[Open to S-Class or Sannin] Rank up fight with me, mario!

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Open to an S-Class or Sannin
Official rank up fight
Rules according to LoK
3-day reply limit
All out
I'll be using Achilles in sig (S-Class rank)

The battle ends after each combatant has made 6 posts, unless we both decide we want to continue. Please try to be active in your replies.

Location:
The training ground in the image below. I'll start on the far side of the river with a forest to my right, and the challenger will start on the near side of it with the forest and the three wooden pillars to their right. Behind both of us is a large grassy plain. The river stretches as far as the eye can see both ways, and to make it easier, the grassy plains and forests go on forever as well in their mentioned areas/directions. We'll start mid range away from one another, with the river between us (which is short range from edge to edge).
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Post a bio and I'll make the first move.
 

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Desmond in Sig( )
Spec: Raiton/Taijutsu
on right hip
Alright, good luck



Passive:
(Chakra Henkanshi no Jutsu) - Chakra Sensing Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 15 (- 5 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: This is a very advanced of advancing the ability to feel and sense chakra. The technique allows the user to concentrate and detect someone's chakra. Users can use this to determine the nature of a jutsu used as well as sense masses of chakra. The use of this can be compared to Sharingan's brutish level of sensory, able to sense collection of chakra but not the level of clarity and precision Byakugan has.

Achilles kept his eyes locked on the hooded man that walked out of the forest across the river. He was clothed quite darkly, he had a black hoodie with the Hyuga crest on the shoulder, what looked like a black beanie beneath it, wore black cargo pants, and had black gloves on. Sensing his chakra, Achilles confirmed that the man before him was no clone, nor did he have any allies hidden nearby. Punching his fist into his other open hand, Achilles smiled widely, excited for his next challenge.

Here we go!

Achilles wanted to start the fight off from a different angle than he normally did - with deception and genjutsu. Weaving the necessary hand seals for the summoning jutsu, Achilles bit his thumb and slammed his hand onto the ground, creating the illusion that he had just performed said technique. In reality, as he placed his hand onto the earth, Achilles had sent chakra into Desmond's brain, making him believe that three large snakes burst out of the ground below, wrapping around his entire body, constricting him. Desmond would feel the pain in the form of mental stress.

(Genjutsu: Oshitsubusu Hebi Kubire) - Illusion Technique: Crushing Snake Constriction
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user puts the opponent into a genjutsu which has snakes appear beneath the opponent to constrict them and with the users command, they crush the opponent. In reality, the opponent is immobilized and takes damage due to the stress on his mind.

Running in an arc to his right (Desmond's left) Achilles channeled fire chakra into the ground beneath his opponent in his first step, causing three pillars of fire to emerge from the earth under him. As he ran, he hurled 3 kunai with explosive tags at the man. One of the pillars would be positioned in front of him, another to his right and slightly behind, and the third would mirror the second but on his left. All 3 of the pillars would be large enough to make immediate contact with him, and essentially be one gigantic pillar of flame standing 6 meters tall.

(Katon: Gōka Honoo no Hashira Jutsu) - Fire Release: Great Fire Flame Pillars Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will knead their fire chakra and release it into the ground by stomping down their leg and then causing three pillars of fire several meters tall spaced out evenly. The Pillars of fire can act as a defensive wall against incoming techniques or targets or used to attack low aerial targets.



