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INT. Construction site - night
Lights growing dimer, as No. 2 shadows grows larger, facing Alonso and Vera.
ALONSO
(Thoughts)
Those shadows, she must be the one who took Vera away.
No. 2 holds out her hand.
NO. 2 (K)
It's time to take you back, Vera.
ALONSO
Vera, who is she?
VERA
She's Isaac's left hand. Kaitlin.
Vera starts to tremble uncontrollably, at the sight of Kaitlin.
ALONSO
Your not taking her away from me again. Vera, give me you hand.
Alonso reaches his hand back and Vera grabs it, as she stands up. Kaitlin's shadows are branching outwards still around her position.
ALONSO
Looks like she won't back down without a fight.
VERA
I don't know if I can.
Alonso looks back at her.
ALONSO
You have to it's the -
Alonso starts gasping, as Kaitlin's shadow is seen piercing through his chest.
INTRO CREDITS
VERA
Alonso!
Shadows wrap around Vera's legs dragging her near Kaitlin.
ALONSO
Don't let go of my hand.
Kaitlin
So he lives, how you've grown.
Her shadows are focused on Alonso while he is still pierced by her other shadow.
VERA
I won't let you!
Vera cuts her arms forming her blood blades on both her arms, then cuts Kaitlin's shadows as they just make it to Alonso. He drops and his wounds heal rapidly. Vera cuts the shadows around her legs and stands next to her brother.
Vera looks at he brother's wound as it heals, then they stand side by side, facing Kaitlin.
KAITLIN
So, she wants to fight.
VERA
You OK?
ALONSO
No problems here, so that's the blades you said you can make.
VERA
... She knows where her boss is?
ALONSO
Then let's do this.
They break apart, Alonso heading to Kaitlin's right, Vera heading to Kaitlin's left.
KAITLIN
If you really think you can take me on then so be it.
They launch at Kaitlin at the same time. She uses her shadows and sends them in both of their attacking directions. Alonso dodges her attacks making it closer to Kaitlin, while Vera uses her blades to fiend off the shadows also making it closer to Kaitlin's position. Alonso comes in for a punch, Vera goes for a kick.
KAITLIN
(Laughs)
Too easy.
Kaitlin's shadows turning around and Alonso and Vera suddenly stop. Shadows entangle both of them, as Kaitlin pulls them in closer, looking at Vera.
KAITLIN
If this is the way you want it, I'll make both of you suffer before I take you back.
Kaitlin herself spins around, as her shadows follow suite, she releases Alonso and Vera throwing them towards the construction building. She runs after them with her shadows spinning around her rapidly. Alonso and Vera makes contact with the building, he hitting his right side, Vera hitting her back, then the fall to the ground. Kaitlin jumps into the air.
The lights in the construction site got out completely, nothing but the moonlight shines in. Kaitlin rushes in, as they look up, she uses the moonlight to create her shadows. The shadows come from above pinpointing on Alonso and Vera's position. Vera rolls away from her brother to the right, jumping out of the way. Alonso does a back flip away from his sister, just escaping the shadows penetrating the ground where they just were.
Alonso
Vera, you OK?
VERA
Concentrate on the task at hand, remember she has information we can use.
Lights begin to flicker again, as Kaitlin touches the ground. Vera and Alonso charge at her.
KAITLIN
This again. You guys have to do better than this.
She ducks between the connected hits of their punches above her head. They jump away from her as her shadows makes a mountain of needle like structures on both sides of her. Turning to her left facing Vera, sending a wave of shadows towards her. Vera blocks most of the attack with her blades and dodges a few.
ALONSO
(Thoughts)
Now my chance!
KAITLIN
Don't even think about it!
She turns around, as Alonso sees Vera blocking the rest of Kaitlin's attack. Vera comes in with quick speed and strikes Kaitlin down, kicking her straight past Alonso.
KAITLIN
How dare you!!! I'll kill you, forget about taking you back in.
A black wall starts forming behind Kaitlin. Vera continues after her, as Kaitlin tries to regain her composer, Vera comes flying in slicing Kaitlin across her stomach.
VERA
Got cha, It's over.
KAITLIN
It's not over til I say it is.
Vera walks towards are brother, as she retracts her blood, as it goes back in her arms, Kaitlin's blood is going inside with Vera's causing Vera's arm to heal. The lights start to rapidly flicker as some break, Kaitlin's wall sends out non-stop shadows to both Alonso and Vera.
KAITLIN
Don't turn your back on me!
