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Don't feel like i should say everything about our clan's power out in the open but meh ~_~
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Keigoku is basically chakara, chakara that us nekuras get from the juubi. This is a foul and raw type of chakara of course. Its so foul and raw, that if any summoning animal touches it, they will become wild O_O Unfortunately, even our own summoning will go on a rampage, and want to destroy everything short range of him/her. Also, depending on our rank in the clan our keigoku varies in power. Some ranks such as clan head keigoku's chakara can go through anything, even as thick and solid as gamabunta that big fat toad :|. Other lower ranks can go through things with lesser density such as bush or small trees. Due to us having this keigoku in our body, it prevents us from bringing in any foreign chakara. Even i we force it in (No sage mode, curse mark :(). So with this, the enemy can't force chakara into our bodies either. No genjutsu, which i love the most xd

You missed everything... ._.

Keigoku is brought to the battlefield via portals, since the evil chakra is wrapped around the moon, this is the only way to get it. The mark of the demon is used as a connection, to actually make us capable of being able to control or even withstand the jubi's foul chakra. The Mark of the Demon corrupts the mind, making us evil, very evil. By preforming evil deeds or having an evil intention, we can access the keigoku. However, you have to use portals to access keigoku, which doesn't require chakra/jutsu.

Now,

( Noroidzi Hari no Nami ) - Cursed Blood Needle Wave
Type: Supplemenary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: A simple but effective technique, the Nekura makes three handseals turning any existing Keigoku on the battlefield that he wishes ( such as that from any techniques the opponent dodges ) into a wave of sharp needles that then shoot at the opponent. Whatever the rank of the Keigoku technique this is used on, the needles will be of that same rank.*If struck by the needles, the opponent suffers from drawbacks of the Keigoku attack originally used (common effects are as small as small minor headaches to searing headaches, momentary loss of focus and temporary incapacitation for no more than 10 seconds).
Cannot be used on Keigoku attacks of S-rank and higher
Can only be used four times per battle.

Really simple technique isnt it? Lets you break down keigoku and shoot out needles which can be used to 'chase' opponents who manage to escape on of our techniques.
 

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Le duh, everyone knows we need portals Lol

So, if i use "Way of Binding Number Seventy Nine: Nine Sunlight Traps" and the enemy somehow dodges/counters the 8 ropes, that tried to grab him, i could turn the ropes into a wave of keigoku needles? O_O
 

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Indeed. /char
 

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(TZogesuzumebachi no Ame ) - Rain of Stinging Wasps

Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30 ( +5 per turn )
Damage: 60
Description: The Nekura clansman opens multiple portals in the sky, each one a few meters wide,causing small drops of Keigoku to fall from the portals like rain, in a shower of individual drops. Any non-Nekura caught in this rain will experience sudden sharp mental pain as the drops touch him. Due to the repeated falling of the Keigoku raindrops, they will not be able to focus enough to use techniques that require intense concentration ( Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Medjutsu, etc. ) and cannot string together more than four handseals without pause.This technique can be used twice per battle; each use lasts for two turns, and there needs to be two turns gap between each use.
By sheltering under a suitable defense, the effects of this technique can be avoided.
The effects also apply to non-Nekura allies, and so this technique is not useful in combo battles or wars.

Simple, make it rain keigoku.
 

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(TZogesuzumebachi no Ame ) - Rain of Stinging Wasps

Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30 ( +5 per turn )
Damage: 60
Description: The Nekura clansman opens multiple portals in the sky, each one a few meters wide,causing small drops of Keigoku to fall from the portals like rain, in a shower of individual drops. Any non-Nekura caught in this rain will experience sudden sharp mental pain as the drops touch him. Due to the repeated falling of the Keigoku raindrops, they will not be able to focus enough to use techniques that require intense concentration ( Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Medjutsu, etc. ) and cannot string together more than four handseals without pause.This technique can be used twice per battle; each use lasts for two turns, and there needs to be two turns gap between each use.
By sheltering under a suitable defense, the effects of this technique can be avoided.
The effects also apply to non-Nekura allies, and so this technique is not useful in combo battles or wars.