Chakra: 1000 - 5 - 20 - 30 = 945
 

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Walking out of the forest Desmond spotted a man across the river from him "Again?" he thought to himself as it seemed he could take a simple walk without some sort of confrontation. Listening to the man before him speak, Desmond watched as he wove several seals and performed the necessary requirements for a summon. As he slammed his hand onto the ground Desmond body began to feel restricted looking down he noticed three snakes had begun to wrap around his body. Upon looking down however Desmond noticed that the ground from whence the snakes emerged remained unchanged "Genjutsu..." he thought as he activated his byakugan confirming the genjutsu whilst biting his lower lip to the point of needing stitches breaking him free from the genjutsu.
(Dōjutsu: Byakugan) Eye Technique: The All Seeing White EyeType: Supplementary
Rank: C - Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15 (-5 per turn to keep active)
Damage: N/A
Description: One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San Daidōjutsu), the Byakugan is the dōjutsu kekkei genkai of the Hyūga and Ōtsutsuki clans, inherited from Kaguya Ōtsutsuki. Bearers of this Dõjutsu have almost featureless white eyes. When the Byakugan is activated, the user's pupils become more distinct, and the veins near their temples bulge as the blood flow to their eyes is increased. While having the Byakugan deactivated, shinobi with have a normal eyesight and no special addition to their vision. While low rank Hyugas will need to perform a sequence of hand seals ( Horse → Tiger with lifting just index fingers → Boar with nearly straightened fingers → Hare → Rat → Dog → Horse → Dog → Hare → Rat → Boar with nearly straightened fingers → Snake with the right index finger lifted straight up) to activate their Byakugan, Hyuga masters and Otsutsuki clan members will be able to do so without the need for any hand seals and even have it active passively for long periods of time. Once activated, the user gains access to all of the abilities the Byakugan bestows upon them. While, like other Dojutsu, its main ability is to see chakra and the chakra flow in sentient beings, the Byakugan adds a complete new detail and dimension to that ability. Not only can they see chakra flow, but also the circulatory system and even the 361 tenketsu (even of their own). Added to this ability, once activated the Byakugan grants the user a near perfect field of vision 360º around himself (up to long-range if they're a master). This field of vision has only one blind spot; slightly above the 3rd thoracic vertebrae and facing backward. The last ability the Byakugan has is the ability to zoom in and out, focusing on specific things, piercing beyond matter and energy alike. This specific ability allows the user to see pass most barriers as well as physical matter (like rock walls, ground, etc) but also energy, being able to focus beyond chakra that might be in front of them or other energies. The zooming ability is enhanced as the user becomes more adept at using his eyes and can even reach distances above 20kms away.
Note: For Hyugas, activation spends a move from the users own move count but once the user reaches Sannin Rank and has gained mastery over Gentle Fist for 1 month, he can activate it passively without spending a move. Because of its low chakra cost to maintain, the user can keep it active throughout the whole fight as long as he has chakra and stamina to do so.
Note: Genjutsu that requires Eye Contact when used against a Byakugan user requires direct eye contact between enemy pupil and user's pupil
Note: Hyugas must be activated to use Gentle Fist (Jyuken)
Note: Its tracking abilities are equal to that of 3 Tomoe Sharingan.
Note: Only Hyugas possess the ability to utilize Jyuken, However, all Otsutsuki clan members possess the ability of passive activation.
Immediately upon breaking free Desmond created a vortex of lightning around himself which would rise up taking the form of a dragons head and rush towards the man in front of him. This dragon if left alone would engulf the man within in lightning electrocuting him in the as it thrashed him around.
(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon TornadoType: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will grow then shoot forward and cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.
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Chakra: 1000-15-30=955
Good Luck to you as well ^^
 

