page one of negative naruto manga

[Tomo Kusakabe]

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[TheLastSamurai]

looks cool, just don't overdo it on the black shaded parts like in the last panel

 

[Hoshi]

Making a manga of negative naruto lol... Funny.

Anyway good work

 

[Ventalus]

Watch out for Kishi, soon he will strike you with his CopyRight Hammer.

But yeah, good job there!

 

[Supermacaquecool]

Seems pretty cool (the panel composition). Just try to be cleaner cuz I took a while to understand the last panel. Just keep it up. One day you'll look back and you'll see how much you have grown as a manga artist (my favorite mangaka Takei Hiroyuki started with a pretty rough style:

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, but u can see how much he grew along the years:

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). Hope we'll see something alike with ya.

 

[Scooby Doo]

I like your style.

 

[- Їиfєяио -]

awesome .............

 

[Nakamazi Itchigo]

what great emotion in your mark-marking

 

[Tomo Kusakabe]

It's kishi's work not mine, I just made it differently