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It would be SOOOO much cooler if you could throw the ball, yes. Since this post will be my 4000th POST!!!! I've give you several to work on!
-Congrats on your 4000th post sempei! ^^ You'll soon become a sanin I see! :D

(Raiton: Jūrokuchū Shibari) – Lightning Release: Sixteen-Pillar Bind
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the needed hand seals Rat → Monkey → Horse → Tiger the user will create a even more powerful version of lightning release: four pillar bind, the user creates sixteen giant pillars, which then form a giant oven to trap the enemy. It is often used after Earth Release: Mud Fall to cover the enemy target in mud and then follow up with using Fire release: Firing Biscuit, creating flames in the oven to roast and harden the mud, immobilizing the enemy.
*I strat by performing the Rat->Monkey->Horse->Tiger hand seals. As I perform each hand seal, I feel the raiton chakra focused in my body. As I perform the final hand seal, my raiton starts moving underground towards the targeted shadow clone. then, 16 pilars of raiton pop out of the earth, and suround my target, imobilising it. The raiton then gets conected, and forms a giant oven around the targeted clone. The clone is traped betwin the pilars, and, unable to go anywere looks at me with a sad face. The raiton crackles in a threating maneer, and I gaze upon it satisfied...*

(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.
*As the targeted shadow clone is traped, I start by performing a regular chidori. I then use form manipulation on my chidori's raiton, to extend it like a blade... My first attempt it too thik, and extends only 5 meters in front of me... I start over, this time managing to extend my blade till 10 metters. As I extend my raiton blade, it passes right through the clone's shoulder. I then comand the raiton to split into multiple smaller blades, and pierce the whole body of the clone, who explodes in white smoke. The blade then begines to fade away, as I diminish, and finally cut the chakra flow in it... *

- Even though it's not stated, I supose I still need to use the Chidori hand seals for this one, right?

(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.
*This time, it shall be more dificult, as I have never made anything simular before... I Focus on my raiton chakra, and release it around my body in the form of a raiton voltex. Soon, the wind around me follows the rotation of my raiton. As soon as that happens, I use shape manipulation on my raiton chakra to mold it into the head of a dragon. I first design the head, focusing on the eyes and teeth, to make it more threating. then, I mold the neck, and finally add the horns.Then, the raiton is attracted by a nearby shadow clone, and hits it heads on, causing it to explode in white smoke...*

-This way training is much more practical (the 3 jutsu per post)! Is there any chance we can continue this way? ^^
 
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*I strat by performing the Rat->Monkey->Horse->Tiger hand seals. As I perform each hand seal, I feel the raiton chakra focused in my body. As I perform the final hand seal, my raiton starts moving underground towards the targeted shadow clone. then, 16 pilars of raiton pop out of the earth, and suround my target, imobilising it. The raiton then gets conected, and forms a giant oven around the targeted clone. The clone is traped betwin the pilars, and, unable to go anywere looks at me with a sad face. The raiton crackles in a threating maneer, and I gaze upon it satisfied...*



*As the targeted shadow clone is traped, I start by performing a regular chidori. I then use form manipulation on my chidori's raiton, to extend it like a blade... My first attempt it too thik, and extends only 5 meters in front of me... I start over, this time managing to extend my blade till 10 metters. As I extend my raiton blade, it passes right through the clone's shoulder. I then comand the raiton to split into multiple smaller blades, and pierce the whole body of the clone, who explodes in white smoke. The blade then begines to fade away, as I diminish, and finally cut the chakra flow in it... *

- Even though it's not stated, I supose I still need to use the Chidori hand seals for this one, right?



*This time, it shall be more dificult, as I have never made anything simular before... I Focus on my raiton chakra, and release it around my body in the form of a raiton voltex. Soon, the wind around me follows the rotation of my raiton. As soon as that happens, I use shape manipulation on my raiton chakra to mold it into the head of a dragon. I first design the head, focusing on the eyes and teeth, to make it more threating. then, I mold the neck, and finally add the horns.Then, the raiton is attracted by a nearby shadow clone, and hits it heads on, causing it to explode in white smoke...*

-This way training is much more practical (the 3 jutsu per post)! Is there any chance we can continue this way? ^^
It is much more viable, but most cannot preform one technique to my standards, let alone three. You, however, can, and we shall continue this way.

