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Prologue:


Chapter one The new students

A eight years after the war the ninja academy in the hidden Leaf was about to surprise one lucky team of genin with Naruto as their sensei. The entire class had passed the test Iruka had given them.

Iruka: Congrulation to every one you all passed the final exam
the entire class cheers.
Iruka: Each of you will be selected for a team based on skill and what you will bring to the team. As soon as Lee returns from the Hokage office I will announce which team every one is on.
Shinamura: Shikaku came up with the plan and all around help the alliance defeat the ten tails even if it ended up costing him his life. He defiantly is a true shinobi.
Shinamura is Sai son. Sai ended up marrying Ino. Ino is Shinamura mother.
Neji: No a true shinobi cares for his comrades first and strives to protect them. A true does not hide.
Neji is Sasuke and Sakura's son. They name him Neji to honor Hinata's cousin Neji who died during the war. Neji and Shinamura are great friends and are learning some of their parents techniques.
Shinamura: He never ran from the fight. His job was to come up with the tactics for the Alliance.
Lee enters the room and give Iruka three sheets of paper and leave
Iruka: Would you two be quiet I am about to give you your team assignments.
Shinamura, Neji spoke together: Sorry sensei.
Iruka: Team 1 will be led by Choji Akimichi. These are his students three names. Team 2 will be led by Kiba Inuzuka. These are his students three names. Team 3 will be led by Rock Lee and these are his students three names. Team 4 will be led by Shikamaru Nara and these are his students three names. Team 5 will be led by Ten Ten. These are here students three names. Team 6 will be led by Sasuke Uchiha and these are his students three names. Team seven will be Neji, Shinamura, and Kushina.
Iruka: Their sensei will be Naruto Uzumaki.
Iruka: Now go greet your senseis and word of warning your late.

Every student leaves to go greet their students. Kushina is annoyed that she is stuck in a group of two guys. She is completely annoyed that her father is leading the squad.

Naruto: You three are late.
silently to himself Naruto thinks great my daughter is on this squad.
All three replied: Sorry sensei.
Naruto: You will all come here tomorrow for a proper greeting to each other and your final test.

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wow this kinda cool id rather have naruto get a son tho idk why but imagine another little naruto messing with bigger naruto lol
 
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Pretty interesting, but for some reason i dont feel the characters personality....
 

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Prologue:


Chapter one The new students

A eight years after the war the ninja academy in the hidden Leaf was about to surprise one lucky team of genin with Naruto as their sensei. The entire class had passed the test Iruka had given them.

Iruka: Congrulation to every one you all passed the final exam
the entire class cheers.
Iruka: Each of you will be selected for a team based on skill and what you will bring to the team. As soon as Lee returns from the Hokage office I will announce which team every one is on.
Shinamura: Shikaku came up with the plan and all around help the alliance defeat the ten tails even if it ended up costing him his life. He defiantly is a true shinobi.
Shinamura is Sai son. Sai ended up marrying Ino. Ino is Shinamura mother.
Neji: No a true shinobi cares for his comrades first and strives to protect them. A true does not hide.
Neji is Sasuke and Sakura's son. They name him Neji to honor Hinata's cousin Neji who died during the war. Neji and Shinamura are great friends and are learning some of their parents techniques.
Shinamura: He never ran from the fight. His job was to come up with the tactics for the Alliance.
Lee enters the room and give Iruka three sheets of paper and leave
Iruka: Would you two be quiet I am about to give you your team assignments.
Shinamura, Neji spoke together: Sorry sensei.
Iruka: Team 1 will be led by Choji Akimichi. These are his students three names. Team 2 will be led by Kiba Inuzuka. These are his students three names. Team 3 will be led by Rock Lee and these are his students three names. Team 4 will be led by Shikamaru Nara and these are his students three names. Team 5 will be led by Ten Ten. These are here students three names. Team 6 will be led by Sasuke Uchiha and these are his students three names. Team seven will be Neji, Shinamura, and Kushina.
Iruka: Their sensei will be Naruto Uzumaki.
Iruka: Now go greet your senseis and word of warning your late.

Every student leaves to go greet their students. Kushina is annoyed that she is stuck in a group of two guys. She is completely annoyed that her father is leading the squad.

Naruto: You three are late.
silently to himself Naruto thinks great my daughter is on this squad.
All three replied: Sorry sensei.
Naruto: You will all come here tomorrow for a proper greeting to each other and your final test.

you mean thread
 

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Very nice, hope you make more or Kishi does a new Naruto series like this :)
 

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Nice background of the story.

I just expect more details etc about the characters, and as well more details in their 'communications' :)

So keep it up! ^^
 

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The next one will be up as soon as I accurately set the proper sence of Naruto telling hinata the test and trying to keep it a secret from his daughter
 

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Sorry about the detail and personalities forgot to truly create those but those will be in the next chapter
 

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Bro awesome... i felt happy reading this nice job
 

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Cool, very cool. I love next generation Naruto FFs. I can't wait to see what these genin are like. Personality-wise and ability-wise.
 

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impressive work. mark a true genious
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