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Hiruko walks onto a grassy field as he observes his opponent. After assessing his opponent, Hiruko smirks as he swiftly waves 4 hand seals before gradually disappearing before his opponent. Several vines emerge from the ground beneath Ragna as he witnesses this, rising him off of the ground as the vines bind him. A bean pod then rises at an angle to your left, opening, revealing Hiruko with a kunai in his right hand as he dashes out of the pod and grabs your neck with the left. Upon grabbing your neck Hiruko secretly places a seal on it as he slashes the muscle holding your left arm to your body rendering it useless. Hiruko lands on top of Ragna as he then performs the confrontation seal with his left hand, activating the seal.
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Hiruko walks onto a grassy field as he observes his opponent. After assessing his opponent, Hiruko smirks as he swiftly waves 4 hand seals before gradually disappearing before his opponent. Several vines emerge from the ground beneath Ragna as he witnesses this, rising him off of the ground as the vines bind him. A bean pod then rises at an angle to your left, opening, revealing Hiruko with a kunai in his right hand as he dashes out of the pod and grabs your neck with the left. Upon grabbing your neck Hiruko secretly places a seal on it as he slashes the muscle holding your left arm to your body rendering it useless. Hiruko lands on top of Ragna as he then performs the confrontation seal with his left hand, activating the seal.
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(I'll be fighting Zanda I've been wanting to fight him ever since I joined Konoha (YES THAT FREAKING LONG AGO)
Ragna notices Zanda make 4 handseals when suddenly several bean vines grow underneath him making him immobile. "A wood user??!!" Ragna thought to himself as the bean vines constricted him. However the felt strange. Not plant like, nor did they give off any odor. The ground didnt seem disturbed either. Believing it might be genjutsu Ragna released an omnidirectinal surge of Raition through his body releasing him from the genjutsu. At that point he saw Hiruko heading toward him (or stopping if you choose so) He caused the ground to tremor forcing Hiruko to become unbalanced and lose his footing. Since his sword can produce smoke he began forming a smoke dragon that eneveloped the fallen enemy coiling around and suffocating him. Ragna watched closely around the coiled part of the dragon.
"Is that all?"
Ragna notices Zanda make 4 handseals when suddenly several bean vines grow underneath him making him immobile. "A wood user??!!" Ragna thought to himself as the bean vines constricted him. However the felt strange. Not plant like, nor did they give off any odor. The ground didnt seem disturbed either. Believing it might be genjutsu Ragna released an omnidirectinal surge of Raition through his body releasing him from the genjutsu. At that point he saw Hiruko heading toward him (or stopping if you choose so) He caused the ground to tremor forcing Hiruko to become unbalanced and lose his footing. Since his sword can produce smoke he began forming a smoke dragon that eneveloped the fallen enemy coiling around and suffocating him. Ragna watched closely around the coiled part of the dragon.
"Is that all?"
(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short (Mid if channeled through a medium)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (+10 if used to boost weapon damage)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electricity from their body. It can be used as an omnidirectional attack or be channeled through weapons, the ground or other conductive mediums. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it has great numbing and paralyzing effects. To channel Nagashi through a medium, the user needs to focus the technique into one of his hands which will then be put in contact with the medium and can only choose to either do a widespread attack throughout his whole body or to channel it into something; he cannot achieve both usages at the same time. Despite not having much destructive or damaging properties, Nagashi can be used to destroy low rank earthen and wooden structures and even negate chakra on the ground to stop high ranked earth and wood techniques. It has also been noted that Lightning Specialists that have mastered Lightning to the highest degree can resist total paralyzation, although they still feel the pain and numbing effects.
Note: Paralyzation lasts 1 turn if sucessful but is ineffective against bios who have a primary Lightning Specialty
(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in making the enemies lose their footing and fall to ground or miss the aim of a given technique.
(Enryū) Smoke Dragon
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
By unleashing a continuous stream of smoke from his wrist launcher, the user can use his chakra to shape the smoke into the form of a dragon linked to his wrist launcher. This gives him the advantage when facing enemies that specialize in close quarter, physical combat because the dragon is completely composed of smoke, making so that physical attacks are useless against it. He can form several Smoke Dragons at once, but in this case, each one proportionally smaller and weaker. Its primary battle ability is to envelop and suffocate the target. However, as smoke is dissolved when it comes into contact with water or wind this technique is weak against water and wind based attacks.
