting more so I'll just end it there.
