[CJ] Noni and Drackos

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(Suiton: Yokoshimana Doroppu) - Water Style: Devious Drop
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user channels their suiton chakra into a water source within mid-range of them. The chakra will target the location where the opponent is standing and treat them as the epicenter for the technique which will cause the water to transform into a prism of syrup, glue-like water. The prism of water will suffocate the target and drag them down if they are unable to escape from it. The size of the prism can vary depending on the decision of the user. Its maximum size can cover up to a 10 meter radius from the epicenter however it can never be more than three meters deep.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: Can only be taught by Drackos

Of course, Mr. Noni. Analyze this and tell me what you think.
 

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o-o lol dude said to analyze, one question can I use this on my own techniques as a combo? Like drown the opponent with stormy blockage then create the prism? that is my only question here is my cj

(Fuuton/Doton: Sekushon Yoku)- Wind/Earth release: Suction Tubes
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will manipulate the ground upfront of them to rise one single tube made of stone and earth. The tube is not more then the size of a regular persons mouth allowing the user to place their mouths on the tube. The user then by stomping their foot on the ground will release up to 10 other tubes all around the users position covering them in a radial manner with the opponent in the center. Each tube once again has an opening no larger then a regular persons mouth and are quite long in size, with the opening of the tubes facing towards the opponent on the side of the of the tubes. Each of the tubes are connected towards the tube that is with the user with a connection underground similar to a pipeline, this is where the air will travel through. The tubes however act only as a medium to supplement the user. The user will then focus wind chakra into their lungs and place their lips on their tube covering it and begins to breath into the one tub (Sucking in the air), but as the user is sucking in the air, a chain reaction occurs where every tube around the opponent will begin to suck in the air (By breathing in) around the opponents area, similar to that of a vacuum effect. This causes the opponent to be restricted completely of movement not allowing them to move whatsoever, and because all angles are sucking the air in, the opponent will feel as if their body is being stretched to the max causing tears in their muscles and tendons as their body is being stretched. With one final gust the user will breathe out and release bullets of wind out of the tubs surrounding the opponent blasting him/her on all directions finishing their body off. This jutsu requires a constant stream of chakra and is very similar to ( Futon: Shinkūdama ) - Wind Release: Vacuum Bullet.

Note: Can only be used three times
Note: Requires Wind to be up to A-Rank
Note: Requires Earth to be up to A-Rank
Note: Counts as two moves in the three jutsu move slot

ask questions (not too many :|)
 

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o-o lol dude said to analyze, one question can I use this on my own techniques as a combo? Like drown the opponent with stormy blockage then create the prism? that is my only question here is my cj

(Fuuton/Doton: Sekushon Yoku)- Wind/Earth release: Suction Tubes
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will manipulate the ground upfront of them to rise one single tube made of stone and earth. The tube is not more then the size of a regular persons mouth allowing the user to place their mouths on the tube. The user then by stomping their foot on the ground will release up to 10 other tubes all around the users position covering them in a radial manner with the opponent in the center. Each tube once again has an opening no larger then a regular persons mouth and are quite long in size, with the opening of the tubes facing towards the opponent on the side of the of the tubes. Each of the tubes are connected towards the tube that is with the user with a connection underground similar to a pipeline, this is where the air will travel through. The tubes however act only as a medium to supplement the user. The user will then focus wind chakra into their lungs and place their lips on their tube covering it and begins to breath into the one tub (Sucking in the air), but as the user is sucking in the air, a chain reaction occurs where every tube around the opponent will begin to suck in the air (By breathing in) around the opponents area, similar to that of a vacuum effect. This causes the opponent to be restricted completely of movement not allowing them to move whatsoever, and because all angles are sucking the air in, the opponent will feel as if their body is being stretched to the max causing tears in their muscles and tendons as their body is being stretched. With one final gust the user will breathe out and release bullets of wind out of the tubs surrounding the opponent blasting him/her on all directions finishing their body off. This jutsu requires a constant stream of chakra and is very similar to ( Futon: Shinkūdama ) - Wind Release: Vacuum Bullet.

Note: Can only be used three times
Note: Requires Wind to be up to A-Rank
Note: Requires Earth to be up to A-Rank
Note: Counts as two moves in the three jutsu move slot

ask questions (not too many :|)
Yes. I created the technique with the intent of being able to chain techniques after it. You simply change the nature of the water to become the sticky glue like water which pulls people down into it. Because it also is disrupting chakra on the water the opponent will lose their footing on the water with their chakra which will pull them down and throw them off balance. If that didn't make sense let me know xD.

So my main question with this is that there are a lot of steps to it. First you gotta back the first tube, then you gotta make the second set of radial tubes, then you gotta use the wind itself. So exactly how much time would you say passes between each step?
 

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The first two steps should not take long at all, movement activation techniques are rather fast. With that being said, since it is considered elemental combo it will take two moves. Making it a lil slow. Best thing to do with it, is a set up or use after pushing an opponent back. As he falls from the sky, erect the pillars and use it, by the time he lands the wind will start to suck the opponent in. Push em back, use clones, I especially like it by using a small mud swamp right under the opponent just to capture their feet then perform the technique. Its bound by your imagination. Boom Boom if that is all we done z,z have fun with it
 

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The first two steps should not take long at all, movement activation techniques are rather fast. With that being said, since it is considered elemental combo it will take two moves. Making it a lil slow. Best thing to do with it, is a set up or use after pushing an opponent back. As he falls from the sky, erect the pillars and use it, by the time he lands the wind will start to suck the opponent in. Push em back, use clones, I especially like it by using a small mud swamp right under the opponent just to capture their feet then perform the technique. Its bound by your imagination. Boom Boom if that is all we done z,z have fun with it
Good doing business with you :3
 
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