One Piece FF, pilot fight.

The Seven-Scaled boy

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The full fledged intrusion of valtigo from part of the strawhat pirate crew had begun. Looking for answer's on his father's earlier move in the Alabasta Kingdom, Luffy decide to finally meet with him by whatever means he deems possible. Dragon, surprisingly, order the total anhilation of who and whatever set foot on the island for the time being.

Confused, yet blindly obeying Dragon's orders, Emporio Ivankov and Inazuma set off to intercept the crew as they easily wrecked their way into dragon's stronghold. Both Sanji and Pat decided to stall them while the rest continued. And thus the first fight begun...

Both groups stared at each other, one blond and brunette against an Purple afro and a white-orange sharmlock.

Emporio: Heee-Haaaaaw! Sanji-boy how are you doing?

Sanji:*in deep pain*You made me suffer those two years huting for recipes...Those newkama's did not allow me to rest for a day...No...women in the island...not...a...single...one.

Emporio: My candies never hesitate once they choose a target, Heee haaaaaaaw! *laughs while putting the back of his purple-gloved right hand to the right side of his humongous head*

Pat: Oi Sanji, we gotta start with the first strike...I'll take Ivankov, you take Inazuma. Careful with his choki choki no mi, I heard the most horrifying rumors on it. Good luck *nods while making the most serious of faces*

As soon as that happened the body of pat seemingly dissipated. No sooner than that, he reapeared, already in a handstand sweeping his scaly tail toward ivankov right side, forcing him to the left.

Ivankov: Rodriguez D. Pato....Toka Toka no mi, Model: Komodo dragon. Nice to finally see you in action...

Pat: I'm surprised you do actually know me, Queen drag queen.*as projecting himself closer to ivankov setting some distance from Sanji's and Inazuma's space of battle. Landing on his two feet*

Ivankov: Cheeky brat...Death Wink! *With no warning he winks shooting a pressurized air shot*

The air punch travels so fast Pat is almost unable to react but crossing his scaled arms in front of his body and lowering his stance, thus making himself harder to blowback.

Pat: *thinking* DAMMIT!! SUCH A SPEED FOR A WINK?

Pat quickly noticed ivankov tilting his face about tilting, about release another wink. And so, he releases that stance and begins to move in a crescent to where ivankov is.

Ivankov: Wink! Wink! Wink! Wink! Wink! Wink! Wink! Wink! Wink!

By a hair, Pat managed to avoid the winks as they left a hole in the ground. As he finally reached close-range, he licked his claws with his tounge as he mid-opened his fist and thrusted it in order to stab ivankov where his ribs should be, aiming to put his claws in his intercostals.

Pat: Puason Darts!

Ivankov: Emporio Calcium Hormone!

*Ivankov thrusted his left hand's syrenges aiming for his stomach*

------------------To be continued and colors added on thursday, lack of time to finish this chapter xd------------------

C&C welcome, I'll explain everything you guys find wierd about the story later :p.

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I found the story strange, yet interesting. This could be because I don't follow One Piece (I'm expecting some filthy looks now).

Small piece of advice, if you're using this script type of writing, put in some color or change some fonts here and there to make it easier on the eye. Then again, you are still going to add everything, so this makes my advice nihil. Maybe make the story a bit longer per chapter. :)

Kudos!
 
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