Order of Balance: chapter 1

[Kawagiri]

What does heaven and hell have to do with Theos?Well maybe hell because that is where he is going when he....anyway....

I liked it,I think you can make gold out of this.

who knows... theos may play a huge part in the story... (or he may just be a person added for future comedy xd )

 

[RokuNR]

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Nexus is the embodiment of evil. xd
Poor Daemon.

Awesome fanfic. I'm curious to see how things turn out O_O
Good job Kiwi ^_^

 

[Kawagiri]

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Nexus is the embodiment of evil. xd
Poor Daemon.

Awesome fanfic. I'm curious to see how things turn out O_O
Good job Kiwi ^_^

thanks =D

 

[KeotsuEclipse]

Very interesting so far. o_o I look forward to seeing how the story develops.

Though, I'm quite interested into why the portrait makes their name go backwards (unless you just decided to do so), and the actual powers of the portrait - seemed to free Nexus and capture Kirabi with a single touch.

Very interesting start. ^_^

 

[Kawagiri]

Very interesting so far. o_o I look forward to seeing how the story develops.

Though, I'm quite interested into why the portrait makes their name go backwards (unless you just decided to do so), and the actual powers of the portrait - seemed to free Nexus and capture Kirabi with a single touch.

Very interesting start. ^_^

yoo! O_O
stop stealing key points of the story from my mind xd