[Approved] New Bio: Victorique de Blois

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Basic Information

Name: Victorique de Blois
Nickname: Gray Wolf (haiiro ookami), Golden Fairy in the Library, Monster Charmant
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Clan: N/A

Looks:
Victorique is a small (5'0"), almost doll-like girl with long blonde hair and emerald eyes. However, she possesses a voice and articulation in speaking that makes her sound like a matured woman, and typical tsundere. Despite being a student in the Konoha Academy, she usually wears a black Victorian dress which is full of lace and frills.
Another important part of Victorique's appearance is that she sometimes appears to be smoking a white ceramic pipe that she uses when thinking (a la Sherlock Holmes).


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Personality:
Along with her sharp tongue, abusive bluntness and eccentric attitude, she possesses amazing detective skills, which she usually describes as "reconstructing the fragments of chaos using (her) wellspring of wisdom". This, however, does not discount the fact that she can also possess a personality of a typical girl of her age: childish, overly curious and fond of sweets.

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Village Info

Village of Birth: Konohagakure
Village of Alliance: Konohagakure

Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank: Chuunin
Specialty: None
Elements: Wind (needs training)
Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info

History:
Victorique was raised in the ourskirts of Konoha in a place which her family had a big mansion. Her father being a very strict man didn't allow her to become friends with other people and so she's been living her childhood without anyone beside her family. Her father also wants to take advantage of her by giving her much knowledge from childhood and so she's been exposed to reading materials ever since she was very young. That is so the father would us her intelligence for "storms" (War).
Victorique's mother is rather calm and she also has a brother who sometimes care for her but some other times despite and ignore her existence.

When she turned 13, Victorique was sent by her father to the academy of Konoha in order to make her more useful for himself. However, the young girl found it as an opportunity to become a great shinobi for her own benefit and see the outsider world by herself.

Now she has passed the academy with a brilliant score and is now looking forward to get started with some more serious training.

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Battles

Won:0
Lost:0


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I like it although it could use more pictures. I wish you good luck in the rp and if you ever have any questions you can always ask and we can help you.

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I like it although it could use more pictures. I wish you good luck in the rp and if you ever have any questions you can always ask and we can help you.

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Thank you. ok anytime *_*

Not bad for a first bio but you should add more history and personality.
Its ok to edit it?? don't know that :) but the info of her is to short, not enough (well someone help me for that) thanks anyway.
 

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Thank you. ok anytime *_*
No problem. ^__^

Its ok to edit it?? don't know that :) but the info of her is to short, not enough (well someone help me for that) thanks anyway.
Just explain through your own words about her birth, growing up, and friends or family she was close to, any people in her life that inspired her, and why or how she came to the conclusion that she wanted to be a shinobi. Usually it is because of a parental figure or a person they deem a hero. It's kinda like writing a mini-story. You want to give as much detail as you can. That way it makes her whole experience that much more richer and you will feel more involved in the RP and feel it is more that post x-y-z jutsu and win. There are encounters and journeys your character will take and people they will meet along the way that helps shape who they are. It may seem dull to you but that is what RP is all about.

Most people I know like to base their RP persona on themselves. It is quite fun and you get to know a lot about a person. But that is just my opinion/advice. Enjoy the Rp as soon as you get your bio approved and if ever there are any questions you have don't hesitate to vm/pm me.

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The history is pretty much fine... But is this bio really finished? Other, Music and Battles sections are completely empty.
You should add a song you like, put 0 - 0 in battles, and in Other, you should give her a weapon or the such.
 

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How about that minna? lol

The history is pretty much fine... But is this bio really finished? Other, Music and Battles sections are completely empty.
You should add a song you like, put 0 - 0 in battles, and in Other, you should give her a weapon or the such.
But my sensei said that I shouldn't put. :Omg:
 
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