Note: Can only be used by Smoke bios
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short (Mid if channeled through a medium)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (+10 if used to boost weapon damage)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electricity from their body. It can be used as an omnidirectional attack or be channeled through weapons, the ground or other conductive mediums. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it has great numbing and paralyzing effects. To channel Nagashi through a medium, the user needs to focus the technique into one of his hands which will then be put in contact with the medium and can only choose to either do a widespread attack throughout his whole body or to channel it into something; he cannot achieve both usages at the same time. Despite not having much destructive or damaging properties, Nagashi can be used to destroy low rank earthen and wooden structures and even negate chakra on the ground to stop high ranked earth and wood techniques. It has also been noted that Lightning Specialists that have mastered Lightning to the highest degree can resist total paralyzation, although they still feel the pain and numbing effects.
Note: Paralyzation lasts 1 turn if sucessful but is ineffective against bios who have a primary Lightning Specialty
(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in making the enemies lose their footing and fall to ground or miss the aim of a given technique.
(Enryū) Smoke Dragon
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
By unleashing a continuous stream of smoke from his wrist launcher, the user can use his chakra to shape the smoke into the form of a dragon linked to his wrist launcher. This gives him the advantage when facing enemies that specialize in close quarter, physical combat because the dragon is completely composed of smoke, making so that physical attacks are useless against it. He can form several Smoke Dragons at once, but in this case, each one proportionally smaller and weaker. Its primary battle ability is to envelop and suffocate the target. However, as smoke is dissolved when it comes into contact with water or wind this technique is weak against water and wind based attacks.
Note: Can only be used by Smoke bios
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Hiruko watched Ragna closely as he stood helplessly once caught in the genjutsu, and as Hiruko gradually got closer as he ran with the kunai in his right hand, he readied himself for any signs of the genjutsu being broken. Suddenly a surge of lightning is released from Ragna in an omnidirectional manner, notifying Hiruko on the breaking of his gen, as he comes to a stop right before short range. Upon stopping, Hiruko creates a flow of gushing water to emerge from underneath Ragna before manipulating that water into a prison that encompasses his opponent. Due to nagashi being an electrical current that emanates from the body, as the water gushes upwards from underneath Ragna his own electrical current would not only shock , but paralyze him due to the fact that he has no lightning specialty, and Ragna would be left floating helplessly within the water as his body begins to take in water uncontrollably. Hiruko, while maintaining concentration of the water prison, dashes within short range of his opponent before releasing the water tech as Hiruko reaches a few centimeters away from him. Acting swiftly Hiruko touches his opponent with his left hand, placing a special seal upon him, while using the kunai in his right hand to cut the tendons in both of the arms of Ragna rendering them useless. Hiruko then kicks his opponent in his stomach/chest sending him 2m away from his location as he helps his opponent bring up some of the water he swallowed in order to prevent him from drowning.
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Dem seals tho
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Ragna having broke out of the genjutsu ended his Nagashi technique as he did not need it anymore it served its purpose. Meanwhile Hiruko began to form a sphere of water, as he stopped his motion forward, around Ragna starting from the bottom as it made its way up. As soon as the water was being formulated underneath Ragna he jumped so that he would be facing the ground. Throwing a punch while releasing futon chakra he pushed the rising water back and also shot himself further away from Hiruko due to the angle at which he was facing the ground while being in the air keeping an eye on him the entire time. Landing on the ground he created a lightning clone and then channeled massive amounts of Doton chakra into the Earth to create an earthen humanoid being with three faces and six arms wielding six large axis. Ragna instructed the being to hurl one of its large axis at the skilled Ninja.
(Fūton: Senpūken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist
Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: The user delievers a punch that releases a giant, adaptable whirlwind.
(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself but made from lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.
( Doton: Gaia ) – Earth Release: Gaia
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short - Long (Made short range-long range reach)
Chakra cost: 40 (-30 per turn)
Damage Points: 80
Description: This jutsu represents a mastery over Earth and takes great skill to learn. The user will perform the Snake handseal and slam their hands on the ground causing a Massive Earthen being to rise. The Earthen construct is made in the form of a beautiful, nimble yet strong, female warrior with three faces all with different emotions. An expressionless face in the front, a face full of sadness on the left, another face full of anger and hate on the right. She has 6 arms and each arm contains a Large Earthen axe that she uses to attack the enemy in all ranges. Having multiple limbs makes the Earthen being more destructive and versatile in battle. Despite being created in large size as she is about two heads (relative to the Golemn head size) taller than the Great Earthen Golemn in height, she is able to strike and move fairly fast as she is smaller in mass being about 2/3 of its width. Only masters of Earth can perform this technique successfully. When the user is not controlling the creature with their chakra it merely becomes a statue as an earthen construct unable to move. To control it, the user must be in contact with it and spending chakra, therefore not being able to use other elements at the same time.
