Oraan Lehnsheer V3 (Loss of Magnetism)

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✧ IF MY MAGNETISM IS THE COST OF GAINING POWER, THEN SO BE IT! ✧

✦ Name: Oraan Lehnsherr
✦ Nickname: Metallo
✦ Gender: Male
✦ Age: 27
✦ Clan: N/A

✦ Appearance: Oraan has thick redish brown hair that he wears in a spiky fashion. His hair is pushed back by a happuri-style forehead protector that frames his face. He wears a camouflage shirt and pants on top of metal armor. Oraan has three marks on his face, that from far away seem to be scars. However when you get closer, you notice that they are in fact simply green face pain. One across his nose and one across both of his cheeks that reach up to right under nis eyes.

✦ Personality: Oraan has an overall calm personality. He tends to be helpful and may sometimes even seem a bit random when he is in the mood. He is an Iwagakure Veteran and would do anything to protect, save or fight for it. Him being a veteran and one who loves his village makes him a trustworthy man, but even the greatest have their flaws. Even though Oraan is calm, when things go at a rather fast pace and decisions are need to be made, Oraan can sometimes decide too fast and not always think of the consequences.


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✧ VILLAGE ALLIANCE INFORMATION ✧

Village of Birth: ✦ Sunagakure

Village of Alliance: ✦ N/A


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✧ ROLE-PLAY INFORMATION ✧

Ninja Rank: ✦ Sage

Specialty: ✦ ✦ Earth ✦ Eight Inner Gates ✦

Elements:

✦ Solar Wind
✦ Blazing Earth
✦ Diethyl Ether
✦ Void
✦ Basic 5
✦ Sound

Abilities:

✦ Kenjutsu
✦ Ninjutsu
✦ Taijutsu
✦ Genjutsu
✦ Fuuinjutsu
✦ Leg Weights
✦ Eight Inner Gates
✦ Hojojutu & Nawajutsu
✦ Satsui no Hado
✦ Hyena
✦ Snakes
✦ CurseMark Level 2


Weapons and Accessories:

✦ Intel Hat- Oraan wears a happuri-style forehead protector on his head that grants him certain abilities.
✦ Dual Swords - He wears each one on his back.
✦ Metal Hojojutsu Chain - Oraan has dense metal chains that he uses for his Hojojutsu/Nawajutsu techniques hidden underneath his suit and wrapped several times around his body. The metal chains wrapped around his body makes it hard for him to be cut down by simple blades or shot down by arrows that haven't been enhanced by chakra.
✦ Satsui no Hado (Apprentice) - Oraan learned Satsui no Hado (Surge of Murderous/Dark Intent) from Akuma (Lord of Kaos). Oraan's Malicious/Dark Intent takes on a dark greenish black color. When in the Satsui no Hado state, Oraan has slightly better reflexes, increased agility, when compared to Strong Fist users and speeds increased to slightly faster than Rock Lee (Part II) without weights but still lower than EIG speeds.(Taken from approved submission of Satsui no Hado).

✧ ADDITIONAL INFORMATION ✧
Lensherr Will - Oraan has a really strong willpower and carries the Will from his very proud family. Having such strong will means that in a fight, small injuries are not enough to stop him. His will to live for and protect himself and the ones he loves is a very great deal, it has helped him many times in fights. Oraan, though fearless, does not mistake this for lack of caution from a dangerous opponent.

✦ Earth - Oraan is an accomplished Lightning user, capable of performing them with as little as one handseal.

✦ Heat Resistance - Training with elements that exude heat at a level closest to the sun has given Oraan an extreme resistance to heat and complete immunity to Solar Wind and Blazing Earth Release. Oraan is also capable of walking on Blazing Earth without being hurt..
(Already stated in the Approved Solar Wind and Blazing Earth CE Submissions, just added here.)

✦ Sound - Oraan, having undergone Sound training with Emperor, has studied the resonant frequency of every possible object. With this study, he has found that as long as you go beyond the resonate frequency of of any one object, it is possible to shatter more than one object at a time indirectly. He also knows the resonate frequency of all objects through immense study.

✦ Snake Summoning - Oraan sports an Ouroboros (Snake eating its tail) tattoo that he uses to summon his snakes with.