Vera turns around, closing her right hand and making a fist. Kaitlin's wall of shadows stop just short of piercing Vera, breaking into pieces like glass, as the lights stop flickering, Kaitlin is begin pulled closer to Vera. Kaitlin shadows fade into the darkness around them and Alonso walks to the right side of his sister, watching Kaitlin struggle in front of them.
ALONSO
(Thoughts)
That's the same thing Vera was using against me back at the hotel.
VERA
Start talking! Why are you after us? Who destroyed our city? Where's our mom and dad?
Kaitlin remains silent, Vera loses her patience, then Kaitlin feels her blood boiling underneath her skin. Vera starts to open her hand and as she does, Kaitlin's blood comes from her body, seeing it through are clothes, falling to the ground beneath her.
ALONSO
(Thoughts)
Vera is serious about this.
KAITLIN
I'll tell you, where he'll be. Then you can ask him in person.
Vera loses her patience again as a result of Kaitlin not talking fast enough, causing her to open her hand half-way. Kaitlin tries to make her shadows come fourth, as she is bleeding through-out her entire body, feeling as if she's going to burst open.
VERA
Hurry up!
KAITLIN
(Struggles)
He's meeting someone outside the city tomorrow, in a field heading South.
VERA
How do we know your telling the truth?
ALONSO
Vera look at her, she has to be.
KAITLIN
I've told you where he will be. Now, let me go!
VERA
Sure.
She opens her hand fully, and as the effect Kaitlin's body explodes, sending blood flying everywhere.
ALONSO
(Thoughts)
How could she? Something has changed inside of my sister. ... Vera we could have used her, --
Alonso turns and finds his sister passed out, he picks her up, leaving the construction site.
ALONSO
Just wait Vera. It will be all over tomorrow.
As Alonso leaves with his sister in his arms, a shadowy figure comes from the ground. The blood on the ground starts to come together at a point next to the woman. Then the blood starts to form as shadows form around the others legs. The whole entire body is reformed, as No. 4 stands next to Kaitlin, watching Alonso walk off with his sister.
KAITLIN
Nice work, No. 4.
NO. 4 (M)
Do you think he believed it?
KAITLIN
Yea, it was fruitful. We must report back.
She uses her shadows as they swirl around them both disappearing into nothingness.
end
INT. Construction site - night
Lights growing dimer, as No. 2 shadows grows larger, facing Alonso and Vera.
ALONSO
(Thoughts)
Those shadows, she must be the one who took Vera away.
No. 2 holds out her hand.
NO. 2 (K)
It's time to take you back, Vera.
ALONSO
Vera, who is she?
VERA
She's Isaac's left hand. Kaitlin.
Vera starts to tremble uncontrollably, at the sight of Kaitlin.
ALONSO
Your not taking her away from me again. Vera, give me you hand.
Alonso reaches his hand back and Vera grabs it, as she stands up. Kaitlin's shadows are branching outwards still around her position.
ALONSO
Looks like she won't back down without a fight.
VERA
I don't know if I can.
Alonso looks back at her.
ALONSO
You have to it's the -
Alonso starts gasping, as Kaitlin's shadow is seen piercing through his chest.
INTRO CREDITS
VERA
Alonso!
Shadows wrap around Vera's legs dragging her near Kaitlin.
ALONSO
Don't let go of my hand.
Kaitlin
So he lives, how you've grown.
Her shadows are focused on Alonso while he is still pierced by her other shadow.
VERA
I won't let you!
Vera cuts her arms forming her blood blades on both her arms, then cuts Kaitlin's shadows as they just make it to Alonso. He drops and his wounds heal rapidly. Vera cuts the shadows around her legs and stands next to her brother.
Vera looks at he brother's wound as it heals, then they stand side by side, facing Kaitlin.
KAITLIN
So, she wants to fight.
VERA
You OK?
ALONSO
No problems here, so that's the blades you said you can make.
VERA
... She knows where her boss is?
ALONSO
Then let's do this.
They break apart, Alonso heading to Kaitlin's right, Vera heading to Kaitlin's left.
KAITLIN
If you really think you can take me on then so be it.
They launch at Kaitlin at the same time. She uses her shadows and sends them in both of their attacking directions. Alonso dodges her attacks making it closer to Kaitlin, while Vera uses her blades to fiend off the shadows also making it closer to Kaitlin's position. Alonso comes in for a punch, Vera goes for a kick.
KAITLIN
(Laughs)
Too easy.
