Not your average 15 year old rapper

[UchiHaHaHa]

Hi everyone!

I am a 15 year old rapper/producer part of a music group from Toronto named S.I.M.R

Now your probably thinking... "Oh he's gonna be garbage, he probably just raps about money, cars, and women or some sh*t!"

That isn't the case though, I pride myself in my lyrical abilities, for me rap is just poetry on top of a nifty beat, And I love poetry!

It would mean the world to me if you guys could listen and give me your honest opinion! Any feedback is welcome! But please at least listen to the track first.

Here is the link to the track:

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I'm the first one and a fellow group member is the second one.

Thanks!

 

[KAGE RYUU]

Meh its ok i guess but everything you say seems like just bits a pieces of other stuff ive heard b4 long story short its nothing special that would make me say oh this guy is better then they other millions of ppl plus all your lines seem like filler there is no big lines that make you like ohhh shit

keep at it tho maybe you will get better your 15 your allowed to suck haha my advice be more original and spit about things that matter like world issues and comunity problems and life ecperiences cuz stuff like


i took the game back like it was confiscated jus sounds stupid cuz its such an old outplayed line

 

[sasukeMangekyousharingan]

its good

 

[UchiHaHaHa]

Meh its ok i guess but everything you say seems like just bits a pieces of other stuff ive heard b4 long story short its nothing special that would make me say oh this guy is better then they other millions of ppl plus all your lines seem like filler there is no big lines that make you like ohhh shit

keep at it tho maybe you will get better your 15 your allowed to suck haha my advice be more original and spit about things that matter like world issues and comunity problems and life ecperiences cuz stuff like


i took the game back like it was confiscated jus sounds stupid cuz its such an old outplayed line

Thanks for your feedback! We have other things in the work that are way better, this was recorded in April and we improved since then. Like you mentioned were starting to talk about more important stuff.

its good

Thanks!

 

[10023213]

thats pretty good