✧ BACKGROUND INFORMATION ✧​


✦ The Child born of Genjutsu - Oraan Lehnsherr was born the son of Lorna Dane. She gained the nickname Polaris from her expert level of magnetism manipulation. Lorna's father was Eric Lehnsherr, the great Mageto, and High Magnus within Sunagakure. He is considered the greatest Magnetism user to have ever been born. Magneto had two other children, Wanda and Peitro, half siblings to Lorna. The two of them however had not inherited the gift of their father, and thus he considered them a great disappointment. Magneto feared that he would never have an heir that would reach if not exceed his potential. Magneto was known throughout Sunagakure as an individual who was immune to Genjutsu. People came thoughout the land to test it out on him. No one ever exceeded. Unknown to anyone, it was Magneto's helmet that kept him from being cast in Genjutsu.

Magneto only took off the helmet only once while at a celebration to name the next High Magnus for him to train as he would stepping down in 10 years. No one had been 40 years old and been High Magnus. It was then that a woman decided to cast a Genjutsu upon him. That night she took him to bed and left, casting the Loss of Memory technique to make him forget. The woman left, taking the knowledge that she would soon mother the child of the great Magneto. Lorna was born, having no knowledge of Magneto being her father. It wasnt until the woman was on her deathbed that she revealed to Lorna who her father was and the desperate act that she had done to heir a strong bloodline of Magnetic users.

Lorna eventually had a son at the age of 20. Conflicted about the name of the child, it suddenly came to her. She would use the letters of her first name to name her son. Oraan L. She deemed it fitting. But before the words came out of her mouth, the baby began screaming and suddenly the metal pacifier in the babies mouth rose upwards and slammed into the ceiling. Lorna then decided that the child would be named Oraan Lehnsherr after her father.

After telling Magneto of her mother's doings, he was exceptionally upset and refused to believe it. With no proof, he cast both Lorna and Oraan out of Sunagakure. After all, who would believe that they had been cast in a Genjutsu when they know that they are immune to it.

Lorna didnt have any other family. Konoha was too far of a travel with a baby. Iwagakure was right up the road, but they were enemies of Suna. Everything else was too far. Settling that Iwagakure was the only way to go, she traveled with Oraan to their destination and settled down. She abandoned all thought of Suna, removing her headband on her way. Surprisingly enough, Lorna and Oraan were welcomed into Iwagakure. Unknown to her, they planned on using her newborn son as a way to get back at Sunagakure in the long run. Now it was just a matter of time.

✦ Timeskip - Years passed and Oraan was now 10 years old. In that time, he had become an accomplished Magnetic user. Lorna figured that by the age of 12, Oraan would be stronger than she had ever been. Magneto himself didnt peak until he was 14. Her son would become the most powerful Magnetism user to ever live.

Oraan was a rather different 10 year old kid. Ever since he had turned 5, his mother had began training him to use Magnetism. She even took time out to figure out what his elemental nature would be. When it came out to be lightning, she smiled inwardly stating like grandfather like son. As a result she had Iwa's most accomplished Lightning user take time out to teach Oraan Lightning jutsu. The training was then followed up with further Magnetism training, developing theories on how Magnetism would affect Lightning and vice versa. Oraan's time at home was spent training, which is why when he went to school, he played the role of the bully or class clown interchanging between the two depending on his mood. It was this that caused him to be an outcast among his fellow classmates, however this is how Oraan preferred things to be. Though he was a class clone, Oraan passed the graduation test with ease to the amazement of all his teachers. No one knew about Oraan's training. Everyone thought that he would be useless as a Genin, the ninja who took nothing seriously.