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Walking out of the forest Desmond spotted a man across the river from him "Again?" he thought to himself as it seemed he could take a simple walk without some sort of confrontation. Listening to the man before him speak, Desmond watched as he wove several seals and performed the necessary requirements for a summon. As he slammed his hand onto the ground Desmond body began to feel restricted looking down he noticed three snakes had begun to wrap around his body. Upon looking down however Desmond noticed that the ground from whence the snakes emerged remained unchanged "Genjutsu..." he thought as he activated his byakugan confirming the genjutsu whilst biting his lower lip to the point of needing stitches breaking him free from the genjutsu.
(Dōjutsu: Byakugan) Eye Technique: The All Seeing White EyeType: Supplementary
Rank: C - Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15 (-5 per turn to keep active)
Damage: N/A
Description: One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San Daidōjutsu), the Byakugan is the dōjutsu kekkei genkai of the Hyūga and Ōtsutsuki clans, inherited from Kaguya Ōtsutsuki. Bearers of this Dõjutsu have almost featureless white eyes. When the Byakugan is activated, the user's pupils become more distinct, and the veins near their temples bulge as the blood flow to their eyes is increased. While having the Byakugan deactivated, shinobi with have a normal eyesight and no special addition to their vision. While low rank Hyugas will need to perform a sequence of hand seals ( Horse → Tiger with lifting just index fingers → Boar with nearly straightened fingers → Hare → Rat → Dog → Horse → Dog → Hare → Rat → Boar with nearly straightened fingers → Snake with the right index finger lifted straight up) to activate their Byakugan, Hyuga masters and Otsutsuki clan members will be able to do so without the need for any hand seals and even have it active passively for long periods of time. Once activated, the user gains access to all of the abilities the Byakugan bestows upon them. While, like other Dojutsu, its main ability is to see chakra and the chakra flow in sentient beings, the Byakugan adds a complete new detail and dimension to that ability. Not only can they see chakra flow, but also the circulatory system and even the 361 tenketsu (even of their own). Added to this ability, once activated the Byakugan grants the user a near perfect field of vision 360º around himself (up to long-range if they're a master). This field of vision has only one blind spot; slightly above the 3rd thoracic vertebrae and facing backward. The last ability the Byakugan has is the ability to zoom in and out, focusing on specific things, piercing beyond matter and energy alike. This specific ability allows the user to see pass most barriers as well as physical matter (like rock walls, ground, etc) but also energy, being able to focus beyond chakra that might be in front of them or other energies. The zooming ability is enhanced as the user becomes more adept at using his eyes and can even reach distances above 20kms away.
Note: For Hyugas, activation spends a move from the users own move count but once the user reaches Sannin Rank and has gained mastery over Gentle Fist for 1 month, he can activate it passively without spending a move. Because of its low chakra cost to maintain, the user can keep it active throughout the whole fight as long as he has chakra and stamina to do so.
Note: Genjutsu that requires Eye Contact when used against a Byakugan user requires direct eye contact between enemy pupil and user's pupil
Note: Hyugas must be activated to use Gentle Fist (Jyuken)
Note: Its tracking abilities are equal to that of 3 Tomoe Sharingan.
Note: Only Hyugas possess the ability to utilize Jyuken, However, all Otsutsuki clan members possess the ability of passive activation.
Immediately upon breaking free Desmond created a vortex of lightning around himself which would rise up taking the form of a dragons head and rush towards the man in front of him. This dragon if left alone would engulf the man within in lightning electrocuting him in the as it thrashed him around.
(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon TornadoType: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will grow then shoot forward and cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.
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Chakra: 1000-15-30=955
Good Luck to you as well ^^
Sensing the build up of chakra in his opponent's eyes, Achilles knew that it would only be a moment before he was free of the genjutsu. He began to run directly toward Desmond as he channeled wind chakra into the sky, causing the clouds to grow dark before releasing a giant F-5 tornado directly above his opponent. As the tornado came down from above, Achilles formed a single seal, converting the earth below his opponent into a thick swamp. The swamp would be a perfect circle 10 meters deep and have a diameter of 5 meters, with Desmond at the center of it. Achilles would be 5 meters away from the hooded man as the tornado crashed into him, sending him deep into the swamp below.

(Fūton: Tatsuno Ooshigoto) - Wind Style: Severing Pressure
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user sends wind into the sky to darken the clouds and make the environment stormy. These clouds will create a cutting tornado that comes down as a F-5 tornado with slicing wind.

(Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will first perform Boar → Tiger and then by changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into mud and creating a non flammable swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures.



Chakra: 975 - 15 -30 - 30 = 900

(Last turn I accidentally did -5 chakra for activating sensory when I was supposed to do -15, and then -5 each turn after. To fix this, I did -15 this turn and left the -5 from last turn).
 

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Sensing the build up of chakra in his opponent's eyes, Achilles knew that it would only be a moment before he was free of the genjutsu. He began to run directly toward Desmond as he channeled wind chakra into the sky, causing the clouds to grow dark before releasing a giant F-5 tornado directly above his opponent. As the tornado came down from above, Achilles formed a single seal, converting the earth below his opponent into a thick swamp. The swamp would be a perfect circle 10 meters deep and have a diameter of 5 meters, with Desmond at the center of it. Achilles would be 5 meters away from the hooded man as the tornado crashed into him, sending him deep into the swamp below.

(Fūton: Tatsuno Ooshigoto) - Wind Style: Severing Pressure
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user sends wind into the sky to darken the clouds and make the environment stormy. These clouds will create a cutting tornado that comes down as an F-5 tornado with slicing wind.

(Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will first perform Boar → Tiger and then by changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into mud and creating a non-flammable swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depend on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures.



