I don't know, i'm bored. I was thinking we could have a debate where two people post any original character they created, with all the info, abilities, strengths and weaknesses and what not, and we could decide who would win in a battle. Of course, the creater have no say in the debate because their decision would be bias. It would be like Versus Colliseum, except parting uncannon characters instead of canon characters. Who knows, maybe i'll put this in VC too. My recent OC is named Po Higarashi, i'll type all his info if someone wants to have their Naruto OC parred against him. Of course, if the OC is too OP then they will be disqualified.
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90% of fanfic characters are awful, just look at the sonic fandom.
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All i'm interested in is how do you plan to restrict OP characters? There needs to be a points system or something in place.
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I did these a while ago before their canon appearance. You consider them either as an AU, potential future, or originals.
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It should be pretty easy to determine whether or not an OC is OP. For one thing, only one Kekkai Genkai per OC, cannot have wood release, rinnegan or EMS. Cannot be an edo tensei, or have more than one special ability. (( Example of special ability: CM, SM, MS. )) So a character cannot possess two of any special abilities, only one, unless you're Sasuke in which you aren't an OC.
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No but the strongest winner is the one who picks the most/best abilities. There's not much else really to it, plus a huge contributor to VS matches are their personalities, weaknesses and knowledge of each other...
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My only legitimate OC (who also wasn't some extra and/or historical person) was an evil dude who created an army of self-healing, self-replicating monsters that could adapt to anything, grow new organs and limbs when required to, etc. Their main weakness was that their powers went out of control under certain circumstances (and lack of intellect, they were basically animals). He also did modifications to his own body.
...But that was a while ago, and he is dead anyway :|
...But that was a while ago, and he is dead anyway :|
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Character: father lord god champion Kaiser c
Cobra
Special ability: Doton domu and Ea
Now come at me.
Cobra
Special ability: Doton domu and Ea
Now come at me.
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Well my OC was a cowardly tiny chunnin guy who tricked animals into summoning contracts. His moveset is almost entirely animal contracts and he's their support nin, he's a total coward about pain and hasn't even been hit.
How would we factor him in haha
How would we factor him in haha
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Those were the days on the OC Sonic characters lol
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This sounds like fun. I will use my own bio. It's an original character so lets see 
Name:Umari Senju
Nickname:The Silver Griffon
Gender: - Male
Age:35
Clan: Senju
Looks:Umari stands 5ft 10in tall, and weighs 165lbs. He has a slender build, and unruly shoulder length silver hair
The tips of his hair are black and his bangs hang from the right side of his face hiding his right eye. His facial features are smooth and youthful despite being 35 years of age. Umari’s attire consists of black pants and black long sleeve shirt covered with a long white jacket with blue flame etchings on its sleeves, back collar and lower tail. His boots also contain the same blue flame motifs as his jacket entails.
Personality:Umari is very warm and friendly to strangers and prefers to end conflicts with his words before his fists. When in battle, Umari is somewhat hesitant which his opponents often mistake as weakness. He is fast and agile freguently using his blinding speed and quick blade attacks to keep his opponents off balance.
Village Info.
Village of Birth: Amegakure
Village of Alliance:Amegakure
Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank:Sannin
Specialty: Star Sage Mode
Elements: Raiton - Fuuton
Your ninjutsu:
Nickname:The Silver Griffon
Gender: - Male
Age:35
Clan: Senju
Looks:Umari stands 5ft 10in tall, and weighs 165lbs. He has a slender build, and unruly shoulder length silver hair
The tips of his hair are black and his bangs hang from the right side of his face hiding his right eye. His facial features are smooth and youthful despite being 35 years of age. Umari’s attire consists of black pants and black long sleeve shirt covered with a long white jacket with blue flame etchings on its sleeves, back collar and lower tail. His boots also contain the same blue flame motifs as his jacket entails.
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Personality:Umari is very warm and friendly to strangers and prefers to end conflicts with his words before his fists. When in battle, Umari is somewhat hesitant which his opponents often mistake as weakness. He is fast and agile freguently using his blinding speed and quick blade attacks to keep his opponents off balance.
Village Info.
Village of Birth: Amegakure
Village of Alliance:Amegakure
Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank:Sannin
Specialty: Star Sage Mode
Elements: Raiton - Fuuton
Your ninjutsu:
(Raiton-Bunshin No Jutsu) - Lightning Clone Technique
(Kaminari no kami no baria) - Barrier of the Thunder God Technique
Rank: A
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short -Mid
Description: by performing the Boar-Ox-Snake handsigns, Umari channels lightning chakra through his body then releases static electricity through his skin. The result is a short ranged barrier that deflects all ninjutsu attacks of A rank or lower. The Barrier cannot be maintained for long and as long as it constantly drains chakra.The barrier can be extended around other people, however keeping the barrier up requires a degree of concentration and thus Umari is unable to move while the barrier is active.
(Denri-ha) - Ionizing Wave
Rank:A
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Description: Umari claps the palms of his hands together channeling lightning chakra into his palms before placing them on the ground. A bluish wave of lightning charged light surges through the ground and everything in contact with the ground within a 25 meter radius is immediately ionized. With the user charged with electrons the next successful hit does 25% more damage for a short time. If the next attack is a wind element the attack does 50% more damage. This technique can be avoided by simply not being on the ground or within the area of effect when the jutsu is performed.
