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Thank you for taking me on, senpai!


*After traveling a considerable distance, Urasan and Saki found themselves along the Land of Lightning's border*

Urasan: Those are some dark clouds over in the distance, I wonder if they'll be coming our way?
Saki: If they do, I hope it doesn't rain during our training. I just can't wait for our new senpai!​
 

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Thank you for taking me on, senpai!


*After traveling a considerable distance, Urasan and Saki found themselves along the Land of Lightning's border*

Urasan: Those are some dark clouds over in the distance, I wonder if they'll be coming our way?
Saki: If they do, I hope it doesn't rain during our training. I just can't wait for our new senpai!​
*Arrives late*

Yo! Sorry about that. Right then, you want to learn Lightning, right? How about starting with you telling me everything you know about the Lightning element.
 

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Saki: For starters, lightning techniques are commonly used by Kumohakure shinobi; they usually have affinities for it.
Saki: From what we know, the Fourth Raikage and Copy Ninja Kakashi are both proficient users of it.

*Urasan, whilst taking a moment to focus his thoughts, looks at the incoming clouds still in the distance*

Urasan: Raiton is the generation of lightning by increasing the high frequency vibrations of one's chakra.
Urasan: Aside from piercing damage and their generally fast speeds, Raiton jutsu commonly induce numbness.
Saki: Some techniques go beyond simple numbness though and can paralyze an unsuspecting opponent.

*Saki, shifting his head to be next to his brother's, observes lightning bolts in the distance*

Saki: From our time in the academy, we memorized the elemental cycle; lightning beats earth, but loses to wind.
Saki: The ground can easily be pierced and broken by lightening, but, wind is a natural electrical insulator.
Urasan: Lightning can oftentimes be used in conjecture with water, increasing in power due to conductivity.
Urasan: As such, it's fitting that the only known kekkei genkai to use lightening, Storm Release, also uses water.​
 

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Saki: For starters, lightning techniques are commonly used by Kumohakure shinobi; they usually have affinities for it.
Saki: From what we know, the Fourth Raikage and Copy Ninja Kakashi are both proficient users of it.

*Urasan, whilst taking a moment to focus his thoughts, looks at the incoming clouds still in the distance*

Urasan: Raiton is the generation of lightning by increasing the high frequency vibrations of one's chakra.
Urasan: Aside from piercing damage and their generally fast speeds, Raiton jutsu commonly induce numbness.
Saki: Some techniques go beyond simple numbness though and can paralyze an unsuspecting opponent.

*Saki, shifting his head to be next to his brother's, observes lightning bolts in the distance*

Saki: From our time in the academy, we memorized the elemental cycle; lightning beats earth, but loses to wind.
Saki: The ground can easily be pierced and broken by lightening, but, wind is a natural electrical insulator.
Urasan: Lightning can oftentimes be used in conjecture with water, increasing in power due to conductivity.
Urasan: As such, it's fitting that the only known kekkei genkai to use lightening, Storm Release, also uses water.​
Good.

Lightning is weak against the Wind element because Wind is a good electrical insulator.

A-rank Lightning = S-rank Earth.
A-rank Lightning > A-rank Earth and it'd continue towards the opponent at a weakened rank of B.

So for an Earth jutsu to cancel out a Lightning jutsu, it must be one rank higher.

As for weakness:

A-rank Wind = S-rank Lightning.
A-rank Wind > A-rank Lightning, and the Wind would continue at a weakened rank of B.

Lightning is not strong nor weak against Water and Fire, and so, using lightning wouldn't be a valid way of defending against a Fire or water jutsu, since it'd go straight through it. (and the water would get electrocuted, dealing you more damage). Of course, this doesn't mean Lightning can't be used in a combination with both Fire and Water.

You've already explained how Lightning can be used to augment the power of Raiton jutsus, but you could also use it in combination with Fire jutsus because Lightning and Fire jutsus are known to just go straight through each other, which is why one is never used to defend against the other. Although, there is one A-ranked Fire jutsu which has a solid presence, so it behaves different, but your Fire teacher will explain that to you.