(Chidori Kireme) - One thousand Birds Breaker
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will deliver several punches and kicks to the opponent sending them into the air where the user will then strike a Chidori into their back.

(Chidori Tokkan) - One Thousand Birds Rush
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will first strike the target with a slash from their sword hitting them into the air and then as they begin to land the user will drive them into the ground with a Chidori.
 

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It is much more viable, but most cannot preform one technique to my standards, let alone three. You, however, can, and we shall continue this way.
-Thank you ^^

(Chidori Kireme) - One thousand Birds Breaker
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will deliver several punches and kicks to the opponent sending them into the air where the user will then strike a Chidori into their back.
*I start by punshing the shadow clone... and it explodes in white smoke...*
-oO I guess I hit it too hard, hehe

*I start over, this time starting with an upercut, followed by a couple of punshes to the ribs. I then kick the clone's stomach, and punsh him to the thorax... Finally, I kick the clone's chin with my knee (while jumping, of cource), and the clone is sent flying, turning by 180 degrees, and showing me his back. The moment I started the kick that ended up with my knee kicking the clone's chin, I also started performing the required handseals for the chidori, and, as soon as the clone shows me his back, I pierce through his pneumons with the chidori in my right hand. The clone then explodes in white smoke...*

-Ah, it feels good to punsh those things for a change... It's been a wile since I actually punshed something instead of killing it with my chakra! xd

(Chidori Tokkan) - One Thousand Birds Rush
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will first strike the target with a slash from their sword hitting them into the air and then as they begin to land the user will drive them into the ground with a Chidori.
*I quickly draw my katana, with determination... As I draw it, I use the movement to slash my opponet, and drive him to mid air. As the katana touches the opponet, with perfect timing I jump till mid air, following the clone's body. While I am following the clone's body, I quicly perform the hand seals needed, and, the very moment me and the clone start falling, I activate the chidori. In the meanwile, I kick the clone's body, downwards. Then, I use the acceleration of the gravity in addition to the acceleration of the chidory, to not only pierce through the clone's stomach, but, as soon as we land, drive the clone into the ground, and advance some meters froward. Then, the clone explodes in white smoke...*

-Nice and powerfull jutsu this one! ^^
 

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*I start by punshing the shadow clone... and it explodes in white smoke...*
-oO I guess I hit it too hard, hehe

*I start over, this time starting with an upercut, followed by a couple of punshes to the ribs. I then kick the clone's stomach, and punsh him to the thorax... Finally, I kick the clone's chin with my knee (while jumping, of cource), and the clone is sent flying, turning by 180 degrees, and showing me his back. The moment I started the kick that ended up with my knee kicking the clone's chin, I also started performing the required handseals for the chidori, and, as soon as the clone shows me his back, I pierce through his pneumons with the chidori in my right hand. The clone then explodes in white smoke...*

-Ah, it feels good to punsh those things for a change... It's been a wile since I actually punshed something instead of killing it with my chakra! xd



*I quickly draw my katana, with determination... As I draw it, I use the movement to slash my opponet, and drive him to mid air. As the katana touches the opponet, with perfect timing I jump till mid air, following the clone's body. While I am following the clone's body, I quicly perform the hand seals needed, and, the very moment me and the clone start falling, I activate the chidori. In the meanwile, I kick the clone's body, downwards. Then, I use the acceleration of the gravity in addition to the acceleration of the chidory, to not only pierce through the clone's stomach, but, as soon as we land, drive the clone into the ground, and advance some meters froward. Then, the clone explodes in white smoke...*

-Nice and powerfull jutsu this one! ^^
Next up!