Chakra: 975 - 15 -30 - 30 = 900

(Last turn I accidentally did -5 chakra for activating sensory when I was supposed to do -15, and then -5 each turn after. To fix this, I did -15 this turn and left the -5 from the last turn).
As he broke free from the genjutsu Desmond immediately noticed the clouds above him darken as large amounts of chakra built up in the skies above; as his opponent began to make his way closer to Desmond's position. Making note of all of this Desmond saw the tornado begin to form and drop, reaching into his cargo pockets Desmond would strategically suspend 8 kunai in the air in front of him just before releasing his chakra from every tenketsu and rotating in the opposite direction of the tornado.This would form a barrier of chakra that would expand 5m out from Desmond launching the kunai towards the man's hands, eyes, feet, carotid artery and solar plexus, whilst also providing an adequate defense against the tornado which would disperse on impact.
(Hakke Irounaku Kaiten) – Eight Trigrams Absolute Heavenly SpinRank: S
Type: Offensive, Defense
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This jutsu is a larger more powerful version of the Eight Trigrams Palm Heavenly Spin.
With the tornado taken care of, Desmond would stop his rotation and weave a single seal causing several wires to erupt from the ground wrapping around the man's wrists, ankles, and throat. As the wires took hold they would begin to cut into his flesh eventually severing hands, feet, and head from the body.
(Ninjutsu: Nezumi no Hoohige) Ninja Arts: Rat WhiskersRank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20 (-5 per turn to maintain)
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will expel chakra outwards, from their hands. The chakra will create a set of 5 wires, thin and sharp but strong, which will immediately wrap around the opponent. While they can be used on their own to powerfully constrict the opponent, they can be used more efficiently by adding an elemental nature to them. Strong elements (Earth, Metal, etc) or Slicing elements (Wind, Lightning, etc) will strengthen or sharpen the thin wires, which will allow them to slice through flesh and bone by the inherited constriction force. Other elements may weaken the body itself, allowing the said slicing effect (Fire burning, Rotting elements, etc). Elements that do not fall in these characteristics will simply add their characteristics to the wires, but will only have the tight grip of normal chakra wires, and not the slicing property.
With one hand seal, the wires can be shot from the ground upwards, binding the target. The user can gradually increase the sharpness and the tight hold of the technique by hand gestures (when he uses it from his hands directly as "whips") or by maintaining the hand seal (if used from the ground). The wires are only able to sever the thinner limbs/weak spots and severely injuring the thicker body parts (I.e Severe arms, legs, necks, and Injure torso, head).
Note: If used from the ground, can't perform any further jutsu until the grip is released.
Note: This jutsu can only be used thrice per battle, at max 1 usage every two turns.
Note: The wires follow the element's and rank's weaknesses and strengths.
Note: Cannot be used by CE elements.
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Chakra: 985-5-40-20=920
 

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As he broke free from the genjutsu Desmond immediately noticed the clouds above him darken as large amounts of chakra built up in the skies above; as his opponent began to make his way closer to Desmond's position. Making note of all of this Desmond saw the tornado begin to form and drop, reaching into his cargo pockets Desmond would strategically suspend 8 kunai in the air in front of him just before releasing his chakra from every tenketsu and rotating in the opposite direction of the tornado.This would form a barrier of chakra that would expand 5m out from Desmond launching the kunai towards the man's hands, eyes, feet, carotid artery and solar plexus, whilst also providing an adequate defense against the tornado which would disperse on impact.
(Hakke Irounaku Kaiten) – Eight Trigrams Absolute Heavenly SpinRank: S
Type: Offensive, Defense
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This jutsu is a larger more powerful version of the Eight Trigrams Palm Heavenly Spin.
With the tornado taken care of, Desmond would stop his rotation and weave a single seal causing several wires to erupt from the ground wrapping around the man's wrists, ankles, and throat. As the wires took hold they would begin to cut into his flesh eventually severing hands, feet, and head from the body.
(Ninjutsu: Nezumi no Hoohige) Ninja Arts: Rat WhiskersRank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20 (-5 per turn to maintain)
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will expel chakra outwards, from their hands. The chakra will create a set of 5 wires, thin and sharp but strong, which will immediately wrap around the opponent. While they can be used on their own to powerfully constrict the opponent, they can be used more efficiently by adding an elemental nature to them. Strong elements (Earth, Metal, etc) or Slicing elements (Wind, Lightning, etc) will strengthen or sharpen the thin wires, which will allow them to slice through flesh and bone by the inherited constriction force. Other elements may weaken the body itself, allowing the said slicing effect (Fire burning, Rotting elements, etc). Elements that do not fall in these characteristics will simply add their characteristics to the wires, but will only have the tight grip of normal chakra wires, and not the slicing property.
With one hand seal, the wires can be shot from the ground upwards, binding the target. The user can gradually increase the sharpness and the tight hold of the technique by hand gestures (when he uses it from his hands directly as "whips") or by maintaining the hand seal (if used from the ground). The wires are only able to sever the thinner limbs/weak spots and severely injuring the thicker body parts (I.e Severe arms, legs, necks, and Injure torso, head).
Note: If used from the ground, can't perform any further jutsu until the grip is released.
Note: This jutsu can only be used thrice per battle, at max 1 usage every two turns.
Note: The wires follow the element's and rank's weaknesses and strengths.
Note: Cannot be used by CE elements.
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Chakra: 985-5-40-20=920
Just as a heads-up, you probably shouldn't do that kunai thing as the first part of your move in the future. It counts as a freeform action, and I can react to it like it was a jutsu, but I could be wrong because they hadn't attacked me yet. Also, the timeframe is a bit iffy. In any case, I like the combination of the rotation and kunais.