Simple, make it rain keigoku.

I make it rain on these B!tches :cool:

So i can open this as close to the enemy as i choose? O_O
 

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Im sure you know what happens next....

*Waits for lok to post saying everything is revoked*
 

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*leaves thread before it happens*
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Man i so need premium ~_~
 

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Yeeaahhh.... you know the deal. Everything over B rank is revoked. Insufficient rank to use.
 

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Well let's continue

( Fōsurai ) - Force Lightning
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user, by using expert chakra control, moulds their Keigoku chakra before opening the portal. Through this method, the user creates a "pressure" of chakra behind the closed portal. Then, the user will open the portal within short range of themselves suddenly, letting the foul chakra explode out into the jutsu. The sudden appearance of such pressurized chakra creates a "flash" of chakra bright enough to momentarily blind dojutsu users and sensors (only if their dojutsu/sensor techniques are active). The Keigoku then shoots forward at the target shaped like lightning, causing pain and temporary incapacitation for one turn
Note: The "sensory/dojutsu blinding" effect lasts long enough for the lightning bolt to travel to mid-range and lasts only during said turn

very useful technique in short range. Mold your Keigoku BEFORE opening the portal then open the portal just short range of you and let it go boom z.z

Analyze give me a move also on how you use this. Like a full battle move pls. You have to practice this like it's in the NW or Battle Arena. There's a saying sports, Practice how you play... full speed o-o
 

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After reaching short range of his opponent, kid performs a couple hand seals as a minor distraction to fool the opponent. From the time he entered short range, he sent his chakra into the brain of the enemy to lock him inside a genjutsu. In this genjutsu, a couple snakes rise from the ground under him and bind him in place. While this is happening, kid molds his keigoku in a pressurize manner before opening a portal in front of him in the direction facing you. Seconds after opening it, he release the cap of the pressurize keigoku to have it shoot out through the portal towards you. Hitting you like a lightning bolt.

( Genjutsu: Oshitsubusu Hebi Kubire ) - Illusion Technique: Crushing Snake Constriction
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user puts the opponent into a genjutsu which has snakes appear beneath the opponent to constrict them and with the users command, they crush the opponent. In reality, the opponent is immobilized and takes damage due to the stress on his mind.

( Fōsurai ) - Force Lightning
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user, by using expert chakra control, moulds their Keigoku chakra before opening the portal. Through this method, the user creates a "pressure" of chakra behind the closed portal. Then, the user will open the portal within short range of themselves suddenly, letting the foul chakra explode out into the jutsu. The sudden appearance of such pressurized chakra creates a "flash" of chakra bright enough to momentarily blind dojutsu users and sensors (only if their dojutsu/sensor techniques are active). The Keigoku then shoots forward at the target shaped like lightning, causing pain and temporary incapacitation for one turn
Note: The "sensory/dojutsu blinding" effect lasts long enough for the lightning bolt to travel to mid-range and lasts only during said turn
 

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( Hadō no Kyūjū: Kurohitsugi ) - Way of Destruction Number Ninety: Black Coffin
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user makes six handseals, causing portals to emerge on all sides around the opponent, a few metres away. Keigoku flows from these portals, before forming itself into a black coffin-shaped box surrounding the opponent, large enough to trap two people. The box covers the opponent in all sides, including above and below ( however the portal from below only appears as the other sides have been fully created ); contact with it makes the opponent's head ache badly. As soon as the box forms fully, taking around the same time it takes to throw a kunai, spears of Keigoku manifest themselves on the walls and shoot inward, impaling an opponent caught within it. This causes severe mental agony, causing the opponent to feel exhausted and collapse temporarily for one turn.
This technique may be used only thrice per battle.
No Nekura techniques above A-rank may be used during the same turn and the next turn.

Blah blah training.

Explain this to me, tell me all you can see.
 