SAGE MODE JUTSU:
Owl Kun Do-
FUKUROU SAKKAKU JAMA ( Owl Illusion Jammer)
FUKUROU-HARIKEN ATAKKU (Owl Hurricane Attack)
SAIKURONSHAUTO (Cyclone Shout)
Weapon(s): Storm Shuriken
Rank: Forbidden
Description: Umari's Windmill Shuriken houses 4 separate short blades each with an elemental seal on it containing Donton, Suiton, Katon, and Fuuton chakra collected from absorbing the blood of any oppoenent it cuts and taking on their elemental affinity. each blade of the windmill shuriken can be used as a sword in itself giving Umari versatility in close or long ranged fights. The blade has a high cost however. Each time one of the seals is activated the user own chakra is devoured in order to release it's collected chakra against an opponent. Overuse of this weapon can even kill the user.
(Kaminari no kami no baria) - Barrier of the Thunder God Technique
Rank: A
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short -Mid
Description: by performing the Boar-Ox-Snake handsigns, Umari channels lightning chakra through his body then releases static electricity through his skin. The result is a short ranged barrier that deflects all ninjutsu attacks of A rank or lower. The Barrier cannot be maintained for long and as long as it constantly drains chakra.The barrier can be extended around other people, however keeping the barrier up requires a degree of concentration and thus Umari is unable to move while the barrier is active.
(Denri-ha) - Ionizing Wave
Rank:A
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Description: Umari claps the palms of his hands together channeling lightning chakra into his palms before placing them on the ground. A bluish wave of lightning charged light surges through the ground and everything in contact with the ground within a 25 meter radius is immediately ionized. With the user charged with electrons the next successful hit does 25% more damage for a short time. If the next attack is a wind element the attack does 50% more damage. This technique can be avoided by simply not being on the ground or within the area of effect when the jutsu is performed.
SAGE MODE JUTSU:
Owl Kun Do-
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Chakra: 25 per hit
Damage: 50 per hit(25 if hit by the wind effect)
Range: Close-Mid
Detail: In sage mode your base speed is increased two fold. Your taijutsu is increased drastically doubling the damage inflicted. In addition your punches and kicks are guided by the wind extending their reach from close range to mid range. A missed punch or kick carries the wind with it knocking an opponent over for 1 turn.
Type: Offensive
Chakra: 25 per hit
Damage: 50 per hit(25 if hit by the wind effect)
Range: Close-Mid
Detail: In sage mode your base speed is increased two fold. Your taijutsu is increased drastically doubling the damage inflicted. In addition your punches and kicks are guided by the wind extending their reach from close range to mid range. A missed punch or kick carries the wind with it knocking an opponent over for 1 turn.
FUKUROU SAKKAKU JAMA ( Owl Illusion Jammer)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Genjutsu
Range: Close-Mid
Details: In Sage Mode, Umari shakes his body to emit the buildup of Gold Leaf Dust stored in his feathers during training at Gurētoerudātsurī. The dust is activated when the Umari's is placed under genjutsu. When inhaled by Umari, nature chakra is carried into his brain returning his chakra flow to normal and dispelling the genjutsu. When those who have not received owl sage training inhale it, the nature chakra is released into their brain causing terrible nightmarish hallucinations.
Note: this jutsu must be deployed before a genjutsu is cast. The Gold Leaf Dust remains on the battlefield for 5 posts unless the opponent blows it away or burns it with a A Rank wind or fire jutsu.
Type: Supplementary/Genjutsu
Range: Close-Mid
Details: In Sage Mode, Umari shakes his body to emit the buildup of Gold Leaf Dust stored in his feathers during training at Gurētoerudātsurī. The dust is activated when the Umari's is placed under genjutsu. When inhaled by Umari, nature chakra is carried into his brain returning his chakra flow to normal and dispelling the genjutsu. When those who have not received owl sage training inhale it, the nature chakra is released into their brain causing terrible nightmarish hallucinations.
Note: this jutsu must be deployed before a genjutsu is cast. The Gold Leaf Dust remains on the battlefield for 5 posts unless the opponent blows it away or burns it with a A Rank wind or fire jutsu.
FUKUROU-HARIKEN ATAKKU (Owl Hurricane Attack)
Rank:A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Details: The sage gathers wind all around his/her body and flies high into the air positioning themselves directly above their opponent. They Owl Sage then enters a free fall state directly above their opponent generating a massive buildup of wind. The sage then rotates their body creating a devastating wind attack that not only causes severe damage but decimates anything within a 5 meter radius of impact after which a small crater is left in the ground.
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Details: The sage gathers wind all around his/her body and flies high into the air positioning themselves directly above their opponent. They Owl Sage then enters a free fall state directly above their opponent generating a massive buildup of wind. The sage then rotates their body creating a devastating wind attack that not only causes severe damage but decimates anything within a 5 meter radius of impact after which a small crater is left in the ground.
SAIKURONSHAUTO (Cyclone Shout)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Details: After absorbing nature chakra and collecting it in your stomach, you apply wind chakra and knead them together. The mix of the 2 chakras are then concentrated to the mouth where the sage spits an extremely high velocity gust of wind capable of destroying large boulders and even steel. (note this attack cannot be blocked and must be either evaded or countered with a jutsu S Rank or higher.
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Details: After absorbing nature chakra and collecting it in your stomach, you apply wind chakra and knead them together. The mix of the 2 chakras are then concentrated to the mouth where the sage spits an extremely high velocity gust of wind capable of destroying large boulders and even steel. (note this attack cannot be blocked and must be either evaded or countered with a jutsu S Rank or higher.
Weapon(s): Storm Shuriken
Rank: Forbidden
Description: Umari's Windmill Shuriken houses 4 separate short blades each with an elemental seal on it containing Donton, Suiton, Katon, and Fuuton chakra collected from absorbing the blood of any oppoenent it cuts and taking on their elemental affinity. each blade of the windmill shuriken can be used as a sword in itself giving Umari versatility in close or long ranged fights. The blade has a high cost however. Each time one of the seals is activated the user own chakra is devoured in order to release it's collected chakra against an opponent. Overuse of this weapon can even kill the user.