-Must have mastered Earth
-Must be taught by Omega5
-Can only be used twice and has a 3 turn cooldown period
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Ragna having broke out of the genjutsu ended his Nagashi technique as he did not need it anymore it served its purpose. Meanwhile Hiruko began to form a sphere of water, as he stopped his motion forward, around Ragna starting from the bottom as it made its way up. As soon as the water was being formulated underneath Ragna he jumped so that he would be facing the ground. Throwing a punch while releasing futon chakra he pushed the rising water back and also shot himself further away from Hiruko due to the angle at which he was facing the ground while being in the air keeping an eye on him the entire time. Landing on the ground he created a lightning clone and then channeled massive amounts of Doton chakra into the Earth to create an earthen humanoid being with three faces and six arms wielding six large axis. Ragna instructed the being to hurl one of its large axis at the skilled Ninja.
(Fūton: Senpūken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist
Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: The user delievers a punch that releases a giant, adaptable whirlwind.
(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself but made from lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.
( Doton: Gaia ) – Earth Release: Gaia
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short - Long (Made short range-long range reach)
Chakra cost: 40 (-30 per turn)
Damage Points: 80
Description: This jutsu represents a mastery over Earth and takes great skill to learn. The user will perform the Snake handseal and slam their hands on the ground causing a Massive Earthen being to rise. The Earthen construct is made in the form of a beautiful, nimble yet strong, female warrior with three faces all with different emotions. An expressionless face in the front, a face full of sadness on the left, another face full of anger and hate on the right. She has 6 arms and each arm contains a Large Earthen axe that she uses to attack the enemy in all ranges. Having multiple limbs makes the Earthen being more destructive and versatile in battle. Despite being created in large size as she is about two heads (relative to the Golemn head size) taller than the Great Earthen Golemn in height, she is able to strike and move fairly fast as she is smaller in mass being about 2/3 of its width. Only masters of Earth can perform this technique successfully. When the user is not controlling the creature with their chakra it merely becomes a statue as an earthen construct unable to move. To control it, the user must be in contact with it and spending chakra, therefore not being able to use other elements at the same time.
-Must have mastered Earth
-Must be taught by Omega5
-Can only be used twice and has a 3 turn cooldown period
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I think you messed up t/f with your move, but I didn't kill you so no worries
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So here's what happened. Zanda created the sphere of water around Omega as the Nagashi current surrounded him. Then, in Omega's move, he simply stopped his Nagashi before Zanda used his technique. In the order of timeframe, to go back and stop a technique earlier than planned, especially the first technique of your most recent move (not counting the one in which you cut Nagashi short) is trying to re-write your move after Zanda has replied. It's also, in a sense, you performing an action before Zanda's first move, which goes directly against the "
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" rule.To simplify my view, as you (Omega) didn't state in your original usage how long your Nagashi would be sustained, it is within full realm of Zanda's capabilities to be able to create the sphere around you before it is complete, paralyzing you. And to go back and say that you end the technique before he moves is a break in timeframe. So as the battle is now, Omega has the Seal on him, though it is not active yet, and his body is paralyzed.
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Thank you for your time Sensei
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To make sure that his opponent doesn't try anything funny, Hiruko takes extra precautions. Performing two hand seals Hiruko spits out a medium pressured controllable stream of chakra infused high viscous water towards the legs and useless arms of his opponent eventually covering his entire body from the neck down as Hiruko then creates a mini 1m puddle around the body. He then continues to watch in silence.
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(Oh ok my bad but for the record my original use was to only break out of the gen I see no reason why I would have it constantly admiting raition it only reaches short range(when used omnidirectionally) as it had no other merits to it plus I used other moves after it so I must have canceled it after its original use but i'll be more detailed from now on. I'll try to finish the fight to the best of my abilities but I admit defeat. Hopefully we'll have a rematch someday)
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With his arms cut and useless and now he was on the ground in agony. Ragna decided this was the end of the line. He needed more experience to face someone with these abilities. Having been paralyzed he watched as his body was soon covered in sticky viscous water preventing movement. Having got some of his bearings back Ragna releases Earthen chakra throughout his entire body he molded some parts of the armor to have spikes protruding from it so they culd also rip through it. Immediately after he placed Hiruko in a genjutsu in which the battlefield became as a mist. Blinding his view of Ragna. Taking advantage of the situation after discarding his armor. Ragna shot out a spear of fast moving Raition from his mouth to destroy Hiruko.
