[CJ] Penguin and Riker

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Katon: Pengin no Inferuno - Fire Style: Penguin's Inferno
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After forming the dog, dragon, and bird hand seals, the user molds katon chakra and channels it into both of their hands. Once channeled into their hands, the user connects the bottom of their palms and releases the katon chakra, and by using shape manipulation, results in two extremely condensed penguin shaped balls of katon that violently swirl in circles while going forward. The balls of katon swirl in the same direction but always are a meter away from each other, leaving a meter opening in the attack, or so it would seem. The meter space in between the balls of katon is actually super heated air from the two katon balls which would severely burn someone if they were caught in the middle of it.

Note: No Katon over A-rank during the turn this us used
Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Penguin.

Here you go. :)
 

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Jeez, it's been a long time since I've learned a technique like this.
*I clasp my hands together and begin to gather up my chakra, accelerating the flow of my chakra towards my arms, pouring more and more chakra into them. I heat up the chakra, causing the temperature to rise and the nature of the immense chakra to change into Katon. Once the chakra has been gathered and converted, I form the three hand seals, practicing them over and over until I get the order and movement fluidly. Once I have the seals down, I perform them for a final time. The second the seals are done, I place my palms together with my hands outstretched. I release the Katon chakra from my palms. As the Katon leaves my hands, I split it into two equal parts. I then shape each part into a fireball shaped like a Penguin. I then use shape manipulation to have the fireballs swirl around each other, building up a large amount of momentum and heating up the air in the meter of space between them, making the air hot enough to cook a grown man alive. I direct the fireballs at the training dummy, incinerating it.*

How's that?
 

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Thanks for posting, that way I didn't have to risk multiposting

Raiton: Sandan (Lightning Release: Scatter Shot)
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long- Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Cost: 80
Description: The user firsts channels Raiton to his finger tip and moves in hand horizontally in front of him, creating a horizontal line of Raiton in front of him. On the user's command, the horizontal line shatters into thousands of tiny blades of Raiton that is launched forward at high speeds, shredding the opponent's skin apart.
~Can only be thought by Rikerslade~
~Only usable twice per battle~
 

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I got you. >_0

Penguin takes his usual stance and starts creating chakra. He does this by molding his physical and spiritual energies together, letting chakra flow freely throughout his body. He then thinks about raiton's properties; sharp, shocking, fast, and noisy. This in turn gives his chakra a raiton nature, and he channels the raiton chakra into his right index finger. He moves his right index finger from a foot away from his left shoulder, all the way to a foot away from his right shoulder, all the while releasing raiton chakra. By using shape and nature manipulation, he gives the line of raiton chakra electrical properties and breaks it apart into thousands of pieces, each cutting through something.

Thanks man! ^^
 

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LOL alright. Like most of my customs, they are simply done, but carry damage. Channel enough chakra into the palm of the hand to constitute an A-ranked technique. Then, transform its nature to Raiton. With a quick flick of your wrist, release it from your palm, and have it slice into this clone.

*Creates clone*

Be descriptive. Be sure to mention amount, frequency and timing.
 

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By molding his physical and spiritual energies together, Penguin begins to create chakra. As he creates this chakra, he ponders on what raiton is and what it's qualities are. Sharp, vibrating, fast were some things that came to mind. By doing this, his chakra now had a raiton nature to it. He then channeled quite the amount of chakra into his hand. With the flick of a wrist, the raiton chakra, which was vibrating immensely and had the sharpness to cut a tree in two, manifests itself into a "flash of light" that slices the clone in two. This was all done within moments.

Like that Law-senpai?
 

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Pretty good, that description will do. However, the timing I was referring to isn't there. You're moving your wrist to propel the lightning. Think about when you fire, with the key words too low and too high.
 

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Pretty good, that description will do. However, the timing I was referring to isn't there. You're moving your wrist to propel the lightning. Think about when you fire, with the key words too low and too high.
By molding his physical and spiritual energies together, Penguin begins to create chakra. As he creates this chakra, he ponders on what raiton is and what it's qualities are. Sharp, vibrating, fast were some things that came to mind. By doing this, his chakra now had a raiton nature to it. He then channeled quite the amount of chakra into his hand. With the flick of a wrist, aiming at the clones midsection which wasn't too high or too low, the raiton chakra which was vibrating immensely and had the sharpness to cut a tree in two manifests itself into a "flash of light" that slices the clone in two. This was all done within moments.
 

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By molding his physical and spiritual energies together, Penguin begins to create chakra. As he creates this chakra, he ponders on what raiton is and what it's qualities are. Sharp, vibrating, fast were some things that came to mind. By doing this, his chakra now had a raiton nature to it. He then channeled quite the amount of chakra into his hand. With the flick of a wrist, aiming at the clones midsection which wasn't too high or too low, the raiton chakra which was vibrating immensely and had the sharpness to cut a tree in two manifests itself into a "flash of light" that slices the clone in two. This was all done within moments.
Better, this will suffice. By too high or too low, I meant be careful when you release. Time it so that you don't release the technique with your wrist too high or too low, or you may launch the attack above the opponent's head or at the ground in front of him.

What's next?
 

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Better, this will suffice. By too high or too low, I meant be careful when you release. Time it so that you don't release the technique with your wrist too high or too low, or you may launch the attack above the opponent's head or at the ground in front of him.

What's next?
Hmmm how about Dragon Fire?
 

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Channel a massive amount of Katon chakra into your fist. Use shape manipulation to have it erupt around your fist and body in the form of a dragon, then drive the powerful Katon into this training dummy.

*Training dummy appears*
 

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Penguin begins to quickly combine his physical and spiritual energies together in equal parts, molding them into chakra in massive quantities. He then begins to think of katon and it's properties, how hot and powerful it is. This in turn gives his chakra a katon nature. Penguin then channels the katon chakra into his fist. By using shape and nature manipulation, the katon chakra explodes out of his fist and forms a dragon made of fire around his body. Penguin then jumps at the training dummy, fist extended whilst maintaining his focus on the chakra, burning through the dummy.
 

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Hm good. Remember, with this technique, you have a constant wave of fire around you and you're moving quickly, so it'll be hard to see where you're going. Make sure when you use it, you have a clear and sure shot. What's next?
 
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