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Rei's R&R
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water source on my left (your right)
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customs and all that

Eragon bio (not updated, have SM and CE's).
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just out of curiosity, I assume you're a seer in rank? Also, is there any link to Nekura clan abilities? I've never fought one before.
 

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What? I VMed you the ones I have :| and the others you can't see because....well...its in a private place for members only @_@

Stop playing with my feelings wes T_T
 

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Anyways

*Seeing the wind-infused kunai fly at me, I just throw a wind-infused kunai back at it*


Looking at his enemy, Eragon sighs.

"Let's get on with it then, shall we?"

Eragon starts by by doing 2 hand seals, creating a fire ball that hits the kunai and continues to his opponent. Considering the wind chakra in it, it burn slightly more while heading towards the opponent.

( Katon: Gōenkyū ) - Fire Release: Great Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user after performing two hand seals Horse → Tiger exhales a big-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact. The fire ball has a given solidity property to it, being able to punch through solid obstacles without exploding.

Considering his opponent is busy, protecting himself from this technique, he creates 3 spikes from behind his opponents to impale him.


(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target if these are less dense. The pillars/spikes can be done in any earthen surface, including other earth techniques of the user.
 

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As he fire ball makes its way towards Kidd, he swings his hand up to create a solid wall of wind short range of him to deflect the fireball in a sense and send it back at you. After this happens, Kidd feels a slight shake from the ground. He quickly coats his body in rock from the ground below as spikes come up and break on his rock armour. “That was close” said eustass as the armour fall off his body and then he opens up several portals all around in the sky to cause small droplets of raw keigoku to fall. This Keigoku when touch by a non-nekura member causes the opponent to lose concentration when performing high rank techniques, making them unable to use S ranks and above along with jutsus such as those from the fuiin, gen and med category and receive a series of sharp mental pain.

Fuuton: Uindo Riba-su (Wind style: Wind Reverse Wall)
Rank:S-Rank
Range: Short (front of user)
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user creates a wall out of wind that is blowing backwards. Any fire jutsu that hits this wall will be strengthened and sent back at the opponent because when the fire jutsu hits the wall, the user will then reverse the polarity at which the wind is blowing, causing the wind to blow forward, making the fire jutsu change directions.

(Doton no Yoroi) - Earth Release Armor
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (-15 per turn to remain active)
Damage points: N/A (+10 to taijutsu moves)
Description: This Technique coats the users body with stones, making them much more resistant to attacks, at the cost of their speed. Whilst using this technique, the user can even change their appearance, but once the technique is either defeated or worn off the users original appearance is shown. The user whilst in this armor is resistant to B rank ninjutsu techniques but is vulnerable to Lightning Techniques.

( Togesuzumebachi no Ame ) - Rain of Stinging Wasps
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30 ( +5 per turn )
Damage: 60
Description: The Nekura clansman opens multiple portals in the sky, each one a few meters wide,causing small drops of Keigoku to fall from the portals like rain, in a shower of individual drops. Any non-Nekura caught in this rain will experience sudden sharp mental pain as the drops touch him. Due to the repeated falling of the Keigoku raindrops, they will not be able to focus enough to use techniques that require intense concentration ( Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Medjutsu, etc. ) and cannot string together more than four handseals without pause.This technique can be used twice per battle; each use lasts for two turns, and there needs to be two turns gap between each use.
By sheltering under a suitable defense, the effects of this technique can be avoided.
The effects also apply to non-Nekura allies, and so this technique is not useful in combo battles or wars.
 

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As I see my own fireball coming at me (love that reverse windwall btw, so tricky to counter when it's used correctly), I exhales a large amount of water from his mouth. It creates a vicious torrent that heads towards the fireball (that is enhanced), crushing it with easy and sending it towards you. The fireball is only concentrated in one point, while the vortex is concentrated and pressurized over its entire form. It would crush into your armor, having enough power left to destroy it and catch you off guard.

Suiton: Suidan no Jutsu) - Water Release: Water Bullet Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user inhales and molds a great amount of chakra into their chest, exhaling a very large quantity of water in the form of a powerful torrent towards their intended target. The stream of water is so powerful and concentrated it can rip through most obstacles in its path. The stream itself contains so much concentrated water that it can flood medium to large sized depressions of the battle field in relatively short amounts of time.

He also does 2 hand seals, which increase the technique in size and power. It also makes the technique go at your more rapidly (+25 dmg, so it's probably around forbidden rank now).

