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*I take the two scrolls in one hand and feel how light they are. I then take the chain and wrap it around my arm loosely I transfer a scroll to my other. I then apply chakra to them and unroll them. They unroll on each side of your clone right next to his feet. I apply a some more chakra to summon a mass amount right of weapons that erupt from the scroll with great force, sending the clone into the air. As your clone is sent flying I take the end of the chain in my free hand and throw it with all my strength. The chain is thrown in a way so that it wraps around your clones feet. When the chains wrap around the clones feet i snap the chain sending wave thought the chain that whips the end of the chain smashing your clone into the ground.*
 

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Well done, but two major details you missed.
1. What kinds of weapons came out of the scroll and how did they affect my clone?
2. Where exactly on the ground did you smash my clone?
 

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Blunt weapons like hammers. So that it doesn't just pierce instead it speeds into to him and knocks him into air. The blunt damage would cause bruises and maybe broken bones. I slammed him straight back down onto his back, most likely breaking it.
 

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Keep in mind you don't want the debris or explosion to affect you as well.
(Sōgu: Fūjin Heki) - Manipulated Tools: Floating Blades Wall
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user unrolls in the floor under the enemy two small scrolls and summons many different weapons from them, taking the enemy into the air. Then they wraps the leg of the enemy with a chain and crushes him back down to the ground.
For this next move, you will once again be utilizing a scroll.
Take this scroll I handed you, and wave it in a circle to build momentum. As this happens, insert chakra into the scroll and "release" it, causing a giant, chain hammer to appear. Catch the hammer with your hands, and then strike my clone with it. This move should have instantaneously with no hesitations. It is one, fluid movement.
 

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*I take the scroll and start waving it in a circle. After building up momentum I channel chakra into the scroll turning the scroll into a chain hammer. With the momentum of the hammer i grab it letting it swing as it gets to the side i apply upwards force so that the hammer starts to move at a diagonal. I keep applying upwards pressure till its over my head at this point i apply downwards pressure bringing the hammer straight down on your clones head.*
 

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Good...
(Sōgu: Dai Tekkai) - Manipulated Tools: Giant Iron Lump
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description:The user takes out a big scroll and waves it in a circle. It turns into a giant chain hammer with a huge metal ball at the end that they then crushes the enemy with. After this move, the chain hammer turns back into a scroll.
Proceed to take this scroll and summon a long chain from it. Grab the chain and toss it in such a way so that my clone is completely immobilized, then proceed to open this other scroll to send a bunch of weapons at him.
 

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*I take the chain in one hand and hold the slack in my other. I then throw the chain so that it wraps around your clone constricting him much like a snake constricts its prey. With your clone restricted by the chain. I take a scroll and grab it with both hands. I rip open the scroll inserting some chakra releasing a large amounts of kunais and shurikens and the little scythes. The weapons hit your clone ripping him to pieces.*
 

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Perfect.
(Kuchiyose: Tetsurensa Housou) - Summoning: Iron Chain Wrapping
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
description: The user summons a long chain from a scroll and wraps the enemy with it. When the enemy is trapped, they use another scroll to launch a rain of weapons at the enemy.
Alright, this next jutsu is extremely basic.
I want you to surpress your chakra to the point where your signature can not be detected or felt by me.
Explain why this is important in a battle.
 

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*I take a deep breathe calming my self. I focus on my chakra. With my focus on my chakra i suppress it so that my chakra is detectable.*


If your trying to hide this will make it so your opponent won't be able to sense you.
 

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Good.
(Chakra Yokuatsu no Jutsu) - Chakra Suppression Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: short
Chakra cost: 15 (-10 per turn to keep active)
Damage points: N/A
Description: This ability allows the user to suppress their chakra to the point that it is completely undetectable. This makes it impossible for chakra sensory-type ninja to track them via their chakra signal. However there is some downside to the technique, whilst suppressing their chakra they cannot use any of the ninja skills.
Note: Cannot prevent doujutsu users from detecting them.
Bend down and have a feel for this cement and its qualities, then by surging your earth chakra through you, manipulate the cells of your hand so that it adapts the same material as the cement itself and becomes the cement.
 

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I bend down and pick up a chunk of cement. I feel the cement between my fingers. I turn it over studying it until i have all i need to know. Once I know the properties of the cement i send chakra into my hand. The chakra manipulates my cells. The cells then take on the properties of the cement
 
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