Umm this is my bio it's my friend one so any tips would be great 
Basic Information
Name: Aisho Narekame
Nickname:Ai
Gender: Male
Age:13
Clan: None
Looks: 5 foot 11 inches tall. 143 pounds. Close cropped brown hair, parting around face. Wears a gray tee-shirt and green shorts, with shuriken holster on right leg. Right handed, with scar on hand from kunai incident at academy. Also carries item pouch on left back side. His eye brows are close together and his eyes are fairly far apart. His lips are fat and his nose is curved upward slightly, a little bit like a pug dog.
Personality: Shy, keeps to himself. Speaks to people only when spoken to, and even then it's short, meek sentences. Ignores other people his age, except his teammates, Zenku(male) and Amaya(female). Whenever people talk about parents he storms off and hides, unless he's with Zenku, Amaya, or his grandmother(before she died).
Village Info.
Village of Birth:Konoha
Village of Alliance:
Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank:Genin
Specialty:
Elements: Suiton
Your ninjutsu:
Background Info.
History: Aisho never had any parents, they were ninja, and a few months after his birth they were sent on a mission and never returned. He was raised by his grandmother, and never had a strong male role model in his life. This tends to make standing up for himself/others hard for him, especially around girls from the academy.
His grandmother died in the Suna/Oto attack on the Leaf, which was when he was only 7. He's been basically alone since, with a few chuunin/jounin bonding with him. When he fights for his teammates lives(since he is really the most skilled of the three) he fights with a burning passion that makes him more confident and concentrated. He graduated at the age of 11, a few days before his birthday.
Other:
Picture:
Theme Song and Background Music:
Battles: 0
Won: 0
Lost:0
~Approved~
Basic Information
Name: Aisho Narekame
Nickname:Ai
Gender: Male
Age:13
Clan: None
Looks: 5 foot 11 inches tall. 143 pounds. Close cropped brown hair, parting around face. Wears a gray tee-shirt and green shorts, with shuriken holster on right leg. Right handed, with scar on hand from kunai incident at academy. Also carries item pouch on left back side. His eye brows are close together and his eyes are fairly far apart. His lips are fat and his nose is curved upward slightly, a little bit like a pug dog.
Personality: Shy, keeps to himself. Speaks to people only when spoken to, and even then it's short, meek sentences. Ignores other people his age, except his teammates, Zenku(male) and Amaya(female). Whenever people talk about parents he storms off and hides, unless he's with Zenku, Amaya, or his grandmother(before she died).
Village Info.
Village of Birth:Konoha
Village of Alliance:
Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank:Genin
Specialty:
Elements: Suiton
Your ninjutsu:
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
Background Info.
History: Aisho never had any parents, they were ninja, and a few months after his birth they were sent on a mission and never returned. He was raised by his grandmother, and never had a strong male role model in his life. This tends to make standing up for himself/others hard for him, especially around girls from the academy.
His grandmother died in the Suna/Oto attack on the Leaf, which was when he was only 7. He's been basically alone since, with a few chuunin/jounin bonding with him. When he fights for his teammates lives(since he is really the most skilled of the three) he fights with a burning passion that makes him more confident and concentrated. He graduated at the age of 11, a few days before his birthday.
Other:
Picture
Theme Song and Background Music:
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Battle music.Battles: 0
Won: 0
Lost:0
~Approved~
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