Notes for the newest chapter from kishi himself. Chapter 689

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Chapter 689: "I Like You"



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This chapter I really tried to push the envelope on how much bullshit I could produce in a single chapter.
So Let me give you a run down on how the process went.




Kaguya

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This chapter, I had to strip her power and ignore a lot of the abilities she has. I wanted to give my goddess personality so I made her panic.





Sasuke

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Sasuke was a difficult one. After Sasuke's words to his team in previous chapters I felt he was being a ****, so I made sure that he would require everyone's help and never actually land a clan hit on Kaguya. He was already trampled with the new ability I gave Kakashi. Topping that would require something unheard of. Making Sakura Haruno useful in a major fight.





Sakura

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Sakura Haruno, my main heroine of the series. This chapter I wanted to put emphasis on how useful Sakura could be. It was rather difficult to give Sakura any role in Kakashi's plan as she's normally a non factor in major fights. So in the end I opted to make her fall on Kaguya, slightly damaging her for extra measure.

I did not expect her fans to celebrate someone who usefulness in the plan was to fall on someone. But I can chalk that up as a win-win.




Naruto

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These chapters I really wanted to make Naruto grandstand. To ensure that I made sure he saved everyone multiple times and fight Kaguya with no issues. To drive it home, I made sure Sasuke's Susanoo was destroyed in every panel he clashed Kaguya to make Naruto look better in comparison. Then to layer it on I made Naruto shout how better Kakashi's Susanoo was in front of Sasuke.




Kakashi

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This one had to be my favorite. I had to make a man who power made him less irrelevant than my heroine; Into a total badass. I had to give him the works. I gave him a Susanoo identical to Sasuke. I gave him neat Shuriken that Warmholes anything that comes into contact with them. Then I made sure he landed a hit on Kaguya with relative ease. To make sure he didn't outshine Naruto I made him say something incredibly awkward at the end.

I was inspired by a episode of DBZ where trunks and Vegeta were training*. I wanted to make Kakashi's power be incredibly easy to gain without the pesky need to go through traumatic events that made Sasuke and other uchiha's great. I honestly do not think I could of handled it any better.


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[video=youtube;xflI5gkF8Ns]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xflI5gkF8Ns[/video]
 
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Trúth

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Lol this was funny. +rep
 

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Too many spoilers, too many words..
OP is "butthurt", I guess..
 

Zook1

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Seeing Kakashi smile that was awesome he looked really happy !
 

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Don't worry, I think we all agree
that this thread sucks
 

Zlatán

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You okay dude? You seem pretty mad....
 

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A guy makes a Satire and people assume he's butthurt...

Glad a few people in this thread see the humor in it.
 

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Satire doesn't have to be funny... :|

Then what's the point if reading satire? If it ain't funny, it's a waste of everyone's time.

Like, I can't remember the writer, but the satire about killing Irish babies and eating them. That one was great.

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Then what's the point if reading satire? If it ain't funny, it's a waste of everyone's time.

Like, I can't remember the writer, but the satire about killing Irish babies and eating them. That one was great.

Because it drives underlying points home that the reader won't admit to knowing are true.

Do i really have to explain satire...?
 
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