Nothing Is What It seems Chapter 6

[Seffy]

O.O

lol yeah I think a bit of my perveyness showed in this chapter

 

[rezaamani]

I am proud of you Sarah as a friend,I know you told me to send my opion in just one post but I really wanted to post under ech chapter,as the works is so amazing,I loved then names,specially elizabeth,You are a gifted one ..really be humble and you'd see success soon enough,I 've already started taranslating it into farsi for my neiece and little cousins,I am sure they also love it,I reallly am surprised to read such a rich a story,you should definitly Send it to a publishe soon,ah ,I really wanted to talk about the charachters but i know it would be too much for yu to answer,rthank you very much for introducing this amazing story to me

 

[Seffy]

I am proud of you Sarah as a friend,I know you told me to send my opion in just one post but I really wanted to post under ech chapter,as the works is so amazing,I loved then names,specially elizabeth,You are a gifted one ..really be humble and you'd see success soon enough,I 've already started taranslating it into farsi for my neiece and little cousins,I am sure they also love it,I reallly am surprised to read such a rich a story,you should definitly Send it to a publishe soon,ah ,I really wanted to talk about the charachters but i know it would be too much for yu to answer,rthank you very much for introducing this amazing story to me

np, i'm glad you enjoyed it to such extent. if you ever want to talk about it, you can send me a vm or pm. i'd be happy to discuss it with you. i know once i've read something i'm excited about, i have to scream it to the world (or write) yeah i should finish writing it and get it all pampered up so i can send it to a publisher, but i have acr atm and that's taking up my time it's an epic game! :T_T:

 

[rezaamani]

np, i'm glad you enjoyed it to such extent. if you ever want to talk about it, you can send me a vm or pm. i'd be happy to discuss it with you. i know once i've read something i'm excited about, i have to scream it to the world (or write) yeah i should finish writing it and get it all pampered up so i can send it to a publisher, but i have acr atm and that's taking up my time it's an epic game! :T_T:

my pleasure,young lady,Thanks to you for givving me the oportunity to read sucha wonderful work,Its really great work,well as expected from my smart friend ;-)

 

[Seffy]

my pleasure,young lady,Thanks to you for givving me the oportunity to read sucha wonderful work,Its really great work,well as expected from my smart friend ;-)

lol ty xd

 

[Uchiha Paulsama]

motivation!

 

[Seffy]

motivation!

wait is that a good thing? lol
ty for reading it!

 

[Uchiha Paulsama]

wait is that a good thing? lol
ty for reading it!

yes! gabriels whole demeanor should motivate people along with your writing ability

your gifted on a insane level U_U

never spoke to anyone this good, im in the crowd cheering you on!

 

[Seffy]

yes! gabriels whole demeanor should motivate people along with your writing ability

your gifted on a insane level U_U

never spoke to anyone this good, im in the crowd cheering you on!

Well when you catch up on the other chapters you maybe disappointed as to Gabriel not playing a huge role like the begining but just keep in mind that everything I do has a connection to something else. There is a bigger picture that just hasn't been seen yet. Though you have to love Elizabeth's unusual fighting techniques lol :hug: ty for the support <3

 

[Uchiha Paulsama]

the way you put words together is amazing you can see it playing in your head O_O

no more spam lol

sorry i had to get that out.

 

[SHARINGAN_USER UCHIHA_ITACHI]

real Amazing job ...like it more than previous ones..!!! xd

 

[Seffy]

real Amazing job ...like it more than previous ones..!!! xd

lol well they have to build up to something more xd
admit it, you loved the part where Vincent untied her shirt with his teeth
:izuna: he's going to his own vacation spot with her :rofl: you know what I'm talking about ^_^

 

[SHARINGAN_USER UCHIHA_ITACHI]

lol well they have to build up to something more xd
admit it, you loved the part where Vincent untied her shirt with his teeth
:izuna: he's going to his own vacation spot with her :rofl: you know what I'm talking about ^_^

♥_♥ make video/anime of that chap.!!
lol....that Vincent guy, he's so luckyyyy..!! :T_T:
lmao yh.. i'll be there too....!!!*march* :izuna: