Demonster99
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Hey guys miss me? Sure you did. Read all your comments and loved each and everyone of em and am also considering a few things. Prepare for some serious wow's in my future chapters as I reveal Naruto's story . As for the figure you'll just have to wait and see. . . Oh and you guys know what's next, ON WITH THE REPLIES *GUY SENSEI STYLE*Footster26: Yay! But then again Naruto isn't plural man. . . .
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keep guessing though wait and see Orggma: Oh you make a good point, I'll try to make your dreams come true
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CHAPTER#4
IMPROVEMENT
He couldn't breath, couldn't even hear a thing as the noises just got louder. He slowly tried to get up to his feet and saw Sasuke doing the same. Both were literally so beaten up that they could barely stand, but the odd thing was that they both had a common enemy.
"I must say I am surprised, you two are very persistent" said a dark voice from above them as a figure wearing a mask, a long cape, a sigth, looked at the pair with glee. His sharingan and Rinegan looked as deadly as ever. Naruto slowly got up to his feet and so did Sasuke.
"My my, how you two have changed the course of history, It's quiet amusing. Two entities the hatred and will, fighting together" said Madara as he stood back some feet away.
"My hatred is what guides me, It's all that I have left, but how blind and thoughtless I was. I directed my hatred at the wrong people, It was meant for YOU!" yelled Sasuke as he charged up his chidori in both hands & combined the two.
"My will, this will kept me going. Helped me to improve my limits beyond an ordinary ninja. Helped me in protecting my family, my friends, my loved ones, also helped me in putting an end to *******S like YOU!" yelled Naruto as he took the last remaining portion of the Kyuubi's chakra and only his right hand had been enveloped by it, he created a Rasengan(White on the inside and Golden on the outside)without using any clones and stood beside Sasuke.
"THIS ENDS HERE MADARA!" they both yelled as they came running up to him, Madara as cocky as he was just looked on and dodged both attacks, but then realised his horrible mistake as the teens transformed their technique into something...unique. He looked around in complete horror as they doubled back and yelled RASENDORI!
Naruto awoke with a thud on the floor,"damn it" he said as he slowly got up and looked around, 'these nightmares are gonna kill me one day' he thought as he looked at the clock It was near 11am His quaters was much like his room, hell it looked EXACTLY like it only bigger. 'I can't believe I used to live like this' he thought as he got up picked up his blanket and neatly packed it up. After freshing up a little there was only one thing on Naruto's mind,'OSS It's time for some Ichiraku Ramen!' he thought with a fox like grin and jumped out the window.
He reached the Ichiraku Ramen shop and came in "Yo old man, one miso ramen with extra meat please" he said as Teuchi came into view "Okay okay you dont have to-" he stopped in mid sentence when he saw, Naruto. . . And said "well well well look who's back! I heard rumors but wouldn't believe em since you never came here Naruto". Naruto just smiled and rubbed the back of his head. "Oye Ayame looked who dropped in" said Teuchi as he called for his daughter. "Dad If you tried to set me up with another boy I swear I'll-"her jaw dropped. She looked at the person sitting in front of her, so handsome, such beautiful hair, cute smile, blue eyes. . . wait blue eyes!
"Naruto? is that you?" she asked in complete surprise as she stared at the hunk in front of her. He nodded, she couldn't believe her eyes, this is the same teen that used to eat here? god he was hot. " hi, how you been?" said Ayame trying to wash the blush off her face and then said"Miso Pork right?", "you know it Ayame-chan" he replied with glee.
In about half an hour Naruto ate about 9 bowls already, "'man am stuffed", he said 'I should pay the old man now' as he toke out his wallet, Teuchi stopped him and said"Naruto, you finally came back after all these years, consider this our welcome back party. . ", "gee thanks old man I owe you one" Naruto said as he began to walk out when Teuchi replied"WE are the ones who owe you Naruto, we can't thank you enough for all you've done". Naruto stopped and turned around with a calm expression and said" My family doesn't have to owe me anything old man, take care" as he gave them a warm smile.
Naruto had about 2 hours left until he was scheduled to meet Tsunade at the training grounds, so he knew exactly where he needed to be right now. . .
