Phoenix Guardian vs. 3Knights

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Starting from where we left off in the thread after the bios were posted. GL. xd

As the three Knights show up on the battlefield eager to fight the Phoenix Guardian Known as Kakuzu he smirks, though its hidden behind his mask. He instantly starts the battle off but utilizing one of his specialties which is Genjutsu. Before the Knights know it, Kakuzu converts his chakra over to each of their brains at once thus taking control over their senses respectively. All three of the Knights would instantly fall into a world of darkness in which their sense of sight becomes inevitably useless thus leaving them as open targets.

( Kokuangyo no Jutsu ) -
Bringer-of-Darkness Technique
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes one handseal, causing the opponent to believe they have been trapped in a world of infinite darkness, where their sense of sight is useless. It is capable of affecting multiple targets within range. However, it does not negate their other senses.

At the exact same moment that Kakuzu activates his Genjutsu his Lightning heart activates a spark within its core thus powering up his lightning abilities while it simultaneously seeps chakra above the battle field, quickly creating a cloud above the entire terrain. With that done in the matter of seconds, the Lightning masked beast instantly manipulates and controls the cloud to make a dozen S-rank lightning bolts strike down upon the helpless Knights thus killing them on contact. Each Knight would be hit with 4 bolts each; one coming from the left at an angle, the right from an angle, the back from an angle and right above them.

(Raiton: Ningen Denchi)-Lightning Release: Human Battery
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: 40 (+20 to A rank lightning and below)
Description: By generating electricity within his body, the user can increase the power of his next lightning jutsu. The electricity can also be discharged from the user's body to shock a nearby enemy.
-Usable 4 times per battle
-No earth or wind jutsu while the charge is present
-Can only be taught by Shin-Akira.

(Raiton: Raiun) - Lightning Release: Thundercloud
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user generates a cloud above the battlefield kneaded with their chakra and then cause a series of lightning bolts to rain down upon the battlefield causing severe damage.

Kakuzu:Ahh lets see our Knight's power shall we? Hopefully two Hearts isn't too much of a hassle for you three!

(Note: the human battery technique made my thunder cloud technique S-rank, Talking doesn't affect timeframe.)
 

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(byakugan activated)

*while becoming shrouded in darkness i then hear some chirping sound which would usually come from lightning. instinctively i surround myself by creating a high water fence after forming the necessary handseals which in result defends us from and absorbs any lightning techs coming towards us. while behind the defending wall i then stab my hand to release myself from the genjutsu and insert chakra into my partners to help them escape as well. while distracted from your technique being absorbed by my water fence i now being able to see you with my byakugan suigetsu then cause water to nearly instantly rise from below you and your lightning heart imprisoning both of you while i cause spikes to erupt from the ground and pierce thru you and the mask of your lightning creature therefore destroying it.

note: if your lightning creature do try to escape using his lightning he will only shock himself. also you can't move when in the water prison.

(Suiton: Suijinheki) - Water Style: Water Encampment Wall
Rank: A
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This defensive jutsu creates a wall of water around the user. The user will use the following hand seals to activate the technique Tiger → Snake → Rat → Snake → Tiger. Enemy attacks are completely intercepted by a fence of water blown out from the mouth, and is raised from below with tremendous might. The water is blown out in the form of a circle around the user, and it makes for a defence without openings. It is also possible for the user to control the amount of water and duration at will. Furthermore, because the field of vision is maintained even while defending one can easily go on to the next move, which is a great advantage. The wall can also be formed from a pre-existing water source.

Suiton: Funshutsu Mizu Kinko) - Water Release: Gushing Water Imprisonment
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water. The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique, though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.
Note: Technique creates its own water source

(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target
 
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My opinion was asked (for some reason), so here I am.

After confirming the legitimancy of W24's move (he stated that his hearts were separated beforhand, and I've looked up the genjutsu which does in fact affect multiple peoples), I'm moving onto dm's move. First off, chirping is a quality of Chidori (1000 Birds), thus the name; not all lightning is chirping. But If we choose to ignore that, his lightning is S-ranked; if your water was S-ranked I might allow your defence, but you're not going to defend against S-rank Lightning with an elementally nuetral A-rank defense; doesn't work. Therefore, his lightning would continue through the water wall (weakened to D-rank), then you stab your hand after the three of you are shocked.

Next thing I see wrong is the inserting chakra. At one point that was alright, but now that Kai rules have been updated to allow use on others, I'm not sure how that would work, as inserting chakra into someone else is Kai. You may want someone else's opinion, but I think in order to do that, it should count as your moves, as the Kai jutsu.

