One Shot (Fan Made)

lndra

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I had to make sure I put fan made before someone lost their mind lmfao.


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Translation said:
sfx: ji (stare)
Hinata’s voice: But you have your father…!
Boruto: (The Fourth Hokage… Dad wanted to meet grandpa, huh…)
(I now understand)
(What mom was saying…)
Naruto: My dad was pretty cool, huh?
Something wrong?
Boruto: !
Dad.
Nah… it’s just
Since you’re around, there’s a lot of stuff I want to know that I can ask you about, but… that wasn’t the case for you, was it?
Naruto: Well, that’s true. As you know, I didn’t have a family to begin with.
But I have met him before.
Boruto: Hah?!
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Page 2
Translation said:
Boruto: What do you mean…?
Like in a dream, or…?
Naruto: Well
It’s a long story, but…
Sasuke: Naruto.
Naruto: Sasuke.
Sasuke: sorry, but I’m here with an urgent matter. We’ve got to hurry.
Naruto: I understand. I’ll go right away.
Boruto!
Dad’ll definitely by home by tomorrow, okay!
sfx: suh (swish)
Boruto: (tomorrow..)
(Dad really remembered…!)
sfx: paaa (blush)
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Page 3
Translation said:
Boruto: Men don’t have to repeat themselves!
Naruto: Yeah!
sfx: bowan (flop)
Boruto: Hehehe!
sfx: dokoh (thump)
sfx: dotagatadondondondon (fumbling around)
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Page 4
Translation said:
Boruto: (Mm…)
(Dad’s voice…?)
Naruto: Hey!
Boruto: (Is he home…?)
Naruto: Wake! Up!
Boruto: (I got it already)
(Just a bit longer…)
Ooh
Naruto: Hey, damn it!
Boruto: …….
… Daaah, shut up!
sfx: gaba (sit up)
You don’t need to be so nois…..!?
Dad?!
Naruto: Who’re you calling dad, you little brat?!
By the way, who the hell are you? Why are you in my room?
Boruto: (He looks just like the picture of dad in his office…)
Uh… uhm…
(I said it right away, but is this… dad?)
(And where am I?!)
(Also)
(He’s missing his arm.)
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Page 5
Translation said:
Naruto: Answer my question!
Boruto: (What the hell is happening…?!)
Naruto: …
Boruto: …… !! (Gasp)
(What) Is it a dream…?
sfx: goron (roll over)
Naruto: Excuse me?! Cut that out!
Haah, geez, what is this? Today of all days…
It’s finally my birthday but I lost my arm and when I go to rest, all of a sudden there’s a strange brat sticking out of my bed…
Boruto: !
(That’s right… today’s dad’s…)
(If I’m not waking up from this dream)
Dad!
sfx: gabah (sit up)
Naruto: Uohh!?
sfx: zekuu (lurch back)
Boruto: (If this is really real)
Naruto: I’m telling you, I’m not your-
Boruto: Your birthday!
(I have to say one thing!)
Boruto: Happy birthday!
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Page 6
Translation said:
Naruto: ……
By the way, you…
sfx: doki (heart beat)
Naruto: You kinda look like me.
It’s like I’m looking at my own shadow clone.
And the way you talk
Boruto: ! That’s
sfx: suu (fade)
Boruto: … Uh
sfx: suura (flicker)
Boruto: Uwah!!
Naruto: Your body’s fading…
The one who’s so tired he’s dreaming is probably me, huh…
And you’ve been calling me “Dad, dad.”
Boruto: No, that’s… that is…!
sfx: su (reach)
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Page 7
Translation said:
sfx: pon (pat)
Naruto: If
If I… had a child like you… and you celebrated my birthday with me…
I think that would make me the absolute happiest. (Heeheehee)
Celebrate it with future me too, okay?
Boruto: Da-
sfx: bu (poof
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Page 8
Translation said:
Boruto: ……………
sfx: goto (thud)
Boruto: ………
A kunai…?
Minato: Boruto.
Naruto: I’m hooome!
Himawari: Daddy!
Minato: Thank you for making Naruto a father.
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Page 9
Translation said:
Himawari: Oniichan, daddy’s hooome!
Boruto: …………….
Himawari: Oniichaaan!
sfx: dotadadadada (running footsteps)
Himawari: Daddy! Happy birthday!
Naruto: Ohh! Thank you, Himawa…?
Boruto: Dad!
sfx: dan (wham)
Boruto: Happy birthday!
sfx: dotaaan (heavy thud)
Naruto: Gyaaah!
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Ambivalence

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That's actually not bad. The art's good and it was entertaining... one hell of a dream, though.

I wouldn't mind reading a fanfic about the kids meeting their parents' past selves.
 

Ootoriyu Jin

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So when are they gonna take their clothes off?


Jks: really nice art, it was a nice read.
 

lndra

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That's actually not bad. The art's good and it was entertaining... one hell of a dream, though.

I wouldn't mind reading a fanfic about the kids meeting their parents' past selves.
It would be really cool if they made an Ova out of that, actually.

//Still waiting for them to make an Indra/Asura one
 

Reraru

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Nice I guess...
 

Bimbonium

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It's nice, though a little incoherent but nice nonetheless.
 

Nattana

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5/10.

Would've been 10/10 if it had Orochimaru in it.
 
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