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

(Raiton: Raikiri Nibai Raikou Jishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Blade Double Lightning Quake
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs Lightning blade and splits it in two, then zigzags at the opponent and finishes by slamming them with lightning Cutter.
 

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-Yupiiii! S-Rank! ^^

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.
* I quickly perform the snake hand seal. I then focus my raiton chakra betwin my hands and raise the raiton flow to amounds I never imagined I could befor today... The raiton chakra in my hands is even greater that that of the chidori... I then add shaping manupulation to the raiton betwin my hands to mold it and shape it in the form of a spear. As the spear is formed, I release the jutsu, wich is almost as fast as natural thunder! It pierced through the targeted clone in the blink of an eye, and then continues it's way through a giant boulder behind the clone. I start over, to examin the full potential of this jutsu, and, as I release the spear, I divide the raiton chakra in 3, thus piercing through 3 different clones...*
-I have only one word for this jutsu: A-M-A-Z-I-N-G ! oO

(Raiton: Raikiri Nibai Raikou Jishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Blade Double Lightning Quake
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs Lightning blade and splits it in two, then zigzags at the opponent and finishes by slamming them with lightning Cutter.
-It's a little weird to learn that before I learn the regular Raikiri xd
* I start by performing a regular chidori. As soon as I do that, I gather an insane amound of raiton chakra in the chidori, just like I did with the Faulse Darkness! Raiton gathers around me and is emited from my hand. I then split the raiton in 2 equal counterparts, and whield one in each hand. I then rush towards the shadow clone, by movind is a zig-zag pattern! As soon as I am close enough, I slash the clone with lighting cutter, and it explodes in a vast amound of white smoke.*
-Cool! :cool: I supose it can be used to avoid attacks as well, since it grands you great speed, right? ^^
 

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* I quickly perform the snake hand seal. I then focus my raiton chakra betwin my hands and raise the raiton flow to amounds I never imagined I could befor today... The raiton chakra in my hands is even greater that that of the chidori... I then add shaping manupulation to the raiton betwin my hands to mold it and shape it in the form of a spear. As the spear is formed, I release the jutsu, wich is almost as fast as natural thunder! It pierced through the targeted clone in the blink of an eye, and then continues it's way through a giant boulder behind the clone. I start over, to examin the full potential of this jutsu, and, as I release the spear, I divide the raiton chakra in 3, thus piercing through 3 different clones...*
-I have only one word for this jutsu: A-M-A-Z-I-N-G ! oO



-It's a little weird to learn that before I learn the regular Raikiri xd
* I start by performing a regular chidori. As soon as I do that, I gather an insane amound of raiton chakra in the chidori, just like I did with the Faulse Darkness! Raiton gathers around me and is emited from my hand. I then split the raiton in 2 equal counterparts, and whield one in each hand. I then rush towards the shadow clone, by movind is a zig-zag pattern! As soon as I am close enough, I slash the clone with lighting cutter, and it explodes in a vast amound of white smoke.*
-Cool! :cool: I supose it can be used to avoid attacks as well, since it grands you great speed, right? ^^
It cannot be used to avoid attacks, it doesn't work like that. ;)

(Raiton: Chidori Jinrai) – Lightning Release: 1000 birds ThunderClap.
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After Performing chidori in mid air the user releases all of the lightning chakra within the chidori to create a Giant Thunder bolt that can be shot at the opponent.

(Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This jutsu is an advanced form of Chidori.
Note that you don't need to preform Chidori first for either of these, but for Jinari, you do need to jump in to the air.

*Shoots some fireballs at the sky.* ;)
 

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It cannot be used to avoid attacks, it doesn't work like that. ;)



Note that you don't need to preform Chidori first for either of these, but for Jinari, you do need to jump in to the air.

