[Open] Official battle, keep up

[Zatanna]

So I was asked to check this.

Post 1: Zee starts off my jumping into the air releasing her leg weights and coming down with a powerful kick. In response to this LGeezy creates shadow clones, but fails to avoid the kick so he ends up taking a direct hit, and has his clones dispersed in the process. Zee is in the lead so far.

Post 2: Zee goes in for a punch, and in response Kirabi creates a dome of wind around him, and later goes on to try and use Oral rebirth.

Post 3: Zee attempts to change up her last move, but fails to do so before the wind hits her which causes her to take a direct blow from the wind attack, and is blown back while Kirabi’s move goes through meaning he has healed himself entirely.

Post 4: LGeezy hinders Zee’s chakra capabilities, and also brings forth a Hellfire technique. In response, Zee propels herself through the fire, and towards her opponent.

Post 5: LGeezy simultaneously enters Sage mode as he summons one of his spiders. By entering sage mode he was able to easily move out of the way of the attack, and cause Zee to pass him. Afterwards, LGeezy would use his spiders to place Zee inside of a gen. In response, Zee uses Heavenly Foot Pain and chakra transfer from her slug.

Post 6: LGeezy uses his Way of the Barrier technique, two genjutsu from his Spiders, and layers the Spider’s gen with his own.

Okay, so the first issue is that Zee thinks that LGeezy would not have summoned his Spider and entered Sage mode the same time. The issue with this is that Zee already responded to LGeezy’s post when he said: “ At the same time however, Hotsuma would draw his own blood and wipe it across a summoning tattoo on his right hand.”

Afterwards, Zee responded meaning she acknowledged that his attack went through. However, even if that was not the case LGeezy would have been able to pull of his move because Sage mode itself does not cost any chakra, so he could easily summon his spider at the same time as he entered it, but that does not matter in this case.

Now, in VMs, LGeezy says, “ Also, my summon's illusions aren't techniques, those are her abilities. There's nothing that prevents her from activating those abilities in the turn she's summoned. She can activate those abilities as many times as needed within her 4 turns and they don't count as moves either. “

This does not make sense in the least. The techniques/abilities count as a move, and I don’t know who convinced him otherwise. The Spider also would not have activated a genjutsu in the same turn she was summoned, so that would happen after fact since LGeezy did not state that it did happen at the same time.

Lastly, I want to look at LGeezy’s final move. I first want to mention that this move fails because LGeezy tries to use multiple techniques at once. For one, he uses two genjutsu from his summoning, a Way of the Barrier technique, and another genjutsu. This equates to four moves in one turn, and the allowed amount is three. Even then, he tries to use his Way of the Barrier technique at the same time as his Binding genjutsu which would cause his move to fail anyways. Overall, his move fails, and he would be hit by Zee’s attack.


TLDR: Zee’s the winner.

As Nana lands her blow, the pressure that was closing around her releases, confirming the death of her opponent.
As she walks over to the body, she pulls out a scroll writing down a script. Laying the scroll down and placing the body on it, she seals the dna within the scroll.

( Han'you Fūin ) - Generic Sealing Technique

Spoiler

Rank: B-Rank
Type: Supplementary , Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique is a standard ninja skill which allows a ninja to summon an assortment of items or weapons that have been stored using Fūinjutsu,typically they are stored within scrolls. When needed, the owner will activate the seals releasing their item or weapon of choice. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons. The items themselves are unaffected by time. This Technique allows the user to seal any weapons they wish being their own or opponents.
Note: Cannot seal opponent's custom weapons, or the special weapons of a particular character ( example: Samehada or Kubikiribocho ).
Note: Can only seal corpses, and not injured people regardless of the extent of their injury.

 

[Geezus]

So I was asked to check this.

Post 1: Zee starts off my jumping into the air releasing her leg weights and coming down with a powerful kick. In response to this LGeezy creates shadow clones, but fails to avoid the kick so he ends up taking a direct hit, and has his clones dispersed in the process. Zee is in the lead so far.

Post 2: Zee goes in for a punch, and in response Kirabi creates a dome of wind around him, and later goes on to try and use Oral rebirth.

