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This noob needs to get his butt kicked U_U Anyone up for the challenge?

Rules:
- Rei's R+R
- No CEs/CJs or pre-used jutsu
- No killing/stealing
- Mid range
- 1 sub

Terrain: Plain old grassy plain, no water, no trees. It is a sunny day.

Obito bio in sig (not updated), post a link to your approved bio and post your move. Cheers :cool:
 

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I throw 3 kunai with smoke bombs on them (1st at my feet, the next 5 ft in front of you, and the last high in the air above you), as the 1st bomb covers me I run right releasing bugs throughtout the field and make 2 clones, the bomb between us goes off so you don't see me running right (c1&2) C1 runs left, and c2 runs at your last location from the right ( short range, as the smoke covers our sight) c2 throws a tagged kunai at you (you won't see this) at the same time c1 makes the ground under you sink in on itself, also at the same time I send a mass of bugs rainning down on you from the sky(you won't see this because of the smoke)


(Doton: Tsuchi Bunshin no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Earth Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates up to three clones of earth and mud. Since they are made of such materials, they can reform after being hit by physical, water or wind techniques. They can also use up to C rank earth techniques.

(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This jutsu causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the center, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated.

(Kikaichu Hisame no Jutsu) -Destruction Bug Hail Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will release thousands of destruction bugs from his body into the air. On their Command, the insects attack the opponent in 5 waves. The insects turn coalesce into a large cloud and rain down on the opponent causing tremendous damage.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame clan.
 

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I throw 3 kunai with smoke bombs on them (1st at my feet, the next 5 ft in front of you, and the last high in the air above you), as the 1st bomb covers me I run right releasing bugs throughtout the field and make 2 clones, the bomb between us goes off so you don't see me running right (c1&2) C1 runs left, and c2 runs at your last location from the right ( short range, as the smoke covers our sight) c2 throws a tagged kunai at you (you won't see this) at the same time c1 makes the ground under you sink in on itself, also at the same time I send a mass of bugs rainning down on you from the sky(you won't see this because of the smoke)


(Doton: Tsuchi Bunshin no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Earth Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates up to three clones of earth and mud. Since they are made of such materials, they can reform after being hit by physical, water or wind techniques. They can also use up to C rank earth techniques.

(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This jutsu causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the center, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated.

(Kikaichu Hisame no Jutsu) -Destruction Bug Hail Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will release thousands of destruction bugs from his body into the air. On their Command, the insects attack the opponent in 5 waves. The insects turn coalesce into a large cloud and rain down on the opponent causing tremendous damage.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame clan.
Alright, lets go!

*I stand there studying you closely as you draw your kunais and begin your throwing action, immediately I know that you're going to throw them at me..so, as you throw the 3 kunais a pillar of earth pushes me up into the air diagonally to my left (your right) allowing me to dodge your kunais coming at me and most importantly, allow me to have a birds eye view of the battlefield.

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Style Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

As soon as Im propelled into the air I see the first smoke bomb go off and immediately the earth at that position (I know that you're in the smoke as I just saw you) splits into a huge fissure, spanning several metres wide much wider than the width of your smoke. This fissure causes you to fall into the fissure as you're running not allowing you to make your clones and spoiling your plans. And because I just used an earth jutsu just before, it would take me less time to perform the fissure.

(Doton: Doryuu Kekai) - Earth Style: Earth Fissure
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu splits the earth apart to make a fissure. The size of the fissure is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.

Immediately after the fissure opens (I know for sure that you're falling down), stone spears protrude from both sides of the fissure and skew you to death. Again, this happens in quick succession since this is also a earth tech which only requires one handseal.

(Doton: Doryuso) - Earth Style: Rising Stone Spears
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This technique lets the user condense mud or stone from the ground and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The spikes cannot penetrate targets of greater density.

I watch from above as I continue to fly through the air, watching the smoke disperse and hopefully your skewered body.
 
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I throw 3 kunai with smoke bombs on them (1st at my feet, the next 5 ft in front of you, and the last high in the air above you), as the 1st bomb covers me I run right releasing bugs throughtout the field and make 2 clones, the bomb between us goes off so you don't see me running right (c1&2) C1 runs left, and c2 runs at your last location from the right ( short range, as the smoke covers our sight) c2 throws a tagged kunai at you (you won't see this) at the same time c1 makes the ground under you sink in on itself, also at the same time I send a mass of bugs rainning down on you from the sky(you won't see this because of the smoke)
Alright, lets go!

*I stand there studying you closely as you draw your kunais and begin your throwing action, immediately I know that you're going to throw them at me..so, as you throw the 3 kunais a pillar of earth pushes me up into the air diagonally to my left (your right) allowing me to dodge your kunais coming at me and most importantly, allow me to have a birds eye view of the battlefield.

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Style Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

As soon as Im propelled into the air I see the first smoke bomb go off and immediately the earth at that position (I know that you're in the smoke as I just saw you) splits into a huge fissure, spanning several metres wide much wider than the width of your smoke. This fissure causes you to fall into the fissure as you're running not allowing you to make your clones and spoiling your plans. And because I just used an earth jutsu just before, it would take me less time to perform the fissure.

(Doton: Doryuu Kekai) - Earth Style: Earth Fissure
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu splits the earth apart to make a fissure. The size of the fissure is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.

Immediately after the fissure opens (I know for sure that you're falling down), stone spears protrude from both sides of the fissure and skew you to death. Again, this happens in quick succession since this is also a earth tech which only requires one handseal.

(Doton: Doryuso) - Earth Style: Rising Stone Spears
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This technique lets the user condense mud or stone from the ground and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The spikes cannot penetrate targets of greater density.

I watch from above as I continue to fly through the air, watching the smoke disperse and hopefully your skewered body.
at the bold part I don't see how you can stop my clones from forming as your doing two techs to my 1 also the fissure would take time for your chakra to travel into the ground from the air...also you would be braking the time frame rule by doing the pillar jutsu before my first attack happens (the smoke at my feet)...please edit
 
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at the bold part I don't see how you can stop my clones from forming as your doing two techs to my 1 also the fissure would take time for your chakra to travel into the ground from the air...also you would be braking the time frame rule by doing the pillar jutsu before my first attack happens (the smoke at my feet)...please edit
Oh snap, I did break the timeframe rule. Thanks for pointing that out.

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I throw 3 kunai with smoke bombs on them (1st at my feet, the next 5 ft in front of you, and the last high in the air above you), as the 1st bomb covers me I run right releasing bugs throughtout the field and make 2 clones, the bomb between us goes off so you don't see me running right (c1&2) C1 runs left, and c2 runs at your last location from the right ( short range, as the smoke covers our sight) c2 throws a tagged kunai at you (you won't see this) at the same time c1 makes the ground under you sink in on itself, also at the same time I send a mass of bugs rainning down on you from the sky(you won't see this because of the smoke)

(Doton: Tsuchi Bunshin no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Earth Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates up to three clones of earth and mud. Since they are made of such materials, they can reform after being hit by physical, water or wind techniques. They can also use up to C rank earth techniques.

(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This jutsu causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the center, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated.

(Kikaichu Hisame no Jutsu) -Destruction Bug Hail Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will release thousands of destruction bugs from his body into the air. On their Command, the insects attack the opponent in 5 waves. The insects turn coalesce into a large cloud and rain down on the opponent causing tremendous damage.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame clan.
Alright, again..
*As I see you throw your 3 kunais, I immediately throw 2 kunais of my own in one swift motion with my two hands (one kunai in each hand) which deflect two of them (the one 5ft in front of me and the one above me) away from me. While you're smoke-tagged kunai near you goes off, I immediately continue by throwing 6 more wind-infused kunais tagged with explosive tags into the smoke and to the sides of it..3 with my left hand and 3 with my right hand in another swift motion. And because of the smoke that you're in, you wouldnt see the explosive kunais coming. They explode while you create your clones, although unbeknownst to me, killing you and your clones.

Dont really know what else to do..:S

Summary:
- I deflect 2 of your kunais, freeing me from distractions, then as the smoke bomb near you goes off, I immediately throw 6 explosive kunais into and around the smoke.
 
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Oh snap, I did break the timeframe rule. Thanks for pointing that out.



Alright, again..
*As I see you throw your 3 kunais, I immediately throw 2 kunais of my own in one swift motion with my two hands (one kunai in each hand) which deflect two of them (the one 5ft in front of me and the one above me) away from me. While you're smoke-tagged kunai near you goes off, I immediately continue by throwing 6 more wind-infused kunais tagged with explosive tags into the smoke and to the sides of it..3 with my left hand and 3 with my right hand in another swift motion. And because of the smoke that you're in, you wouldnt see the explosive kunais coming. They explode while you create your clones, although unbeknownst to me, killing you and your clones.