Next thing is the Water Prison. The jutsu creates a single sphere of water, trapping them both (assuming Kakuzu and his mask are close enough to be trapped by one bubble). The only thing about that actually helps you; if lightning mask tries to do something, he'll shock both the mask and Kakuzu. The earth spikes were used correctly, but of course everything before them must be delt with before we get there.

This is my opinion on the events so far. U_U
 

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(Well if I understand lightning right, you'll all be near death (if not dead) from the D-rank also since it hit you all on the top of your skulls (which would fry your brains), both arms and in your backs. At the very least you guys would pass out, but that's just my opinion, but since I have no other opinion about that I guess I have to overlook it.)

-- As the lightning hits you all (affecting suigetsu more then others due to his body being water) you all pause in shock from lightning surging through your brains thus breaking the illusion. During the paralysis both my Lightning and water masks go to my left (Lightning) and right (water) until their in mid range of me, but still in mid range of you all too. By that time you'd start performing your gushing water prison technique, so in return my lightning mask (now to the right of you guys) would quickly form a ball of lightning in his mouth and releases a wave of destructive lightning bolts that destroys everything in its way, which is you and your partners. With the Hyuga using the water jutsu towards Kakuzu he'd be unable to defend himself without stopping his jutsu completely.

(Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
Rank: S
Type:Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.

-- At the EXACT SAME TIME, my water mask (now to your guys left) performs a water jutsu in which he instantly spews a massive amount of water from its mouth that quickly covers a wide range of area towards you guys in the form of a giant stream with deadly waves that will crush you guys from the left followed by it forming an orb around you all and beginning the process of you all drowning and being captured.

(Suiton: Dai Bakusui Shōha) -Water Release: Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave
Rank: A
Type: Offensive,Supplementary
Range: Short -Long
Chakra cost:30
Damage points: 60
Description: This technique is a stronger version of exploding water colliding wave technique. The user will first perform the ram hand seal and then spits out a large amount of water that covers an entire area, with massive waves that can crush the opponent. The user then forms the water into a giant orb, instead of releasing like weaker version of the technique.

-- Also at the same time, Kakuzu forms a vortex of water inside his right palm and quickly releases it straight forward which would instantly expand into a spinning wall of water that would crash into the incoming water imprisonment (if I'm not mistaken you shoot that out your mouth, it doesn't just auto form under me since we're on solid ground) thus canceling it out, and if you decide to stop the jutsu so your hyuga can defend against the lightning, the wall of spinning water would head straight at you all and smash you guys.

(Suiton: Hahonryuu) -Water Style: Destruction Torrent
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: A water vortex created in the palm of the user’s hand that can then be blasted forward creating a spiraling wall of water which can then be used to attack or defend.
Note: No water source required.

(Sidenotes: the masks both are flying so they aren't near ground and you guys would have to defend against all three jutsu before being able to use earth spikes, and if you guys somehow get the spikes off I'll accept being stabbed with them since they can't reach my flying masks.)
 

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(w24 the gushing water imprisonment comes from under you. Your Kakuzu is trapped in the water, they should only be slightly paralyzed from the D ranked Raiton as the shock breaks me out of the genjustu and im also stopping myself from being paralyzed) Sasuke activates his curse seal of heaven and decides to quickly grab the sword of kusanagi to redirect the D ranked lightning. Sasuke then sees his partner about to be hit by the lightning from the mask , using the speed of the curse seal sasuke runs in front of the blast, extending his sword and taking the full blast of lightning that would have killed his friend...

(Fuuinjutsu: Juin Jutsu) - Sealing Technique: Cursed Seal
Rank :A
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A(-5 per turn to target if they us it and target can be self)
Description:This jutsu creates a seal that gives its target more chakra and more strenght.(Curse Mark of Heaven: +10 Nin - +5 Tai. Curse Mark of Earth: +5 Nin - +10 Taijutsu)
Note:Level 2 is double the gain and the damage to the one with the seal)

Sasuke: Waves of water are heading towards us ... I cannot stop them *coughs up blood* i could only defend you from this attack...I cannot move. Im paralyzed from head to toe. Its amazing how i can talk.

(Im out of this match unless somebody can heal me xd . My curse mark speed allowed me to jump in front of the lightning waves. And by the way you worded it, its range is long, but the spread is not that big. Allowing me to protect my friend here. Another thing, this is just about 3v3. With you being able to go every other turn, and having 3 sources of attacks + defense. SY's rules would have been better for this battle. I'd do better, if my trainers haven't went afk. )
 
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