patiently waiting

[Hotaruko]

Days go by as I watch you fade
Taking away with you
all the dreams, hopes
and the future that we made

I'm standing here heavy
as you bid goodbye
Can't move an inch
watching you die

Days go by as I sit awaiting
for you to return
or for me to depart
which one of it, I don't know

I'll wait patiently
til you've slipped through
my grasp, perhaps a few
hundred times

Then maybe I'll be satisfied
patiently watching us die​

 

[shuma]

Dayuuuum girl where yo mind at?

Nice read though

 

[Hotaruko]

Dayuuuum girl where yo mind at?

Nice read though

XD i know this isnt my usual style of writing lol
just putting bits and parts of my heart in words though ^^

 

[Kaneki Kun]

I think I felt something in my chest reading this....emotions....oh god....*sheds tear*
On a serious beautiful.

 

[Hotaruko]

I think I felt something in my chest reading this....emotions....oh god....*sheds tear*
On a serious beautiful.

im glad that you were moved by it xD
well thank you for appreciating it <3

 

[Goetia]

It's honest, and painfully true. Nice work.

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

These thoughts looks familiar um ! never mind that good poem

 

[fiend]

Simple, Moving and just beautiful <3.

 

[A$AP Wap]

nice work

 

[Hotaruko]

It's honest, and painfully true. Nice work.

These thoughts looks familiar um ! never mind that good poem

i wonder why is that... xD

Simple, Moving and just beautiful <3.

nice work

thanks guys :hugg:

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

i wonder why is that... xD

Can't say maybe we think similarly

 

[Waindo]

Well, this was depressing. :NO:
Fantastic and touching poem, great job!

 

[Ryu Kishi]

nice hotaruko chan i like it

 

[Byron123]

Damn this ending killed me! It sounds like a married couple that changed through the time from loved ones to indifferent and now one of them is thinking of divorce but has used to this routine so he may prefer to die like that in an unhealthy marriage than to try anew

 

[Hotaruko]

Can't say maybe we think similarly

perhaps? ^^

Well, this was depressing. :NO:
Fantastic and touching poem, great job!

hahaha indeed xD but thank you

nice hotaruko chan i like it

im glad you like it Ryu ^^

Damn this ending killed me! It sounds like a married couple that changed through the time from loved ones to indifferent and now one of them is thinking of divorce but has used to this routine so he may prefer to die like that in an unhealthy marriage than to try anew

haha thats not really the case here, but I do understand why you'd get that feel from it

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

perhaps? ^^

Now i see it, you said you put bits and parts together and that's how my mind works combining bits and parts together it's like you've lot of perfect pictures but you've to put it together to make a masterpiece Lol