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(Ninpo: Jibaku Fuda: Kassei) - Ninja Art: Exploding Tag: Activate
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: Utilizing chakra, the user is able to activate the explosion mechanism of a distant bomb tag. The exploding tags that the Third Hokage used were different than the usual bomb tags, being yellow in color instead of white with a red border.
 

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This is how I will train you: I will first post the technique and the describe it in my own words, and then state a few sentences about the usefulness of the technique both offensively and defensively. I would like you to respond by by telling me:

- how you would perform the technique in battle
- how you will use the technique offensively
- how you can defend against the tech
- whether or not you find the technique useful or interesting
 

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(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.


The basis of this technique is chakra distribution. Focus your chakra throughout your body and feel the amount of chakra inside of you. Once you feel that you know the total amount of chakra, begin to divide the chakra in half. Once you have found the perfect balance between half of the chakra that will remain in you and the half that will be released, perform the single seal and release half of your chakra out of your body at once. Shape the chakra into your image and mold the chakra to have a physical appearance. The clone should look exactly like you, if it is deformed it means there is no balance in the distribution. Offensively and defensively the allows you to defend against several attacks or attack several times at once. One physical blow to the clone will cause it to time out. One of the most useful techniques in the entire RP. If used wisely it is a game changer.


( Gen'ei Tajū Shuriken ) - Multiple Phantom Shuriken
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing the shadow clone technique the user and the two clones perform the Dog → Rabbit → Monkey → Clap Hands and they throw several shuriken which multiply and attack the opponent.
Note: Requires two shadow clones before use.


Now perform the shadow clone jutsu. Perform the hand seals while focusing small amounts of chakra into the shuriken you are holding in your hand. You notice that this technique requires you to have clones already and requires 4 hand seals. It is basic the multiplication of other objects requires more focus that yourself. Throw the shuriken and then divide the chakra you put into the shuriken into equal amounts. Cut the chakra in these equal amounts to separate parts and move to chakra out, once you move it out of the shuriken shape the chakra into the very shape of the shuriken and give the chakra physical characteristics. This technique can be used to defend unless someone is running at you, and offensive again not really offensive unless someone is running at you. To defend against it there are several ways, state a few. I feel it's simple enough that I don't want to take away from your responses.
 

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I start gathering all chakra of my body in one spot just to measure my own capacity then I manipulate my chakra and keep half of it in my body while the other half is taken out of my body after performing the handseal of course and by using shape manipulation I shape this chakra as an identical copy of me with the same height, weight and physical appearance and giving it a touchable body made of 100% chakra.




after I perform the required handseal and create a clone I start gathering some suiton chakra. at the same time the clone was performing the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals, I slammed my hands on the ground making massive amount of water to fall at your clone from 10 meters from the sky and my clone finishes the handseals and makes 4 pillars of earth to rise around him then shoots many thunder bolts at the soaked clone making him disappear after getting hit with water/lightning combo.

(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Stormy Blockade
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will slam their hands against then ground allowing him/her to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.

(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals, he releases his lightning chakra into the ground, using it to forcefully shape the earth into 4 big pillars (proportionate to the target area) around the target. Once they rise, they unleash a barrage of lightning bolts, currents and shocks to whatever is inside, paralyzing, shocking and damaging the target from all around.

other than helping me to do combos more effectively as you saw, clones' experiences, memories, Intelligences and even daydreams
will return to my mind once they disappear as shown in the manga and anime.
the clones can also be used as good decoys as they look identical to the user unless the opponent can use doujutsu or other means to distinguish a clone from non-clone. they're are also good shields and training dummies o-o
they're also good as a combo-partner coz they can use all jutsus I can use without restrictions




since this technique isn't a direct offense technique, it would be best to be careful not to fall for opponent's trap using a clone or more and to kill a clone or group of clones it would be better to use multi-target or wide ranged techniques to kill many of them in the same time.

This technique is very good, interesting and useful and will be used in future of course.




I'm posting this for clone jutsu for now so i can hear your opinion on it before I proceed to the other jutsu, I just hope you don't mind O_O
 

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Pretty vague here, can you elaborate on why it is "very good, interesting and useful..."?
very good because it's the main technique of the main character in the series O__O'
interesting coz I can use it in many ways to help me in battles,strategies, etc.
useful coz I can use a clone to help me in a combo, act as a human shield, deliver info without the real me getting in any dangerous situations, look at left and right at the same time (this line carries a lot of meanings in it), or fool the opponent.
 