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Okay,seeing how this is the most detailed bio on a characters, I will use this one. I guess i'll first determine whether he is OP or not, and then pair him against another OC and have it posted in the Versus Colliseum.This sounds like fun. I will use my own bio. It's an original character so lets see
Name:Umari Senju
Nickname:The Silver Griffon
Gender: - Male
Age:35
Clan: Senju
Looks:Umari stands 5ft 10in tall, and weighs 165lbs. He has a slender build, and unruly shoulder length silver hair
The tips of his hair are black and his bangs hang from the right side of his face hiding his right eye. His facial features are smooth and youthful despite being 35 years of age. Umari’s attire consists of black pants and black long sleeve shirt covered with a long white jacket with blue flame etchings on its sleeves, back collar and lower tail. His boots also contain the same blue flame motifs as his jacket entails.
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Personality:Umari is very warm and friendly to strangers and prefers to end conflicts with his words before his fists. When in battle, Umari is somewhat hesitant which his opponents often mistake as weakness. He is fast and agile freguently using his blinding speed and quick blade attacks to keep his opponents off balance.
Village Info.
Village of Birth: Amegakure
Village of Alliance:Amegakure
Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank:Sannin
Specialty: Star Sage Mode
Elements: Raiton - Fuuton
Your ninjutsu:
(Raiton-Bunshin No Jutsu) - Lightning Clone Technique
(Kaminari no kami no baria) - Barrier of the Thunder God Technique
Rank: A
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short -Mid
Description: by performing the Boar-Ox-Snake handsigns, Umari channels lightning chakra through his body then releases static electricity through his skin. The result is a short ranged barrier that deflects all ninjutsu attacks of A rank or lower. The Barrier cannot be maintained for long and as long as it constantly drains chakra.The barrier can be extended around other people, however keeping the barrier up requires a degree of concentration and thus Umari is unable to move while the barrier is active.
(Denri-ha) - Ionizing Wave
Rank:A
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Description: Umari claps the palms of his hands together channeling lightning chakra into his palms before placing them on the ground. A bluish wave of lightning charged light surges through the ground and everything in contact with the ground within a 25 meter radius is immediately ionized. With the user charged with electrons the next successful hit does 25% more damage for a short time. If the next attack is a wind element the attack does 50% more damage. This technique can be avoided by simply not being on the ground or within the area of effect when the jutsu is performed.
SAGE MODE JUTSU:
Owl Kun Do-
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Chakra: 25 per hit
Damage: 50 per hit(25 if hit by the wind effect)
Range: Close-Mid
Detail: In sage mode your base speed is increased two fold. Your taijutsu is increased drastically doubling the damage inflicted. In addition your punches and kicks are guided by the wind extending their reach from close range to mid range. A missed punch or kick carries the wind with it knocking an opponent over for 1 turn.
FUKUROU SAKKAKU JAMA ( Owl Illusion Jammer)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Genjutsu
Range: Close-Mid
Details: In Sage Mode, Umari shakes his body to emit the buildup of Gold Leaf Dust stored in his feathers during training at Gurētoerudātsurī. The dust is activated when the Umari's is placed under genjutsu. When inhaled by Umari, nature chakra is carried into his brain returning his chakra flow to normal and dispelling the genjutsu. When those who have not received owl sage training inhale it, the nature chakra is released into their brain causing terrible nightmarish hallucinations.
Note: this jutsu must be deployed before a genjutsu is cast. The Gold Leaf Dust remains on the battlefield for 5 posts unless the opponent blows it away or burns it with a A Rank wind or fire jutsu.
FUKUROU-HARIKEN ATAKKU (Owl Hurricane Attack)
Rank:A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Details: The sage gathers wind all around his/her body and flies high into the air positioning themselves directly above their opponent. They Owl Sage then enters a free fall state directly above their opponent generating a massive buildup of wind. The sage then rotates their body creating a devastating wind attack that not only causes severe damage but decimates anything within a 5 meter radius of impact after which a small crater is left in the ground.
SAIKURONSHAUTO (Cyclone Shout)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Details: After absorbing nature chakra and collecting it in your stomach, you apply wind chakra and knead them together. The mix of the 2 chakras are then concentrated to the mouth where the sage spits an extremely high velocity gust of wind capable of destroying large boulders and even steel. (note this attack cannot be blocked and must be either evaded or countered with a jutsu S Rank or higher.
Weapon(s): Storm Shuriken
Rank: Forbidden
Description: Umari's Windmill Shuriken houses 4 separate short blades each with an elemental seal on it containing Donton, Suiton, Katon, and Fuuton chakra collected from absorbing the blood of any oppoenent it cuts and taking on their elemental affinity. each blade of the windmill shuriken can be used as a sword in itself giving Umari versatility in close or long ranged fights. The blade has a high cost however. Each time one of the seals is activated the user own chakra is devoured in order to release it's collected chakra against an opponent. Overuse of this weapon can even kill the user.
Name: Kano Ma`ryoko Okami
Nickname: The Tailed Wolf
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Clan: Okami
Looks: Kano has short brown hair, bluish green eyes, and a natural blush light skin complexion. He is naturally skinny, but well built and very strong. He stand at 6'0 with a slender body shape and usually slightly hunched posture.
Personality: Kano has a split personality. While one side of him is usually happy and kind, and grateful for his life and friends, his other side in dark and gloomy, a part of his soul that still mourns for the death of his parents and clan. At that point, his hair turns black and he shuts the world out. However, Kano isn't sure which is his primary personality, whether he is truly happy or truly mourning inside.