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The user will do 6 hand seals to cause small portals; about 8 I would say to form around the opponent. It’s a few meters apart and away from the enemy, with enough space to hold 2 people. When the portals are open, keigoku will flow from these portals to each other and spread to form a box surrounding the enemy. The formation of the box doesn’t take long to form at all. When the box is form, several spikes of keigoku forms outside the box and goes into the box to impale the enemy or enemies from all sides.

Basically in short its this:

No questions u_u
 

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And, what does this Keigoku impalement "do" to the person?
 

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A really badass head ache. Mental pain which can cause the opponent to faint due to feeling tired, exhausted etc for one turn, which would basically give you a win lol
 

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Hm, good. Good.

( Togesuzumebachi no Ame ) - Rain of Stinging Wasps
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30 ( +5 per turn )
Damage: 60
Description: The Nekura clansman opens multiple portals in the sky, each one a few meters wide,causing small drops of Keigoku to fall from the portals like rain, in a shower of individual drops. Any non-Nekura caught in this rain will experience sudden sharp mental pain as the drops touch him. Due to the repeated falling of the Keigoku raindrops, they will not be able to focus enough to use techniques that require intense concentration ( Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Medjutsu, etc. ) and cannot string together more than four handseals without pause.This technique can be used twice per battle; each use lasts for two turns, and there needs to be two turns gap between each use.
By sheltering under a suitable defense, the effects of this technique can be avoided.
The effects also apply to non-Nekura allies, and so this technique is not useful in combo battles or wars.

And this one?
 

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I like this because of no handseals lol. But yeah you open several portals around the sky up to long range. All the portals are some meters wide, like I would say 1-3. Doubt its more. From these portals countless “Keigoku Drops” will fall from the sky for two turns straight. This keigoku won’t affect other nekura clansmen though, so any none nekura ninjas will suffer from headaches and mental pain once more. But instead of fainting this time, this jutsu causes them to not be able to string together more than 4 hand seals without a slight pause and they won’t be able to concentrate clearly to perform high class jutsus such as genjutsu, fuiin jutsus and medjutsu since these aren’t normal chakra consuming jutsus. They need concentration. This technique shouldn’t really be used in a tag match unless your opponent is a nekura himself or else he will suffer the consequences too. Luckily for them they can find a shelter to cover from the raining keigoku…..SIKE ;)
 

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Remember the phasing ability of Keigoku is dependent on rank so there are "some" techniques that can successfully counter this of course. Other than that yeah it's correct. Lets move on to the next.

( Nekura Ichizoku Hijutsu: Zokugie ) - Nekura Clan Secret Technique: Unholy Conversion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Self
Chakra: 30 (+10 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description:
Once the Nekura casts this technique, it generates a small portal in front of him. From then onwards, whenever he shoots out a technique from him or from in front of him, a little Keigoku goes from the portal into the technique ( i.e., if he uses a fireball, a sphere of Keigoku, tennis-ball sized hides inside the fireball, and attacks the opponent as well when the fire hits him, or even if the fire is blocked, it needs to be blocked as well ). However, it does not work when techniques are being cast that come from other directions ( such as spikes from under the opponent, or wind from the sky ) as the portal is not near them.
Since the amount of Keigoku used is small per technique, it only gives the opponent a headache and makes him lose concentration for a few seconds if it hits, however the effects stack- i.e, if the first time he loses conentration for two seconds, the next time his already weak mind loses focus for four, then six, and so on.
No Forbidden-rank Nekura techniques may be used while this is active.
 

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Yeah I remember them from the CC submission u_u

Pretty simple but pretty useful and I’m surprise this doesn’t have any restrictions like usages or turn limit to be present on the field lol. So in short the nekura creates a stationary portal in front of their chest that will be there for…as long as you’re alive I guess o_o and any projectile type jutsus that are shot through the portal will travel to wherever with some keigoku inside. It will only work if the ‘projectile’ goes directly through the portal the nekura person creates. The portal can only be made a few feet away from his/her chest. Like it can’t be made long range away etc.
 

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And to what purpose does this serve? Why are you adding Keigoku?
 
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