✦ First Mission - Oraan was paired up with two other Genin from his class and a Sensei. Though they had been in training sessions together, Oraan feigned ignorance at most things, feeling it unnecessary to relearn things he already knew, showing little skill when doing things living up to his name. It wasnt long before they were sent on a C Ranked Escorting Mission. Not expecting any action, Oraan dazed off into space when suddenly trees began to fall all over the place. Oraan's Sensei had been struck from behind with a sneak attack, the trees being just a cover. He was fully paralyzed however and would be no help. It was basically up to Oraan and the other Genins. His two partners were an Earth user and Sensory nin. Oraan could tell that the trees had been cut down by lightning, the paralysis technique used on his sensei must have been a paralyzing lightning technique. This was Oraan's department, but he would see how his fellow Iwarians did on their own. The Earth nin succeeded in only spreading chunks of earth throughout the battlefield, all of them failing to do any harm to the lightning user from what appeared to be Sunagakure. After the two Genins were rather exhausted, Oraan finally decided to help them.....he slowly walked over to the sensory nin and gave him a swift chop in the back of the neck, causing him to fall down knocked out cold. He would be out for at least an hour. Walking over to the Earth nin who just stared in amazement at Oraan, he began stumbling backwards away from him and tripped on the roots of a large tree, falling backwards and hitting his head on the trunk. He would be out for at least an hour as well. With both his sensei and fellow Gennin now unconscious and or paralyzed, it was time for Oraan to make his move.

With no one to see him he began having a conversation with the Suna nin. Originally his face was hidden from the ninja, so Oraan stepped into the light and the ninja gasped taken aback. To the Suna Nin, Oraan looked the exact replica of a man he knew to be his father. The Ninja was Pietro, Magneto's son. About to ask Oraan about his lineage, he was interrupted by a blast of Magnetism and Lightning in the form of a purple beam of electrified energy heading towards him. Pietro easily dodged the technique. It appeared that he was a Swift user, and would not take damage from a direct hit. This didnt worry Oraan as much as the look on Pietro's face. Pietro knew that purplish beam of Magnetism and Lightning anywhere. It was indeed that of his father. Figuring that this piece of information would be more important to his father than the mission itself, Pietro took off back to Sunagakure as quickly as he had arrived.

Wondering what that was about, Oraan waited for the rest of his team to wake up; a smirk on his face. They all tried to question his actions and what all happened, but no matter what he wouldnt budge. Figuring that they would have him questioned by their Intel Division, the Sensei took them all to the building after reporting the mission back to Bishamonsama, the Tsuchikage. They were able to gather all the information they needed from his two teammates up until the part where Oraan knocked them out, however when it came to going inside Oraan's mind, there seemed to be an interference. Oraan had learned early on from his mother how to use his Magnetism to produce Magnetic fields to protect his mind from being delved into. The Intel Division was pissed, they knew that if they wanted to break the magnetic barrier, which they could, that they would ruin the mind of the Genin. The fact that Oraan had taken such measures to protect himself made them think initially he was a spy, however as they reported their findings to the Tsuchikage and Daimyo Scar, they were told to leave him be. Having watched his growth as a child, and obtained the background story from Lorna, both individuals knew that Oraan was indeed no ordinary Genin, but something he was not was a spy. He would be continuously watched and monitored even more closely than before from that point on.

✦ Back in Sunagakure - Pietro has reported to Wanda and Magneto the possible existence of a Genin that looked exactly like him, the only difference was that his hair color was a brilliant redish brown. Magneto would have been just as unbelieving of Pietro as he was of Lorna had it not been for the detail that the Genin's techniques were not only Magnetism/Lightning combinations, but gave off a purplish color. Magneto thought back to the day that Lorna arrived with the baby and he banished them from his sight. He should have welcomed both his child and grandchild into his house, and now he would pay the price. He had to find a way to get them to forgive him. And so Magneto set out towards Iwagakure with Pietro and Wanda.