Post 3: Zee attempts to change up her last move, but fails to do so before the wind hits her which causes her to take a direct blow from the wind attack, and is blown back while Kirabi’s move goes through meaning he has healed himself entirely.

Post 4: LGeezy hinders Zee’s chakra capabilities, and also brings forth a Hellfire technique. In response, Zee propels herself through the fire, and towards her opponent.

Post 5: LGeezy simultaneously enters Sage mode as he summons one of his spiders. By entering sage mode he was able to easily move out of the way of the attack, and cause Zee to pass him. Afterwards, LGeezy would use his spiders to place Zee inside of a gen. In response, Zee uses Heavenly Foot Pain and chakra transfer from her slug.

Post 6: LGeezy uses his Way of the Barrier technique, two genjutsu from his Spiders, and layers the Spider’s gen with his own.

Okay, so the first issue is that Zee thinks that LGeezy would not have summoned his Spider and entered Sage mode the same time. The issue with this is that Zee already responded to LGeezy’s post when he said: “ At the same time however, Hotsuma would draw his own blood and wipe it across a summoning tattoo on his right hand.”

Afterwards, Zee responded meaning she acknowledged that his attack went through. However, even if that was not the case LGeezy would have been able to pull of his move because Sage mode itself does not cost any chakra, so he could easily summon his spider at the same time as he entered it, but that does not matter in this case.

Now, in VMs, LGeezy says, “ Also, my summon's illusions aren't techniques, those are her abilities. There's nothing that prevents her from activating those abilities in the turn she's summoned. She can activate those abilities as many times as needed within her 4 turns and they don't count as moves either. “

This does not make sense in the least. The techniques/abilities count as a move, and I don’t know who convinced him otherwise. The Spider also would not have activated a genjutsu in the same turn she was summoned, so that would happen after fact since LGeezy did not state that it did happen at the same time.

Lastly, I want to look at LGeezy’s final move. I first want to mention that this move fails because LGeezy tries to use multiple techniques at once. For one, he uses two genjutsu from his summoning, a Way of the Barrier technique, and another genjutsu. This equates to four moves in one turn, and the allowed amount is three. Even then, he tries to use his Way of the Barrier technique at the same time as his Binding genjutsu which would cause his move to fail anyways. Overall, his move fails, and he would be hit by Zee’s attack.


TLDR: Zee’s the winner.

In this case, im sorry but I have to disagree with the check and will seek a second opinion for two reasons:

1. My Hayabusa doesnt use any genjutsu in the last move. All Genjutsu were preformed by the Spider as I avoid Zee's attack.

2. Although I now know officially that the spiders abilities count as moves, that in no way changes what happens during the order of events. This simply means the binding genjustu doesnt occur because it would be classified as the 4th move during this turn. Since there are normally only 3 moves in a turn anything outside of that doesnt count or fail. From previous checks in the past this usally hasnt condemned the entire move to fail unless something done was critical to thier defense. I have to note how the binding gen is not critical to my defense. Its only purposed was to double layer my opponents in genjutsu in order to land the final blow. Her heeldrop was avoided by me moving into the air and off the ground.
While the spider places them in genjutsu.

If this loss is based on overall performance during the fight, then the check should reflect that which it doesnt.

 

[Geezus]

As Nana lands her blow, the pressure that was closing around her releases, confirming the death of her opponent.
As she walks over to the body, she pulls out a scroll writing down a script. Laying the scroll down and placing the body on it, she seals the dna within the scroll.

( Han'you Fūin ) - Generic Sealing Technique

Spoiler

Rank: B-Rank
Type: Supplementary , Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique is a standard ninja skill which allows a ninja to summon an assortment of items or weapons that have been stored using Fūinjutsu,typically they are stored within scrolls. When needed, the owner will activate the seals releasing their item or weapon of choice. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons. The items themselves are unaffected by time. This Technique allows the user to seal any weapons they wish being their own or opponents.
Note: Cannot seal opponent's custom weapons, or the special weapons of a particular character ( example: Samehada or Kubikiribocho ).
Note: Can only seal corpses, and not injured people regardless of the extent of their injury.

Well im not seeing that check coming so might as well move on.