Village Info:
Okamigakure: Village hidden by wolves
Konohagakure: Affiliation
Rank/Chakra Info:
Rank: Sage, Elite Anbu Leader
Specialty: Katon
Kano's Jutsu's
Nickname: The Tailed Wolf
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Clan: Okami
Looks: Kano has short brown hair, bluish green eyes, and a natural blush light skin complexion. He is naturally skinny, but well built and very strong. He stand at 6'0 with a slender body shape and usually slightly hunched posture.
Shippuden:
Gaiden:
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Personality: Kano has a split personality. While one side of him is usually happy and kind, and grateful for his life and friends, his other side in dark and gloomy, a part of his soul that still mourns for the death of his parents and clan. At that point, his hair turns black and he shuts the world out. However, Kano isn't sure which is his primary personality, whether he is truly happy or truly mourning inside.
Village Info:
Okamigakure: Village hidden by wolves
Konohagakure: Affiliation
Rank/Chakra Info:
Rank: Sage, Elite Anbu Leader
Specialty: Katon
Kano's Jutsu's
Katon: Kasai Teryuudan (Kanji; 手榴弾) Literal Meaning; Fire Release; Fire Grenade
(Rank A)
The user weaves chakra into ones own palm, forming it into a fairly small condensed fire ball, which the user propels into the earth, softening up the earth into sand. If stepped on, ones foot is stuck, and the added weigh of there body triggers the small fire ball in a massive explosion. (Used more or less for mission.)
Katon: Fukusū no hinotama no Jutsu (Kanji; 複 数の火の玉). Literal Meaning; Fire Release: Multiple Fireball Technique.
(Rank A)
A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire and expelled from the mouth as a plethora of massive orbs. The scope of the attack is altered by controlling the volume of chakra that is mustered. The released flames will engulf their target, and leave a crater on the ground's surface. a plethora of great fire balls propell toward the opponent, rising so harshly in temperature that there flames manifest into blue fire as they arrive near the enemy.
Katon: Kamikaze Tori (Kanji; 鳥神風). Literal Meaning; Fire Release: Kamikaze Birds
(Rank A)
the user weaves chakra into ones own mouth, spewing that chakra into the shape of large, mishapen birds that highly resemble the puppets of Kakuzu. The birds propel themselves at a great speed toward the enemy one by one, each causing a notable explosion at touch, large enough to cause minor burns to the enemy. The explosion surrounds the entire area with fire particles, that once breathed in, deprives the body of air by feeding off of it’s oxygen, and consuming the enemy from inside out with a burning fire.
Katon: Jiko Hakai (Kanji; 自己 破壊) Literal Meaning; Fire Release: Self Destruct
(Rank S)
This jutsu consumes a massive amount of energy, in an event where the user seemingly self destructs. Focusing a large amount of chakra around one’s own body, the chakra is then weaved into a large ball of fire around the user and expanded in both height and width, widespreading and burning anything in it’s path as it grows. The fire, so dense and hot, deflects tools thrown at them, and reduces Suiton to steam in a matter of seconds. It was created by the Uchiha caln and intended for use when destroying a village. One would stand in the middle of a village, and began this jutsu.
Katon: Hai Ryū (Kanji; 火遁 豪龍火の術) Literal Meaning; Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire and Ash Pile Burning Technique
(Rank A)
The user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body and changes it into a dragon head-shaped fireball. The user then skillfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. Even outside of the attack range, its power and reliability are stressed. The flames have a high temperature, which cause them to turn blue and can create an upward movement of air currents which in turn can give rise to thunder clouds. A master of this technique can fire off several flames in succession and anyone caught in the technique could potentially be reduced to ashes. The mouth of the dragon spews a stream of chakra infused gun-powder from their mouth, which surrounds the region. As the gunpowder is composed entirely of ash, it stays in the air around the victim like a cloud, which can be used like a smokescreen. After surrounding the enemy with the ash, the user can ignite it with a flint placed on their teeth beforehand to create a spark, resulting in a violent explosion, burning the enemy. However, this technique requires keen senses to read the air currents, the insight to read the movements of the enemy, the tactical experience to not also enfold one's allies in the flames, and careful attention for the timing of the ignition.
Katon: Kanun no jutsu (Kanji; 嵐遁雲 ) Literal Meaning; Fire Release: Storm Cloud Technique
(Rank C)
The user performs the necessary hand seals to summon a small fire ball, which he then launches into the air at an amazing speed, a process that soon summons a dense layer of storm clouds. Once the storm clouds form, the user can use utilize the storm clouds to assist more elaborate jutsus.
Raiton: Zeusu no Kiyanon (Kanji; ゼウスの キヤノン) Literal Meaning; Lightning Style: Zues’s Canon
(Rank S)
Only used during storm clouds. User summons a large bolt of lightning from the sky, which enters his body, conducting itself through his chakra points and out toward his finger tips causing him severe pain and impaired vision for no more than 10 minutes. If user can stand the pain, he focuses the lightning into a single, wide-spread thick spiraling blast, undodgeable do to speed.
Raiton: Inazuma Tensei (Kanji; 千鳥 神羅天征) Literal Meaning; Lightning Style: Lightning Push
(Rank: A)
This technique channels a large amount of lightning chakra to the user's hand. The amount of chakra is so great that it becomes visible, as the user focuses the lightning mainly to his palms, thrusting it into the ground. This causes a three hundred and sixty degrees dispersion of wild electricty to spread at an amazing pace around the user’s circumfrance, stirring wild winds that conduct the electricity in greater strengths toward the opponent. The affects are bad electricution to the point of numbness and near paralysis.