✦ Like Grandfather, Like Grandson - Magneto had sent word ahead to the Tsuchikage that he would be coming to Iwa and requested a temporary truce and seize fire. Magneto, Pietro, and Wanda met with the Tsuchikage and his royal guard, which happened to consist of the entire Anbu Squad. No precaution had been spared with the arrival of Magneto and his two children. They had been snuck into the walls of Iwa during nightfall. A meeting was held to discuss Oraan. Magneto demanded a meeting with Oraan and Lorna. He needed to discuss bringing them back into Sunagakure and doing away with their banishing. Oraan and Lorna walked into the meeting place. Lorna was startled at the sight of her father at first, and then began to pierce her lips together, anger taking its place. Oraan glanced up at his mother. He knew that with her lips pierced together she was quite pissed. Her eyes however weren't as upset as her faced seemed to portray. Oraan then wenced going down the steps, as he had been recovering from a training session the day before and was wrapped in bandages. Suddenly in a swift movement, Magneto appeared across the hall closing the gap between him and Oraan, a purple gloved finger pointed at his throat. Just as quick as the finger appeared however, Oraan had his own finger pointed underneath the glove at an angle towards the head of Magneto. Magneto noted that injury did not slow his reaction speed and smiled on the inside. Neither the Anbu members were quick enough to stop Magneto, but Oraan didnt need their help. Magneto noted that he would be equally as dead as Oraan had he actually decided to attack, and with the same exact move he came up with years ago. Magneto would have thought this were his son instead of his grandson the way the boy reacted. The Tsuchikage and Daimyo sat unnerved, watching the exchange, now intrigued by Oraan. Earlier they were not going to risk Magneto meeting with Oraan and Lorna on his own, let alone with his children. Now however seemed to change their mind. With a motion the Tsuchikage ordered the Anbu and Daimyo away. He himself got up and removed himself from the room. They were all gone in a matter of seconds. Magneto's next maneuver was to apologize to Lorna and Oraan both. He explained that he wanted to see if Pietro had been bluffing about the boy's abilities. He asked after the boy's name and commented that it was a strong one. He then looked to Lorna; his daughter. One whom he knew nothing about. He extended his life to her, apologizing for banishing. He wanted to make up for it, giving them the opportunity, if they chose, to be welcomed back into the fold so to speak, as well as a chance to get to know his Grandson and Daughter. Oraan looked at his mother, her eyes showed a longing that her pierced lips would not let her speak, so he spoke for her. Something like this would take time he said, they built a home in Iwagakure, and leaving for Suna on a whim, no matter what that whim was, would be wrong, especially after the Tsuchikage had been forgiving enough to allow the daughter and grandson of their enemy into the village. It would take time. Lorna then looked down at her 11 year old son with amazement, almost enough for her tightly pierced lips to open and find meaning. Magneto had his answer, it wasnt one he liked, but one he respected. He bid them all sit down and talk, getting to know one another. All of them did, and for several hours at that.

✦ Friends - Oraan, didnt make friends as quickly because of his arrogance towards all of his peers, and even some sensei. Oraan's closest friend in Iwa was without a doubt Mathias. Though they werent on the same squad, they were without a doubt a troublesome duo. They sought out fun in any way shape or form; from pulling pranks to asking for random missions together that ensured that they would get into a fight. They often sparred together, allowing each other to know the exact timing and speed of each others attacks at full potential or even hindered movement and senses. Eventually they were capable of fighting in sync with each other unconsciously.

✦ Timeskip - Several years had passed since that meeting. Pietro, Wanda, Magneto, Lorna and Oraan had all become a family. Magneto even went so far as to teach Oraan a few of his special Magnetism and Lightning combination techniques, one of which included the infamous Wormhole technique, which Magneto frequented in order to contact Oraan and Lorna without the real need to travel. With them, Oraan soon became a member of Iwagakure's Anbu squad at the age of 16. Because of the relationship between the five; after 5 years of long peace talks between Sunagakure and Iwagakure, along with other factors, the cease fire turned into an end to the war.

Soon enough, Sunagakure became a second home to Oraan. It was where he relaxed after every mission, using Magneto's wormhole as a source of travel. Sunagakure however wasnt just a source of relaxation. Oraan felt like he had a lot of making up to do. Missed birthdays and celebrations. He also wanted to learn his background. Living in Iwa, he seemed to be alone, without customs and traditions. Suna was the place where he could practice his clan's customs. And surprisingly enough, they welcomed both him and Lorna as if they had never left.


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✧ CURSED MARK SEAL OF HEAVEN ✧

✦ Oraan's CM2 form takes on the the appearance of dark purple wings and a dark purple bone hawk mask that extends down to his nose covering the green markings on his face. This form also grants Oraan extremely sharp claws. Oraan's eyes are capable of seeing in complete darkness. While in both CM1, CM2 and Partial Transformation form, Oraan is capable of using any and all Void Release techniques as his eyes allow him to see complete darkness in each of the forms. Oraan's CM2 and Partial Transformation with wings enable him to fly with ease.
Note: Taking off from the ground and flying is considered one move in that turn unless the the user just turned into CM2 or Partial Transformation form with the purpose of flying.