(Doton: Koka no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Hardening Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offense/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (-15 per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user releases a burst of earth chakra from all over his body. As he does this, a multitude of rock seemingly grows from his skin, forming a large, dense armour or rock much bigger and bulkier than the users original size. The armour can be manipulated and used to create extendable weapons to strike a target with like rudimentary swords or hammers. The downside is that the user cannot mold techniques from other elements a part from earth while sustaining the armor. The armor can be manifested in only specific parts of the body if the user so chooses.
( Magen: Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu ) - Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 10 (+5 if you use it double)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user casts an illusion over an area that allows him to manipulate the way an area looks to fool an opponent. He can only change the way the terrain looks, and not any other feature.
(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user, after performing the Snake hand seal, emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands or mouth which then pierces the enemy. Kakuzu, the original user, shoots the technique from his Lightning mask's mouth. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies by branching the main spear. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.
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With his arms cut and useless and now he was on the ground in agony. Ragna decided this was the end of the line. He needed more experience to face someone with these abilities. Having been paralyzed he watched as his body was soon covered in sticky viscous water preventing movement. Having got some of his bearings back Ragna releases Earthen chakra throughout his entire body he molded some parts of the armor to have spikes protruding from it so they culd also rip through it. Immediately after he placed Hiruko in a genjutsu in which the battlefield became as a mist. Blinding his view of Ragna. Taking advantage of the situation after discarding his armor. Ragna shot out a spear of fast moving Raition from his mouth to destroy Hiruko.
(Doton: Koka no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Hardening Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offense/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (-15 per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user releases a burst of earth chakra from all over his body. As he does this, a multitude of rock seemingly grows from his skin, forming a large, dense armour or rock much bigger and bulkier than the users original size. The armour can be manipulated and used to create extendable weapons to strike a target with like rudimentary swords or hammers. The downside is that the user cannot mold techniques from other elements a part from earth while sustaining the armor. The armor can be manifested in only specific parts of the body if the user so chooses.
( Magen: Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu ) - Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 10 (+5 if you use it double)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user casts an illusion over an area that allows him to manipulate the way an area looks to fool an opponent. He can only change the way the terrain looks, and not any other feature.
(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user, after performing the Snake hand seal, emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands or mouth which then pierces the enemy. Kakuzu, the original user, shoots the technique from his Lightning mask's mouth. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies by branching the main spear. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.
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I have no problem with a rematch someday ^_^
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As Hiruko intensely gazed upon his opponent watching his every move, he takes the creation of the earth armor as his cue, and responds by exerting his killing intent as he focuses on his target. Ragna, unable to see Hiruko as he lays on the ground, would feel the great pressure and chakra magnitude of Hiruko as he lays paralyzed as the thought of a gruesome death replays in his mind over and over again. Unfocused and traumatized, Ragna would be unable to cast his genjutsu upon Hiruko as he lays paralyzed in fear. Hiruko continues to maintain his focus on Ragna as he slowly backs out of short range of him, weakening the killing intent once reaching mid.range, lessening the magnitude of the paralyzation allowing Ragna to move to a certain extent. Hiruko observes the reaction of his opponent as he stands 8m away from him while maintaining the weakened killing intent.
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When I master the basics I'm coming back for you. xD
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Laying on the ground Ragna closed his eyes as he awaited his enemies next move. He was sure that he would die. He gave it his all but the enemy proved too strong.There was not many other things he could do with his arms the way they were. The enemy would easily counter them. Ragna had done his best.
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Winner: Zanda
You held back and could have killed me multiple times and you still whooped my ass. Thanks for the lesson it will help in the NW.
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Laying on the ground Ragna closed his eyes as he awaited his enemies next move. He was sure that he would die. He gave it his all but the enemy proved too strong.There was not many other things he could do with his arms the way they were. The enemy would easily counter them. Ragna had done his best.
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Winner: Zanda
You held back and could have killed me multiple times and you still whooped my ass. Thanks for the lesson it will help in the NW.
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As his opponent lays helplessly on the floor Hiruko performs the confrontation hand seal activating the Puppet Curse Seal. A red eye with another circle in it resembling the pupil, with four lines stemming from the upper line of the eye and two big thick lines stemming from the side of the eye appears on the forehead of Ragna, giving Hiruko full control of his body. With a few minute finger movements Hiruko makes Ragna stand up and come to him where they stand off face to face. The earthen armor that was once covering Ragna falls to the ground around his feet as he stares into Hiruko's eyes. Lets go. The two shinobi then walk off into the sunset, destination, unknown......