*Shoots some fireballs at the sky.* ;)
-I'll do my best! ^^

(Raiton: Chidori Jinrai) – Lightning Release: 1000 birds ThunderClap.
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After Performing chidori in mid air the user releases all of the lightning chakra within the chidori to create a Giant Thunder bolt that can be shot at the opponent.
*I start by imitating the chakra I use for chidori. As the chakra gets thiker and thiker, I can hear the fammiliar sound of the raiton, that reminds you the chants of thousands of birds (thus the name "Chidori). While I do that, I then Jump in mid air, adding more and more chakra, and try to project the Raiton chakra as a bolt... The chidori frizzles, and nothing happens... This is because I did not gather the Raiton in mid air. I start over, this time jumping quite hight (about 7 meters, a regular jump for a shinobi), and, in mid air, I gather raiton chakra in my right hand, simular to the way I gather it for chidori (but without performing any hand seals). As soon as the raiton is gathered, and while I'm still in mid air, I direct the dense Raiton chakra in my hand towards a clone that stands about 15 meters away (long range). The clone dissapears as soon as the raiton touches him...*
- Usefull and ingenius technique! ^^
(Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This jutsu is an advanced form of Chidori.
*Once again, I replicate the chakra used for chidori. This time, I do not stop at the point where I hear the thousand bird-like sound, and add more chakra, like I do for the rest of S rank Jutsu I know so far... As soon as I reach my limit (if I add more, I'd loose controll over the chakra), I can see the Raiton emiting random bolts and, the light from it, forming a blue cyrcle around me... The sound of the chanting birds is the most intence I've ever heard... As soon as I feel I reached my limit, I rush towards a nearby shadow clone, and pierce it with my hand. Not only did my hand pass through the clone's chest, but the random bolts continued damaging him even after that! Then, the clone exploded in white smoke...*
- I guess you can't get a chidori variation greater than this one! ^^

*as I spot senpei shooting fire balls at the sky, fammiliar with the technique that requires it, I ask sempei:*

-May I assume Kirin is next? :D
 

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*I start by imitating the chakra I use for chidori. As the chakra gets thiker and thiker, I can hear the fammiliar sound of the raiton, that reminds you the chants of thousands of birds (thus the name "Chidori). While I do that, I then Jump in mid air, adding more and more chakra, and try to project the Raiton chakra as a bolt... The chidori frizzles, and nothing happens... This is because I did not gather the Raiton in mid air. I start over, this time jumping quite hight (about 7 meters, a regular jump for a shinobi), and, in mid air, I gather raiton chakra in my right hand, simular to the way I gather it for chidori (but without performing any hand seals). As soon as the raiton is gathered, and while I'm still in mid air, I direct the dense Raiton chakra in my hand towards a clone that stands about 15 meters away (long range). The clone dissapears as soon as the raiton touches him...*
- Usefull and ingenius technique! ^^


*Once again, I replicate the chakra used for chidori. This time, I do not stop at the point where I hear the thousand bird-like sound, and add more chakra, like I do for the rest of S rank Jutsu I know so far... As soon as I reach my limit (if I add more, I'd loose controll over the chakra), I can see the Raiton emiting random bolts and, the light from it, forming a blue cyrcle around me... The sound of the chanting birds is the most intence I've ever heard... As soon as I feel I reached my limit, I rush towards a nearby shadow clone, and pierce it with my hand. Not only did my hand pass through the clone's chest, but the random bolts continued damaging him even after that! Then, the clone exploded in white smoke...*
- I guess you can't get a chidori variation greater than this one! ^^

*as I spot senpei shooting fire balls at the sky, fammiliar with the technique that requires it, I ask sempei:*

-May I assume Kirin is next? :D
Great job on the detail. Next up:

(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger the user will then create a blinding light that appears to emanate from the users body and blind the target/s.

(Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
Rank: S
Type:Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.
For the first one, preform the 3 hand seals, and allow your raiton chakra to radiate out from your body, causing a bright flash. And tell me how to defend from this jutsu

For the second, it's pretty simple.
 

