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I am writing lyrics to
A failed melody
My life remains
In endless discrepancy

Am I being carried
Do I have a choice
Is there any power
In my thoughts
…Or my voice?

The lesson’s I have
Do I have them for a reason
Will it be useful
In the coming seasons..?
..
Does it matter whether I come
Or Go…
Or will the night come
Whenever it says so… …

….?

Is there any power
In my sudden actions
Or am I just making excuses
To not garner reaction

I am not that… ‘courageous one’
I thought I knew
I’ve watch myself grow
I’ve become, less than new..

I laugh it off
I really have made it far, though
I lean back
Now just how much farther can I go?

My eyes light up
I’m ready for my trip
And I rush out the door
Not worried if I slip
 

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This is honestly pretty well done. As I read it from line to line, they gradually began to develop into verses and I found myself humming through them in a gentle rhythm. I feel like I could easily hear this as the lyrics to something calm yet with a gentle beat; like something R&B, almost, if that makes any sense?

Anyway, thank you for sharing. 🙏
 
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