✧ SATSUI NO HADO ✧​

✦ The Road He Must Travel: There had been rumors throughout the lands that there had been a shinobi who utterly and completely destroyed everyone he came across. Ninja that had simply gone missing were said to have come across this Shinobi and challenged him to a fight. These were no ordinary Ninja, as they were mostly the best in what they did. They were never heard from again. Whispering panic began to spread to all the villages. Oraan was around 10 years old when these rumors started. He was now 24 years old. A fourteen year time span since the first disappearance, Oraan and Mathias were off doing their normal exploits when they felt a powerful force that stopped them in their tracks. Panic and awe gripped instantly at Oraan. He could look at Mathias' face and see that the look on his face had to be the same one that he wore. Deciding to regain control over himself, Oraan knew that he wanted this power. And if he knew Mathias as well as he did, he knew that he felt the same way. The feeling of panic and awe now gone, they both split off in different directions towards what they thought would be the source of the power. It was there that they found a man sitting there in meditation, a dark redish black aura protruding from him. Oraan then went up to the individual and sat down in meditation form a few feet away from him.
Mathias showed up a few minutes after Oraan had sat down. He was the first to break the silence.




Mathias: Sorry, I got lost in the path of life.

Meditating Man: Do you know why you're here?

Oraan: I have a road that I must follow. I don't know whether it is right or wrong, hot or cold, moist or dry; I know only that I must travel it. I do so accepting my fate no matter what it might bring, where it might lead me, or what may become of me. The road is mine and mine alone to travel. For those who stand in my way I bear no mercy, but only malice at trying to prevent me from my task. This place, this training, learning from you how to awaken something deeper within myself that will allow me to continue to walk with my head still on my shoulders, is but a step on the road that I must take. Were it not, I wouldn't be here, and no sensei, neither would you or Mathias.

Mathias: Yes, of course

The Meditating Man raised his eyebrow, looking at him with great interest. Is this pride he was seeing? Did this warrior really dare challenge his might in his own realm? If it had not be for the fact that Akuma summoned him, he would have been slain already.


Meditating Man: Oh? Well enlighten us, why are you here?

Mathias: I've come across a rather tall wall that I can not cross over. I am not here to gain power, I'm here to achieve something greater. My true desire is to tap into my dark emotions, which in return, will fuel my power as I allow my thirst for blood takeover. I will not allow anyone to stand in my way, no matter what.

Mathias suddenly rose his hand and creates a rasegan which is unexpectedly consumed by his dark thoughts, causing it to darken as it spirals within his hand.


Meditating Man: Power...this power...it comes at a great risk.. in order to effectively use it, you must be willing to cast away all earthly possesions you have. You must throw away the illusion that you still have of the world and men being good creatures. You must be ready to embrace the savagery that comes with the intent of murder...you must be willing to kill even your greatest friend, just to obtain a small amount of the heaven's power. Do you think you have what it takes to push your body mentally and physically to it's limit, and then go past it?

The Meditating Man noted the long and quick, fleeting glances they both gave one another at the mention of killing their best friend. He knew the rumors of how close they were, the great bond of friendship they held.. He cared little for it. All friendships were to him were chains, anchors holding one back to the ship of weakness. They must be ready to cast off that ship before they are ready to begin. Only through anger at someone they care or once cared about can they awaken this power they so greedily craved.


Oraan: I said it once. I shall but only once more. I will accept my fate no matter what it brings.

Mathias: If it means even stepping through my own friend, I will do so without hesitation within my mind.

Pleased with the answer, the Meditating Man finally broke a smile and it was barely a smile but more of less of the frown he had the entire time he spoke and listened to them. They obviously knew of the consequences of learning the art but did they truly know of the outcome of not being able to control it? He had long lost his true soul to the Satsui no Hado...he barely remembered the times before he started training...even his name was occasionally a blur...Go..Gouki..that was his old name. Of course, he long threw away that forsaken name when he started down his path of excellence. His only goal at this point was complete domination in the field of martial arts and therefore he sought out the greatest, not knowing it was himself at the time. If it meant training others to become great just to have some close to his level, then so be it.