KONOHA CEMETARY
Naruto looked down at the gravestone, clutching his fists and fighting to hold back tears. He bend down on one knee and looked up at the rising sun and the gravestone which read
HERE LIES CAPTAIN YAMATO, A TRUE LEADER, AND A TRUE SHINOBI, MAY HE REST IN PEACE
Naruto took a moment to take in those words, he couldn't believe that Yamato was gone and he couldn't do anything about It. Yamato had died during the fourth great shinobi war, when Naruto and bee had traced the location of the millions of Zetsu coming to do battle. They found Yamato strapped tp a large tree and was apparently used to create the huge army of Zetsu heading to fight the shinobi forces. They had tried to free Yamato but his life force was bonded with the tree! In the end, Yamato told Naruto and Bee to leave while he "holds" the Zetsu down. Naruto refusing to leave him, was grabbed by Bee as Yamato said his last words"Good luck Naruto, I believe in you, you will become Hokage" as he transformed his life force into energy, killing the entire Zetsu army and in the end, becoming a large garden.
Tears began to fall down as Naruto remembered his last words and clenched his fists. "Yamato-taicho, I Promise you, I WILL become Hokage and I shall protect everyone" he said as he felt a hand on his shoulder. HE turned around to find Shikarmaru there smiling at him, "Let It all out, It's alright they didn't die in vain Naruto, these men will forever be known as the bravest people to have ever stepped on this earth" he said.
Naruto cleaned his tears with his hands" I-I couldn't save him, this is all my fault, If only-", Shikamaru cut in and said"Naruto, we all told you before, we don't expect you to do everything by yourself. Don't take this whole thing on yourself. . .your better then that, learn to believe in yourself and your friends more" as he let go of his shoulder."Now come on, your suppose to come to the training grounds or else lady Tsunade AND Sakura will pumble you. . . women, such a drag" he said as he took out his cigarette
Naruto face dropped "SINCE WHEN DID YOU SMOKE?" he asked in surprise, "you just noticed? you might look older but your still really dumb" he said as he went away while Naruto's jaw dropped.
Naruto and Shikamaru arrived at the training ground, surprisingly alot of people were there. Sakura, Ino, Sai, Tsunade, Kakashi(even his son Tayo), Shizune, Lee, Ten-Ten, Neji, Hinata, and now Shikamaru. Naruto sighed "this isn't WWE you know" he said they all laughed. "Well kiddo, lets see If you have improved or not. . " said Tsunade. Naruto became annoyed and said"Oh man, do I have to fight Kakashi sensei again?". This made Tsunade smirk and Kakashi gloom in a strange corner(going a little emo).
"No no, your far beyond Kakashi's level Naruto. . . your even beyond mine. So, I thought I'd give you a bit of a challange" she said as Naruto bumped his fists, "bring it!" he said.
" Okay then, remember you asked for this, he's ready..." she yelled. Then alota things happened at once
The sand beneath Naruto errupted like a Volcano, he backed away in a defensive position and prepared himself. Suddenly that Sand, slowly toke the shape of a human being. . . .
Naruto smirked"Finally, I get to fight you after all this time. . . . Garaa" he said as the sand toke the form of the Kazekage. Garaa had changed alot over the years, he had grown his hair to just below his neck, his gourd was a bit smaller now, he was wearing dark red shinobi pants and a blueish closed shirt(like in shippuden) which marked the kanjii of Kazekage on the back, he had two bands on either side of his arms and was wearing black shinobi boots.
"It's great to see you again Naruto Uzumaki" he said as he gave a small smile. "Your Hokage told me about your arrival, I had to meet my oldest friend soon enough though, so she proposed something intresting. . . ."
"heh, glad your here Garaa now lets get this over with" yelled Naruto as he got ready to fight and so did Garaa. Some distance below him, the hooded figure jumped on the tree and looked on at the scene below"This should be intresting" he said and looked on.
"Are you both ready? Good, now. .. . . .BEGIN!" Kakashi said as they both rushed at eachother
END
So, guys watcha think, too much? three much? Oh and do give me a nice little review and rate my story please so that others may enjoy It aswell. Next chapter might be a bit late, cause i have university work to do, so toodles. . . ..