Hotsuma would be devasated by the attack and would fall to the ground dead. However his sword had been awaiting this exact moment for quite sometime as Hotsuma's chakra was pulled into the blade. As Nana walked over to him, the Hayabusa's body turned brown as it wittled away to dust. The wind scattering the Hayabusa across the land much to Nana's bewilderment. There would unfortunately be nothing left of Hotsuma's body and no traces of DNA left to obtain as he was scattered into the wind. The only thing left of the battle was the Akujiki which laid on the ground, enticing the woman to take up its blade to continue its legacy.

Akujiki | Evil Eater

Spoiler

Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra: -40 chakra per turn unsealed; -10 chakra sealed.
Damage: +20 kenjutsu unsealed
Description: The personal katana of Hotsuma Hayabusa, Akujiki, is an ancient and cursed blade, said to have consumed the souls of men for centuries. It is said, "He who wields Akujiki, wields absolute power." Akujiki possesses the terrifying ability to indefinitely enhance its destructive power by consuming chakra. Thus, whosoever uses Akujiki shall forever be cursed with an unfortunate fate; in order to sustain the blade's hunger, those who wield Akujiki must dedicate their entire lives to the slaughter of any and all beings that possess chakra, and then they must be devoured in their last moments. Despite Akujiki's incredible power, it was possible to seal the demon blade by using fuinjutsu to contain its power. However, because seals of this nature are not indestructible, they must be vigilantly guarded, lest the seal become undone and allow Akujiki to run rampant. Hotsuma has taken it upon himself to end the bloodstained legacy of the blade.

Ariake Seal
The Ariake seal's formula runs along the length of Akujiki and forms a thin barrier along the blade equal to S-rank. The chakra emitted from the barrier is made to not only contain the blade's power but also serves to counteract sealing techniques of equal rank and below. Originally, this seal was a countermeasure put in place to prevent it from being undone by those whose only wish was to gain power. The chakra within the formula activates when the Ariake Seal comes within short-range a foreign sealing technique. As the sword comes near the opposing sealing technique, the chakra stored by the barrier forcibly enters the foreign seal's activation mechanism and destroys the chakra within preventing the seal from activating or remaining active. The Ariake Seal can counteract one sealing technique A-rank and below three times per battle. To sustain this seal requires no concentration on the user's part, but it does drain a small portion of the user's chakra to sustain itself. As mentioned the true purpose of the Ariake Seal is to prevent the sword from draining the user's chakra substantially. But by sacrificing a move, the user can choose to undo the seal and allow the true nature of the Akujiki to come forth. The unsealing happens passively, and once unsealed, the blade begins to draw on large portions of the user's chakra seeking to consume them and inflicting them with the blade's curse. This seal may be redone at the cost of a move and three handseals.

Evil Eater
Akujiki shares the name with the curse placed upon the user in exchange for its power. As the Akujiki consumes a large amount of the user's chakra, the chakra becomes dense and visible in the form of a blood-red hue completely coating the blade. The chakra exuded from the blade is a manifestation of its hunger and can absorb one S-rank or below technique's chakra within short-range once per turn while also granting the user's kenjutsu +20 damage while unsealed. For every technique absorbed, the Akujiki empowers itself by consuming the chakra and exuding a destabilizing shockwave meant to make consuming additional chakra easier. This chakra enters the body and prevents the use of elemental techniques for a single turn. However, this shockwave affects all within short-range of the sword including the user and thereby afflicts them weapon's curse. During this time, the chakra consumption of Akujiki is halted as it engorges itself on the absorbed chakra until the -40 chakra cost cannot be sustained. If less than 40 chakra was absorbed, the user's own chakra makes up the difference. If Akujiki consumes the user's chakra while in this state they will be unable to perform genjutsu due to the strain. Should the user die while in possession of Akujiki it will then forcibly consume and seal the user's chakra within it, leaving only the husk of their body which is rendered to dust.
Note:
Requires Adv. Fuinjutsu to use.
Akujiki is indestructible, but cannot be used to defend against jutsu on its own.
Once the Ariake Seal becomes undone, the user may redo the seal at the cost of a move. The seal can only be undone for a maximum of 4 turns per battle

 

[Zatanna]

Well im not seeing that check coming so might as well move on.