Raiton: Tacchi Wo Sasu (Kanji; タッチ を 刺す) ; Literal Meaning; Lightinig Release: Stinging Touch
(Rank: A)
The user focuses a dense amount of lightning chakra in ones own fingertips, which begin to conduct eletrical currents. When an opponent comes into contact with these electrical currents found inonly the fingertips, that area that had made contact is quickly shocked and soon becomes numb.
Dorobōgan
Dorobōgan: ( Kanji; 泥棒 ) Literal Meaning; The Thief Eye
Dorobōgan is the bloodline dojutsu kekkai genkai of the Okami clan that appears during Sage Mode. Dorobōgan was later added as the fourth great Dōjutsu along with sharingan, byakugan and rinnegan.
Kamachi Style: Capoeira ( Kanji; カポエイラ )
(Rank S)
By utilizing the properties of Chakra Flow and the element Lightning, the user is able to dramatically increase ones own reflexes and overall speed by electrically stimulating the Somatic Reflex Arc; a neural pathway that controls the action reflexes within the body, and the optic nerve to increase Visual Acuity. Unlike similar techniques, this technique is completely anonymous and is activated without the usage of handseals. In terms of usage, this technique can allows to see with an extreme degree of clarity, though not as defined as a doujutsu, and react with speeds rivaling those of similar anatomical techniques. The user react in a mix of hands, feet, and head in such a random yet precise peformance combined with chakra natures, it’s extremely hard to counter.
Kamachi Style: Youkai ( Kanji; 妖怪 )
(Rank A)
This is a less powerful taijutsu for of Capoeira centered around simple evasive manuevers that appear sluggish and erratic to the viewer. The main purpose of the style is to destablize an opponent’s focus and footing while lining them up for counter attacks. Most of the more "direct" attacks of this style combine chakra shaping to belt out internal damage to further hamper a target. This technique does not require Dorobōgan
Tsutsuji: ( Kanji; ツツジ ) Literal Meaning; Azalea
(Rank S)
Kano uses a special poison he created for different situation. It usually comes in a poisonous cloud that alters the cebrel cortex and induces severe insanity. Kano also has his very kunai dipped it, can use Suiton, or even spread it with Fuuton.
Ninpo: kuchibueno chakura no dangan ( Kanji;口笛 のチ ャクラ の 弾丸 ) Literal Meaning; Ninja Art: Whistling Chakra Bullet
(Rank B)
An attack that requires skill at molding chakra into physical form, the Whistling Chakra Bullet Jutsu gets its name the high pitched sound that it makes upon release. Chakra is condensed inside the hand and formed into a round hard bullet-shaped pellet that's slightly larger than a marble. The user cocks his fingers back as if ahooting a gun, and shoots the pellet straight forward at high speeds using a burst of chakra for propulsion. The bullet can only been indentified by the sonic booms that ripples behind it’s trail, composing whistling sounds.
In'yōton: Kibaku Fuda Fūinjutsu ( Kanji; 起爆札 封印術 ) Literal Meaning; Ninja Art: Explosion Tag Seal Technique
(Rank B)
A technique where the user utilzes chakra to perform sealing jutsu, being required to rest their palm on their opponent to place a seal with the design for Explosion Tags. When triggered, the victim suffers moderate burn to the surface of their skin.
In'yōton: Pandōra no Haku ( Kanji;パンドラ の 箱 ) Literal Meaning; Shadow Style: Pandora’s Box
A jutsu that consists of four special shadow kunai to be placed in equal diagnol angles from each other. From there on, the user summons and utilizes the shadow chakra in the kunai to gather forth a special shadow, one that forms a three dimensional box over the user. This can be used as a defense jutsu that holds the user inside, nullifying any attacks that come near it, no matter the pierce, shred or cut power.
clone body switch jutsu
(Rank A)
I didn't really go into dertail when making this jutsu, but Kano can switch places with an active clone so that the Clones body becomes his own living body and his orginal body becomes the clone. Not as impressive now that I think about it, but i'll keep it up here, it could be good for tactical use.
Kano has a special weapon that can shift into other weapons. Some examples; a large wooden mallet that swings suppressed chakra waves with brutal force, a bow with a metal string able to conduct electricity and and shoot arrows of lightning with piercing strength stronger than Chidori, which is actually used to make the arrows sometimes, a sword that conducts fire.
(Rank A)
The user weaves chakra into ones own palm, forming it into a fairly small condensed fire ball, which the user propels into the earth, softening up the earth into sand. If stepped on, ones foot is stuck, and the added weigh of there body triggers the small fire ball in a massive explosion. (Used more or less for mission.)
Katon: Fukusū no hinotama no Jutsu (Kanji; 複 数の火の玉). Literal Meaning; Fire Release: Multiple Fireball Technique.
(Rank A)
A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire and expelled from the mouth as a plethora of massive orbs. The scope of the attack is altered by controlling the volume of chakra that is mustered. The released flames will engulf their target, and leave a crater on the ground's surface. a plethora of great fire balls propell toward the opponent, rising so harshly in temperature that there flames manifest into blue fire as they arrive near the enemy.
Katon: Kamikaze Tori (Kanji; 鳥神風). Literal Meaning; Fire Release: Kamikaze Birds
(Rank A)
the user weaves chakra into ones own mouth, spewing that chakra into the shape of large, mishapen birds that highly resemble the puppets of Kakuzu. The birds propel themselves at a great speed toward the enemy one by one, each causing a notable explosion at touch, large enough to cause minor burns to the enemy. The explosion surrounds the entire area with fire particles, that once breathed in, deprives the body of air by feeding off of it’s oxygen, and consuming the enemy from inside out with a burning fire.
