On Search - Chapter 3

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*Takeo and Daichi are standing infront of an open park with lots of people going by*

Takeo: I´ll explain everything, let´s go grab a drink somewhere.

Daichi:*sigh* fine, but what if we meet that cop again?*starts walking*

Takeo: The chances of that happening are very slim but that cop will send word to police headquarters and they´ll probably send a team to search for you......though it might take hours.

Daichi: Why go through all this trouble for me just knocking a guy? It doesn´t make any sense for them to be after me because of that Kenji.

Takeo: It does because Kenji is the son of the boss of police HQ!

Daichi::eek:What?! Really?! He just seemed like a spoiled brat to me.:shrug:

Takeo: That´s because he is! He goes around doing whatever he wants knowing he´s the police officer commanders son and whoever that messes with him gets thrown in jail, this towns police doesn´t give a crap about upholding the law, they just use that as an excuse to do whatever they want and hide behind the law when questioned.
Infact, no one dares to question a cop, they´ll take and lock you up while giving a vague reason and you powerless to say or do anything about it.:mad:

Daichi: I see......*sees a restaurant from a distance* let´s go to that restaurant over there.

Takeo: Sure thing!

*They go into a huge barbecue restaurant where there are two checkouts divided doing different work, one for the barbecue and another for a bar, the room is also divided into two parts*

*Daichi drops his bag where they´re gonna sit, him and Takeo take two seats and sits down.*

Takeo: You´re gonna eat?

Daichi: Yeah, of course! I have to try out this towns food!:D

*Waitress walks to them*

Waitress: Can i have your order?

Daichi: I want barbecue meat!

Takeo: A Cranberry drink will do fine.:cool:

Daichi: Wait, this is from the barbecue checkout right?

Waitress: Of course, since you´re sitting here and not at the bar, we have fruit drinks and other drinks here but at the bar we only sell alcohol.

Daichi: I see...

Waitress: Is that all?

Daichi: Yes.

Waitress: Then it´ll all cost 20 Ginni´s.:)

Takeo: I´ll pay for us both.

Daichi: Takeo....

Takeo: I did say i was gonna repay for that time didn´t i?

*Takeo pays, they get their orders and Daichi eats Barbecue meat while Takeo drinks*

*Daichi eats like a maniac*

Takeo:*puts down his drink with eyes closed and a smile* So, you´re not from here huh?

Daichi:*looks at him with meat hanging from his mouth, looks a little surprised* how did you know?

Takeo: You said you wanted to try this towns food so i take it you´re traveling.

Daichi: And you´re right*keeps eating*

Takeo: How long´ve you been here?

Daichi: Now that i think about it, an hour and a half, maybe a little more*Takeo starts drinking*

Takeo:*Puts down his drink hard* What?!*gets surprised* You´ve only just come here?

Daichi: Yeah, it didn´t take long before i saw you as the laughing stock of that crowd by Kenji, why did you even fight him? You who know so much about him and this town, you live here don´t you?

Takeo:*Grab drink, drinks everything, put down drink**Sigh* No, i don´t live here.

Daichi: What?! You too?

The end.

Thought would be well appreciated my fellow Narutobase members and On search fans.<3:D

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Disquiet

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nice, will read the others as well ^__^
 

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It was pretty damn good the commanders son is somehow similar to the helmeppo (One piece coby's friend) make more chapters i really like your work ;)
 

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It was pretty damn good the commanders son is somehow similar to the helmeppo (One piece coby's friend) make more chapters i really like your work ;)
Thanks, i didn´t think of that but i guess my series is a bit more similar to one piece then i thought huh?:D
 

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yeah :D
but its nice
I have thought of something.
I´d like to have as many people as possible reading this right now from the start because if more people read later chapters like you did then they´re gonna wonder about the previous ones which will make me forced to basically dig up graves of threads to find it for them.

It´s because of this that i would kindly ask you guys reading this to tell your other nb friends to read this and give it a try, i will be writing for a long time.

Have a happy new year!:D
 

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Cranberry is one word ;) lol
Pretty good keep it up ^_^
 
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