Gouki | Akuma: Hmmph...you seem willing to turn to the temptations of evil quite quickly... with a willpower so seemingly low, how do you know that you will not succumb to the complete destructive force that is...Satsui no Hado? Greater men than you have fallen to it's never fulfilling lust for power, making you lose your human aspect as you blindlessly search for this power...greater men such as myself. There is only pain and power down this path. Great pain, greater than any you have known so far...but the power, oh the sheer destruction from the power...If you think you're ready to use this power, then stay. I will not blame you for leaving, it only means your cowardice has shown its true colors.

Akuma looks into the face of Mathias and Oraan, seeing a dee determination etched across them: they're mind had long been made before they arrive. To think that such a strong pair of friends had emerged in Iwa...it almost saddened Akuma to think that only one may survive this deadly relationship they had with one another...


Gouki | Akuma: Very well. If you're so intent on becoming a disciple of mine, then tell me everything you know of the art, from the power one gains to the properties of the Hado chakra given off. I don't expect you to the true history of the art so don't even bother speaking on it. Tell me how you think this power is achieved and how far one must be willing to go to use it.

With a smile on his face,


Mathias: My willpower low? I control my willpower, I decide how high or low it can be, depending on what I need. The style revolves around the manifestation of one's desire or win or evil intentions. This manifestation is displayed by a purple/dark aura that surrounds the user. Once the user has access to this split personality for a lack of a better word, he will gain access to a new type of chakra. This chakra is more more evil and destructive. The actual style revolves around close and medium range fighting. It ranges from taijutsu punches and kicks, to even spinning maneuvers. The dark chakra and also be used to release big scaled destructive blasts or simply enhancing one's fighting. Once the user takes control of this style, his strength, speed, and power will increase drastically. However it comes at a great cost, and that is to leave other emotions aside, replacing them with the desire to win and kill at all costs. The actual power is achieved by finding one's on path in life, reaching deep in their souls and actually discarding them. Allowing them more evil self take over, but not entirely.

Waiting for Mathias to finish, Oraan regaled what he knew.


Oraan: I have pledged my life to traveling the road. If it be my fate for my mind to be lost to this art, then I pray my body stay it's course so that I can reach the end. If my death becomes the hands of Mathias, then I know that my path was to befriend him, and then grant him a higher achievement with my death. I would then go to the afterlife knowing that I fulfilled my task at life. I fear not death; nor which place I shall go hereafter.

With that said, Satsui no Hado is a technique that requires and relies on the emotions of the user. These emotions are extreme rage, often bought on by an immense desire to kill. Watching a loved one die, receiving a near fatal or fatal wound are mere triggers for the user of this technique. To be able to master this, and bring about the trigger on your own with a simple past thought of something that wells up malicious intent inside of them. The intent to kill changes the very chakra of the user, and is unique to each user in such a way that it takes on its own color that cannot be duplicated, not unlike a fingerprint.

When the Satsui no Hado takes over you, it overwhelms you completely. It takes over mind, body, and soul, giving you a one track mind, focused on the kill. Everything you do, every step you take, is but one step closer to destroying your opponent; utterly and completely. Within the Satsui no Hado, there are techniques that are used to bring about the full potential. The techniques take on the chakra color pattern specific to the user.

Not only does Satsui no Hado increase the power of the individual, but their speed as well. Most other things about Satsui no Hado are simply hearsay and speculation. The people who have seen the techniques first hand have all died. Killed in combat. By you!

That last part was said without any meaning behind it. It was pure fact. Oraan knew it, and so did Akuma and Mathias.

Akuma smiled, or at least smirked. It seemed word of his skill with Dakku Hado has spread deep and far indeed.. He had tried to eliminate all who had witnessed him using the power. The less people who have seen it's power, the less chances there are for someone to devise a plan against it... Akuma thought, though he found the idea of someone figuring out a way to actually beat the Hado's chakra was absurd. The only way that'd be possible was for Senju Hashirama or Uchiha Madara to combine forces and fight him. Hell, he found even that hard to believe as a possible competitor against him.