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I start by creating two shadow clones of myself, and the three of us perform the Dog → Rabbit → Monkey → Clap Hands and take out shurikens and gather chakra into them while throwing them. once thrown, we cut the chakra gathered into the shurikens into equal parts then use this chakra to make physical copies of the shurikens, shadow clones of the shurikens to be exact.




after I create two clones of myself, your clone started running towards me from mid-range. Me and myself and I perform the Dog → Rabbit → Monkey → Clap Hands, take out 3 shurikens per person and throw them at your clone. Once thrown, we use the chakra we gathered in our shurikens to make shadow clones of the shurikens and multiply the number 7 times (3x3x7=63) so it would 21 shurikens thrown per person and 63 shurikens in total. the shurikens cover wide area and would leave no gap for your clone to escape through.




my steel bio can easily counter this jutsu by using impervious armor to harden my whole body with steel so no shuriken would harm me.

(Kōton: Mukankaku no Yoroi) - Steel Release: Impervious Armour
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This Technique allows the user to turn part their body into black steel, making that part of their body invulnerable to most weapons and taijutsu attacks. But due to its metal properties it leaves the user vulnerable to lightning based techniques.
Note: Can only render Taijutsu Techniques A rank and below useless.

any normal bio can counter this jutsu by making a wall of earth in front of him/her using moving earth core jutsu which is a fast jutsu which requires the user just to slam their hands on ground.

(Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user slams his hands on the ground and lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tall creating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.




ok, shurikens aren't either useful or interesting. and the jutsu also requires having two shadow clones on field which means the probability of me using this jutsu is about 43%
 

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Shuriken are useful, like all ninja tools. If someone can fail a battle test by not countering a kunai, they sure can fail one by not countering a shuriken as well.




Summarise what you know of the Summoning jutsu and it's many and varied uses in and out of battle.

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu) - Summoning Technique
Rank: B
Type: Defense/Attack/Suplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description:
To summon the creature the ninja will wipe blood on his hand, perform the Boar → Dog → Bird → Monkey → Ram handseals and then touch the ground or another object, where a sealing formula will appear. Though it appears that as long as significant pressure is placed against the blood in some form, the summon will be complete, most summoning uses use a solid surface, though in some cases it can even be done mid air. There can be variations to the summoning steps, some ninja like Temari will wipe blood on her fan, then by swinging the fan the animal is summoned. Other ninja like Orochimaru wipe the blood across a snake tattoo on their arm first, then touch the ground. Others will clap their hands directly like Nagato through the use of his Animal Path. The user must have signed the contract with the creature he wants to summon but the technique can be used to summon a generic creature of that contract (B-Rank) which will have no special traits or abilities beyond those normal to the rest of the animals in the contract. The animal is always summoned on the mark that appears upon slamming the users hand or, if not the case, always in short range of the user.
 

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Summoning jutsu or Kuchiyose no Jutsu is a space/time jutsu used to summon animals (the most common thing), weapons, and other humans. to summon animals one must sign the contract that it ties those animals with humans. However, in our RP we can only have a maximum of two contracts signed at time. for me I have signed the kingfishers contract made by a certain bug <__< and locusts contract made by Ushiro. there's a thing must be done to have a successful summoning jutsu, the blood sacrifice. A ninja must sacrifice some of his blood, by which he signed the contract, to summon the animal tied to that contract. people have different ways to summon things. After weaving the handseals, Normal people draw a line with their blood on their palm and slam this palm on the ground. certain people (for example, orochimaru) draw a line of blood on their summoning tattoo then slam their palm on the ground to summon their animal.
 

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Summoning is not only related to animals, but can be extended to summoning weapons; different from releasing a sealed weapon... there is a fine line between summoning and un-sealing something... but now I'm getting off track O__O'

Now for some summoning related jutsu...

(Kuchiyose: Aian Meiden) - Summoning: Iron Maiden
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the needed hand seal the user summons a giant Iron maneki neko, which appears beneath the opponent from underground, split down the middle. The statue then closes in on the opponent trapping them inside and wrapped around with iron chains and then dragged underground.

So... the jutsu says it all. I assume you'd like to summon a giant metal Kitty xD Just to note, this is done through seals, not a summoning scroll.