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Great job on the detail. Next up:



For the first one, preform the 3 hand seals, and allow your raiton chakra to radiate out from your body, causing a bright flash. And tell me how to defend from this jutsu

For the second, it's pretty simple.
-Thank you sempei! ^^
(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger the user will then create a blinding light that appears to emanate from the users body and blind the target/s.
*I first perform the following hand seals: Ram-> Horse -> Snake-> Tiger, and, meanwhile, a great amound of raiton chakra is gathered in my body. As soon as I perform the last hand seal, I stop supressing the raiton in my body and release it as a blinding blue light emited from my body. Any living being that saw it will get complitelly blind for a small amound of time, and then, slowly regain his ability to see... A good way to deffend agaist such a jutsu would be to turn around or use a doton jutsu to prevent eye contact... I'm not sure that merelly closing his eyes would work for the opponet, but I will close mine when I cast the jutsu to prevent self-blinding...*

(Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
Rank: S
Type:Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.
*This time, I start by using a regular chidori, and, once more, add a great amound of raiton in it, at the level of being almost not able to controll it... As the raiton emits random sparks around the chidori, I slowly liberate the raiton, and give it more and more freedom. The fammiliar sound of singing birds is now reminding a horor film (Alfread Hichkok), and gives whoever hears it an ominus feeling... When I finally liberate the raiton completelly, random bolts of Raiton chakra are spreading all around me, with an amazing devasting power, that destroyes all the shadow clones around me till mid range. It also leaves a small amound of white smoke around me, as the raiton starts dissapearing...*
 

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*I first perform the following hand seals: Ram-> Horse -> Snake-> Tiger, and, meanwhile, a great amound of raiton chakra is gathered in my body. As soon as I perform the last hand seal, I stop supressing the raiton in my body and release it as a blinding blue light emited from my body. Any living being that saw it will get complitelly blind for a small amound of time, and then, slowly regain his ability to see... A good way to deffend agaist such a jutsu would be to turn around or use a doton jutsu to prevent eye contact... I'm not sure that merelly closing his eyes would work for the opponet, but I will close mine when I cast the jutsu to prevent self-blinding...*



*This time, I start by using a regular chidori, and, once more, add a great amound of raiton in it, at the level of being almost not able to controll it... As the raiton emits random sparks around the chidori, I slowly liberate the raiton, and give it more and more freedom. The fammiliar sound of singing birds is now reminding a horor film (Alfread Hichkok), and gives whoever hears it an ominus feeling... When I finally liberate the raiton completelly, random bolts of Raiton chakra are spreading all around me, with an amazing devasting power, that destroyes all the shadow clones around me till mid range. It also leaves a small amound of white smoke around me, as the raiton starts dissapearing...*
Great job, almost done. Next up:

(Raiton: Raiden) - Lightning Release: Lightning Chain
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:This technique requires the user to firstly create a shadow clone, each of them then activate the Lightning Cutter on opposite hands to one another. Connecting the two techniques together, forming a chain of sorts, they are then able to use the resulting beam to slice through objects with great ease.
Note: Must first perform the shadow clone technique.

(Raiton: Chidori Shinsō) - One Thousand Birds True Spear
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:The user starts off by dashing at his opponent with a Chidori in his hand. As they strikes his opponent, they uses shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a lightning spear that impales and hurtles the opponent into the air. The user then increases the potency of the lightning, generating a powerful electric explosion at the end of the spear and sending the enemy back to the ground.
Note: Only the spear extention can reach up to mid range.
Next to, any questions just ask!
 