Gouki | Akuma: Very well...it seems you know quite a bit about the art...but theory and practical use vary completely. The only way you can actually know of Hado is by experiencing it firsthand. It can be seen similar to the Sharingan, needing conditions where there is high levels of pressure on you and you experiencing great rage due to this pressure. The easiest way would be to simply insert Hado chakra inside of you and have you try to mimic that feeling. However, that will not do.

As Akuma talks he makes 6 clones and split them up in two groups of three. As the clones spread apart, they move towards Mathias and Oraan, respectively. They surround each in a triangular shape, having them in the middle of each triangle. They then channel their Hado chakra and proceed to deal massive amounts of damage to both Mathias and Oraan through powered taijutsu strikes aimed at the chest and limbs.

Akuma then makes a few handseals, unbeknownst to the two of them. Setting them inside a genjutsu where every strike they throw lands but seems to do no damage. The more they fight, they stronger it seems the clones get, using their rage to power them. A key part of the genjutsu is that each clone begins to look like those who have wronged each of the two students in their life, be it killing one of their parents to being their greatest foe. The point of this is to raise their anger at both themselves and their foes, the anger that will inevitably lead them to unlock the power of the Satsui no Hado. Even by it being a genjutsu, the students anger will get so high that their minds will be clouded from this and their only thoughts will be focused on retaliation and pain towards their wrongdoers.


Gouki | Akuma The clones that are attacking you now serve one purpose..well, two. The first is to beat you with great force. Beat you until you are nearing the point of submission. To the point that you are willing to cast away your humanity to strike back at this foe. The second reason is to entertain me as I watch myself destroy you into pulps..

Seeing the clones encircle both him and Mathias, a smirk appears on Oraan's face. He would have a chance to gauge his power against that of 3 Akumas. The exact power might not add up to Akuma's true power as he split them between clones, however the mindset, the moves, the pattern, the entire way he fights; all of these things were something that Oraan desired to have, to master, to incorporate into his own style, and then overcome it. All of these thoughts were conveyed in the eyes and smirk that Oraan now wore.

Oraan's smirk seemed to have triggered something within the clones, as they began to unleash an unrelenting attack upon him. He had no time to think about Mathias, and he didnt even bother as he knew that Mathias could hold his own. Right now was not the time for teamwork....necessarily. Akuma wanted to see how each of them performed on their own. Oraan managed to poof one of the clones by purposefully sacrificing his right arm, causing one of the clones to misjudge where Oraan was going to be, assuming that he would dodge as he did so continuously making guerilla tactics. The loss of the arm however brought about Oraan's downfall. Continuous blows from the remaining two clones seemed to rain down upon him in quick succession. His smirk was now gone. Slowly but surely his body was saying...


Oraan: Enough, just end me, why do you play with me so much?

The more Oraan tried to fight the more it seemed like he was making little to no headway. The destruction of the clone seemed to amplify the power and speed of the remaining clones as the genjutsu is cast. As slowly as his body felt like it was being drained, Oraan's mind was raging out of control.


Oraan: How could there be this big a gap in between us? To kill a clone I had to sacrifice an arm. To kill Akuma himself at this stage means that I would have to sacrifice my life. That was not acceptable. No. I will not die yet, I will not. I WILL NOT DIE HERE.

It was then that he felt it. His mind was literally being ripped away from him. His body felt as if it were no longer his. A surge of power overwhelmed him. It felt good.....no, it felt wonderful. He enjoyed it. It was trying to control him. The clones had now backed him into a position to where he could see Mathias clearly getting beaten up as well.


Oraan: Stop It......That's Enough........Tell Them To STOP IT.

Oraan couldn't see it but Akuma wore an almost smile on his face.


Gouki | Akuma: That's the way, let it all go

At these words, Oraan completely snapped and began screaming. A dark greenish black aura enveloped him as he did so.


Oraan: GahGahGahAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHH


Everything from that moment on was as if Oraan was having an outer body experience. He seemed to be watching himself destroy the two clones that attacked him. The feeling was complete ecstasy.

