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Kurotschi, appears with her sword on her back "Benihime". Changed bio as i told you through vm's
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*As soon as i hear the mud and ground tremblin below me I immediately know that you're up to something so I quickly place my hand on the ground below me and send a portion of my lava chakra into the ground and cause the earth to crack below you and from the cracks there rises up a huge amount of lava erupting and mixing with my mud swamp creating more lava and melting you while you're underground, and als your water shark evaporates due to the immense heat of the lava, killing you and the eruption happens in an instant*

(Yõton: Maguma Gouben) - Lava Release: Lava Pool

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique creates a Lava pool beneath the target (relative to them) that immobilizes them. The user simply puts his/her hands on the ground and send a portion of his/her chakra into the ground the ground which causes the earth to split and so cause the lava to rise up from the cracks in the ground so the Lava will simply erupt from the ground. Remember the cracks get bigger and bigger because the lava melts the earth that blocking the lava from rising up. If, your opponent is sucked by the lave your opponent will melt. It will cause the battle field to turn into a huge lava pool. [this all happens in an instant]

.Note: Can only be used by Ichigo Kurosaki.
.Note: Can only be used 2 times in RP battle.
.Note: The user must have mastered the lava element.
.Note: The user must have mastered doton and katon.
.Note: The user must be higher than sannin rank.

I've changed my bio as well, to Chojuro in my sig.

Well, I've read your move and I'm pretty sure you broke the time frame. You used your lava jutsu before I even released my first jutsu (Giant Shark Missile) You stated that you "felt the earth and mud tremble" so you suspected a suspicious activity on my part. So in order to react, you used you lava jutsu, to form a huge lava pool beneath me (even though i was underground at the time.

Firstly, as I've said before this is breaking the time frame rule. Secondly, even if you used that jutsu after my creation of the Giant Shark Missile, you wouldn't be able to use such a jutsu. The Shark would immediately burst through the earth with its tremendous size, aimed directly towards you. After bursting through the ground it would break apart the earth beneath your feet, making it so that you can't even put your hands on the ground to use that jutsu.

So, you should edit your move o_o
 

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*At the moment i hear the ground beneath me trembling i realize its a incoming attack
[but i still don't know thats a water shark] so as i hear the trembling i shoot out a vortex on the grond that doesn't require any handseal so shooting myself into the air with an enormous gust i direct it a little bit to the righ of mine so evading your shark and you kunais because i shot the vortext a little bit to my right. As your kunai and shurikens were heading my way so i evaded them by shooting myself a lil bit right*

(Fūton: Senpuuken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist
Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: A vortex of wind shot out of the users fist wind he/she punches.
*Then, at the moment as i'm high in the air i grow out 4 wing made out of wind and stop in mid air facing your way and awayting your next move*

(Fuuton: Uyoku Enzeru) - Wind Style: Take Flight
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: the user gathers a lot of wind chakra into his back creating 2 large wings and 2 small wings made out of wind , the 2 large wind wings can be used to fly or to guard the user against incoming attacks, and the 2 small wings are made to increase the speed of the user while he's flying in the air, when the user activates this technique , he's pushed into the air upwards from the thrust of the wind that comes out of his back.

~ 4 times per battle.
~ as long as this technique is active the user cannot use any fire based techniques
~ Can Only be taught by ~Crow~
 

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*At the moment i hear the ground beneath me trembling i realize its a incoming attack
[but i still don't know thats a water shark] so as i hear the trembling i shoot out a vortex on the grond that doesn't require any handseal so shooting myself into the air with an enormous gust i direct it a little bit to the righ of mine so evading your shark and you kunais because i shot the vortext a little bit to my right. As your kunai and shurikens were heading my way so i evaded them by shooting myself a lil bit right*

(Fūton: Senpuuken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist
Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: A vortex of wind shot out of the users fist wind he/she punches.
*Then, at the moment as i'm high in the air i grow out 4 wing made out of wind and stop in mid air facing your way and awayting your next move*

(Fuuton: Uyoku Enzeru) - Wind Style: Take Flight
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: the user gathers a lot of wind chakra into his back creating 2 large wings and 2 small wings made out of wind , the 2 large wind wings can be used to fly or to guard the user against incoming attacks, and the 2 small wings are made to increase the speed of the user while he's flying in the air, when the user activates this technique , he's pushed into the air upwards from the thrust of the wind that comes out of his back.

~ 4 times per battle.
~ as long as this technique is active the user cannot use any fire based techniques
~ Can Only be taught by ~Crow~

As you attempt to avoid my in coming Shuriken, I release some of my Wind chakra into the surrounding air, and materialize two wind vortex's. The vortex's are used to re-direct both of my shuriken so that they are once again aimed for you. The two Wind enhanced Shuriken are now flying at you once more, one after the other.

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: The user will first focus on his Wind chakra and create spinning air gusts. When the air gusts are ready, he will throw up to 4 shurikens, which will engage with the gusts through the air as spinning disks. These disks are controlled by the user can be thrown individually towards the opponent.



While your attention is focused on the Shuriken, I use the water created by my previous jutsu [Giant Shark Missile] to trap you in a sphere of water, immobilizing you in mid-air. Because there was already water on the ground, this works out a bit faster than usual trapping you before the shuriken even reach you. Upon reaching you, the shuriken will slash you, as well as the sphere of water in half, thanks to the advanced cutting abilities of the wind.

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water. The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique, though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.



While your too occupied to even pay attention to me, I advance towards you, approaching short range. While making my way closer to you, I draw Hirame from it's holster on my back, and hold it with my right hand. It is still wrapped in it's bandages.

Upon entering short range, I stop and pay attention to whats happening to you, since at just about this time, you should be being cut in half.
 

