Nothing Is What It Seems Chapter 11

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I'm sure they'd also be just as superb,I shall support my amazing sis by all means available ;-)
lol ty :)

Epic! You're talented at developing back-story as a device to unfold the main plot. The dramatic revelation of secrets keeps me coming back for more. ;)
:p as I keep telling everyone else, everything is connected, well except Sophia, she's just there >.> (obviously not my fave character lol) yeah i know i keep toying with the readers based on the whole secret that I stated in my first chapter. Well that they had many dark secrets :p
i still say that you need to include a *** scene, but again nice work.
lol ty xd
Oh, and btw, i had this song on the headphones while reading this...
:itachi:
lol nice xd i do like this song ^_^ ty for sharing
 
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