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It´s time i tried this fanfic stuff.

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I felt it´s time to set out on my journey, i´m standing on a grassy plane looking down on this huge village.
It´s been 2 weeks since i left that woman....the woman who saved me, in order to accomplish my dream and to find my sisters whereabouts.

Oh, i´ve forgot to introduce myself...the name is Daichi, blue messy hair, dark eyes, 17 years old, currently C-class magician, from Gaga village.

My dream is to train and become the strongest magician there is!
Nothing can stop me! *raises hands and shouts into the air*

I will also find what happened to my sister, my sister who 5 years ago vanished without a trace, i was young and i don´t know how it happened but i have the feeling it has something to do with this black magic organization known as the Illuminati, seeing how one of their members(some muscle-head with a leash on his neck and a third eye) used to come to our village and had always his eyes set on her.

Why you ask? You see, my sister was a bit special...she usually did crazy things unconciously, she´s the one who killed our despicable father.

I still haven´t recovered from that night, it was the worst ever, when my father......forget it, the past is the past and there is a long road ahead of us.

This city below me is called Powhow, the city of the famous magician Catpaw, i look forward to meeting him.

*At the same time in Powhow, in an open park of people, a young girl who is walking among the people, shows legs and body but not face*

Mysterious girl: I heard rumors of "it" being somewhere around here, i must find it *shows the face, brown eyes and brown hair, she has a ponytail with nice bangs hanging infront of her forehead*

A talking dog: Maria...we´ve been searching for 2 hours now, let´s go to a restaurant to relax for a while, my legs are killing me

Maria:Ahh! You´re so lazy Riley ! Hmph! Fine, let´s go somewhere *looks around and sees a taco restaurant* Owww!!! *Runs there*

Riley: Maria wait!! Oh my legs are so tired....:o

*Scene shifts to a shadowy room*

Mystery person nr 1: So...the show is in tomorrow eh?

Mp nr 2: Yeah, more people but how many?*creepy voice*

Mp nr 3: We should take a minimum this time, the plans almost complete, just a little increase in numbers, about 140 more, we can´t take any risks, too many and the detection barrier will get rejected by the people.*calm but ominous voice*

Mp nr 2: Yeah, we should be careful now, the plan has come this far.

*They get a call, mp nr 1 turns on the speaker for mpnr 2 and 3 to hear*

Mpnr1:Hello?

In the phone: How´s things going?

Mpnr1:*in a hippy voice almost like buggy:)* uhmm, yeah sir! Everythings going well.

Itp: This is the last stage of our plan and the most risky, make sure to follow through it, the extraction process has to go well...no slip-ups, are we clear?
I don´t think i have to tell you what happens.:|

mpnr1: :eek:Yes! Yes! I guarandamntee there will be no failures, it will all go according to plan!!! No need to worry sir!:p

Itp:.......I hope it does.:|

mpnr2&3:.......U_U

*call ends*

*Scene switches to Daichi entering the city looking up at the gates with a smile*

The end.

 
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I wanna see what happens next! You MUST write NOW!
 

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I wanna see what happens next! You MUST write NOW!
This was something i just thought of on top of my head and now i have myself a whole freaking story to write with scenarios, i will do my best to post them but i have to really get my act together and take notes of how this story will be.
 

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interesting, especially the part about the illuminati xd good luck bro, keep it interesting!​
 

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"My dream is to train and become the strongest magician there is!
Nothing can stop me! *raises hands and shouts into the air*"

Reminds of Luffy when he always declares that his going to be the pirate king xd

and I lol at the part with the illumanati.

I enjoyed the fanfic man keep up the good work :)
 

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"My dream is to train and become the strongest magician there is!
Nothing can stop me! *raises hands and shouts into the air*"

Reminds of Luffy when he always declares that his going to be the pirate king xd

and I lol at the part with the illumanati.

I enjoyed the fanfic man keep up the good work :)
Every great series is inspired by some other great series, i was inspiried by luffy always shouting his dream so i did that with daichi, not ripping off, there is a difference between being inspired and a ripoff.
 

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Every great series is inspired by some other great series, i was inspiried by luffy always shouting his dream so i did that with daichi, not ripping off, there is a difference between being inspired and a ripoff.

Yea it's def not a rip off

I always get goosebumps when Luffy declares it never gets old lol
 

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Wow, you can write.
 

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very cool man
 

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I'm also going to try and write a fanfic soon! :D
Very good story, keep up the good work.
 

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Nice job :) It's different, which is a good thing! I'm not a fan of script style (play format) but it's still good! Keep it up! ^_^
 

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I wanna see what happens next! You MUST write NOW!

interesting, especially the part about the illuminati xd good luck bro, keep it interesting!​

"My dream is to train and become the strongest magician there is!
Nothing can stop me! *raises hands and shouts into the air*"

Reminds of Luffy when he always declares that his going to be the pirate king xd

and I lol at the part with the illumanati.

I enjoyed the fanfic man keep up the good work :)

Wow, you can write.

very cool man

I'm also going to try and write a fanfic soon! :D
Very good story, keep up the good work.

Nice job :) It's different, which is a good thing! I'm not a fan of script style (play format) but it's still good! Keep it up! ^_^
.........You all have my thanks, i really appreciate your comments.<3
 

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I have made a second part for those of you who are interested, here is the link:
 

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I like the city names, haha.
 

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nice fanfiic dude and thanks for advice on making my own manga
 

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very nice. you are an awesome writer :)
 

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very nice. you are an awesome writer :)
Thanks!:D
I have thought of something.
I´d like to have as many people as possible reading this right now from the start because if more people read later chapters like you did then they´re gonna wonder about the previous ones which will make me forced to basically dig up graves of threads to find it for them.

It´s because of this that i would kindly ask you guys reading this to tell your other nb friends to read this and give it a try, i will be writing for a long time.

Have a happy new year!:D
 

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hmmm rather interesting, keep it up bro :D
 
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