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[NaNaNaaaaa]

Rhythm

Breath, a lyrical note, tender on my lips
It urges, fingertips over skin and a vibrating rhythm
Pleading helps
A rise and fall and only to rise again
A blissful horizon and blurry eyes
It licks and warm saliva drips and an exchange of motion and drive
Touch me
It writhes, throbs and begs
All things crescendo
And warm nights turn to sunny shores
And sleepy eyes, repeat once more

I'm not good with titles LOL, the title has no bearing on the poem. Now it has a title

 

[Everztar]

you could always go for "Sasuke sucks" as title, you'll get a lot of reads <3

 

[NaNaNaaaaa]

you could always go for "Sasuke sucks" as title, you'll get a lot of reads <3

I didn't think of that, maybe I will try it next time XD

 

[HashiraMadara SenjUchiha]

you could always go for "Sasuke sucks" as title, you'll get a lot of reads <3

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[God of TryHards]

Is it just me or the last 2 lines are the only lines that rhyme haha

Is it just me or this poem is about guys jacking each other off and giving each other head till they fall asleep haha

 

[Nonomi]

Ignore the silly people who cannot appreciate the poem and be fools about it.
This is nice and warm. Makes me think of Nagats ​

 

[Everztar]

Is it just me or the last 2 lines are the only lines that rhyme haha

Is it just me or this poem is about guys jacking each other off and giving each other head till they fall asleep haha

Philosophical Poems doesn't have to rhyme :3

 

[NaNaNaaaaa]

Is it just me or the last 2 lines are the only lines that rhyme haha

Is it just me or this poem is about guys jacking each other off and giving each other head till they fall asleep haha

Not all poems rhyme, this one is not meant to. And yes it is just you, that is not what this poem is about.

Thank's Diao

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Did you wanted it to be sensual ?

and try to use a line in your poem or something that goes with the purpose of the poem for title .

It's a well written poem