New poem

[Yuse]

tell me what you think

its titled My sharingan has awakened



my eyes sorrow with tears of blood
which means my sharingan has awakened and my rampage has begun
with my sharingan to me you are nothing but flies
with my sharingan i am able to see through all your lies
before you are dead the last color you will see is my sharingans dark red
if i use izangai i may go blind but i wont mind as long as i have the chance to rewind your death over and over again because we are uchiha in this cruel world its either kill or be killed sadness and pain that is what our destiny is instilled with

 

[Glovoc]

One word, Beautiful.

 

[Faceplant911]

I like it. it's got some real meaning and some actual rhyming.

 

[Yuse]

thanks alot i appreciate it

 

[Jewjitsu]

Very good.
+ rep

 

[SayWhat21]

good job i like it

 

[ems susanoo]

Good job. .

 

[Arian]

in front of my eyes there is nothing you can hide
for i am Itachi Uchiha, my vision is wide
i am one of konohas heroes, hiding in the dark
attending a dark organisation, teamed up with a shark

i watch over my beloved village, where my brother lives
i do what is necessary, considering all "buts" and "ifs"
going as far as to kill all of my own clan
under the circumstance to spare but one little man

my beloved little brother, who should be the future hero
i will make him kill me, to bring our clans sins to zero
as the master of illusion, i am second to but one
shisui my best friend, who rather died, though he could have won

in front of my eyes, no one can stand
as there is no attack they could land
for i have the yata mirror, an ultimate defense
as well as the totsuka blade, my strongest offense

it is my responsibility, to save our clans name
to makee sure i was the only one to blame
so that our village could live without war
so that i was the only one getting a deep scar

eating me up inside out with unbearable pain
i made sure all the powers i have my brother would gain
so that one day he could be safe when im gone
only then will my lifes task be done

its true, i wished for another life
i wished for friends, kids and a wife
but my fate was destined to be another
for i had to protect my only brother

i hope until his death he never finds out
what my whole life and the uchiha where about
i want him to live happily without any pain
i hope all my actions are not in vain

now it doesnt matter, as im about to die
i only wished i could tell him before i lie
that no matter what happens, we're always together
and that i will love him always and forever....

</3 T__T

 

[Nigerianswagpapi]

#deep #demfeels

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

:heh: good one .