Ibiki used this in the Anime, can't recall seeing it in the manga though...
*Checks Wikia and grabs a picture*
So it's an anime only jutsu O__O'
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(Kuchiyose: Rashōmon) - Summoning Technique: Rashōmon
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This summoning creates a demonic form of the main gate of old Kyoto, which is capable of blocking almost any attack. The Rashomon stands tall and wide covering a range of about 10 meters in width and height.
Note: This technique can only block B rank and below.

Sakon and Ukon used this jutsu against Kiba in the Sasuke retrieval arc.
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The face covers an area roughly mid-range, which to me is 6-15 meters; however this gate is only 10x10 meters hight/wide. It plays neutral to all elemental jutsu, blocking B-rank and lower. Of course, non-chakra based taijutsu of A-rank won't break it down in my opinion.

This is a summoning, not a scroll based summon.

(Kuchiyose: Tetsuengo Kabe) -Summoning: Iron Protection Wall
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user summons a large iron dome from one of their scrolls that covers themselves and even their teammates from enemies' attacks.
Note: Can only defend against B rank and down but doesnt block techniques directed from beneath.

This jutsu is summoned via use of a scroll (so technically a fuuin, however in the RP, it is usable by anyone). Similar protection to the Rashomon, but can cover you and some team mates on all-sides, except from below.
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So, analyse all of these, give me your thoughts on them (usefulness, weaknesses, strengths etc) and anything else you wish to add.
 

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Minato teleports instantly into the training field, finding his student waiting for him there. Minato is wearing his standard Jōnin attire, as he approaches his student, he addresses him saying: Hello! I'm known as Minato, and I will be continuing your ninjutsu training from here on out.

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[B][I]Technique Description:[/B][/]

[B][I]Advantages:[/B][/I]

[B][I]Disadvantages:[/B][/I]

[B][I]Apply Usage of The Technique:[/B][/I]

[B][I]Optimal Timing To Use The Technique:[/B][/I]

[B][I]Questions:[/B][/I]
Following this template, I want you to post the technique, then carefully analyze and extract at least two advantages, disadvantages of the technique and so on, for an example I'll use the template now to explain how this works.

Example:

Technique Description:

(Rasengan) - Spiral Sphere
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Rasengan was a Ninjutsu technique developed over the span of three years by the Fourth Hokage, Namikaze Minato. The technique was taught to his sensei, Jiraiya, who then passed it on to Minato's young son, Naruto, years later. The technique is unlike many other jutsu in that it does not require any hand seals. It just relied on the ninja's ability to mold chakra. The ninja concentrates a contained, fast, rotating sphere of chakra in the palm of their hand, which can create a destructive impact.

Advantages:

1. Fast execution due to being simply a shape manipulation based technique

2. Rotation speed can be combined with water to make spinning-like water formations like vortexes if used with the ideal technique. And also making it on par with equal ranked elemental techniques within reason, like the chidori.

3. No handseals required.

Disadvantages

1. Short ranged reach, basically taijutsu range, and having to physically ram the opponent with it at point blank range which might put oneself in a disadvantage if the opponent is better in close ranged combat

2. Inability to guard against against large scaled techniques like fire streams and water waves.

3. Being small sized would translate it to be easily avoidable by the opponent.

Apply Usage of The Technique: With my right palm open and facing upwards, I draw a moderate amount of chairs into my right palm while at the same time holding my wrist to increase the shape manipulation accuracy, slowly forming the chakra into a miniture circular cyclone shape of furiously rotating chakra, then I run towards a training doll to slam the Rasengan into it, from point blank range aimed at the center of its chest area. With its overwhelming power, the Rasengan goes through the wooden doll smoothly with a drilling motion, making a large circular hole into its chest.

Optimal Timing to Use The Technique: When being in close proximity to the opponent, or guarding against small sized techniques in a short amount of time

Questions: Obviously I'm not gonna ask myself anything >_>

Okay, now that you have seen how to use the template, I want you to do the same with the techniques Shinta-Sensei has posted, I'll be doing two techniques per post. What I will do is that I will post the technique and explain it to you, then you gotta use the template to explain it further and then I will review it and correct any misconceptions. Note that the "Questions" part of the template isn't restricted to the technique itself but rather any questions you might have about the ninjutsu field. Now ready?! Get set! Go!!!
 