Dont really know what else to do..:S

Summary:
- I deflect 2 of your kunais, freeing me from distractions, then as the smoke bomb near you goes off, I immediately throw 6 explosive kunais into and around the smoke.
as you throw your 2 kunai to deflect my 2 smoke kunai I continue with my move (makinf clones and running to the right releasing bugs, and tagged kunai(c2's)) I emerge from the right side of the smoke as your throwing your tagged kunai and c1 at the same time emerge frome the left, also c2 from the front of the smoke (we all see your kunai (as you knocked the smoke that covers you and the air away) In seeing your kunai c2's tagged kunai hits one of the ones you threw into the smoke and explodes taking out your kunai (all but the ones to the outside..you never said how many was to the outside, so all but 2 ,one on each side of the smoke) c1 makes a fissure under you and c2 makes spikes from the walls of the fissure stabing you(c1 gets hit by your tagged kunai then he reforms) and I throw 2 tagged kunai (with 1 hand) 1 exploding you tagged kunai coming at me and the other behind you in the ground (from the right so my mud won't hit my 2nd kunai) as I release my kunai I make mud fall on you from the sky as c1's fissure froms under you covering you so you fall into the spikes ending the fight.

(Doton: Doryuu Kekai) - Earth Style: Earth Fissure
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu splits the earth apart to make a fissure. The size of the fissure is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.

(Doton: Ganchuusou) - Earth Style: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user creates spikes of earth that come up from the ground to stab the enemy. This jutsu can be made in a short or mid distance but the jutsu its self is made of a 6 foot radius of spikes.

(Doton: Doro Kakou) – Earth Release: Mud Fall
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates an opening within the sky, which drips down onto the opponent a large amount of mud, covering them. It’s normally followed up by Lightning release: sixteen pillar bind to create a giant oven around the opponent and then using Fire release: Firing biscuit technique to ignite the oven, hardening the mud and immobilizing the enemy target.
 

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as you throw your 2 kunai to deflect my 2 smoke kunai I continue with my move (makinf clones and running to the right releasing bugs, and tagged kunai(c2's)) I emerge from the right side of the smoke as your throwing your tagged kunai and c1 at the same time emerge frome the left, also c2 from the front of the smoke (we all see your kunai (as you knocked the smoke that covers you and the air away) In seeing your kunai c2's tagged kunai hits one of the ones you threw into the smoke and explodes taking out your kunai (all but the ones to the outside..you never said how many was to the outside, so all but 2 ,one on each side of the smoke) c1 makes a fissure under you and c2 makes spikes from the walls of the fissure stabing you(c1 gets hit by your tagged kunai then he reforms) and I throw 2 tagged kunai (with 1 hand) 1 exploding you tagged kunai coming at me and the other behind you in the ground (from the right so my mud won't hit my 2nd kunai) as I release my kunai I make mud fall on you from the sky as c1's fissure froms under you covering you so you fall into the spikes ending the fight.

(Doton: Doryuu Kekai) - Earth Style: Earth Fissure
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu splits the earth apart to make a fissure. The size of the fissure is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.

(Doton: Ganchuusou) - Earth Style: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user creates spikes of earth that come up from the ground to stab the enemy. This jutsu can be made in a short or mid distance but the jutsu its self is made of a 6 foot radius of spikes.

(Doton: Doro Kakou) – Earth Release: Mud Fall
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates an opening within the sky, which drips down onto the opponent a large amount of mud, covering them. It’s normally followed up by Lightning release: sixteen pillar bind to create a giant oven around the opponent and then using Fire release: Firing biscuit technique to ignite the oven, hardening the mud and immobilizing the enemy target.
As my kunais are coming at you and as soon as I see multiple copies of you appear from the smoke (C2 is just about to throw his kunai), I immediately sprint off to my right (still in mid range) while I simultaneously sending a massive fire/wind combo towards you and your clones. The combination of blazing fire and wind is huge, the fire is drastically enhanced by the wind rendering any normal A-ranked water jutsu useless against this attack. This attack speeds toward you and your clones leaving you no time to react to it, seeing as it is coming at a different angle from my earlier barrage of explosive kunais. Also, the fact that Im an Uchiha allows me to perform the attack quicker than a normal person would, allowing you less time to react. This attack effectively stops you from performing your jutsus as you need to defend against my attack, if you decide to perform your justsus you and your clones would get caught by the attack. Even if your clone performs the fissure (and thus your spikes), he would not be able to pinpoint my location since I moved from my original position and my fire/wind combo is right in front of me (covering your sight of me).

