Pejorative (Poem)

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[COLOR="#B46T5"]Waiting , seems like eternity...
Sat on a small bench,
waiting, for the petrichor to fade...

The world looks like it's slooming,
but, when "it" wakes up, it becomes evasive...
The ubiquity of it's beliefs,lost, wandering in foreverness.

Such made me think carefully,
for this somber world...
Thinking of it differently,
Considering it pejorative...

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It reminds of me of Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening by Robert Frost
Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.

He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound’s the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.

The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep
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interesting...
Well thanks :)
Good poetry rarely requires a thesaurus to understand.
It's not my fault that you can't understand it :)
It reminds of me of Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening by Robert Frost
Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.

He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound’s the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.

The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep
.
I didn't know about that one :)
That's a very good poem :)
 
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