Ok, do you have any questions about this, or is there something you don't understand? Totally didn't c/p paste this from my other training. >.> <.<

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Sorry for my late reply. :/
 

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Urasan: Hmph, I never really considered using katon and raiton in combinations. Thanks!
Saki: I don't believe we have any questions. Senpai, you may proceed.​
 

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*Urasan and Saki jog onto the field and upon seeing their sensei, both brothers express their happiness with hearty grins*

Urasan: Oh my... I do believe we have met before... only not with such a cool status.
Saki: How goes it, our former earth senpai? It's nice to be training under you again. xD​
 

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Sakon: Well if it isn't our cousins from the earth training!

Ukon's head sprouts from Sakon's chest and looks at the twins

Ukon: Good to see you both have lived since last time.

Sakon: So I was told you wanted to learn Lightning this time? If thats true you'll have to tell me what all you know of Lightning ninjutsu.

A storm starts rumbling overhead.
 

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Saki: For starters, lightning techniques are commonly used by Kumohakure shinobi; they usually have affinities for it.
Saki: From what we know, the Fourth Raikage and Copy Ninja Kakashi are both proficient users of it.

*Urasan, whilst taking a moment to focus his thoughts, looks at the incoming clouds in the heights above*

Urasan: Raiton is the generation of lightning by increasing the high frequency vibrations of one's chakra.
Urasan: Aside from piercing damage and their generally fast speeds, Raiton jutsu commonly induce numbness.
Saki: Some techniques go beyond simple numbness though and can completely paralyze an unsuspecting opponent.

*Saki, shifting his head to be next to his brother's, observes lightning bolts in the distance*

Saki: From our time in the academy, we memorized the elemental cycle; lightning beats earth, but loses to wind.
Saki: The ground can easily be pierced and broken by lightening, but, wind is a natural electrical insulator.
Urasan: Lightning can oftentimes be used in conjecture with water, increasing in power due to conductivity.
Urasan: As such, it's fitting that the only known kekkei genkai to use lightening, Storm Release, also uses water.​
 
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Sakon:Correct on most accounts. Except that their are actually more Kekkai Genkai that utilize Lightning chakra then juts Storm Release.

Ukon: We have faced them in battle. Swift Release, which gave the user superhuman speed. And Dark release which allowed the user to absorb energy into their palms and release it back at their enemy as blue flames.

Sakon: So now what we've discovered what you know about it, we can teach you how to actually create lightning chakra.

Ukon fully splits from his brother and stands to his side

Ukon: As you both have already noticed, theirs a storm brewing. You can feel it, can't you. Focus your thoughts on that feeling, like a wild beast fighting its bindings, trying to break free.

Sakon: Meditate on it for a while and let us know how you feel.
 

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Urasan: Yep, we'll give a shot, sensei!

*The brothers proceed to sit and take up a meditative pose; they sit with Urasan's legs crisscrossed whilst both brothers leave their palms casually facing upwards. After a minute of regulating their breathing and gradually unwinding their moderately tense bodies, the brothers then close their eyes and focus on what they know of lightning release as they hear its natural counterpart booming not very far from where they sit. As an extended moment passes, the brothers let their chakra flow freely and almost instinctively, begin to rapidly increase the frequency vibrations of their chakra... until sparks begin to appear from what is seemingly the brothers' outstretched palms and then, their entire bodies.*

Saki: S-Sensei, is t-this it? My chakra has never been so constantly moving, especially so fast.
Urasan: I felt it all too, but then parts of my body started to go slightly numb... wherever Saki's sparks touched my skin.​
 

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The twins smirk as their students describe to them how their chakra was reacting.

Sakon:Correct. Remember this feeling my fellow clansmen, This is molding your chakra into Lightning Chakra.

Ukon:The most dangerous of the 5 elemental chakras, Lightning threatens to wrest itself free from a weak user at any given moment, such high levels of energy require a lot of control.

Sakon: So the next step, of course. Now that you know the feeling of creating it, is learning to control it

Ukon tosses two small folded pieces of chakra paper to the students.

Sakon: This is chakra paper, hold it as you remember the feeling of lightning surging through you. Then command it with all your mental might to travel down your arm, through your fingertips and into this paper.

Ukon:If successful, the paper will crinkle up.
 

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*Both brothers grab the papers, one for each, and begin to knead their chakra and channel it into the small slips of paper. As they also begin to put their mental focus into their actions, the brothers recall the sensations that they had just a moment ago experienced whilst meditating. Almost as soon as they do so, the papers in their hands begin to crinkle.*​
 

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Sakon:That was fast!