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Great job, almost done. Next up:



Next to, any questions just ask!
-Wow, those ones are brand-new, aren't they? :eek: I've never seen them before! ^^

(Raiton: Chidori Shinsō) - One Thousand Birds True Spear
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:The user starts off by dashing at his opponent with a Chidori in his hand. As they strikes his opponent, they uses shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a lightning spear that impales and hurtles the opponent into the air. The user then increases the potency of the lightning, generating a powerful electric explosion at the end of the spear and sending the enemy back to the ground.
Note: Only the spear extention can reach up to mid range.
*I first focus a huge amound of raiton in my right hand. As I gather it, the raiton crackles and reminds the sound of birds. I first gather enough chakra for a regular raiton... Then, I rash towards a clone, still adding more and more chakra... As I finally am 2 meters away from the clone, I target his chest with my chidori wielding hand. I then add shape manipulation, extending the chidori in the form of a raiton spear that reaches mid-range in front of me... The spear impales the clone, and sends him flying, as it is still in his chest... At this point, I focus the maximum potential of my raiton on the tip of the spear, and, uncontrolable as it becomes, it explodes, bashing the clone towards the ground, who then explodes in thik white smoke...*
-Only 2 questions about this one...
A) When I use it, the spear is connected with my hand the whole time, or is it a projectile jutsu?
B) Can I keep it for more than one turn, and battle with it activated?

(Raiton: Raiden) - Lightning Release: Lightning Chain
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:This technique requires the user to firstly create a shadow clone, each of them then activate the Lightning Cutter on opposite hands to one another. Connecting the two techniques together, forming a chain of sorts, they are then able to use the resulting beam to slice through objects with great ease.
Note: Must first perform the shadow clone technique.
*I first summon a shadow clone... He then runs to mid range, and, in the meanwile, we both perform the lighting cutter. I activate it in my right hand, and he does the same on his left hand... We then extend our hands towards each other, and let the raiton in out hands go freely straightforward. As we do that, the two raiton spears extend and conect in one beam of raiton. We then run towards a nearby tree, and, I pass from the right side of it, while my clone pases from the left. The result is that, the raiton beam that conects our lighting cutters slices through the tree, and cuts it. The tree then falls down...*

-I have a couple of questions about this one sempei:
A) In the case of a taq duel, if my team mate knows this jutsu, can he substitue the clone?
B) Can I use that when either me or my clone are in mid air? Or when both of us are?

-Finally, some more questions: Will I learn Kirin, but be able to use it only when I get proper Katon training (I only have D-rank so far), Or will I skip it, and learn it only when I have the appropriate Katon Jutsu? :shrug: Finally, will it be counted as "mastered" raiton, if I don't have Kirin for now (and, will I be able to use any Raiton jutsu that requires hand seals with only one hand seal?)?

-Thank you for answearing my questions in advance ^^
 

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-Wow, those ones are brand-new, aren't they? :eek: I've never seen them before! ^^



*I first focus a huge amound of raiton in my right hand. As I gather it, the raiton crackles and reminds the sound of birds. I first gather enough chakra for a regular raiton... Then, I rash towards a clone, still adding more and more chakra... As I finally am 2 meters away from the clone, I target his chest with my chidori wielding hand. I then add shape manipulation, extending the chidori in the form of a raiton spear that reaches mid-range in front of me... The spear impales the clone, and sends him flying, as it is still in his chest... At this point, I focus the maximum potential of my raiton on the tip of the spear, and, uncontrolable as it becomes, it explodes, bashing the clone towards the ground, who then explodes in thik white smoke...*
-Only 2 questions about this one...
A) When I use it, the spear is connected with my hand the whole time, or is it a projectile jutsu?
It stays connected with you.

B) Can I keep it for more than one turn, and battle with it activated?
Yes, but you have to re-post it on the next turn if it's still around.


*I first summon a shadow clone... He then runs to mid range, and, in the meanwile, we both perform the lighting cutter. I activate it in my right hand, and he does the same on his left hand... We then extend our hands towards each other, and let the raiton in out hands go freely straightforward. As we do that, the two raiton spears extend and conect in one beam of raiton. We then run towards a nearby tree, and, I pass from the right side of it, while my clone pases from the left. The result is that, the raiton beam that conects our lighting cutters slices through the tree, and cuts it. The tree then falls down...*

-I have a couple of questions about this one sempei:
A) In the case of a taq duel, if my team mate knows this jutsu, can he substitue the clone? Yepp
B) Can I use that when either me or my clone are in mid air? Or when both of us are?
Yepp


-Finally, some more questions: Will I learn Kirin, but be able to use it only when I get proper Katon training (I only have D-rank so far), Or will I skip it, and learn it only when I have the appropriate Katon Jutsu? :shrug: Finally, will it be counted as "mastered" raiton, if I don't have Kirin for now (and, will I be able to use any Raiton jutsu that requires hand seals with only one hand seal?)?