(Suiton: Mizu kakujuu) - Water style: Water expansion
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: A
Range: Short - long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: +25
Description: After releasing a water jutsu the user will perform 2 handseals as they release there chakra into the water jutsu. In doing so, the user will increase the power and size of the water jutsu boosting any water jutsu by 25 damage points. By the increase in chakra the water gains more power as the wave of water increases in size and the power and speed of the water is increased.
Note: Can only use used on water the user or the users summon has created
Note: Can only be used once one each water jutsu creates
Note: can only be used 3 times


As this happens, Eragon makes 3 clones, in a V formation infront of him.
2 of these clones start to run at you, in an arc (one left, and one right hand side). They both throw 2 kunais at you. One of each which they throw in the air, calculating the arc and making it drop down on your position, and 1 directly at you (from the sides).

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.
 

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After his earth amour was used efficiently to defend against the earth spikes, he was about to channel chakra to open portals in the sky when he sees a stream of water coming his direction. It was coming very fast, Kid quickly takes a small leap upwards and did two hand seals while releasing his wind chakra to create a perfect wind sphere around him. Then he follows up with one more hand seal to add the strongest of earth particles in the spinning and rotating winds. The water was successfully defended from and destroyed. Kid wastes no time for you to realize this and do something else, he did one more hand seal to send the winds at you in the form of two large gusts of wind that travels quickly. This would happen before you can create your clones though.

As that goes towards you, he opens the portals in the sky to make it rain keigoku.

( Fuuton/Doton: Horun no Areno Eki ) Wind/Earth Style: The Horns of the Desert Lizard
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user links together 2 handseals, creating a ravaging dome of slicing winds. The wind's speed and sharpness is increased to the max, having almost no rival in shredding power. At which point, the user ends the succession of handseals with an extra one, which infuses the wind with small particles of the strongest earth materials. This sets the abrasive power of the wind past it's limits, both Wind and Earth chakra working together to combine the roughness and tangibility of the earth against the sharpness and speed of the wind, creating an almost perfect defense against all matter, which is shredded to oblivion when it comes in contact.
With 1 handseal, the user is disperse the dome into 2 large gusts of wind that fly up to mid range.
*The user is able to create a perfect sphere by leaping in the air*
*This jutsu is able to overpower the Strongest Metals/Perfectly Solid/Kaguya Bone/Diamond Elements/KGs up to it's rank, and Basic or less solid Elements (Wood, Calcium, Crystals, etc) 1 rank above*
*This jutsu can only be used once every 3 turns*
*The user is unable to preform Earth or Wind jutsus higher than S rank in the next turn*
*The dome is maintained for only 1 turn, and disperses normally if the user does not throw it towards the opponent*
*Can only be used thrice per battle*

( Togesuzumebachi no Ame ) - Rain of Stinging Wasps
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30 ( +5 per turn )
Damage: 60
Description: The Nekura clansman opens multiple portals in the sky, each one a few meters wide,causing small drops of Keigoku to fall from the portals like rain, in a shower of individual drops. Any non-Nekura caught in this rain will experience sudden sharp mental pain as the drops touch him. Due to the repeated falling of the Keigoku raindrops, they will not be able to focus enough to use techniques that require intense concentration ( Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Medjutsu, etc. ) and cannot string together more than four handseals without pause.This technique can be used twice per battle; each use lasts for two turns, and there needs to be two turns gap between each use.
By sheltering under a suitable defense, the effects of this technique can be avoided.
The effects also apply to non-Nekura allies, and so this technique is not useful in combo battles or wars.
 

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Noticing the portals open, Eragon sighs.

"He's a Nekura... These guys just never seem to learn."

With great ease, Eragon creates a giant stone golem that grows from the ground (note that earth is my primary element). As it forms, it instantly takes a defensive pose over Eragon, defending him from any of the harm. While doing this, he slams his left arm into you (albeit a bit sluggish). While doing this, Eragon simply creates 3 clones in a V formation again.


(Doton: Dai iwa Kyojin no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Great Stone Golem Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long (Made short range of the user with a long range reach)
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user creates a even larger and stronger version of Earth Release: Stone Golem Technique. However, unlike the smaller version, the user creates this stone golem from the ground solely. The user will slam his hand on the ground, manipulating it and shaping it into a large warrior of stone which he can control as long as he keeps his hand in contact with it or with the ground and keeps fueling the technique with chakra. The golem can reach heights of 30 meters and is quite massive but seems to also be capable of moving quite fast as well.


(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.
 

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He was confident that the man would get hurt by the raw keigoku falling from the portals. But then he creates a big golem that rises from the ground near him and pose over his body to protect him from the rain. He was smart for that, perhaps he knew of the nekura’s powers. Eustass would then release his lightning chakra to take control of this enormous stone creature. As it prepares to swing its hand to hit Kid, the golem would stop and instead go to attack you with its other hand that is closer to you. As it is doing this, it would get up in a straight up position to also not shelter you, causing the keigoku to now rain down on you. After using his lightning jutsu, he would quickly place you within a genjutsu where snakes burst up from underneath you and quickly bind you.

