[Romance] One who do impossible

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Kishi Uzumaki

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I'm sitting at this table
looking at you from far away
for world you are dead
but you and me know
what happened
on that day
we separated

It was for your safety
there is danger because who i am
one who serve my country
on missions that's impossible
there's calmness in your life
when I'm not around

but my heart says
' be close to you '
Do you feel it
that I'm around you

you turned around
as you sensed me
that smile we shared
will last forever
as i walk into danger
for my country

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