Hotsuma would be devasated by the attack and would fall to the ground dead. However his sword had been awaiting this exact moment for quite sometime as Hotsuma's chakra was pulled into the blade. As Nana walked over to him, the Hayabusa's body turned brown as it wittled away to dust. The wind scattering the Hayabusa across the land much to Nana's bewilderment. There would unfortunately be nothing left of Hotsuma's body and no traces of DNA left to obtain as he was scattered into the wind. The only thing left of the battle was the Akujiki which laid on the ground, enticing the woman to take up its blade to continue its legacy.

Akujiki | Evil Eater

Spoiler

Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra: -40 chakra per turn unsealed; -10 chakra sealed.
Damage: +20 kenjutsu unsealed
Description: The personal katana of Hotsuma Hayabusa, Akujiki, is an ancient and cursed blade, said to have consumed the souls of men for centuries. It is said, "He who wields Akujiki, wields absolute power." Akujiki possesses the terrifying ability to indefinitely enhance its destructive power by consuming chakra. Thus, whosoever uses Akujiki shall forever be cursed with an unfortunate fate; in order to sustain the blade's hunger, those who wield Akujiki must dedicate their entire lives to the slaughter of any and all beings that possess chakra, and then they must be devoured in their last moments. Despite Akujiki's incredible power, it was possible to seal the demon blade by using fuinjutsu to contain its power. However, because seals of this nature are not indestructible, they must be vigilantly guarded, lest the seal become undone and allow Akujiki to run rampant. Hotsuma has taken it upon himself to end the bloodstained legacy of the blade.

Ariake Seal
The Ariake seal's formula runs along the length of Akujiki and forms a thin barrier along the blade equal to S-rank. The chakra emitted from the barrier is made to not only contain the blade's power but also serves to counteract sealing techniques of equal rank and below. Originally, this seal was a countermeasure put in place to prevent it from being undone by those whose only wish was to gain power. The chakra within the formula activates when the Ariake Seal comes within short-range a foreign sealing technique. As the sword comes near the opposing sealing technique, the chakra stored by the barrier forcibly enters the foreign seal's activation mechanism and destroys the chakra within preventing the seal from activating or remaining active. The Ariake Seal can counteract one sealing technique A-rank and below three times per battle. To sustain this seal requires no concentration on the user's part, but it does drain a small portion of the user's chakra to sustain itself. As mentioned the true purpose of the Ariake Seal is to prevent the sword from draining the user's chakra substantially. But by sacrificing a move, the user can choose to undo the seal and allow the true nature of the Akujiki to come forth. The unsealing happens passively, and once unsealed, the blade begins to draw on large portions of the user's chakra seeking to consume them and inflicting them with the blade's curse. This seal may be redone at the cost of a move and three handseals.

Evil Eater
Akujiki shares the name with the curse placed upon the user in exchange for its power. As the Akujiki consumes a large amount of the user's chakra, the chakra becomes dense and visible in the form of a blood-red hue completely coating the blade. The chakra exuded from the blade is a manifestation of its hunger and can absorb one S-rank or below technique's chakra within short-range once per turn while also granting the user's kenjutsu +20 damage while unsealed. For every technique absorbed, the Akujiki empowers itself by consuming the chakra and exuding a destabilizing shockwave meant to make consuming additional chakra easier. This chakra enters the body and prevents the use of elemental techniques for a single turn. However, this shockwave affects all within short-range of the sword including the user and thereby afflicts them weapon's curse. During this time, the chakra consumption of Akujiki is halted as it engorges itself on the absorbed chakra until the -40 chakra cost cannot be sustained. If less than 40 chakra was absorbed, the user's own chakra makes up the difference. If Akujiki consumes the user's chakra while in this state they will be unable to perform genjutsu due to the strain. Should the user die while in possession of Akujiki it will then forcibly consume and seal the user's chakra within it, leaving only the husk of their body which is rendered to dust.
Note:
Requires Adv. Fuinjutsu to use.
Akujiki is indestructible, but cannot be used to defend against jutsu on its own.
Once the Ariake Seal becomes undone, the user may redo the seal at the cost of a move. The seal can only be undone for a maximum of 4 turns per battle

As she walked over she could see the body starting to decompose quickly. It wasnt instant but there was somethxing happening with the sword on his back. In one swift movement, she drew a tanto shortsword from her back and cut off a foot. She only needed a small portion. Even if the foot would still decompose, she had the blood and skin cells that would contain his dna on the blade of her weapon.

