Oxide Mujaki (Made for me)

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Name- Oxide Mujaki

Age- 17

Rank- Unknown


Village- Kumogakue, Village Hidden in the Cloud



Element- Fire

Ninjutsu- Hinotetsume no jutsu- Flaming claws of chakra protrude from the users hands and semi-harden allowing for extended reach and heightened CQB (close quarters battle) efficiency. Actual jutsu is C rank, power and effectiveness mostly depends on users Taijutsu ability. Mujakis sensei taught him this technique on graduation from the academy.

Naien yousei no jutsu- The jutsu summons forth fire spites, that can come in any number/ size though as would be expected, the larger/ more of them there are, the more chakra it consumes, they can be utilized in many different ways by the familiar, it is possible to run thousands of microscopic fire sprites through ones blood stream in order to neutralize poison, neutralize any wind chakra that enters the body or even just keep the body warm, they can also be used to spy and they transfer everything they see in real time, or when in a stitch you can summon just one or two giant flame sprites that can either self destruct cause a huge explosion or just simply outright ATTACK! While this is usually a high B rank jutsu, it takes a fair chunk of chakra and Mujaki has yet to master it. C rank.

Taijutsu- Seisho palm- By pushing his stamina body into his palm and hitting the meridians on a persons body he can sap some of their energy and use it as his own, Mujaki learned the basis of this technique when working the farm and keeping wild animals calm, he then used this to create his own technique The Seisho Palm after his uncle who taught him the original. C
rank.

Land-Mine Fist- By pushing some chakra into his fist and adding the explosion element to it Mujaki can make a punch and have an explosion burst from his fist though it is angled in such a way that he is left untouched, the explosive force and size may vary depending on how much chakra is input.
B-rank.

Clan Tech.- Inanaki no jutsu- Inanaki no jutsu is not strictly a a jutsu perse, it is more of a passive ability that is inherent in the Nii clan due to their farmer background and it allows the user to communicate telepathically with beasts of all motive and description. C- rank.

Bio- Oxide Mujaki is the son of Nii Yuukyuu who was the son of Nii Yugito, the two tails Jinchuriki. Mujaki has been under the guidance of his uncle (His mothers younger brother) and a fun loving yet cynical young man of 17 years and has a pessimistic yet creative view of the world and takes every truth with a grain of salt. Growing up in the Hidden village in the Grass he has grown up with animals all around him and is well received by all of them, he has a strong bond with his pet cat who's family line has been with that of the Nii clans for centuries, Mujakis cat Raku is lazy and cynical yet he has his wise moments, they are both looking forward to the chuunin exams very much and they anticipate the long journey from their new home in Kumogakure the Hidden Village of the Cloud.


Special Ability
Yuukyuu Enkou: mysterious blue flame very similar to the forbidden technique Ameterasu, it burns ANYTHING that it touches and though his father created this new technique, he never taught it to Mujaki, and no-one knows where he gained it.
 

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This whole bio is wrong.

Dont even know where to begin.

First don't make duplicate threads. You could of easily just edited your original thread and we could of given you feed back.

You do not have blue flames or whatever. You have no special ability. Actually everything under "Element: Fire" delete. Except Bio portion, which you need to change to History.

Lets start with that
 
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