(Raiton: Zeus Kontorrou)- Lightning Release: Zeus's Control
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C-S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15-40
Damage: 30-80 (Depends on the rank of construct)
Description: The user either by the use of a touch or by releasing the chakra forward towards their intended target through their limbs, will specifically release a surge of unfocused lightning. With the lightning, the user will not aim for the opponent themselves but instead aim towards the opponents jutsus, specifically earth material type jutsus. Lightning that is unfocused will act to move along and around the earth substance, almost as if the earth will act as a conductor. There has been showcases of lightning moving along earth like substances without breaking them apart using this same concept (e.g. Earth/Lightning Release: Electric Rock Pillar). The lightning will act to overpower the rock section or construct completely engulfing the rock and rendering the opponent's chakra within the section of rock useless. However this does come with a certain type of consequence, since there is still chakra of the opponent's harboring within the section of rock it will cause slight damage and cracking along the rock, this is simply an act of the lightning attempting to overpower the earth material but the material of earth will be weakened due to this (Exactly one rank would be deduced). As this step has been completed, with the user's lightning chakra now within the earth material, the user is now capable of taking complete control of the section of rock and send it towards a target or move the rock section around with complete ease but focused required as well, this concept similar to that of Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation, as in how lightning is able to mask over the material and take control of its movements. This is exactly what would occur with the earth like substances. The appearance of the constructs will look quite normal, just a few cracks in and around its body and a light yellow aura of lightning along its body. The constructs can be controlled at will, the user can either send specific construct towards the opponent as a projectile or they can remain focus upon it and guide its direction. The constructs will retain the same sort of defensive and offensive property it had before it was taken control from the lightning, when taken control the objects obtain a certain shock type of damage which can indeed numb the opponent just like regular unfocused lightning would cause. This technique can not be used on the user's own earth constructs. The lower rank the earth construct the lower amount of chakra the user can use to overtake it.

Note: Can only be used twice
Note: Must have Mastery of lightning
Note: The construct is kept active for three turns
Note: Requires one turn cool down before use again
Note: Usable only on solid and logical techniques

( Genjutsu: Oshitsubusu Hebi Kubire ) - Illusion Technique: Crushing Snake Constriction
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user puts the opponent into a genjutsu which has snakes appear beneath the opponent to constrict them and with the users command, they crush the opponent. In reality, the opponent is immobilized and takes damage due to the stress on his mind.
 

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About to make his clones, Eragon noticed things were not going as planned. The golem started to glow slightly, and slowed his attack on the opponent, up to the point where it halted. Fearing the worst, Eragon noticed the golem slowly started to pull his other hand towards him. Instead of making the clones, he halted, and activated his secret seals.

Fuuin Genkotsu: Yasei no Janguru no Shīru | Sealing Fist: Seal of the Wild Jungle
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: /
Description:The Sealing Fist: Seal of the Wild Jungle is a dormant technique that consists of a giant seal that encompasses 3 main areas, all connected and intertwined into a massive high rank seal. The core of the seal is in the chest of the user which then branches out into both hands and connects to a secondary seal located in the forehead. Each part is connected and share the same core which is connected to the users chakra circulatory system directly. This connection is how the seal is fueled for the most part. The seal is consisted of 3 unlocks:


Unlock the Courage of a Bull: The first and most basic ability, though one of the most beneficial. When the user unlocks this part of the seal, the outside core of the seal fuels chakra through the branches to power the user's speed and physical power. The user gains a boost in speed and strength, becoming physically able to do incredible physical feets, like creating small craters upon the impact of falling kicks or punches, and gaining the speed similar to that of Sage Taijutsu Specialist. His reflexes are enough to keep up with his speed and adapt his movement to it. This unlock can dispel genjutsu up to B-Rank upon activation. Not only that, but when used by Jyuuken users, they will have a much more chakra at their disposal, making it far easier and faster to perform the signature Hyuuga moves, as well as exerting more chakra due to the rush of chakra.

Restrictions and Abilities:
Note: Can be used 1 time per battle and lasts 3 turns
Note: Activation costs as 1 jutsu
Note: When this is active and the user uses Jyuuken techniques, the techniques will cost 20 more chakra, but will do +10 damage
Note: Strong Fist gets +10 damage due to the drastic increase in strength.
Note: While the seal is active the user is left unable to use Wind and Lightning techniques and KG based on them.

Unlock the Pride of the Puma: The second one of the three unlocks, created in such a fashion that it can be used offensively as well as defensively. The user activates the branches of the seal alone, and when he does so, the chakra releases over his body, sending it to his hands and feet. These will start to burn dark purple, much like Orochimaru’s fingertips when he restricted the chakra flow of Naruto. Next to that, the Kanji for “repel” will appear on every foot and palm of the user. The user can then use taijutsu moves and stances (both from strong fist style as well as other styles) to fend of Ninjutsu techniques (elemental or not) up to A-Rank (within reason, as one needs to take consideration of the size of the technique). The chakra unlocked on the branch seals will repel incoming techniques and projectiles, regardless of nature or characteristics. This enables the user to defend himself from almost anything but, if used to attack an enemy with Taijutsu, it will cause the punches and kicks of the user to deal +20 damage as they will repel the enemy with tremendous might.