-Thank you for answearing my questions in advance ^^
Answers in bold. Now, raise your hand to the sky, and preform:

(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After using Dragon Fireball Jutsu to create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Can only be avoided with time/space techniques. Can only be used once per battle.
Remember, this jutsu is LONG RANGE. If you let it off in mid or short range, you'll fry yourself along with your opponent.

*My clones huddle together far off in the field.*
 

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Answers in bold. Now, raise your hand to the sky, and preform:



Remember, this jutsu is LONG RANGE. If you let it off in mid or short range, you'll fry yourself along with your opponent.

*My clones huddle together far off in the field.*
-:D *big smile* Youpiiii! Kirin! ^^

(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After using Dragon Fireball Jutsu to create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Can only be avoided with time/space techniques. Can only be used once per battle.
* As sempei has already fired the Dragon Fireball to the sky about 1,5 minute ago, thunderclouds have gathered beyond the training ground, and have covered the sky... They are black, and emit an ominus feeling to everyone around... I can spot small animals running away, trying to hide from a potential rain... Then, lighting starts cracking in the skyes... I quickly perform a chidori, and, with it, I send a signal towards the skyes, conecting with the thunderbolts above me. While the connection is made, a shape reminding a dragon can be spoted in the skyes. I then direct my finger towards a clone. A blue-white pilar of Lighting flashes during the fraction of a second, and, in the blink of an eye, a thik cloud of white smoke has replaced the clone I was targeting (who, it should be noted, was standing at long rang, over 20 metters far from me...). I could not even spot it dissapearing. A big crater has formed on the area I was targeting, and everything has burned in a cyrcular area till mid range... This was the ultimate Raiton jutsu*
-Wow, this is the most amazing jutsu I've ever casted! :eek:

Question: Can I use it if there are already thunder clouds above the battlefield (in a spar for example, where the battlefield has been desided)?
 

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-:D *big smile* Youpiiii! Kirin! ^^



* As sempei has already fired the Dragon Fireball to the sky about 1,5 minute ago, thunderclouds have gathered beyond the training ground, and have covered the sky... They are black, and emit an ominus feeling to everyone around... I can spot small animals running away, trying to hide from a potential rain... Then, lighting starts cracking in the skyes... I quickly perform a chidori, and, with it, I send a signal towards the skyes, conecting with the thunderbolts above me. While the connection is made, a shape reminding a dragon can be spoted in the skyes. I then direct my finger towards a clone. A blue-white pilar of Lighting flashes during the fraction of a second, and, in the blink of an eye, a thik cloud of white smoke has replaced the clone I was targeting (who, it should be noted, was standing at long rang, over 20 metters far from me...). I could not even spot it dissapearing. A big crater has formed on the area I was targeting, and everything has burned in a cyrcular area till mid range... This was the ultimate Raiton jutsu*
-Wow, this is the most amazing jutsu I've ever casted! :eek:

Question: Can I use it if there are already thunder clouds above the battlefield (in a spar for example, where the battlefield has been desided)?
*Nothing happens.*

o_O

And you can, but that would be super lame.
 