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*you make a massive amount of shadow clones as training dummies*

Technique Description:[/]

(Kuchiyose: Aian Meiden) - Summoning: Iron Maiden
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the needed hand seal the user summons a giant Iron maneki neko, which appears beneath the opponent from underground, split down the middle. The statue then closes in on the opponent trapping them inside and wrapped around with iron chains and then dragged underground.

Advantages:

(from the wiki again) The iron maiden is a coffin-like torture device with sharp spikes lining the inside. A victim is forced to stand straight up inside until they can no longer support themselves, at which point they are forced to lean forward or backward onto the spines, resulting in a slow and painful death.

Disadvantages:

1- Requires a series of four handseals
2- short ranged

Apply Usage of The Technique:

I start gathering my chakra in the ground around your clone while I'm performing the Boar → Dog → Bird → Tiger handseals (got them from the wikia).. as I finish performing the handseal I release the gathered chakra and use it to summon two metallic structures that traps your clone the same way a venus fly trap does to a fly. the two metallic structure encloses on your clone shaped as a giant metallic neko statue, hollowed from inside to keep the target clone in. using my chakra again, I summon steel chains that wraps the statue and pushes it into underground.

Optimal Timing To Use The Technique:

It's best to use it on an immobilized opponent, an opponent in pinch to make them in a worse situation.

Questions:

Can the statue hold more than one opponent inside it?
I am allowed to use it to hide precious things (treasures, high-bounty heads, kages, hostages, scrolls) in it underground, right? (re-phrase the question so it becomes: can I alter the uses of the jutsu up to my imagination?)




Technique Description:[/]

(Kuchiyose: Rashōmon) - Summoning Technique: Rashōmon
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This summoning creates a demonic form of the main gate of old Kyoto, which is capable of blocking almost any attack. The Rashomon stands tall and wide covering a range of about 10 meters in width and height.
Note: This technique can only block B rank and below.

Advantages:

1- No handseals required. just the blood sacrifice and stamping the palm on the ground oh, wait, Wikia says it requires performing a single snake handseal which is still an advantage.
2- the big size of the gate provide protection for both the user and the allies nearby

Disadvantages:

1- Short ranged, can't be summoned to protect distant allies from coming attacks
2- the big size of the gate blocks the vision of the user which can be used by the opponent to set a trap or make a move
3- in the anime/manga, the jutsu would be an obstruction to anyone. However, in our RP, people would easily post an A-ranked jutsu to destroy the gate -_-

Apply Usage of The Technique:

I start gathering great amount of chakra in the ground in front of me as i perform the snake handseal. After performing the handseal I release the gathered chakra and use it to summon a big 10mx10m gate that resembles the old gate of Myiako Kyoto with a demonic face on it.

Optimal Timing To Use The Technique:

obviously, the best time for using a defensive jutsu is when the opponent is attacking but the size of this gate makes me use it only when the offensive jutsu used by the opponent is wide ranged so I can take full advantage of the size

Questions: N/A




Technique Description:[/]

(Kuchiyose: Tetsuengo Kabe) -Summoning: Iron Protection Wall
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user summons a large iron dome from one of their scrolls that covers themselves and even their teammates from enemies' attacks.
Note: Can only defend against B rank and down but doesnt block techniques directed from beneath.

Advantages:

1- didn't find anything about it in wikia so I'll say that it doesn't require any handseals as nothing stated otherwise
2- can be used to protect both me and teammates

Disadvantages:

1- leaves the user and the people under it open for attacks from beneath and beneath the beneath
2- it's made of iron and B-ranked, so any noob with C-rank raiton training can easily destroy it and even get anyone of the people under it shocked if they were touching it.
3- add to that the same disadvantage of the RP mentioned in the Rashomon

Apply Usage of The Technique:

I perform the blood sacrifice by cutting my thumb and drawing a line of blood on the scroll that summons the iron thingy. on drawing the blood line, I use my chakra to summon the iron dome thingy or whatever and hide under it

Optimal Timing To Use The Technique:

it's best to use it when the opponent uses a jutsu to attack from above. the B-ranked stormy blockade water jutsu for example. this excludes all the lightning jutsus that comes from upward of course :3
can also be used to protect from ninja tools barrages, explosive tags and kunais.

Questions:

how does this jutsu look like? I couldn't find any info about it in the wikia.
 
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