New song I made!

[UchihaMifune]

A new song that I just finished up with my homeboy Nicky Budz. Give it a peep and let me know what you guys think!
Nicky's got the first verse, I'm on the second.

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[Lord Old Moldy Butt]

It's actually not bad! I have a ton of music production major friends and in a band so we talk about music all the time. Try making that jazz oowap background a little different I think its missing something maybe triplets and never be afraid to revese the instruments they could sound awesome!. Also I think in this song your not implementing both talents of rap and jazz into it. They are very distinguishable but your only giving rap, the characteristics. Jazz is all about dynamics and rhythm. Use that to your advantage, let the trumpet be the drums sometimes and let it drive.

 

[Nundo]

Raise the volume of the instrumental, that's all, I like it

 

[Desanto]

Its a good, sorta average.. I agree with everyone else though, raise the beat and work a little on the flow. I liked your first rap better but this one isnt bad.. I just think the first guy out-shined you a little. NG would love your flow, you guys rap alot alike Lol