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GrayParadise

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Trying to keep this up weekly, where I review each page and go over every notable quote and my own personal note. Excuse me for the lateness, but enjoy.

Page 1
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A very minor action we all should realize, that I didn't notice until now... Mei, Oonoki and Gaara are maintaining speed with Kurama cloaked Shinobi. Very impressive. Also, Bee is once more shown behind A, with Kurama's Cloak as well.

Personal notes
Screw B's new role. He might as well be a generic Zetsu now, I hate where he is.
Is Kishi trying to make Tsunade look more visually appealing than she already is? I just noticed the bottom part of her shirt is torn off.
And the shinobi behind Oonoki has a beard. I believe that's the first time we've ever seen a shinobi with a full blown beard.

Page 2
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Tobirama, Naruto, Sasuke, Hiruzen slicing these God trees like it's nothing... I guess this means Mufine is Kage level too.

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Never noticed how Mifunes armor looks extremely identical to Hashirama's.
Cool.

Page 3
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Tobirama: I can't do it all at once like you... but I'll support everyone with my Shunshein no Jutsu.
What the heck. Tobirama you're a freaking Edo. You have unlimited stamina and chakra, what the heck do you mean you can't do it.

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I like the bridge Kishi used to get Oro in the fight.

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Oro with the steroids, okay. I never knew he was that physically powerful... I know Hashirama's cells have a huge part to play in that display of strength, but did absorbing Kabuto's senjutsu have anything to do with it?

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I really like that Hiruzen and Oro are teaming up, but I'd love to see a Tsunade/Oro tag team.

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So I'm guessing this is where Hashirama's Wood Dragon is derived from. But can it actually do anything, or just flail and bang it's ead around everywhere? It'd be cool if it could breathe fire or something. Otherwise it looks something like a pig as well.

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The more I look at this, the more I start to think Hashirama is more connected to the Juubi than the actual Sage. He's shown more similarities in terms of ability with him than what we know of the Sage.

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Partner summoning. I've never heard of this before, and its a really weird concept to be honest, summoning the same thing at once and it doesn't make much sense. Tsunade has more than double whatever chakra Sakura has, so shouldn't she be able to summon it on her own?

And how do two people summon the same thing? Summoning depends on the amount of chakra put into your 'call' when performed. So, that would imply Tsunade didn't have enough chakra to summon her alone and needed Sakuras assistance to, which I don't understand. This idea is very flawed.

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I give it a few hours until somebody takes that panel of Tobirama and turns it into a sig. If it already hasn't been done...

Page 7
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Katsuya has once again shown another ability to alter her medium, I guess she has liquefying abilities now. Cool.

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Ino can now contact the entire alliance normally now I guess. Kuramas Cloak disappeared off her in this scan.

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It's insane how fast this guy is. He dodged a PS Slash and Kuramas Swipe at the same time, it's like trying to swat a fly you can't touch.

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I swear it looks like Sasuke's Susanoo keeps on getting bigger and bigger every panel.

And what was the purpose of showing Sasuke's Sharingan? Whenever that happens its usually foreshadowing something or something that he noticed. Waiting to see what that was.

Page 9

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Obito didn't even break a sweat tanking those hits. He keeps getting stronger an stronger.

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Page 10

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Obito's Jinton Arms. I don't get why Naruto doesn't take that time to blast a TBB right in his face while he has the chance, but whatever.

And I think it's about time Kakashi gets psychologist sage mode.

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First of all, I'd like to clear up Obito's parallel with Pain. They're similar, but have 2 completely different motives for fighting Naruto.

Pain asked him for an answer, that could have possibly lead to him thinking another way or really influencing him. Pain had his own methods of attaining peace as Obito has his own, but Obito isn't really looking for much of an answer. He's making sure he's not just all bark and no bite so when he leaves and abandons his I.T. plan, Naruto will still hold the planet down like he's supposed to. He's testing his will and courage to fight on even when the odds just keep on stacking, and stacking and stacking up against him.


Pain on the other hand was more than sure of his method of peace, while Obito is having second thoughts.

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Why does Obito look so anorexic?

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What the heck Tobirama? "I'll help out in whatever way I can?" Foreal? You just let Obito bring the hammer down on like, 25 fodders.

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So I'm guessing those Wood Dragons are just for nothing, because that's exactly what they've been doing.

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Silly Obito, you can't tnj Naruto.

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Everything. It blows my mind how much of this crap Sasuke, Naruto and Jugo keep tanking.
Especially Jugo. It's like his parents were tanks. It's like he's a walking tank. Matter fact, I think his full name is Jugo Tank. Yeah..

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I highly suggest Susanoo either keeps his mouth closed from now on, or goes to see a dentist. Those teth are horrid.
 
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Moe22

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Well Tsunade WAS kinda cut in half =D
Edit: But very insightful review. You have a keen eye!
 
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appreciate all the work put into this.!!
 

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Rep for the effort. I would like to see more jutsu from Tobirama. He an edo, he should be spammin water dragons and shun shin, not sitting back analyzing stuff. Hashiramas dragon looks as if it's attacking the alliance. Smh @ hiruzens love for Oro. No comment for the Tsunade Sakura -chan duo(no positive comments). Wtf is Madara? Why isn't Obito attacking madara? Looks like sasukes taking a page out of Madaras book with the susano'o over the nine tails cloak. I look forward to the next chapter.
 

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Ok great post plus Rep to you. Now page three I belive that he can't ftg as many people as minoto due to the amount of chakra needed he is not linked to half of the nine tails. Page 6 again it depends on the amount of chakra and the hokage said that if they combined there chakra they could summon 1/10 of her full size that tells us two things the slug is massive and she is the only one. We have seen multiple snakes and frogs but only one slug. Hope that clears up some of your thoughts again great post
 

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I really liked page 15. You know the way Obito is shown with these black things makes him look like he has some kind of black wings which is an excellent allegory because he represents a falling angel for his change from good to evil and him with black wings is exactly that!=D
 

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I like to see different vantage points from others when they read the chapter. Makes it more interesting.
 

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Rep. You should consider adding a video with your written reviews, meaning have both the text post and a video presentation of yourself on what you wrote up.
 

GrayParadise

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nice is there some review from the last chapters

Thanks. And not at the moment, this is my first one. I tried doing one for 649, but it only got finished on Moday so I was like screw it and waited.
 

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so i was one of the very few that thought of the ending of matrix revolutions when obito questioned naruto?
 

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The susanoo teeth are straight and perfect? Go to a dentist are you serious?
 
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