Ukon:Almost too fast o.0

Sakon:Well it is to be expected from our genius clan *said with a certain smugness*

Ukon: I suppose. Anyway, now that you can cause the chakra to flow as you want, drop the paper and try it again but this time, without a conductor it should produce small bolts of lightning from your fingers that zap the target.

I would like you to use this template every time you reply to a technique.
Try to be as detailed/descriptive as possible. All you have to do is copy the PHP code.

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Also, I will post how all of the techniques work. I want you then, in your own words, to describe to me what you are doing to get the desired result.

(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.

described above in the talking.
 

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Fix the title for me. >.> it says "dotin".

Ohh you posted too. Hmm tell me everrrrrythinggggggg you know about... Raiton. Weaknesses, strengths, kg it makes, 3 good users, what village uses it most etc. Etc...
 

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Saki: For starters, lightning techniques are commonly used by Kumogakure shinobi; they usually have affinities for it.
Saki: From what we know, the Fourth Raikage and Copy Ninja Kakashi are both proficient users of it.

*Urasan, whilst taking a moment to focus his thoughts, looks at the incoming clouds still in the distance*

Urasan: Raiton is the generation of lightning by increasing the high frequency vibrations of one's chakra.
Urasan: Aside from piercing damage and their generally fast speeds, Raiton jutsu commonly induce numbness.
Saki: Some techniques go beyond simple numbness though and can paralyze an unsuspecting opponent.

*Saki, shifting his head to be next to his brother's, observes lightning bolts in the distance*

Saki: From our time in the academy, we memorized the elemental cycle; lightning beats earth, but loses to wind.
Saki: The ground can easily be pierced and broken by lightning, but, wind is a natural electrical insulator.
Urasan: Lightning can oftentimes be used in conjecture with water, increasing in power due to conductivity.
Urasan: As such, it's fitting that the only known kekkei genkai to use lightning, Storm Release, also uses water

Lightning is weak against the Wind element because Wind is a good electrical insulator.

A-rank Lightning = S-rank Earth.
A-rank Lightning > A-rank Earth and it'd continue towards the opponent at a weakened rank of B.

So for an Earth jutsu to cancel out a Lightning jutsu, it must be one rank higher.

As for weakness:

A-rank Wind = S-rank Lightning.
A-rank Wind > A-rank Lightning, and the Wind would continue at a weakened rank of B.
Just ignore the colloquial nature of this post, I posted it long ago for another lightning thread, but never moved past it.​
 

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Saki: For starters, lightning techniques are commonly used by Kumogakure shinobi; they usually have affinities for it.
Saki: From what we know, the Fourth Raikage and Copy Ninja Kakashi are both proficient users of it.

*Urasan, whilst taking a moment to focus his thoughts, looks at the incoming clouds still in the distance*

Urasan: Raiton is the generation of lightning by increasing the high frequency vibrations of one's chakra.
Urasan: Aside from piercing damage and their generally fast speeds, Raiton jutsu commonly induce numbness.
Saki: Some techniques go beyond simple numbness though and can paralyze an unsuspecting opponent.

*Saki, shifting his head to be next to his brother's, observes lightning bolts in the distance*

Saki: From our time in the academy, we memorized the elemental cycle; lightning beats earth, but loses to wind.
Saki: The ground can easily be pierced and broken by lightning, but, wind is a natural electrical insulator.
Urasan: Lightning can oftentimes be used in conjecture with water, increasing in power due to conductivity.
Urasan: As such, it's fitting that the only known kekkei genkai to use lightning, Storm Release, also uses water

Lightning is weak against the Wind element because Wind is a good electrical insulator.

A-rank Lightning = S-rank Earth.
A-rank Lightning > A-rank Earth and it'd continue towards the opponent at a weakened rank of B.

So for an Earth jutsu to cancel out a Lightning jutsu, it must be one rank higher.

As for weakness:

A-rank Wind = S-rank Lightning.
A-rank Wind > A-rank Lightning, and the Wind would continue at a weakened rank of B.
Just ignore the colloquial nature of this post, I posted it long ago for another lightning thread, but never moved past it.​
Good, good. Now with each technique I post you'll fill out my training template for it to show you have an understanding of its usage. If any questions just say so and I'll explain the jutsu, ok?

Use le training template.

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(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.

(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.
 
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