Kaitlin's shadows turning around and Alonso and Vera suddenly stop. Shadows entangle both of them, as Kaitlin pulls them in closer, looking at Vera.
KAITLIN
If this is the way you want it, I'll make both of you suffer before I take you back.
Kaitlin herself spins around, as her shadows follow suite, she releases Alonso and Vera throwing them towards the construction building. She runs after them with her shadows spinning around her rapidly. Alonso and Vera makes contact with the building, he hitting his right side, Vera hitting her back, then the fall to the ground. Kaitlin jumps into the air.
The lights in the construction site got out completely, nothing but the moonlight shines in. Kaitlin rushes in, as they look up, she uses the moonlight to create her shadows. The shadows come from above pinpointing on Alonso and Vera's position. Vera rolls away from her brother to the right, jumping out of the way. Alonso does a back flip away from his sister, just escaping the shadows penetrating the ground where they just were.
Alonso
Vera, you OK?
VERA
Concentrate on the task at hand, remember she has information we can use.
Lights begin to flicker again, as Kaitlin touches the ground. Vera and Alonso charge at her.
KAITLIN
This again. You guys have to do better than this.
She ducks between the connected hits of their punches above her head. They jump away from her as her shadows makes a mountain of needle like structures on both sides of her. Turning to her left facing Vera, sending a wave of shadows towards her. Vera blocks most of the attack with her blades and dodges a few.
ALONSO
(Thoughts)
Now my chance!
KAITLIN
Don't even think about it!
She turns around, as Alonso sees Vera blocking the rest of Kaitlin's attack. Vera comes in with quick speed and strikes Kaitlin down, kicking her straight past Alonso.
KAITLIN
How dare you!!! I'll kill you, forget about taking you back in.
A black wall starts forming behind Kaitlin. Vera continues after her, as Kaitlin tries to regain her composer, Vera comes flying in slicing Kaitlin across her stomach.
VERA
Got cha, It's over.
KAITLIN
It's not over til I say it is.
Vera walks towards are brother, as she retracts her blood, as it goes back in her arms, Kaitlin's blood is going inside with Vera's causing Vera's arm to heal. The lights start to rapidly flicker as some break, Kaitlin's wall sends out non-stop shadows to both Alonso and Vera.
KAITLIN
Don't turn your back on me!
Vera turns around, closing her right hand and making a fist. Kaitlin's wall of shadows stop just short of piercing Vera, breaking into pieces like glass, as the lights stop flickering, Kaitlin is begin pulled closer to Vera. Kaitlin shadows fade into the darkness around them and Alonso walks to the right side of his sister, watching Kaitlin struggle in front of them.
ALONSO
(Thoughts)
That's the same thing Vera was using against me back at the hotel.
VERA
Start talking! Why are you after us? Who destroyed our city? Where's our mom and dad?
Kaitlin remains silent, Vera loses her patience, then Kaitlin feels her blood boiling underneath her skin. Vera starts to open her hand and as she does, Kaitlin's blood comes from her body, seeing it through are clothes, falling to the ground beneath her.
ALONSO
(Thoughts)
Vera is serious about this.
KAITLIN
I'll tell you, where he'll be. Then you can ask him in person.
Vera loses her patience again as a result of Kaitlin not talking fast enough, causing her to open her hand half-way. Kaitlin tries to make her shadows come fourth, as she is bleeding through-out her entire body, feeling as if she's going to burst open.
VERA
Hurry up!
KAITLIN
(Struggles)
He's meeting someone outside the city tomorrow, in a field heading South.
VERA
How do we know your telling the truth?
ALONSO
Vera look at her, she has to be.
KAITLIN
I've told you where he will be. Now, let me go!
VERA
Sure.
She opens her hand fully, and as the effect Kaitlin's body explodes, sending blood flying everywhere.
ALONSO
(Thoughts)
How could she? Something has changed inside of my sister. ... Vera we could have used her, --
Alonso turns and finds his sister passed out, he picks her up, leaving the construction site.
ALONSO
Just wait Vera. It will be all over tomorrow.
As Alonso leaves with his sister in his arms, a shadowy figure comes from the ground. The blood on the ground starts to come together at a point next to the woman. Then the blood starts to form as shadows form around the others legs. The whole entire body is reformed, as No. 4 stands next to Kaitlin, watching Alonso walk off with his sister.
KAITLIN
Nice work, No. 4.
NO. 4 (M)
Do you think he believed it?
KAITLIN
Yea, it was fruitful. We must report back.
She uses her shadows as they swirl around them both disappearing into nothingness.
end