Achilles watched his opponent lob a few kunai in front of him as the tornado emerged from the clouds above. As soon as he had thrown the kunai, Desmond had transitioned into a rotation, defending himself from the tornado that was still descending from above while also sending the kunai out toward Achilles. Stopping in his tracks, he formed a single hand seal and easily blocked and evaded the incoming kunai with a combination of his own, that he pulled from a holster on his right thigh, and by jumping a meter to the left. While Desmond was finishing his rotation, he would be met on his left and right by two gigantic mounds of earth, which would smash into each other, killing him instantly. Each mound of earth would be 20 meters high, and mid range in length both behind and in front of Desmond, meaning that the mountain would stop mere feet in front of Achilles, as he had not yet reached short range, like he originally planned to.

(Doton: Yama Eikyō) - Earth Release: Mountain Smash
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 70
Damage: 100
Description: The user will do 3 handseals (Tiger → Ram → Rat) and slam his hands on the ground which creates two enormous rock formations that close in on the opponent from two opposing sides with tremendous force, smashing everything caught in between. Both of these formations are capable of dwarfing even the Demonic Statue of the Outer Path in size. This is one the most strongest Earth based techniques, standing as a testament to both this ability's destructive potential and its difficulty. However, because of its size and power, it can only be used a limited amount of times, requires much chakra and can only be used at least mid range from the user.
Note: Can only be used twice
Note: Can only be used by Earth Primary Specialists.



Chakra: 930 - 5 - 70 = 855
 
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As Desmond finished rotating he saw massive amounts of chakra in the ground around him which shortly after began to tremble as two large sections of rock began to form. Looking for a way out Desmond couldn't think of an escape route and thought of potential alternatives. Just as the sections were about to close lightning erupted from Desmond's body forming another vortex around himself creating a hole from him to the top of the earth then shooting forward creating a pathway from Desmond to his opponent before dispersing. Desmond would begin to scratch his head Why would fate pit me against someone like you? said Desmond with a sigh as he began to walk towards his opponent.
(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon TornadoType: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will grow then shoot forward and cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.
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Chakra: 940-5-30=905
 

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As Desmond finished rotating he saw massive amounts of chakra in the ground around him which shortly after began to tremble as two large sections of rock began to form. Looking for a way out Desmond couldn't think of an escape route and thought of potential alternatives. Just as the sections were about to close lightning erupted from Desmond's body forming another vortex around himself creating a hole from him to the top of the earth then shooting forward creating a pathway from Desmond to his opponent before dispersing. Desmond would begin to scratch his head Why would fate pit me against someone like you? said Desmond with a sigh as he began to walk towards his opponent.
(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon TornadoType: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will grow then shoot forward and cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.
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Chakra: 940-5-30=905
Achilles knew his opponent had released large amounts of lightning chakra before it broke through the mountain, having sensed it's emergence. Knowing both the exact location of his opponent inside of the mound of earth, as well as the lightning jutsu that passed through parts of it, Achilles prepared a counter attack. As the lightning created a tunnel between himself and his opponent, he heard Desmond's voice echo outwards, addressing him.

I'm not quite sure what you mean. He called back.

Forming a single seal and focusing chakra under the entirety of the mound of earth, Achilles created a gigantic layer of mud along the ground. The swamp would be hundreds of feet deep, allowing the entire mountain to sink to the depths of it if not countered. With no escape from above, and the only exit being a long tunnel before him, Desmond would be in severe danger. As if that were not enough, Achilled placed his hand on the mountain like pile of dirt, rocks, and other earthy objects, and surged chakra back into it. Instantaneously, the entire mound of earth would collapse, reforming into hundreds of thousands of shards. The shards would be so close to one another that they would let no light penetrate into the depths of it's core, where Desmond stood. The shards would move like they already had momentum, which could easily catch his opponent off-guard (the damage would be equal to an A rank, as this jutsu takes on the damage of Mountain Smash, which has had a small portion of it countered by a jutsu treated as equal rank. Because it is so large and the chakra is distributed equally throughout it, your counter would only deal with small portion of it). The barrage would last over a minute due to the sheer amount of earth that Mountain Smash provided as 'ammunition,' and all the while everything would be sinking. With the mound of earth being transformed into shards, Desmond's exit would be lost, filled in with thousands of them. The combination of projectiles from all sides, the sinking from below, and the pitch blackness Desmond stood in proved extremely dangerous.

(Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will first perform Boar → Tiger and then by changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into mud and creating a non flammable swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures.

(Doton: Ishi no hitsujikai) Earth Style: Shepherd of Stone
Type: Supplementary / Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A (Depends)
Description:
The user begins by placing their hand or feet onto an earthen structure or jutsu, and pouring their own chakra into it. If it is an opponent’s jutsu, if the amount of chakra sent into it is more than what was used to create it, the technique will shatter, sending the chunks of rock in a specific direction(s) that the user can determine. Alternatively, the user can reshape the technique into a weapon or armor (a sword, spear, dagger, shield, suit of armor, etc) which will be equal in rank to the jutsu that was just countered. On the other hand, if the chakra exerted into it was equal, then the jutsu will simply crumble. In the case of using this technique on one of the user’s own jutsu, they can cause it to crumble, shatter and launch in (a) direction(s), or reform it into something new in the exact same manner explained before. This technique can counter fast moving and even sharp earthen jutsu by instead of placing a hand or foot onto it, by weaving five hand seals and holding their hand out in front of the object, which will cause an aura of visible chakra to gather around them, flowing out of their extended hand and back past their body. This speeds up the process of affecting the oncoming jutsu dramatically, allowing it to take effect before the true force behind the object can exert itself upon the user. This is done to such a high degree that someone using this to counter the oncoming slap of the S ranked stone golem technique would take no damage from it, at worst feeling a light punch to their hand. If this technique is used on the terrain, it has the same effects, being able to cause it to crumble (up to short range), turn it into a barrage of spikes, or turn it into a weapon or armor. Because of how single-target focused this technique is, it has a difficult time countering something like a barrage of boulders or spikes, giving it an obvious weak point.
-Can be used twice per battle with a 3 turn cooldown.
-This technique has no effect on F ranked earthen jutsu, or any other type of chakra besides earth.
-The shards of earth, earthen tools, etc, have damage equal to the rank of the jutsu this technique was used against, or if it was the environment, it has freeform damage but can still be lethal in cases
-Can only be taught by Leathercandle.



Wew that's my first time using this combo, I'm interested to see how you'll respond to it.

Chakra: 855 - 5 - 40 - 30 = 780
 

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Hey, the vortex went up and through the top of the earth then towards you so I should still have an upward escape if necessary.
As he made his way towards the man he heard him speak back, Desmond let out a sigh, Yeah, guess you wouldn't. The man wove a single seal and chakra flooded the ground around him. Soon after this Desmond noticed the solid earth become more pliable and begin turning into mud. As Desmond sunk ankle deep and the mud went up into his pant leg he crouched removing his leg weights whilst releasing a vortex of lightning once more forcing the mud from his body as it hardens. Getting tired of using this jutsu... he said with a smirk as he began running towards his opponent maintaining a safe distance from the dragons head. The lightning would tear through the swamp hardening the surface layer enough for him to run on eventually colliding into his opponent while Desmond drew his blade to run through the man.
(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will grow then shoot forward and cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

(Katai Omori: Doroppu) Leg Weights: Drop
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A (+20 to Kicks, 2x Running Speed)
Description:
The user stops, bends over to reach his legs and unstraps his leg weights, dropping them to the ground. As a result, the user gains a drastic boost to his running speed (doubles) and +20 to all his Strong Fist Kick-related moves. However, this boost in strength and speed is completely nullified when releasing the EIG or when using any kind of movement speed enhancement technique or weight manipulation technique; they don't add on each other.
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Chakra: 905-5-30=870
 
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[FONT=&]Hey, the vortex went up and through the top of the earth then towards you so I should still have an upward escape if necessary.[/FONT]
As he made his way towards the man he heard him speak back, Desmond let out a sigh, Yeah, guess you wouldn't. The man wove a single seal and chakra flooded the ground around him. Soon after this Desmond noticed the solid earth become more pliable and begin turning into mud. As Desmond sunk ankle deep and the mud went up into his pant leg he crouched removing his leg weights whilst releasing a vortex of lightning once more forcing the mud from his body as it hardens. Getting tired of using this jutsu... he said with a smirk as he began running towards his opponent maintaining a safe distance from the dragons head. The lightning would tear through the swamp hardening the surface layer enough for him to run on eventually colliding into his opponent while Desmond drew his blade to run through the man.
(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will grow then shoot forward and cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