Katon: Jiko Hakai (Kanji; 自己 破壊) Literal Meaning; Fire Release: Self Destruct
(Rank S)
This jutsu consumes a massive amount of energy, in an event where the user seemingly self destructs. Focusing a large amount of chakra around one’s own body, the chakra is then weaved into a large ball of fire around the user and expanded in both height and width, widespreading and burning anything in it’s path as it grows. The fire, so dense and hot, deflects tools thrown at them, and reduces Suiton to steam in a matter of seconds. It was created by the Uchiha caln and intended for use when destroying a village. One would stand in the middle of a village, and began this jutsu.
Katon: Hai Ryū (Kanji; 火遁 豪龍火の術) Literal Meaning; Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire and Ash Pile Burning Technique
(Rank A)
The user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body and changes it into a dragon head-shaped fireball. The user then skillfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. Even outside of the attack range, its power and reliability are stressed. The flames have a high temperature, which cause them to turn blue and can create an upward movement of air currents which in turn can give rise to thunder clouds. A master of this technique can fire off several flames in succession and anyone caught in the technique could potentially be reduced to ashes. The mouth of the dragon spews a stream of chakra infused gun-powder from their mouth, which surrounds the region. As the gunpowder is composed entirely of ash, it stays in the air around the victim like a cloud, which can be used like a smokescreen. After surrounding the enemy with the ash, the user can ignite it with a flint placed on their teeth beforehand to create a spark, resulting in a violent explosion, burning the enemy. However, this technique requires keen senses to read the air currents, the insight to read the movements of the enemy, the tactical experience to not also enfold one's allies in the flames, and careful attention for the timing of the ignition.
Katon: Kanun no jutsu (Kanji; 嵐遁雲 ) Literal Meaning; Fire Release: Storm Cloud Technique
(Rank C)
The user performs the necessary hand seals to summon a small fire ball, which he then launches into the air at an amazing speed, a process that soon summons a dense layer of storm clouds. Once the storm clouds form, the user can use utilize the storm clouds to assist more elaborate jutsus.
Raiton: Zeusu no Kiyanon (Kanji; ゼウスの キヤノン) Literal Meaning; Lightning Style: Zues’s Canon
(Rank S)
Only used during storm clouds. User summons a large bolt of lightning from the sky, which enters his body, conducting itself through his chakra points and out toward his finger tips causing him severe pain and impaired vision for no more than 10 minutes. If user can stand the pain, he focuses the lightning into a single, wide-spread thick spiraling blast, undodgeable do to speed.
Raiton: Inazuma Tensei (Kanji; 千鳥 神羅天征) Literal Meaning; Lightning Style: Lightning Push
(Rank: A)
This technique channels a large amount of lightning chakra to the user's hand. The amount of chakra is so great that it becomes visible, as the user focuses the lightning mainly to his palms, thrusting it into the ground. This causes a three hundred and sixty degrees dispersion of wild electricty to spread at an amazing pace around the user’s circumfrance, stirring wild winds that conduct the electricity in greater strengths toward the opponent. The affects are bad electricution to the point of numbness and near paralysis.
Raiton: Tacchi Wo Sasu (Kanji; タッチ を 刺す) ; Literal Meaning; Lightinig Release: Stinging Touch
(Rank: A)
The user focuses a dense amount of lightning chakra in ones own fingertips, which begin to conduct eletrical currents. When an opponent comes into contact with these electrical currents found inonly the fingertips, that area that had made contact is quickly shocked and soon becomes numb.
Dorobōgan
Dorobōgan: ( Kanji; 泥棒 ) Literal Meaning; The Thief Eye
Dorobōgan is the bloodline dojutsu kekkai genkai of the Okami clan that appears during Sage Mode. Dorobōgan was later added as the fourth great Dōjutsu along with sharingan, byakugan and rinnegan.
Kamachi Style: Capoeira ( Kanji; カポエイラ )
(Rank S)
By utilizing the properties of Chakra Flow and the element Lightning, the user is able to dramatically increase ones own reflexes and overall speed by electrically stimulating the Somatic Reflex Arc; a neural pathway that controls the action reflexes within the body, and the optic nerve to increase Visual Acuity. Unlike similar techniques, this technique is completely anonymous and is activated without the usage of handseals. In terms of usage, this technique can allows to see with an extreme degree of clarity, though not as defined as a doujutsu, and react with speeds rivaling those of similar anatomical techniques. The user react in a mix of hands, feet, and head in such a random yet precise peformance combined with chakra natures, it’s extremely hard to counter.
Kamachi Style: Youkai ( Kanji; 妖怪 )
(Rank A)
This is a less powerful taijutsu for of Capoeira centered around simple evasive manuevers that appear sluggish and erratic to the viewer. The main purpose of the style is to destablize an opponent’s focus and footing while lining them up for counter attacks. Most of the more "direct" attacks of this style combine chakra shaping to belt out internal damage to further hamper a target. This technique does not require Dorobōgan
Tsutsuji: ( Kanji; ツツジ ) Literal Meaning; Azalea
(Rank S)
Kano uses a special poison he created for different situation. It usually comes in a poisonous cloud that alters the cebrel cortex and induces severe insanity. Kano also has his very kunai dipped it, can use Suiton, or even spread it with Fuuton.
Ninpo: kuchibueno chakura no dangan ( Kanji;口笛 のチ ャクラ の 弾丸 ) Literal Meaning; Ninja Art: Whistling Chakra Bullet
(Rank B)
An attack that requires skill at molding chakra into physical form, the Whistling Chakra Bullet Jutsu gets its name the high pitched sound that it makes upon release. Chakra is condensed inside the hand and formed into a round hard bullet-shaped pellet that's slightly larger than a marble. The user cocks his fingers back as if ahooting a gun, and shoots the pellet straight forward at high speeds using a burst of chakra for propulsion. The bullet can only been indentified by the sonic booms that ripples behind it’s trail, composing whistling sounds.