Placing both the foot and weapon in the scroll, she sealed them up and walked away.

( Han'you Fūin ) - Generic Sealing Technique
Spoiler
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Supplementary , Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique is a standard ninja skill which allows a ninja to summon an assortment of items or weapons that have been stored using Fūinjutsu,typically they are stored within scrolls. When needed, the owner will activate the seals releasing their item or weapon of choice. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons. The items themselves are unaffected by time. This Technique allows the user to seal any weapons they wish being their own or opponents.
Note: Cannot seal opponent's custom weapons, or the special weapons of a particular character ( example: Samehada or Kubikiribocho ).
Note: Can only seal corpses, and not injured people regardless of the extent of their injury.

 

[Geezus]

As she walked over she could see the body starting to decompose quickly. It wasnt instant but there was somethxing happening with the sword on his back. In one swift movement, she drew a tanto shortsword from her back and cut off a foot. She only needed a small portion. Even if the foot would still decompose, she had the blood and skin cells that would contain his dna on the blade of her weapon.

Placing both the foot and weapon in the scroll, she sealed them up and walked away.

( Han'you Fūin ) - Generic Sealing Technique
Spoiler
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Supplementary , Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique is a standard ninja skill which allows a ninja to summon an assortment of items or weapons that have been stored using Fūinjutsu,typically they are stored within scrolls. When needed, the owner will activate the seals releasing their item or weapon of choice. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons. The items themselves are unaffected by time. This Technique allows the user to seal any weapons they wish being their own or opponents.
Note: Cannot seal opponent's custom weapons, or the special weapons of a particular character ( example: Samehada or Kubikiribocho ).
Note: Can only seal corpses, and not injured people regardless of the extent of their injury.

Lol unfortunately it dont work like that.The body doesnt actually decompose in a sort of rapidily accelerated natural process. When my chakra is absorbed at the end of my life. Any and all traces are rendered to dust leaving only the sword. Also did you just really try and seal my CW ? Lmao

 

[Zatanna]

Lol unfortunately it dont work like that.The body doesnt actually decompose in a sort of rapidily accelerated natural process. When my chakra is absorbed at the end of my life. Any and all traces are rendered to dust leaving only the sword. Also did you just really try and seal my CW ? Lmao

Youre absorbing chakra? Cool even the most advanced chakra absorbing techniques can do what 100 a turn? Youve still got 800 chakra left. Its not gonna be instant. And no, i was sealing my tanto blade

 

[Sasori]

I was asked to check this again.

The first issue appears to be that LGeezy's body would turn to dust before Zee has the chance to capture it. According to VMs, and the fight itself it is agreed that LGeezy would not be killed by the previous attack, and would leave him with some health, so his CW would not turn his body to dust yet. At this point, Zee is able to do as she pleases since she has already won the battle. Also, since Zee has already won the battle she is free to kill LGeezy after the fact or do whatever, and attempt to collect LGeezy's DNA.

So continue with Zee making her next post, and LGeezy being left with only around 15 points.

Note: This post isn't me approving any DNA capture from Zee.
@LGeezy @Zatanna

 

[Geezus]

I was asked to check this again.

The first issue appears to be that LGeezy's body would turn to dust before Zee has the chance to capture it. According to VMs, and the fight itself it is agreed that LGeezy would not be killed by the previous attack, and would leave him with some health, so his CW would not turn his body to dust yet. At this point, Zee is able to do as she pleases since she has already won the battle. Also, since Zee has already won the battle she is free to kill LGeezy after the fact or do whatever, and attempt to collect LGeezy's DNA.

So continue with Zee making her next post, and LGeezy being left with only around 15 points.

Note: This post isn't me approving any DNA capture from Zee.
@LGeezy @Zatanna

Wait hold on. So I requested a redo of your last check and you told me thats not how it works. 3rd checks were final even though you completely read my move incorrectly. But Zee ask and here you go checking the fight again? Okay, great modsmanship. Lol. I thought 3rd checks were final and ended the fight altogether especially when both parties are still alive. Not the other party gets to freely attack while your bio has to sit there and watch....

