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Sorry everyone I have been delayed for a while, but I was bussy, here is the new chapter, I hope everyone still wants to read and comment on it :D

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New Generation


Revealed

As the mysterious man was looking up into the darkness, while he was met by millions of lights shining in the distance, while the wind was blowing through his hair as the hood fell down and he could smell the fresh air and hear all the beautiful sounds of the frogs in the forest. The three students were sitting in the light of the mysterious man’s fire while their sensei was stunned by the mere sight of the person standing before him in the dark.

As the hood revealed his old face, with long spiky hair tied back in a ponytail, his headband showed an old sign that only one person in Konoha knew about. While the cloak completely revealed his body, as he was wearing green pants with a matching shirt, with a simple black belt and a red cloak with two simple yellow circles. He wears wooden sandals, has mesh armor showing out of his outfit and has hand guards and a huge scroll on his back.

Mante: “Are you freaking kidding me!!!”

Yashi: “What is it sensei…. who is this man..”

Mante slowly walked over to the mysterious man as he put his hand on his shoulder, while he smiled to the one he had heard so much about from the hokage. He just stood there for a moment as he couldn’t believe what he saw.

Mante: “It really is you… Jiraiya.. The Gallant…”

Jiraiya: “hahaha…. Yes let me introduce myself…”

Jiraiya jumped backwards landing on one foot, while doing his legendary pose with one hand out in front of him while jumping to the side a few times, smiling to the audience.

Jiraiya: “I am Myouboku Mountain’s Monk of the Frog Spirits, also known as the Frog Hermit, Jiraiya the Gallant!!”

Right as he finished his pose, and was about to put down his leg, suddenly a small frog came flying sending a fist straight into his chin, smashing him into the ground without giving any warning, while Jiraiya was pushed into the ground he just looked at the toad in pain.

???: “I told you not… to leave Mount Myouboku…”

Jiraiya: “Argh!! I wanted to see Konoha… especially my old student…”

The three students slowly stood up, as they understood, that the mysterious man who had just revealed himself, was actually an ally of the Hidden Leaf village. They walked over to their sensei as they stood looking at the man who called himself Jiraiya.

Ginjiro: “What are you talking about…. who is your student…”

Jiraiya stood there for a moment, while thinking and looking into the dark forest as he looked back at Ginjiro and put his hand on his shoulder.

Jiraiya: “My former student is… the current Hokage of the Hidden Leaf…”

3 students: “WHAT!!!”

Jiraiya: “Relax… he doesn’t know I’m alive…”

Akira: “What do you mean he doesn’t know you’re alive…”

Mante: “It’s because… Jiraiya was said to be killed by another shinobi… long ago…”

Jiraiya looked around, as he sat down on top of a small rock, while getting into a meditating stance, while looking into the sky. The wind was no longer blowing, the trees were silenced, and the only thing you could hear was the frogs in the distance and the small toad sitting next to Jiraiya.

Jiraiya: “I will tell you my story…”

*Scene skip*

As the students and their teacher was listening to the legendary shinobi, a mysterious man was approaching the Hidden Leaf, through the same forest where there previously had been committed a murder by another powerful shinobi.

???: “I have finally returned… I will crush all of them…”

While the mysterious man was walking down the dark path towards Konoha, the other shinobi who had just been there not long ago, was sitting on a rock not far from there, relaxing and waiting for the right moment to appear before the person he was seeking.


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Created by JiraiyaEroSennin & Uffe0365​
 

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omg!!! i can't believe my favorite toad sage is still alive!! my happiness has been revived and the want to learn sage techniques is rekindled!!
 

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This was really good, I like your imagery. What I liked best was how great you did Jiraiya, the whole chapter seem like it was taken straight out of the actual manga, great job.
 

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I see everyone is happy that Jiraiya is alive......

Though this is just the beginning.. just wait and see all the other surprises there will be in the following chapters....
 
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