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*Daichi enters Powhow, he walks in a crowd and looks around at all the magic shops and restaurants*

Daich: Wow! This place is amazing! Look at all these magicians and restaurants!

*He sees a small crowd gathered around some contest*

Daichi: What´s happening here? *He walks into the crowd, pushes through and sees a duel between 2 people that is very one sided, the contest holder is practically owning the young boy who challenged him*

Crowd: That guy doesn´t stand a chance! Get outta here! No one can beat Kenji!

Weak guy:*Is on the ground having lost hope, just stands up* ok, you win...

Kenji: Then it´s over.

Wg: ?!

Kenji: Prank cast: Shame Regretto!*A green light-beam comes out from his finger*

Wg: Wait!

*The beam hits him and his clothes vanishes, making him naked infront of the crowd*

Crowd: *Laughs,shocked,shouts and throw stuff*

Wg: Ah!!!*is shocked*

Kenji: This is you punishment for challenging me, hahaahahahaa!

*Rejecto*

Kenji: ?!*spots Daichi*

Daichi: *Snap his fingers, a gust of wind gets blown and a yellow light surrounds Wg that makes his clothes return*

Kenji: Who´re you? You dare to defy me?!:mad:

Daichi: You scum! you already had him beaten yet you went on to humiliate the guy, why don´t you face me next, i´ll teach you a lesson.....:cool:

Kenji: Haahaahahhah! You hear that people?! This kid thinks he can actually beat me!

Crowd: Hahahhaha! This guy is crazy! Who does he think he is?! Teach him a lesson Kenji!! Get him good! Make him beg for mercy! This guy will get squashed!

Kenji: I´ll show you what happens to people who try to play heroes infront of me!!

*Kenji brings out a huge staff, he jumps and spins it * Restriction Cast: Spirit net!*There comes alot of yellow trawl nets made of light, they´re all small*

Kenji thinking: Despite their small sizes, once it hits the person, it automatically attaches itself and sucks out the persons spirit energy, this kid won´t know what hit him!

Daichi thinking: Trawl nets...their small sizes gives away the fact that they have another function.:)

*Daichi uses super speed to dodge them with ease and crowd goes shocked*

Kenji: Well well, Kids better then i thought......but still hehe.

*The trawl nets have hit the ground around Daichi forming a circle around him and the nets become connected to each other, becomes spinning light that shoots yellow beam from all sides*

Daichi:*Smiles* Heh! Barrier cast: bounce field! *A force field comes up around him to bounce away the light beams* Is that all?

Kenji: What?!

Crowd: How did he do that?!

Wg: Amazing!

Daichi: *Looks at his field* these beams......absorb spirit energy.

Kenji:*thinking: That was the perfect defense for delaying my trawl net beams! While my beams would suck a normal force field relatively quickly, a bounce field does a splendid job bouncing away my beams and only have them absorb a minimum when it makes contact with his barrier.*
You made a wise choice but what now? It´s only a matter of time before my beams suck your field and reach you!

Daichi: In your dreams.....this match is already over!

*Daichi watches the interval that the beams hit his barrier, as soon as a beam hit his barriers front and gets bounced back, he runs out of his barrier, the beams get his left arm and sucks energy but he ignores it and blitz infront of Kenji*

Kenji: ?!

Daichi: Illusion cast: Spirit fist!*His right hand becomes covered in blue energy and he punches Kenji in the gut which sends the energy through all parts of his body and knocks him unconcious.*

Daichi: Phew! For a moment there i thought i was being naive trying a cast like that but his defense was so weak it worked wonders!

*Daichi looks around the crowd that have their jaw dropped including the weak guy from before*

Daichi: Best i get moving now, i´ve attracted too much attention already.

*Wg runs to him*

Wg: Thank you so much, you´re so nice you would go into a fight for a total stranger! My name is Takeo nice to meet you mr...?

Daichi: The name is Daichi, look, that guy was just being a scumbag and i wanted to put him in his place, don´t get the wrong idea, i wasn´t doing it for you, i just hate people like that.

Takeo: Whatever it was, you still hepled me and i want to repay you somehow.

Voice from afar: Someone beat up Kenji! You there! Stay where you are!*a cop pointing finger at Daichi*

Daichi: Me?

Takeo: Oh no, let´s go!*drags daichi*

*Runs through a small alley, get to the other side where there is a huge park with people*

Takeo: Phew! We got away.

Daichi: Was that a cop? What did he want with me? That was a normal duel between this Kenji-guy and me, how come there was no cop running when he beat and humiliated you???

Takeo: Calm down, i´ll explain everything, let´s go grab a drink somewhere.

The end

Tell me what you guys thought of this one.:D

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Daichi FTW!!!!!!

Btw where did u get the name Daichi from?
I got the name from Beyblade and Blazer drive, it´s a cool name but not something heard of much.
you better write or else.. I will make my father Satin drag you down to hell xd
I will but i must bring things together and plan what´ll happen so you have to patient otherwise i´ll probably mess up, thanks for liking it btw and here is the first chapter incase you haven´t read it yet:

Thanks alot both of you!:D
 
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nice fan fic bro :D just make sure it doesn't become to long but just right :D congrats bro
By too long, do you mean the chapters or the story itself because i plan on writing the story for a long time and this arc has only just begun, there are still many arcs to write, many more characters to introduce and lots of revelations.
 
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cool chapter, it seems like one of one piece's episodes when they arrive at a city i forgot the name and see lots of shops and stuff and sanji enters a contest :)
very nice.
 

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cool chapter, it seems like one of one piece's episodes when they arrive at a city i forgot the name and see lots of shops and stuff and sanji enters a contest :)
very nice.
This is the third time someone told me about the similarities between this and one piece, the first was when Daichi was declaring his dream "my dream is to become the strongest magician there is! Nothing can stop me*raises hands and shouts into the air*, a friend told me it was similar to when luffy shouts he´s going to be pirate king, another friend told me how Kenji was similar to Helmeppo from one piece and now this.:D

I guess i´m just inspired by one piece that i don´t think of these things when i do them but it´s good, thanks alot!:D

I have thought of something.
I´d like to have as many people as possible reading this right now from the start because if more people read later chapters like you did then they´re gonna wonder about the previous ones which will make me forced to basically dig up graves of threads to find it for them.

It´s because of this that i would kindly ask you guys reading this to tell your other nb friends to read this and give it a try, i will be writing for a long time.

Have a happy new year!:D
 
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