[Open] Fight me, please...

[Yüme1]

[This is the third thread I've made, hopefully someone can reply after my first move... I'd prefer someone who has time to post with haste, if you can only post minimum once everyday that's fine.]

This will simply be a spar, unofficial of course. I will be using a very old and outdated bio, though it's not updated I haven't really acquired any new techniques since so we should be fine.

Terrain: Dense Woodland

Range: Beginning Medium

Yume Uchiha, returning from an S ranked mission found himself traveling through a forest in the south of (insert country) in order to make it back to his village.

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[Shady Doctor]

Nakk Le Vaar in Sig

Askin was on an interception mission, where he was to intercept a shinobi his rogue companions were tracking for a while. They seemingly lost track of him in a dense wooded area, so Askin himself stepped out to catch him. He swiftly summoned a personal serpent of his, Asmodeus. The small snake buried into the ground and made his way to a tree about 50m behind Askin.

"Ahh, so he's there?"

Askin exclaimed after Asmodeus sensed someone speeding through the forest and told Askin Via telepathy.

(Hebi Kuchiyose: Asmodeus) - Snake Summoning: Asmodeus

Spoiler

Rank: A
Range: Short
Type: Summoning
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: After performing the necessary requirements for performing the summoning technique, the user summons Asmodeus which is a small black and white snake about 50 cm in length, Asmodeus doesn't have any combat skills and can't be used for any type of defensive measures like majority of the other snake summons, but Asmodeus was born with a special gift that makes him just as important as any other powerful snake, Asmodeus' snake senses are almost double as sensitive as regular snakes, he is able to detect even the slightest bit of a vibration 120 meters away, Asmodeus can still however travel underground like all snakes and thanks to his miniature size he wouldn't be easily detected by regular ninja even if he travels close to the surface of the ground, Asmodeus also has the ability to contact any other snake summoning via telepathy as well as its summoner.

Note - Can only be summoned once per battle.
- Lasts for 4 full turns until automatically dispersed.
- Summon is able to detect any vibration (this includes any movement and any sound since sound is produced through high frequency vibrations.) across the entirety of the battlefield, And also up to 120 meters maximum, but cannot sense any chakra.
- When traveling underground the summon can only be detected by Doujutsu users and those with Sensory abilities.
- Can only be taught by Yashiro.

 

[Yüme1]

...

Yume identifies a live Shinobi seemingly tracking him in the forest. He activates his Sharingan in response before quickly moving in for a swift attack in high hope to end this quickly so that he might return home.

3 Tomoe Sharinan Activated

"So you've finally found me..."

Yume says as he claps his hands together, releasing insane amounts of chakra. As he performs this technique Yume swiftly moves in closer to a shorter range, closing the gap between him and the unknown shinobi.

Suiton Bunshi: Water Molecules

Spoiler

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 80
Damage : (15 damage per turn )
Description: The user puts their hands together as if they were praying but is actually releasing large amounts of water chakra into the water molecules in the air so that now all fire attacks lose -15, sand is reduced to mud, lightning used becomes instantly conducted and all water or elements containing water gain +15
►can only be taught by Axle
►lasts 5 turns
►can only be used once per battle
►after this technique is done the user can't user any A-rank and above water jutsus for 3 turns
►can be used as a water source

"Hmm..."

Yume performs a rapid sequence of handseals in an attempt to create an explosion purely out of water around his opponent. Yume is convinced that if it works, it will destabilize his opponent by catching him offguard. At that moment Yume will take the opportunity to leap in and strike him with a whirlpoorl created around his right arm.

(Suiton: Kōka Suijin) - Water Release: Hard Whirlpool Water Blade

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user makes the water under the enemy explode, launching them into the air. Then the user jumps above the enemy and creates a large whirlpool around his arm, striking the enemy with it and creating a large water explosion.
Note: Water source required.

 

[Shady Doctor]

As the man runs towards Askin whilst clapping his hands, Askin could only take this as a sign of the battle officially beginning. He'd quickly dig into the inside of his shirt, grabbing a scroll that is quickly unraveled. It summons a pair of goggles that Askin puts over his eyes, giving him a unique sensing ability.

(Drishti go-guru) l Goggle's of Drishti

Spoiler

Type: Supplementary/ Defensive/Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 10/ turn
Damage: N/a
Description: The goggles were created by the combined effort of the Third Mizukage and his council. In an effort to control and mimic the power of Bijuu, they created weapons and accessories. These goggles were one of those items, they were crafted from a strange dense yet light metal found in a mine near Kirigakure and from the denses most strongest glass in the village. The Third Mizukage and some of his chakra and a councilmen's aswell sealed within the glasses. The glasses however were a failure they did nothing to help control a jinchuriki, however the glasses gained a strange new power due to the what was sealed within them. The third mizukage decided to keep them as they would aid him in battle and they covered his eyes from being blinded by debris or dust and sand, etc.

They emit a chakra field mid range all around the user, the air and underground as well. An object that is within the field is known to the goggles. The Goggle's can know where the object or chakra signature is, how big it is and it's speed, if moving, but only if the user is able to perceive and track the speed of said object himself. This information is sent right to the user as the goggles are connected.

