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Taking a quick look over Naruto or any story for that matter you see holes, or things that could have been done better. These characters needed more development, this should have been expanded on, etc. So if you could edit Naruto in any way what would you change.

Please no posts that say Naruto is perfect the way it is. I'm happy you feel that way but that just takes up space.

And I cannot stress this enough NO PAIRING TALK! Romance is fine just be general about it and don't mention specific characters. That way we avoid the salt and the smug.

Personally I would have Altered the Kguya and Madara fight. Actually explained who the SO6P brother was because he seemed somewhat important in sealing Kaguya the first time. As for romance I wouldn't have shoe horned it into the movie, and make it more realistic, subtle but intricate. Finally I would have made the epilogue a lot bigger. (unless the part 3 rumors are true in which case the epilogue is fine.)
 

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I would remove Kaguya, and prolong the Naruto/Sasuke vs Madara fight.
 

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Naruto is now one of the worst manga series of all-time. It's too late now.
 

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I would list what's wrong with this series, but I'd probably end up with a 100 page essay .
 

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I would list what's wrong with this series, but I'd probably end up with a 100 page essay .

Pretty much this. You would literally have to remove everything and then start from scratch.
 

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i would have made sarada with riinegan and bolt with FTG and himawari with byakugan
 

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Naruto is now one of the worst manga series of all-time. It's too late now.

Stay Mad you didn't get what you wanted

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-I would get rid of Kaguya, or at least make her talk more in an intellectual way. Instead of being a Chakra Cookie Monster
-Extend the Naruto and Sasuke Vs Sage Madara fight greatly
-Give Sakura slug sage mode. IDC Kishi had the perfect chance to give this but he failed miserably
-Have a REAL Madara Vs Obito battle
-Allow Minato to keep his arms. It was stupid for Kishi to cut them both off
 

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You dont even go here
 

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Naruto is now one of the worst manga series of all-time. It's too late now.

lol nah... lets not over exaggerate. just because shit didnt go the way you wanted does not mean it is the worst lol ungraeful ass fans i tell you. log off.
 

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OK correct me if I am wrong but I'm getting the feeling you all simply hate Naruto.
 

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If anyone were to change anything in the manga, it would be shit tbh.
 

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I would have given more story on hanzo he was a badass character
 

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I have a solution for you.
You should start your own manga, get money and fame and please everybody.
 

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OK correct me if I am wrong but I'm getting the feeling you all simply hate Naruto.
Yes, yes we do. It was just like Death Note - started of amazing; eventually became a hot, steaming pile of shit.
 

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You guys are so ungrateful....if you don't like Naruto then why the hell do you have an account here ?! Just to complain ?!
Go make your own manga and leave us the ones who enjoyed Naruto in peace
 

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Wow, OP neg repped me because i said if anyone else made changes to Naruto it would be sh*t.

Didn't know we weren't allowed to state facts, but then again this is a stupid thread so..

How about this OP, make your own manga and see if you get as successful as Kishi, it doesn't matter to kishi what people on the internet say lol, he's still richer, more famous and lets face it, nobody here could write a manga better than Kishi's, im not saying its perfect because it has its ups and downs but people shouldn't judge other people's work because they could never amount to the work kishi does.
 

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Only thing i would change is showing what happened to team taka,kabuto,orochimaru, and yamato in ch. 700.

Personally i think orochimaru might be dead since he needs to change host every 2-3 years and if he caused mess they would deal with him. I also think or i should say am hoping that the last covers what happened to these character during at least the 2 year time skip.
 

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The entire chapter 699 could have easily doubled or tripled in length to wrap up the end of IT and the war.
 

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Way too many things that I would be willing to list.
 

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Wow, OP neg repped me because i said if anyone else made changes to Naruto it would be sh*t.

Didn't know we weren't allowed to state facts, but then again this is a stupid thread so..

How about this OP, make your own manga and see if you get as successful as Kishi, it doesn't matter to kishi what people on the internet say lol, he's still richer, more famous and lets face it, nobody here could write a manga better than Kishi's, im not saying its perfect because it has its ups and downs but people shouldn't judge other people's work because they could never amount to the work kishi does.

Exactly Dude.
I love how people tends to bash Kishi's work when they have never created a Serialize Manga in their entire life.
Also Kishimoto is human not a machine he is bound to make mistakes.
 
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