Need some Serious CnC..

[Pavoneo]

I'm sucking, a lot. Help me get better T_T

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Please give some CnC.

Stock if anyone wants it.

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[SQY]

I'm not really good at giving CnC since I only started using Photoshop when I moved over from GIMP.
The only thing I could say is, make the background stick out alittle more? Just feels like I'm focusing too much on that stock.

 

[GIMV]

Stop using those c4d's/effects, makes the sig look LQ. Also the flow is off and you could blend the render more. Anyway, I like the colors.

 

[Pavoneo]

I'm not really good at giving CnC since I only started using Photoshop when I moved over from GIMP.
The only thing I could say is, make the background stick out alittle more? Just feels like I'm focusing too much on that stock.

Well you want to make sure that when people are looking at the sig the first thing they see is the girl. But I see your point, maybe I blurred the bg a bit too much :3. Thanks.

Stop using those c4d's/effects, makes the sig look LQ. Also the flow is off and you could blend the render more. Anyway, I like the colors.

Yeah, I noticed the flow was off a bit too late, tried to roll with it but it didn't work :3. Blurring the render would probably make it look nicer. Instead of using the C4D's what else would you suggest I do?