Gouki (Lord of Kaos) then went on to start Oraan's training in Satsui no Hado.

✦The Cost of Power - Having gained the ability to use Satsui no Hado at will, Oraan found that he could no longer channel the chakra needed for his Magnetism Release. Had he payed a price for this power. His Magnetism was like a part of him, the best part, and he guessed that Satsui no Hado would be second to none. After pondering for awhile, Oraan was glad that the magnetism was gone, but was more worried about the relationship that he had with both his mother and grandfather. They bonded over Magnetism, what now. Thankfully when he approached them about the subject, however initially shocked they were, they accepted his loss and ensured him that no matter what the family bonds they shared could not be broken so easily. After all, his Aunt Wanda and Uncle Pietro didnt have Magnetism and he loved them just the same. After laughing about it for quite some time, Oraan briefly showed them what his ability was. Even for that brief moment of entering the Satsui no Hado and coming out of it, his mother and grandfather were stricken in fear. It took them about 5 minutes to fully collect themselves from the thought that their own offspring was going to kill them. They regarded Oraan in wonder at his newfound power. They had never felt a killing intent quite like that before and werent likely to forget it. Oraan apologized for scaring them, however he was pleased with himself, the two were the strongest people he had ever known before meeting Akuma.

✧ EIGHT INNER GATES ✧​

✦Who Better Than Uncle Pietro? Sitting in the halls of Sunagakure after having talked with his mother and grandfather about his loss of magnetism and newly acquired ability, Oraan was lost in thought. With the gain of Satsui no Hado, Oraan felt that his fighting style had completely changed. It now relied on raw power and speed, whereas before it was more strategic in nature. Oraan felt however that that raw power seemingly overwhelmed his speed and sought a way to balance out the scales. It was then that Pietro began walking up to him.
Uncle Pietro was literally the fastest man he knew. Who better to help him increase his speed than him? Approaching his uncle as he came closer, Oraan greeted his uncle with a hug and they sat down to talk. Pietro had heard that Oraan had lost his Magnetism and figured that it might be hard coping to live without it. Having never had it to begin with, Pietro thought that Oraan might need his help. Little did he know that he was only half right. It wasnt the coping that Oraan had a problem with, it was advancing past it. Pietro smiled, he would train Oraan in the ways of the Eight Inner Gates. The training was rigorous and long. Whole months flew by before Oraan could even open the first of the Eight Inner Gates.


✧ THEME SONG & Background Music✧



✧ BATTLES ✧

✦ WINS: 2

✦ LOSES: 1

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Updating - Removed Magnetism | Added EIG, Leg Weights, and Satsui no Hado

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Probably one of the best BB-coded biographies you've had. Why do I get the feeling that Blizzy helped you with those picture collages and the actual structure of the template?
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Probably one of the best BB-coded biographies you've had. Why do I get the feeling that Blizzy helped you with those picture collages and the actual structure of the template?
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Lol there were way more pics but I couldnt be bothered to add them all.

But yea, Blizz did it all. lol

I'm sure you hear this a lot and well continue to hear it, but hell, who am I to be dishonest and break the streak?

Nice bio. :bouncy:
Thanks

Pretty nice o.o
Thanks bro.
 

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Nice and clean, love it. If only you justified the text, it would've been a touch, but I guess it's good as it is. :p

Oh and that loss, which might that be? :D
 

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That Hado part in the history doe.
I no vright.

Nice and clean, love it. If only you justified the text, it would've been a touch, but I guess it's good as it is. :p

Oh and that loss, which might that be? :D
Tried something different.

Don't remind me. Still pissed at myself for losing that fight. Good fight though it was. I had it planned perfectly and a note I overlooked screwed me over.

Awesome bio, a long list of abilities you have there xD.
Thanks.......ummmmm.....you are in Akatsuki? Boy things sure do change.

U_U Awesomeness is the best descriptio.
Gracias

Agrees with the bald guy^^

Ish nice oraan. I saw this somewhere before though :rolleyes:
Have you? Oh yeah. forgets.
Shouldn't your village of alliance be Iwa?

Great bio, just that the text all looks the same xD
Lol trying something new.
 
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