Restrictions and Abilities:
Note: Can be used 2 times per battle and lasts 2 turns each time
Note: Activation costs as 1 jutsu
Note: Taijutsu techniques will get the repel function which boosts damage to +20

Unlock the Determination of the Hippopotamus: The third of the three unlocks, consists of the core of the seal itself and takes use of all the branches of the seal. This is the most defensive unlock of the three. Upon unlocking this, the core of the seal opens completely and the Kanji for "Gateway" is formed in the Left Palm and the kanji for "Blessing" is formed on the Right Palm. This unlock makes the seal work as a pathway for foreign chakra, capable of absorbing chakra through the Gateway and returning it through the Blessing. It can, in alternative, reroute that chakra into itself, sealing it in the core. In reality, this unlock enables the user to absorb up to F-Rank techniques while converting the chakra into a raw version of what was absorbed (absorbing a fire jutsu produces a raw fire stream, absorbing water produces a raw water jet, etc etc) with little shape manipulation but the same strength. If the user decides to seal that chakra in the core, he can double the duration of one of the other two unlocks.

Restrictions and Abilities:
Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle.
Note: Absorbing, Releasing and Sealing the absorbed chakra all counts a technique, meaning that this unlock always costs 2 moves.
Note: In the turn its active, the user can't mold chakra above A-Rank.
Note: Can be unlocked with either the Courage of the Bull or the Pride of the Puma activated.
Note: When used to seal away chakra with one other unlock, it doubles the duration of that unlock.
Note: Absorbing an F-Rank technique can only be done once and disables the use of any part of the seal (meaning, its unlocks) and leaves the enemy unable to mold anything above S-Rank for 2 turns.

General Restrictions
Note: This seal must be present in the bio to be usable
Note: User needs to have learned Fuuin Genkotsu | Sealing Fist
Note: Can only be taught by Wesobi

He activates The Determination of the Hippopotamus, absorbing the glowing chakra from his golem (note: from the body that is still behind him, not the fist that is incoming). As he does so, the lightning leaves the golem, as well as your control over him, leaving him to still defend Eragon (the sheer size of the golem would require it to take some time to actually fully leave his "protection over me"), and halt the attack on Eragon. Time-wise, this is discussable, but then again so many things are. I think I could make it in time as the golem is quite sluggish. The golem then snaps out of it and continues to attack you with the fist he first used to attack you.

Also, Eragon redirects the chakra at you (lightning), sending a raw bolt of lightning your way.

Of the genjutsu, Eragon notices nothing, considering his inherent seals protect him automatically of any genjutsu cast upon him.


Ototon: Gyakusetsu Takanari | Sound Release: The Ringing Paradox
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30/seal
Damage Points: 5 damage to the user for every seal released.
Description: is an intelligent seal applied at the backside of the user’s ears. The seal detects abnormalities in the users senses and releases itself whenever needed, upon release the sound chakra stored inside creates a ringing noise which awakens the user from sleep or breaks any genjutsu(up to A rank, 2 seals have to be released to break through an S rank) casted over the user.
Note: Up to 4 seals could be applied over the user’s body per battle, and user’s hearing suffers slight after every release.
-Must know sound release and sealing techniques.

So basically timeline: You fry my golem to attack me, I absorb the foreign chakra as his hand moves at me to stop him from doing so and still protect me. He then continues to attack you, and you have a lightning bolt headed your way.
 

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Eustass sees you moving meaning you some how break from the genjutsu. Was he a nekura too? he thought to himself as he saw you releasing a lightning bolt at him. He quickly drops to the ground and slam his hands on the ground channeling his chakra underneath you. His drop would make him avoid the incoming lightning, and make the ground underneath you in a wide radius around you quickly rise up in seconds. Due to the shelter you created above you, you would slam into the body of the massive golem in seconds. (Can't make the golem move again since you stop channeling chakra into it)

(Doton: Daichidōkaku) - Earth Release: Great Moving Earth Core
Rank: S
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique grants the user the ability to freely lower or raise the terrain within a specific area surrounding them, in a similar manner to its parent technique, albeit on a much larger scale. The user will slam his hands on the ground which he can then lower or raise the ground up to 100 meters in a large section. The rise will be fast enough to pin enemies to the ground, restricting their movements as they struggle to get up and the drop will be fast enough to leave almost all enemies without a footing (albeit not airborne). Because of the large chakra needed to alter such a large area of the terrain, the user will be able to use it only a limited number of times.
Note: Can only be used twice.
 
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