Perfection

[ikikouchiha9668]

Okay, this was written for my 'popular' friend who has a shitty personality
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A perfect girl with a perfect smile
With a perfect family
And a perfect house
Nothing seemed so perfect before

Without a perfect love
And a perfect boy
To hold her perfect heart
Just how perfect can she be?

But if you dig deep enough
You see all the imperfections
Her imperfect soul
And her imperfect heart
How far will she go
To reach Perfection?

 

[Yusuke Urameshi]

Did you write that? Hater... And is your friend hot?

 

[Fodder#5]

Did you write that? Hater... And is your friend hot?

Yeah is your friend hot? That can really make up for a bad personality haha

 

[ikikouchiha9668]

Did you write that? Hater... And is your friend hot?

Yes I wrote that. No, I'm not a hater. I guess she's pretty.

 

[S A G E]

You would have the root word "perfect" in every line, except lines 9 and 13.

Great job though

 

[Yusuke Urameshi]

Yes I wrote that. No, I'm not a hater. I guess she's pretty.

How pretty?

 

[Punk Hazard]

I don't really care for poems that don't rhyme, but I suppose this was alright.

 

[ikikouchiha9668]

You would have the root word "perfect" in every line, except lines 9 and 13.

Great job though

Hehe sorry ^_^
Glad you liked it! ^_^

How pretty?

I'm not a lesbian. How should I know?