Which one is better of the following two:
A black crown with a white cover
Always feel depressed but hide my feelings from another
Id rather sit and suffer
than end up talking
things flow out soon enough theres no stopping
these feelings that are coming
i swear there's no blocking
Conscious at my door
But i'm deaf to the knocking
Or
Sound of hearts stopping
Grew the balls to give up
and *****s start flopping
oh i miss him
He was such a great guy
get more attention dead
than when i used to be alive
don’t wanna try it’s a bother
raising myself
cause i was cursed without a father
Blaming myself
cause i had a mom with no honor
telling myself
I'll endure the pain no longer
CC is welcomed.
So, which is better and why?
Note: I know I'm not very good so give me some slack xD
A black crown with a white cover
Always feel depressed but hide my feelings from another
Id rather sit and suffer
than end up talking
things flow out soon enough theres no stopping
these feelings that are coming
i swear there's no blocking
Conscious at my door
But i'm deaf to the knocking
Or
Sound of hearts stopping
Grew the balls to give up
and *****s start flopping
oh i miss him
He was such a great guy
get more attention dead
than when i used to be alive
don’t wanna try it’s a bother
raising myself
cause i was cursed without a father
Blaming myself
cause i had a mom with no honor
telling myself
I'll endure the pain no longer
CC is welcomed.
So, which is better and why?
Note: I know I'm not very good so give me some slack xD