Now I have 15 hp left, but cant reply to the fact my opponent is STILL trying to kill me even though the fight has ended and im ALIVE? Im not even knocked unconicous. If im alive and the fight ended without her successfully killing me how does she get to attempt for edo tensei? This all types of flawed and yall know it.

Since I am still alive then, I guess its safe to say my mental creation is still actively surpressing her abilities and she is about to be rendered unconcious since she is still in range of me according to this "check" if thats what it is.
3rd and final checks my ass lmao.

 

[Zatanna]

As her opponent passes out, Nana takes a shortsword and using medical knowledge of the body, cuts off the hand of her opponent, and making sure her opponent doesnt wake up, delivers a strong kick to the center of his chest, directly stomping on his heart.

Sealing up the hand for the dna, Nana leaves for home.

(Tsūtenkyaku) - Heavenly Foot of Pain

Spoiler

Rank: A-Rank
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A (25+10=35-10=25)
Damage Points: 60+85=145
Description: This technique is simply a falling axe kick. The user concentrates their incredible strength into his or her heel and foot and strikes the enemy. The power of this attack is so great that it would cause immediate death to anyone who it hit by the attack directly. It was shown that when it strikes the ground it results in a gigantic crater (mid range all around, up to 5 meters deep) that can even kill an opponent caught in its short-range strike zone. The technique can also be used against solid ninjutsu techniques such as those from Earth Release.

Note: Can only be used by Sakura or Tsunade bios.

( Han'you Fūin ) - Generic Sealing Technique

Spoiler

Rank: B-Rank
Type: Supplementary , Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique is a standard ninja skill which allows a ninja to summon an assortment of items or weapons that have been stored using Fūinjutsu,typically they are stored within scrolls. When needed, the owner will activate the seals releasing their item or weapon of choice. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons. The items themselves are unaffected by time. This Technique allows the user to seal any weapons they wish being their own or opponents.
Note: Cannot seal opponent's custom weapons, or the special weapons of a particular character ( example: Samehada or Kubikiribocho ).
Note: Can only seal corpses, and not injured people regardless of the extent of their injury.

 

[Geezus]

As her opponent passes out, Nana takes a shortsword and using medical knowledge of the body, cuts off the hand of her opponent, and making sure her opponent doesnt wake up, delivers a strong kick to the center of his chest, directly stomping on his heart.

Sealing up the hand for the dna, Nana leaves for home.

(Tsūtenkyaku) - Heavenly Foot of Pain

Spoiler

Rank: A-Rank
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A (25+10=35-10=25)
Damage Points: 60+85=145
Description: This technique is simply a falling axe kick. The user concentrates their incredible strength into his or her heel and foot and strikes the enemy. The power of this attack is so great that it would cause immediate death to anyone who it hit by the attack directly. It was shown that when it strikes the ground it results in a gigantic crater (mid range all around, up to 5 meters deep) that can even kill an opponent caught in its short-range strike zone. The technique can also be used against solid ninjutsu techniques such as those from Earth Release.

Note: Can only be used by Sakura or Tsunade bios.

( Han'you Fūin ) - Generic Sealing Technique

Spoiler

Rank: B-Rank
Type: Supplementary , Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique is a standard ninja skill which allows a ninja to summon an assortment of items or weapons that have been stored using Fūinjutsu,typically they are stored within scrolls. When needed, the owner will activate the seals releasing their item or weapon of choice. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons. The items themselves are unaffected by time. This Technique allows the user to seal any weapons they wish being their own or opponents.
Note: Cannot seal opponent's custom weapons, or the special weapons of a particular character ( example: Samehada or Kubikiribocho ).
Note: Can only seal corpses, and not injured people regardless of the extent of their injury.

Sorry, but I'm not unconscious. Nothing in you move has knocked me out or made me pass out lol.