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(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After using Dragon Fireball Jutsu to create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Can only be avoided with time/space techniques. Can only be used once per battle.
*I first cast the Dragon Fireball towards the sky, and, about 30 seconds latter, thunderclouds have gathered beyond the training ground, and have covered the sky... In the meanwhile, I run till I am in long range from the clone I am trying to roast... The clouds are black, and give you an ominous feeling... Then, lighting starts cracking in the skyes... I quickly perform a chidori, and, with it, I try to controll the thunderbolts above me, by raising the chidori-wielding hand towards the sky. When I finally do, I target a clone with the lighting above me. A blue-white bolt of Lighting strikes during the fraction of a second, and, in the blink of an eye, the clone I was targetting disapeared, hit by the lighting (who, it should be noted, was standing at long rang, over 20 metters far from me...). I could not even spot it dissapearing. Everything happened so fast. This is the power of the fastest Raiton jutsu... *
-Wow, this is the most amazing jutsu I've ever casted! oO
 
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*I first cast the Dragon Fireball towards the sky, and, about 30 seconds latter, thunderclouds have gathered beyond the training ground, and have covered the sky... In the meanwhile, I run till I am in long range from the clone I am trying to roast... The clouds are black, and give you an ominous feeling... Then, lighting starts cracking in the skyes... I quickly perform a chidori, and, with it, I try to controll the thunderbolts above me, by raising the chidori-wielding hand towards the sky. When I finally do, I target a clone with the lighting above me. A blue-white bolt of Lighting strikes during the fraction of a second, and, in the blink of an eye, the clone I was targetting disapeared, hit by the lighting (who, it should be noted, was standing at long rang, over 20 metters far from me...). I could not even spot it dissapearing. Everything happened so fast. This is the power of the fastest Raiton jutsu... *
-Wow, this is the most amazing jutsu I've ever casted! oO
*Still nothing happens.*

"Don't ask, this is a test. Read the jutsu description carefully, and post your description as if it was in a battle."
 

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*Still nothing happens.*

"Don't ask, this is a test. Read the jutsu description carefully, and post your description as if it was in a battle."
(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After using Dragon Fireball Jutsu to create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Can only be avoided with time/space techniques. Can only be used once per battle.
*As the clones are getting away from me, I start moving on the other side, to reach long range as soon as possible... In the meanwhile, I cast the Dragon Fireball jutsu towards the sky.*

(Katon: Goryuka no Jutsu) - Fire Style: Dragon Fireball Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform kirin.
*When I finally reach Long range (about 45 seconds after the fire ball was casted), the sky has gathered some thunder clouds, formed from the fireball I just casted, and lighting starts crackling... At this point, I quickly perform a chidori, and raise my hand towards the sky, in an attempt to controll the thunder raiging above me...*

(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey and they create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.
Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.
*As a result of using the above jutsu in the corect order, I gain the ability to perform the ultimate Raiton Jutsu: Kirin! As my, chidori wielding hand, is directed towards the sky, I finally commant the lighting to strike the preciece location of the clone I targeted. A Blue-white bolt strikes, and dissapears in the matter of milliseconds, merelly during the blink of an eye... Not only did the clone disapear, but so did the nearby clones, that were close enough (till mid range). This is the ultimate jujment of lighting!*

-Was it right this time, senpei? ^^
 

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*As the clones are getting away from me, I start moving on the other side, to reach long range as soon as possible... In the meanwhile, I cast the Dragon Fireball jutsu towards the sky.*



*When I finally reach Long range (about 45 seconds after the fire ball was casted), the sky has gathered some thunder clouds, formed from the fireball I just casted, and lighting starts crackling... At this point, I quickly perform a chidori, and raise my hand towards the sky, in an attempt to controll the thunder raiging above me...*



*As a result of using the above jutsu in the corect order, I gain the ability to perform the ultimate Raiton Jutsu: Kirin! As my, chidori wielding hand, is directed towards the sky, I finally commant the lighting to strike the preciece location of the clone I targeted. A Blue-white bolt strikes, and dissapears in the matter of milliseconds, merelly during the blink of an eye... Not only did the clone disapear, but so did the nearby clones, that were close enough (till mid range). This is the ultimate jujment of lighting!*

-Was it right this time, senpei? ^^
This time, you were right my friend. You MUST preform and post the jutsu for Chidori, then post Kirin. Great job, you've just mastered Raiton!
 
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