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*As i see hear them shurikens closing in [and not paying any atention to your water] i quickly wave my wings forward and my shoot out a vortex at the same time directing it to the ground [the wings served for a extra push] so because i'm in the air i'm easly trown backwards to long-range and as 'hurricane fist' doesn't require any handseal it's much quicker + wind specialist so evading your jutsus shurikens and you water shiz as they couldn't reach me*

(Fūton: Senpuuken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist
Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: A vortex of wind shot out of the users fist wind he/she punches.
*So as i'm long range now i summon a huge amoun of water above you, completly harmless and blocking your vision so you're not able to see me*

(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Storm Upheaval
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
*And while you're focused on ze, water above your head and not paying any attention to me i quickly kick out two lightning beams directed at the water*

(Raiton Bu-meran Ashinami) - Boomerang Lightning Step
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: By doing a simple kick the user shoots out two powerful beams of lightning at great speeds being able to slice through solid objects or cut down attacks. As soon as the beam is launched and makes contact with anything it will come back towards the user like a boomerang and disperse.

♦ Can only be used 3 times per battle.
♦ Must have mastered lightning.
♦ No lightning techniques of S-Rank or above for one turn after the use of this technique.
♦ Can only be taught by Mathias
 

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*As i see hear them shurikens closing in [and not paying any atention to your water] i quickly wave my wings forward and my shoot out a vortex at the same time directing it to the ground [the wings served for a extra push] so because i'm in the air i'm easly trown backwards to long-range and as 'hurricane fist' doesn't require any handseal it's much quicker + wind specialist so evading your jutsus shurikens and you water shiz as they couldn't reach me*

(Fūton: Senpuuken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist
Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: A vortex of wind shot out of the users fist wind he/she punches.
*So as i'm long range now i summon a huge amoun of water above you, completly harmless and blocking your vision so you're not able to see me*

(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Storm Upheaval
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
*And while you're focused on ze, water above your head and not paying any attention to me i quickly kick out two lightning beams directed at the water*

(Raiton Bu-meran Ashinami) - Boomerang Lightning Step
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: By doing a simple kick the user shoots out two powerful beams of lightning at great speeds being able to slice through solid objects or cut down attacks. As soon as the beam is launched and makes contact with anything it will come back towards the user like a boomerang and disperse.

♦ Can only be used 3 times per battle.
♦ Must have mastered lightning.
♦ No lightning techniques of S-Rank or above for one turn after the use of this technique.
♦ Can only be taught by Mathias

Overall, your move was pretty good, but if I were you, I would have aimed the lightning at me instead. This way, I'm forced to defend against one or the other, since it's relatively impossible to defend against two things at the same time if your one person. Also, it would not only cause me more damage, but it would still electrocute the water (if timed correctly). Just saying :p
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Suddenly, as you fly off into the distance, I can't help but escape the sound of rushing water around me. Since there isn't a source large enough around me, I can only assume it's coming from above me, and sure enough, I'm correct. Just before the water comes down on me, I protect myself within a dome shaped barrier of Wind.

Rank-S
Type-Attack/Defense
Range-Short/Mid
Chakra-40
Damage-80
Description-
The user manipulates the wind around him to create a rapidly spinning cocoon of wind, throwing anything around. The user may expand it to create a bigger dome. If A Fire type attack(of equal or lower rank) is launched against it it will surround the dome, getting caught in the spinning vortex.
*Can only Be taught By icemyster*
*Can only Be used 3 TImes per Battle*



As the dome fades, after protecting me form the water, I perform a few handseals, and imbue my chakra into the Wind around you. I then quickly form a large and powerful tornado that throws you high up into the air, while also slicing you severely.

Rank:S
Type: Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: After performing the 5 needed handseals to imbue their chakra into the air, the user creates a vertical updraft of wind quickly moving massive amounts of warmer, less dense air upwards. This updraft causes the opponent to rise with the air. Since the wind is infused with the users chakra, the enemy is also being sliced by the wind. They are thrown into the air, and sliced by the powerful winds at the same time.
~Can only be taught by Ruiz..
~Can only be used 3 times per battle




Immediately in conjunction with finishing that, I perform a few more handseals, and cause a powerful bullet of wind to do even more damage to your already wounded body.

Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: User will concentrate on his wind chakra and then send it into the sky. Originally Gaara's technique, different characters will need to perform handseals in order to imbue their chakra in the air. In conjunction with the wind primary sent to the sky, a huge spiraling sphere of wind is created than is strong enough to do major damage to even a Summoning like Gamabunta.



Immediately afterwards, I run towards the location of your body, placing Hirame back in it's holster. No matter how you defend, react, or whatever, I'll still be running over to your location. And I can sense you, so I don't really need to see you :p
 

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xD..Lol, i had something else in mind :p but meh nvm >_>
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*As i see your barrier of Wind form i quickly cancel my lightning kick, at the same time while i clap my wings in which causes me to fall at high speed from the sky while and land on the ground in a split second. By this time you already made your tornado appear at my location so i open my mouth and form 4 handseal [I do the same jutsu twice] all the same. i release the first ball of wind as i see the tornado form bevore me so releasing inside the tornado and canceling it out as they are the same rank. So again while you shoot your bullet my second ball clashes with your wind bullet, so overpowering it due to the rank "S-Rank vs A-Rank" and heading your way in a spilt second, because i already made it when defending against the tornado and it over powered your bullet and killing you as you have no time to react at all at such a close range*

2x Great Balls of Wind

(Fūton: Shinkū Taigyoku) – Wind Release: Great Balls of Wind
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After performing two hand seals the user launches a large, explosive bullet of wind chakra from their mouth at their target.
*And afterwards as i see you get ripped apart by the wind ball i simply form a single handseal and create 2 shadow clones one to my right and the other to the left*

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninjas chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.
 
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