---

Hotsuma lay on the ground barely clinging to life, his opponent believing he had passed out from the sudden collapse. He could hear the steps of his opponent shuffling towards him. As she neared closer to cut off his hand, the woman would be still suppressed by the Hayabusa's Upper Dantian creation and considering she had maintained short-mid range distance from Hotsuma the entire fight her spirit had finally been reduced to nothing. Nana, having continued to maintain the close proximity beside her consciousness fading, showed she wasn't aware of what was actually happening to her. As she bent to slice Hotsuma's hand off, she'd unexpectedly fall to the ground beside him, unconscious from the spiritual erasure she was still being subjected to by Hotsuma's Akujiki entity. She shoulda killed him prior to trying to feed her selfish desires.

(Neidan: Wuji Dao) Internal Alchemy: Way of Nothingness (ref)

Spoiler

Type: Supplementary
Rank: D - S (B)
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 10 - 70 N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: This is one of the fundamental Neidan techniques within the Hayabusa clan and the first one learned. This technique returns existence to nothingness/erases from existence. Using one of the three Dantian Hayabusa ninja render existence to nothingness. Depending on the Dantian that is used the user can manipulate physical, vital, or spiritual existence. Regardless of which application is used there are two components that can be utilized: internal or external. These two components describe the technique’s application to one’s self and outside themselves respectively. A Hayabusa ninja who utilizes the internal component with this technique manipulates their own physical, vital, and/or spiritual existence. One who utilizes external component does the same but with any entity other than themselves. Only one of the components can be used for any given application of this technique. As for the applications, only one can be used at a given time. Upon reaching higher jounin ranks (Dragon/Head Ninja and Master Ninja), Hayabusa ninja can utilize all three of the Dantian simultaneously to completely erase their own existence (internal) or that of another entity (external). When erasing one’s own existence with this technique the user can only maintain a state of non-existence for no more than one turn with and must re-appear within 10 meters of their original point. Once the user has gone to nothingness they cannot use any techniques until after they return to reality. Through the external component the user can erase the existence of another life such as summons or other shinobi though it requires prolonged contact with the target (3 turns). After contact is made the victim will begin to vanish from the ground up.

Lower Dantian: The Lower Dantian deals with physical existence. Entities such as solids and liquids, physical entities, and corporeal matter are within this Dantian’s scope. When using the internal component of this application the user is capable of erasing parts of their body as small as: bits of flesh and bone to whole limbs, organs, etc. This ability extends to physical afflictions such as poisons, toxins, pathogens and generally any other thing that integrates itself within the user’s physical being. When using this technique on the body to take off flesh and bone the user will feel as though their flesh and bone have been ripped apart and their body will suffer accordingly. For example: if the user erases their right index finger, they will feel their finger ripped off their body and will bleed profusely until stopped. The external component of this technique takes the form of transparent visual distortions similar in nature and appearance to the voids of kamui though with the ability to vary in shape and size. The shape and size are dependent on the rank of the technique. As well as the amount of matter in which one can erase is also dependent on the rank. Lower ranks means smaller areas of effect and less matter that can be erased. This technique has the ability to combat against techniques of equivalent rank or chakra input. With the external component, if anybody other than the user makes contact with the technique, they will suffer just as the user would if they used the internal component of this application. The external component of this application can be made within short range of the user but not the target unless both parties are in close range. Even then, the user cannot manifest this technique directly on their opponent without
physical contact.

Middle Dantian: The Middle Dantian deals with vital existence; the existence of energy. Non-solid/liquid entities like plasmas, fire, lightning, raw chakra forms, and otherwise ethereal entities fall within this Dantian’s scope. The internal component of this application is rather simple, the user erases chakra/energy that exists within them either their own or that of another’s that is connected to the user. The amount of chakra the user can erase is proportional to the rank they use for this application. As for the external component, similar to the Lower Dantian, voids of various shapes are created which erase the chakra/energy, ethereal, and/or vital nature of entities. Again, like with the Lower Dantian, the user cannot directly manifest a chakra erasing void upon their opponents; contact with the void or between the user and the target must be established to directly affect the target.