Note: Do not aid vision in anyway
Note: Goggles are very durable and can take one S ranked technique before disabling, but remain unbroken on the user, any further attack D rank and above will break them.
Note: Will not sync with opponent chakra
Note: Must be taught usage by Strawberry

At this point, Askin is met by an explosion of water from below him which causes quite the damage to him and throws him off balance. Still being able to Sense his opponent, Askin could feel him closing in for a finishing blow to his back, but he had something in store for the man. Once he was about a foot away from hitting him, Askin simply balled up and used chakra in his body so that hundreds of wind needles would erupt. Simultaneously to this he also weaved a single hand seal which made the wind stronger than it would be originally, allowing Askin to use it near its peak strength. The needles erupt in such a way that they pierce through the man right before he could hit Askin, dealing a fatal blow while also pushing him back.

(Futon : Ten no hejji) - Wind Release : Celestial Hedgehog

Spoiler

Type: Defensive/Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 + 20 = 100
Description:
The User Surges Wind Chakra all through their body, The user can then channel this wind chakra into their back and create hundreds of wind needles which can pierce into targets and push them back slightly. After they have focused the wind chakra throughout their body they can choose to jump and curl into a ball thus shooting off condensed, pressurised wind needles in various directions, or can aim their back in a direction of there choice, aiming the needles in that particular direction.

The wind needles expands from their back as a defensive mechanism similar to that of a hedgehog and can cause quite severe cuts, however as the needles travel and reach Mid-range they begin to loose pressure thus expanding and becoming spirals of wind and then when they reach Long-Range they become huge tornadoes that travel horizontally in the sky.

- Can only be taught by Kirikoe
- Can only be used 3 times
- No s-rank wind on the same turn

(Fūton: Kamaitachi) - Wind Release: Sickle Draws

Spoiler

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: N/A (+10 chakra cost to techniques this is applied to)
Damage points: N/A
Description: A two part jutsu, Sickle Draws aims to augment Wind jutsus in specific ways, allowing the usage of simple jutsus to become more complex, and simply more dangerous in nature. The nature of this jutsu itself only allows it to work alongside the Wind element. The first part requires the user to focus more of his Wind chakra into his future Fuuton jutsu which have no cutting abilities whatsoever (supplementary, defensive type techniques), and using said chakra to sharpen the outside edges of the aforementioned jutsu. This manipulation causes a change within the technique's shape and allows the most defensive Wind jutsu the capability to inflict lethal cutting damage. The damage output would depend on the rank of the supplementary/defensive jutsu used (i.e. an A-Rank will inflict 60 damage). The second usage of this jutsu allows the user to do the same, still only working on Wind jutsus, but instead only focuses on offensive Wind techniques, simply adding a +20 damage to the jutsu used in conjunction as it adds on to whatever it is used with, rather than focusing on things which are purely defensive. When used in either form, however many hand seals the jutsu used alongside this requires, an extra one (the Ram handseal) is added on. This is added on regardless of any abilities which the user may have which allows him to perform wind jutsus without hand seals (specialty, NB sword etc.) This is an activation type jutsu and its effects apply to future wind techniques rather than pre-existing ones. Activating this ability is instant and does not consume any time whatsoever.

~ Can only be taught by Erzo. Can only be used a maximum of two times per battle/event, and once used lasts a maximum of four turns, or until deactivated. Upon it being deactivated/timing out, the user must wait a turn before being able to use again. The user can decide to use one form 2 times, or mix and match as he likes, as long as both the first and second usages are not used at the same time.

 

[Yüme1]

Note(s): The Water Molecule Jutsu can actually be used as a water source (as you know) and so I used that to create an explosion around you, not from under you, as worded in my previous post. The pressure most definitely would have done some damage or at the very least broken a couple of bones. I'm only basing it's damage output off of other A ranked water techniques. So in that case I don't think your move is valid for two reasons. 1.) You were never shot upward 2.) In my opinion it would be hard to form a ball with your body almost immediately after being the victim of an explosion. Also if you wait until I'm a "foot" away from you, you would definitely still take the hit before having the time to actually ball up and release a jutsu. 1ft is extremely close and I probably would have hit you before I got that close.

If you agree, please take the water jutsu in its entirety instead of my follow up.
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Edit: I was going to make a move but after looking into it an average human arm is 25 inches long. That's 2 feet. I'm not sure if I'm reading it improperly or misunderstanding, though that's the only way I can interpret it seeing as though you do not possess a Dojutsu and you can't accurately predict when exactly I'd use a move. If you disagree or prove me wrong i'd gladly continue with a counter.

 

[Shady Doctor]

I'm not even going to entertain this with a counter argument.

1) no one has time to debate a BA fight.
2) your argument consists of my move being "not valid" because i was shot into the air, which is exactly what the CANON water tech does. You can't just make up what that tech does. Whether your forbidden tech made a water source or not, the second tech shoots me into the air, nothing more, nothing less.

Have fun though

 

[Yüme1]

Woah Woah, why does it always have to be an argument... I made this thread to practice. I didn't change the technique only the location in which it began, my first jutsu allows for that.

That most certainly was not my only point either, there were many flaws though if you give up you give up, I will not continue to spam the thread z_z. I'll take the boring win. When did nb become filled with... bleh.

The Fight is Over.