(Katai Omori: Doroppu) Leg Weights: Drop
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A (+20 to Kicks, 2x Running Speed)
Description:
The user stops, bends over to reach his legs and unstraps his leg weights, dropping them to the ground. As a result, the user gains a drastic boost to his running speed (doubles) and +20 to all his Strong Fist Kick-related moves. However, this boost in strength and speed is completely nullified when releasing the EIG or when using any kind of movement speed enhancement technique or weight manipulation technique; they don't add on each other.
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Chakra: 905-5-30=870
Sensing a build up of chakra in the center of the mound of earth which began to approach him, Achilles wove the hand seals tiger → dog as he gathered chakra in his lungs. Jumping backwards as he inhaled, Achilles landed two meters behind his original position, having exhaled a large sphere of wind mid jump. The wind would easily penetrate the mass of earth previously used in Mountain Smash, and come into contact with Desmond and his lightning jutsu, overpowering them both and launching him backwards to where he just ran from, crashing into the stones (at this point, I'd imagine that Mountain Smash would begin to collapse in on itself, after having taken so much damage from my wind technique, and your lightning jutsu). Even with the earth collapsing in around him, Desmond would have yet another thing to worry about. Achilles would weave three hand seals and send lightning chakra into the sky above his opponent to call down upon him a lightning bolt. The bolt of lightning would have a width of short range (five meters) and anything within short range of the lightning bolt (another five meters) would succumb to a special electrical field that surrounded it, causing them to levitate off the ground and be swiftly pulled into the jutsu at the same speed that it came down from the sky. The bolt of lightning would linger on the ground for several seconds before dispersing, damaging it all the while.

(Fūton: Shinkū Taigyoku) – Wind Release: Vacuum Great Sphere
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: After performing two hand seals Tiger → Dog the user launches a stronger version of the Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere technique, where the user instead chooses to compress the entirety of the previously inhaled breath into a single large, crushing sphere of wind chakra that they then proceed to expel from their mouth.

(Raiton: Vuaruhara no Handan) | Lightning Release: Judgement of Valhalla
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: By performing three handseals and infusing chakra into the sky, the user will be capable of calling down large lightning bolt(s) (up to eight) from the air. Each lightning bolt can have a radius large enough toaffect an area up to short range in size, making them powerful and large enough to pierce gigantic holes through even the largest of summons. As the lightning bolts descend they will rapidly charge the air around them, creating a field of electricity that, similar to ‘levitating blades’ will result in anything within short range of the lightning bolt being forced to levitate, and subsequently drawn in towards the lightning bolt through attraction at the speed of the lightning technique. When the lightning bolt strikes the ground, it will not immediately disappear, but will instead linger as a pillar of lightning after its initial earth shattering impact. Alternatively, the Lightning bolt can be made to disperse upon impact with the ground into an unfocused current so strong that it will charr the earth black as it conducts into the ground, while also neutralising any earthen based chakra within the ground on account of its chakra nature. Naturally, the user will be unaffected by any of the Lightning’s conduction effects as it is their chakra, meanwhile the effects of the Lightning bolt will completely expire after two turns.

Notes:
Can only be used 2x.
No lightning techniques above B rank for the rest of the turn.
Two turn cooldown between uses.



Chakra: 820 - 5 - 40 - 40 = 735
 

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As his dragons roared through the mountain Desmond saw his opponent jump up and release a large sphere of chakra towards him. This sphere would begin by clashing with the mountain causing the sections it hits to collapse as it forced it's way through. It then clashed with the head of the lightning dragon instantly dispersing it and continuing onwards towards Desmond. With his dragon gone and the pathway in front of him closed and the structure around him beginning to weaken, crack, and crumble. Desmond now 9m from his opponent would plant his left foot in front of him twisting his body clockwise and thrust his left hand forward releasing, shaping, and manipulating the chakra to form a sphere equal in size to that of the sphere headed towards him. Upon the two jutsu clashing a blowback would occur causing the remainder of the mountain to begin to collapse. This, however, didn't matter as Desmond kept his momentum from the twist seamlessly transitioning into a rotation destroying all debris within a 5m radius of him.Upon finishing his rotation Desmond spoke You, sir are making my day a huge pain in the ass. he said with a smirk as he utilized the debris to make his way towards the man.
(Oodama Rasengan) - Big Ball Spiral Sphere
Rank:S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: Oodama Rasengan is an advanced Ninjutsu technique that creates a very large Rasengan ball, following the same method, limits, and logic behind the original, smaller technique.
Note: Must already know rasengan.