In'yōton: Kibaku Fuda Fūinjutsu ( Kanji; 起爆札 封印術 ) Literal Meaning; Ninja Art: Explosion Tag Seal Technique
(Rank B)
A technique where the user utilzes chakra to perform sealing jutsu, being required to rest their palm on their opponent to place a seal with the design for Explosion Tags. When triggered, the victim suffers moderate burn to the surface of their skin.
In'yōton: Pandōra no Haku ( Kanji;パンドラ の 箱 ) Literal Meaning; Shadow Style: Pandora’s Box
A jutsu that consists of four special shadow kunai to be placed in equal diagnol angles from each other. From there on, the user summons and utilizes the shadow chakra in the kunai to gather forth a special shadow, one that forms a three dimensional box over the user. This can be used as a defense jutsu that holds the user inside, nullifying any attacks that come near it, no matter the pierce, shred or cut power.
clone body switch jutsu
(Rank A)
I didn't really go into dertail when making this jutsu, but Kano can switch places with an active clone so that the Clones body becomes his own living body and his orginal body becomes the clone. Not as impressive now that I think about it, but i'll keep it up here, it could be good for tactical use.
Kano has a special weapon that can shift into other weapons. Some examples; a large wooden mallet that swings suppressed chakra waves with brutal force, a bow with a metal string able to conduct electricity and and shoot arrows of lightning with piercing strength stronger than Chidori, which is actually used to make the arrows sometimes, a sword that conducts fire.
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Bad Touch Yakushi
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Name: Hāndler Sumoi
Nickname: The Contract Trickster
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Clan: No clan, adopted by the Sand.
Looks: Sumoi has a big blonde quiff of fringe with his brown natural hair shaved at the sides. He is unusually short for his age, only being around the size of a ninja such as Boruto. He has a boyish face which conflicts with his deceitful and tricky nature. He dresses in a Sand Brown flack jacket with Sand-coloured shorts and the usual Sand-ninja shoes. Like a lot of Sand ninja, he carries a strap around his shoulder that carries all of his collected summoning contracts. He has two contracts of his two favourite summons tattooed onto the underside of both his arms. (Mole & Sparrow)
Personality: Sumoi is a very defensive fighter and borderline coward. His fighting style is very much supportive and letting his summons do his fighting for him, having never been hit before. He is scared of pain but nonetheless enjoys inflicting it on others in battle.
Sumoi on the surface seems nonchalant and moody but is deceivingly silver-tongued, a natural born-liar and trickster- smack talking opponents when safe & exploring the Ninja world wilderness, tricking animals into contracts to him. His true nature is shady, slimy and pathetic, but ultimately he just wants a quiet, undisturbed life and time to work on his contract collection. He dreams of returning to The Hole one day with his collection of monsters & being treated like a Dictator/Bully. He keeps these aspects of his personality quiet whilst doing missions for the Hidden Sand.
Village of Birth: The Hole (Hacho Village)
Village of Alliance: Hidden Sand Village
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Rank//Chakra Info
Ninja Rank: Chunnin
Specialty: Summoning Fighting Style & Support Jutsu to back them up.
Weakpoint: His taijutsu is poor & lacks general physical offensiveness.
Elements: Earth Release. Minor Lightning Release
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Your Ninjutsu:
Summons:
Summoning: Ram Ram the Giant Mole (Big)
Has a tail that can drill holes & travel underground rapidly. Very good peripheral sensing and basic earth jutsu. Obeys due to small intellect and trickery.
Summoning: Condor the Ostrich (Small)
Knows several powerful taijutsu moves taking advantage of his naturally strong leg muscles. For example, he can do a powerful aerial kick that has the potential to slam the opponent to the ground or a powerful kick to the stomach in either in the air or on the ground similar to Rock Lee's taijutsu. While up in the air he can also create a shock wave by slamming his feet into the ground. His taijutsu skills make him capable of fighting chūnin-level shinobi. Naturally, as an ostrich, Condor has immense speed which he used in tandem with his taijutsu. He has also demonstrated great chakra control, demonstrating the ability to walk on water. He and Sumoi often argue, being tricked into the contract and being naturally very proud of being Lord of the Ostriches. Sumoi has convinced him that they're bonded by a suicide tech where if the caster dies, so does the summon.
Summoning: Small Ninja Sparrow (Tiny)
This sparrow cannot talk and was Sumoi's first ever summon, from his academy days. His personal favourite because it doesn't argue back, the sparrow can take orders, fly at intense speeds and has very good grip, used to hold kunai and sneak attacks. It can be charged with chakra to shield it from impact and make it's hit sharper.
Summoning: Yokkai the Sand Snake (Medium)
An averagely-sized snake only found in the Hidden Sand Demon Desert. An outcast from Ryuchi Cave, these two actually get along quite well due to their goals of ruling a small town and similar personalities. He is the same size as the Manda Sasuke summoned in the fight against Deidara. He possesses no unique abilities other than his camouflaging and poison fangs. He doesn't like to be summoned too often and is more of a trump card.
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Personal Support Jutsu: (He has no major offensive jutsu of his own, all supplementary)
Hair Needle Senbon
Type:Supplementary
Rank:C
Range: Close to Mid
Transparent Escape Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Hiding Like a Mole Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C-Rank
Range: N/A
Lightning Pillar
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: All
Tools(s): Military Rations Pill, Standard Shuriken & Kunai, Johyo & 1 explosive tag. Carried in his shoulder strap.[/I]
Nickname: The Contract Trickster
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Clan: No clan, adopted by the Sand.