Upper Dantian: The Upper Dantian deals with the spiritual existence of an entity. Spiritual techniques, consciousness, mental capability, and spirits are all within this Dantian’s control. The internal component of this application controls the existence of illusions, consciousness, sentience, within the user. Enemy techniques that deal with mind control or that inject their consciousness within the Hayabusa can be defended against with the internal component. Likewise, the stability and power of illusions and other spiritual techniques attached to the user can be cut down according to the rank/chakra of this technique. The external component of this application is a little different than the others. Unlike the Lower and Middle Dantian which cannot effect an opponent directly, this Dantian’s application can. With the external component the user can cause the spiritual energy of a sentient being dwindle to nothingness as long as the user has sensory perception of their target and is within range. The result of erasing the spiritual being comes in the form of fatigue and a lack of focus which prevents the target from using higher ranked techniques and progressively dims their consciousness. For example: C-ranked usage will prevent use of Forbidden rank techniques and B-rank usage would prevent S-rank and above and so on. The constraints are as follows: Only chunin level Hayabusa and above can use this technique (as it starts at C-rank) and the user must be within and maintain mid-range of the target to use C and B-rank. A-rank requires short range and S-rank direct physical contact. While using this application only two techniques can be used per turn. If the victim gets out of range of the user they will become capable of using their full power in the following turn.
Note: This technique is learned at genin level and follows similar rules for each rank. Genin can only use D-rank applications, chunin = C-rank, jounin = B-rank (upper) A-rank (lower and middle), Dragon/Head Ninja = A-rank (upper) S-rank (lower and middle), Master Ninja = All ranks.
Note: Genin and Chunin are required to use 5 to 3 hand seals respectively for any application’s external component. Jounin require one hand seal, Dragon/Head, and Master Ninja can use up to B-rank with no hand seals. Contact between user and opponent requires no hand seals.
Note: When using the external component of the Upper Dantian, using the A-ranked and above will render an opponent comatose after two turns. C and B-ranks will simply render one unconscious after 4 turns. Each turn of maintaining drains half the original chakra cost. While maintaining no other application of this technique can be used.
Note: Upper Dantian usages, regardless of the component can only be used once every other turn. A-ranked and above usage requires a two turn cool down.
Note: S-rank applications of this technique requires a one turn cool down for the Middle and Lower Dantian.
Note: To erase completely the existence of oneself or of another the user must use 70 chakra. Unlike the external component where it takes three turns to erase another, the internal component is instantaneous in its nature due to a lack of resistance from the user applying it to themselves. Upon using this advanced application either internally or externally the user will be unable to use any Neidan technique for the next two turns. Dragon Ninja and Head Ninja can use this application twice per battle and Master Ninja 3 times per battle.

 

[Imperfect]

Was asked to rule on DNA collection. While things are kind of wild here at the end of this fight, bottom line is Zat was ruled the winner, even though your Health didn't reach zero, LGeezy. As such, despite how sucky it is, Zat basically gets to decide how they finish you off. Never really done this before (rule on DNA collection), but I see no issue in Zat's collection of your DNA, and subsequent killing blow.

 

[Geezus]

Was asked to rule on DNA collection. While things are kind of wild here at the end of this fight, bottom line is Zat was ruled the winner, even though your Health didn't reach zero, LGeezy. As such, despite how sucky it is, Zat basically gets to decide how they finish you off. Never really done this before (rule on DNA collection), but I see no issue in Zat's collection of your DNA, and subsequent killing blow.

Wew. Unspoken rules are fun. Even though my HP doesnt reach zero and the fight ENDED. The fact of the matter is whether I had full hp left or 15 hp she technically is being given a free shot at killing me when I still have the capability to defend myself despite not being successful in killing me when the fight actually ended. So yeah that's sucky especially when my side of things arent being considered in the slightest, no one has acknowledge why I have such a issue with this collection and bottom line is, it isnt fair. Like I said previously I dont care about the loss, its how the rp goes. I do care about being ignored when I have a issue with a checks gross negligence for my move. I do have a issue with the fact I asked for a redo of the game deciding check to make sure this confusion at the end didnt happen and it didnt come until Zee asked. Suspect much. I'm alive at the end of the fight, but my actives aren't being considered either like they just dont exist. We arent considering the fact Im still in Perfect Sage Mode and freeform removal of my hand wont work as it only deals 5 damage and I negate up to 30 damage. She wont be able to remove my hand that way so she stomps my chest which would activate my Akujiki killing me and activating it. But yet capture approved?

Oh well. Its clear I was not only fighting my opponent but the system also. Yall got it and im done lol.

 

[Daemon]

DNA cap confirmed