(Hakke Irounaku Kaiten) – Eight Trigrams Absolute Heavenly Spin
Rank: S
Type: Offensive, Defense
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This jutsu is a larger more powerful version of the Eight Trigrams Palm Heavenly Spin.
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Chakra: 870-5-40-40=785
 
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As his dragons roared through the mountain Desmond saw his opponent jump up and release a large sphere of chakra towards him. This sphere would begin by clashing with the mountain causing the sections it hits to collapse as it forced it's way through. It then clashed with the head of the lightning dragon instantly dispersing it and continuing onwards towards Desmond. With his dragon gone and the pathway in front of him closed and the structure around him beginning to weaken, crack, and crumble. Desmond now 9m from his opponent would plant his left foot in front of him twisting his body clockwise and thrust his left hand forward releasing, shaping, and manipulating the chakra to form a sphere equal in size to that of the sphere headed towards him. Upon the two jutsu clashing a blowback would occur causing the remainder of the mountain to begin to collapse. This, however, didn't matter as Desmond kept his momentum from the twist seamlessly transitioning into a rotation destroying all debris within a 5m radius of him.Upon finishing his rotation Desmond spoke You, sir are making my day a huge pain in the ass. he said with a smirk as he utilized the debris to make his way towards the man.
(Oodama Rasengan) - Big Ball Spiral Sphere
Rank:S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: Oodama Rasengan is an advanced Ninjutsu technique that creates a very large Rasengan ball, following the same method, limits, and logic behind the original, smaller technique.
Note: Must already know rasengan.

(Hakke Irounaku Kaiten) – Eight Trigrams Absolute Heavenly Spin
Rank: S
Type: Offensive, Defense
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This jutsu is a larger more powerful version of the Eight Trigrams Palm Heavenly Spin.
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Chakra: 870-5-40-40=785
So there would still be tons of mountain falling on top of you from above but I've taken way too long to reply to this so I'm just going to go with it. Apologies for taking this long.




Before hearing the blast of Desmond's rasengan, he sensed the creation of it within the mountain. Wondering what Desmond could possibly do with but a rasengan against a falling mountain and his wind technique, Achilles was taken by surprise to see a large explosion launch debris away from the man, defending him from the falling rocks. Even with much of the front side of the mountain gone, Desmond's back would still be facing the large mound of rubble behind him. Forming the ram hand seal, Achilles would spew a large quantity of water out of his mouth at his opponent. The water would have enough force behind it to slam Desmond into the earth behind him, as well as hold him there briefly, as the water continued to crash into him. The water would take the shape of a large sphere after a few seconds, which would drown him if not escaped. As the sphere formed, Achilles wove the hand seals Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare and focused chakra into four points surrounding Desmond, each 3 meters away. A pillar of stone would emerge from the earth in each location, sending bolts of lightning toward the center, charging the water (and therefore shocking Desmond), as well as shocking Desmond directly.

(Suiton: Dai Bakusui Shōha) - Water Release: Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This technique is a stronger version of exploding water colliding wave technique. The user will first perform the ram hand seal and then spits out a large amount of water that covers an entire area, with massive waves that can crush the opponent. The user then forms the water into a giant orb, instead of releasing like weaker version of the technique.

(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) - Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals, he releases his lightning chakra into the ground, using it to forcefully shape the earth into 4 big pillars (proportionate to the target area) around the target. Once they rise, they unleash a barrage of lightning bolts, currents and shocks to whatever is inside, paralyzing, shocking and damaging the target from all around.



Chakra: 775 - 5 - 30 - 20 = 720
 

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In my post, I mentioned the remainder of the mountain collapsing on me which is why I transitioned to kaiten but I'll take rasengan soloing everything xD
As the jutsu clashed Desmond saw his opponent weave a single seal followed by expelling a large wave of water towards him. Desmond, in turn, wove a seal inhaling and then exhale a wall of flames though slow these flames would be large enough to clash with his opponent's waves. Upon collision, both jutsu would be neutralized but not before covering the battlefield with a thick steam mist. Desmond thinking that the mist would cover his tracks This is too much of a hassle... he's said as he began to break off from battle.
(Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: A technique where the user makes the horse hand seal and then kneads chakra inside his body which is then converted into fire and expelled from the mouth as a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an expansive range in both vertical and horizontal dimensions, making it extremely difficult to avoid. However, due to its massive width and height, the technique is not one of the fastest seen so far.
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Chakra: 825-5-40=780
 
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