Looks: Sumoi has a big blonde quiff of fringe with his brown natural hair shaved at the sides. He is unusually short for his age, only being around the size of a ninja such as Boruto. He has a boyish face which conflicts with his deceitful and tricky nature. He dresses in a Sand Brown flack jacket with Sand-coloured shorts and the usual Sand-ninja shoes. Like a lot of Sand ninja, he carries a strap around his shoulder that carries all of his collected summoning contracts. He has two contracts of his two favourite summons tattooed onto the underside of both his arms. (Mole & Sparrow)
Personality: Sumoi is a very defensive fighter and borderline coward. His fighting style is very much supportive and letting his summons do his fighting for him, having never been hit before. He is scared of pain but nonetheless enjoys inflicting it on others in battle.
Sumoi on the surface seems nonchalant and moody but is deceivingly silver-tongued, a natural born-liar and trickster- smack talking opponents when safe & exploring the Ninja world wilderness, tricking animals into contracts to him. His true nature is shady, slimy and pathetic, but ultimately he just wants a quiet, undisturbed life and time to work on his contract collection. He dreams of returning to The Hole one day with his collection of monsters & being treated like a Dictator/Bully. He keeps these aspects of his personality quiet whilst doing missions for the Hidden Sand.
Village of Birth: The Hole (Hacho Village)
Village of Alliance: Hidden Sand Village
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Rank//Chakra Info
Ninja Rank: Chunnin
Specialty: Summoning Fighting Style & Support Jutsu to back them up.
Weakpoint: His taijutsu is poor & lacks general physical offensiveness.
Elements: Earth Release. Minor Lightning Release
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Your Ninjutsu:
Summons:
Summoning: Ram Ram the Giant Mole (Big)
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Has a tail that can drill holes & travel underground rapidly. Very good peripheral sensing and basic earth jutsu. Obeys due to small intellect and trickery.
Summoning: Condor the Ostrich (Small)
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Knows several powerful taijutsu moves taking advantage of his naturally strong leg muscles. For example, he can do a powerful aerial kick that has the potential to slam the opponent to the ground or a powerful kick to the stomach in either in the air or on the ground similar to Rock Lee's taijutsu. While up in the air he can also create a shock wave by slamming his feet into the ground. His taijutsu skills make him capable of fighting chūnin-level shinobi. Naturally, as an ostrich, Condor has immense speed which he used in tandem with his taijutsu. He has also demonstrated great chakra control, demonstrating the ability to walk on water. He and Sumoi often argue, being tricked into the contract and being naturally very proud of being Lord of the Ostriches. Sumoi has convinced him that they're bonded by a suicide tech where if the caster dies, so does the summon.
Summoning: Small Ninja Sparrow (Tiny)
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This sparrow cannot talk and was Sumoi's first ever summon, from his academy days. His personal favourite because it doesn't argue back, the sparrow can take orders, fly at intense speeds and has very good grip, used to hold kunai and sneak attacks. It can be charged with chakra to shield it from impact and make it's hit sharper.
Summoning: Yokkai the Sand Snake (Medium)
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An averagely-sized snake only found in the Hidden Sand Demon Desert. An outcast from Ryuchi Cave, these two actually get along quite well due to their goals of ruling a small town and similar personalities. He is the same size as the Manda Sasuke summoned in the fight against Deidara. He possesses no unique abilities other than his camouflaging and poison fangs. He doesn't like to be summoned too often and is more of a trump card.
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Personal Support Jutsu: (He has no major offensive jutsu of his own, all supplementary)
Hair Needle Senbon
Type:Supplementary
Rank:C
Range: Close to Mid
This technique hardens the hair on the user's head and shoots it at the enemy. The sharpened points of the hair can turn the target's entire body into a pincushion. The user can fire either individual strands of hair, or multiple strands can be wrapped together to create larger projectiles. This is a technique left over from when he had very long hair, so he keeps his quiffed fringe thick and long for this reason. He thinks it interferes with his otherwise cool hair style but learning new jutsu is difficult.
Transparent Escape Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
The technique is shown to render the user invisible, allowing them to either make stealthy strikes on their opponent or escape from the opponent's sight. It can only be used as long as he holds his breath.
Hiding Like a Mole Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C-Rank
Range: N/A
This technique changes earth into fine sand by channelling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. This effect goes around the body (not just the hands), making it just large enough for a person to move through. The user can pinpoint where they are, despite being underground, by sensing the magnetic forces. They can also sense what is happening on the surface and use that information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. One can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy can't reach. It also appears that after digging, the ground can be returned to its original state, leaving no trace of where the user entered the earth.
When combined with clone techniques, the user can use the clone to lure their enemies into a trap or false sense of security before launching a surprise attack from below.
When combined with clone techniques, the user can use the clone to lure their enemies into a trap or false sense of security before launching a surprise attack from below.
Lightning Pillar
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: All
Description: This technique blinds the target with an extremely bright light that appears to emanate from the user's body. Those caught in the light are then caught within a genjutsu. Sumoi isn't very talented with this high level jutsu & so uses it mostly as a blinding distraction. It only works when the opponent looks directly into the light. He very rarely pulls this off.
Tools(s): Military Rations Pill, Standard Shuriken & Kunai, Johyo & 1 explosive tag. Carried in his shoulder strap.[/I]
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I'll be sure to pair you up against the next person to post their bio. However, don't expect much debate from your fight. This is how the first debate went
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it's a damn shame, and this seemed like a really fun idea too.