(Katon: Fuuton Ken Katon Bakufuu no Jutsu) Fire Release: Wind and Fire Blast Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user after combining Fire Release: Intelligent Hard Work and Wind Release: Pressure Damage at the same time. This creates a blast that is so intense that a standard water technique (ex : Water Release: Water Encampment Wall) can only at most soften of the impact. It was successsfully stopped by Yamato and Naruto's Typhoon water vortex.

As soon as I emit the fire/wind combo at you I immediately change direction and start to run behind my fire/wind combo..allowing you not to see me while I simultaneously, using the distraction caused by it, quickly perform a single handseal and create clones of my own but instead of creating 2 clones..I create 4: C1, C2, C3 and C4 in a specific formation. C4 is in right behind me.

C1-C2-Me-C3
-------C4----

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja�s chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.
At the instant, that the shadow clones appear C1 and C3 start sprinting around you (in a circle maintaining mid range, with you at the center)..this is about the time that you would be dealing with my combo. While this is happening Me, C2 and C4 stop and become stationary..watching the fire/wind combo speed towards you while keeping an eye on the other clones getting ready to provide jutsu support. Also, as soon as he is formed, C4 makes it rain, allowing him to sense you and your clones location.

(Suiton: Chakra Kenpa No Ame) - Water Style: Chakra Senseing Rain
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A down pour of rain will fall and any thing with chakra that it touches the user can sense there location and instantly know there.
 
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As my kunais are coming at you and as soon as I see multiple copies of you appear from the smoke (C2 is just about to throw his kunai), I immediately sprint off to my right (still in mid range) while I simultaneously sending a massive fire/wind combo towards you and your clones. The combination of blazing fire and wind is huge, the fire is drastically enhanced by the wind rendering any normal A-ranked water jutsu useless against this attack. This attack speeds toward you and your clones leaving you no time to react to it, seeing as it is coming at a different angle from my earlier barrage of explosive kunais. Also, the fact that Im an Uchiha allows me to perform the attack quicker than a normal person would, allowing you less time to react. This attack effectively stops you from performing your jutsus as you need to defend against my attack, if you decide to perform your justsus you and your clones would get caught by the attack. Even if your clone performs the fissure (and thus your spikes), he would not be able to pinpoint my location since I moved from my original position and my fire/wind combo is right in front of me (covering your sight of me).

(Katon: Fuuton Ken Katon Bakufuu no Jutsu) Fire Release: Wind and Fire Blast Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user after combining Fire Release: Intelligent Hard Work and Wind Release: Pressure Damage at the same time. This creates a blast that is so intense that a standard water technique (ex : Water Release: Water Encampment Wall) can only at most soften of the impact. It was successsfully stopped by Yamato and Naruto's Typhoon water vortex.

As soon as I emit the fire/wind combo at you I immediately change direction and start to run behind my fire/wind combo..allowing you not to see me while I simultaneously, using the distraction caused by it, quickly perform a single handseal and create clones of my own but instead of creating 2 clones..I create 4: C1, C2, C3 and C4 in a specific formation. C4 is in right behind me.

C1-C2-Me-C3
-------C4----

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja�s chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.
At the instant, that the shadow clones appear C1 and C3 start sprinting around you (in a circle maintaining mid range, with you at the center)..this is about the time that you would be dealing with my combo. While this is happening Me, C2 and C4 stop and become stationary..watching the fire/wind combo speed towards you while keeping an eye on the other clones getting ready to provide jutsu support. Also, as soon as he is formed, C4 makes it rain, allowing him to sense you and your clones location.

(Suiton: Chakra Kenpa No Ame) - Water Style: Chakra Senseing Rain
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A down pour of rain will fall and any thing with chakra that it touches the user can sense there location and instantly know there.
Well c2's kunai was thrown in the last turn (before you threw yours) and c1 didn't defend against your kunai and c1 & c2 makes the fissure/spike combo (before you run) so you fall in (as running is not a defense against a hole in the earth)...but even if you say your wind/fire combo is your defense...my bugs I release earlier let's us know you location and makes the fissure/spike combo anyway and you fall in as your doing a jutsu and can't stop it (as it was your defense to mine) and I go underground (you won't see because your falling in the fissure and your fire blocks your sight) ending the fight

(Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach. cant reach.

It was a good fight....until next time

Oh and I don't think being an uchiha make you faster at s fire/wind combo
 
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